Mehbeer FF: Fall, together with spring , Authors note page no.5

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Some stories fate are to get unnoticed , this piece of my works went unnoticed on wattpad , so I lost interest and stopped it , but the thing is I'm so desparate to write this . So let me test its fate here .😆
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Fall , Together with Spring

Games of heart !

If we can predict , how it can game with us, we would never intend to participate .

Sounds philosophic !?

Physical games will make us either winner or looser but Heart games makes us philosophers.

Physical hurt's makes temporary scars which pains no further but, love hurt's make permanent scars and intense pain shoots every single time we feel scars.

Meher and Abeer life has turned upside down with Gone Megha!

Meher's only family is her gone sister Megha, Her Aim, Goal has changed , finding her family, Megha has become her life. She was live with her sister . A soulless life is what she is living in now! Her sister is her soul and she was complete with her sister.


When she vanished , her soul left her. Autumn, ' fall ' started on the day Megha vanished and it is still continuing.


Abeer was Megha's boyfriend, Meghas missing costed him so huge , he was effected so badly . It took years for him to come out and when he thought he is out , he is actually not!

Soul wrenching fact , the girl he should have protected is still missing ! and the fact hunts him . He don't know whether he still loves her or not ! But he realised he should find her for his mental peace.

Abeer and Meher pursuit is Megha !

Does their pursuit ends with Megha!?

What happens when spring blooms in autumn?

Will spring survive ? Can spring withstand, counting shedding hopes in Fall ??

Can Abeer resists charms of his life destroyer ?

Will Meher realise when and how her soul parted into two ?

Does realisation brings' Fall ' again into her life.

And what happened with vanished megha !?


End of description.


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Prologue - page 1 ( scroll down )

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Originally posted by: --Ari--

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good morning ke liye 😆

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Prologue

Meher's POV


" Megha " I say walking over empty street. Light is fading faster as its a sunny day, I lift my head to gaze at Sky , Sun is almost off to bed. Fear grips me , I looks around , peek into every corner, walking with fumbling legs.


A jetblack cat jump's on me from its hiding spot , I jerk back in fear muffling my screams , I hate it to let Megha know I'm sacred. As cat walk on road A dog appeared from nowhere and dasghes to attack cat. Screams of Cat and Dog are so horrific, still I don't break into fear.


" Me..Gha "I say gain , composing my tone .I hear nothing other than whizzing sounds of wild wind and screams of two crazy animals.


" Meg's , I will find you " I say in a chirpy tone hiding my fear.


I walk around glancing at every possible place, recollecting her hiding spots. I remember Megha last time hiding in aunt Anjali garden. Dislodging my fear I run to Anjali home.


"Megha...Megha ... Megha. " I run chanting loudly her name .


aunt Anjali is watering plants , her back is facing me, I hold her elbow and pull her to look at me, she screams in horror with my sudden attack, gushing water from pipe she is holding drip me wet.



I Gaze up to look at her face ,She holds her head with one hand , pipe in other hand is still dripping me wet


" Meher " she yells , flips water rushing pipe to ground ,kneels down to reach my height and continues " came to find your sister like every time ? " I nod my head . She huffs, rolls her eyes then a small smile escapes her lips.



" Megha just left before your arrival. " she says and waits for my reply, but I don't wish to waste time in replying her, i need to find Megha . I run not replying her .


" Meher, you are wet darling " She yells from back, I don't heed of my wet state, I run to our home damping path I am walking with water dripping from my wet dress. Fading light is fearing me more , although I'm scared to enter backyard of my home alone , I silently steps in like a cat. I hear nothing except to my breath and rustling sound , when I stamp on dry withered leaves.


I gaze around , I hear tweets of young birds, they are not humming ,they are calling their mother out of fear. I turnaround and walk to Oak tree, it's trunk is big , so big that it can fit both me and Megha!


" Megha " I giggle , I jump clapping near its trunk anticipating her presence , but she is not here.


I can no longer hold fear, " Megha " I say in a cracked tone.


I tweet her name like a young bird calling it's mother , walking everywhere in the backyard.


Only spot I'm left with is spot near old well, I am scared of that spot , my neighbour friends always scares me saying there is a devil in well. So I never dared to cast a glance of it too, but now with trembling legs, shaking body I walk towards well expecting Megha ,I peep to other side of it maintaining safe distance from it, unsure of who will pop up from other side, what if it's a devil with long sharp teeth stained with blood , I shut my eyes and calls Megha in most fearful tone of mine.


"Meher " you found me " hearing Megha I open my eyes gasping for air.


" You found me Meher " she says again stamping her leg in disappointment.


" I thought you will not find me, so I hid here, where u will not dare to come, but you came bravo ! " she says patting my shoulder.


" you scared me Megha " I say sniffing .


" Ohh Meher , I thought you will not come here , finding me ! " she says in concern.


" Don't do it Again Megha , I will come anywhere to find u " I reply with a smile , she smiles back appreciating me .


" come let's walk away from here " I say dragging her away from the most horrific place .


" I found you Megs ,I found you " I say again and again barreling my win.


" okay, that's enough , let's play again, you have to hide this time " Megha anounces.


" No, no I will not hide " I reply , taking large step towards home yelling ' I found you ... I found you ' denying her offer to play again.



" MEHER ... MEHER " I hear screams of my name , I jerk back from sleep opening eyes widely, it's Rati , not Megha !


I shut eyes tightly trying a way back into my dream! No memories in my dream.


" Meher " I hear Rati again, I prop up supporting to head rest,

" Meher ,You were screaming ' I found you Megha ' " she says offering me a glass of water.


I nod my head sipping water. Megha is gone , that's the only cruel fact. My heart shrinks , my only family , my sister is Gone.


" don't worry Meher everything will be okay " She says patting my shoulder.


" Nothing will be fine without her " I say bursting into tears, I remember that fateless day , the state I was in , I thought it was some prank and like every time I kept searching for her , it took hours to realise, she was Missing.



She still is missing! She is missing from 3 long years . 3 years weighed as 30 years. It has thought me so much

Never mind ! What about Megha ?? What happened to her ?



" you will find her Meher " Rati says reassuringly squeezing my hand.



I know , I will do that, I can go any end to find her, Megha is my everything and I lost everything when she Vanished.




Abeer 's Pov


My life has changed , Every dream shattered into million pieces, life I aspired from my childhood seemed unreachable, impossible for some period . Loving her truly sent me to place none wishes to go. I was blamed for nothing I did.



I can never do of what I was blamed for! I am over it, but still I am thinking those rough days of my life . I lost me, my family lost me. Life turned upside down.



Dad's sweat, years of hard work , Reputation he earned faded to many shades, just because of me, I stoop so low in my Dad's eyes, he never asked me to become perfect, but never expected me to be of how I was pictured by everyone.



I saw disgust , defeat in his eyes. When I was absolved , faded reputation gradually enhanced. I was entombed in rubble of blames and people who stabbed with their blame slowly tried clearing me from rubble but, it hurt me more than when they hit me. I diont know why!



It took many months to position back my wits, to align my life to normalcy.



Now every one feels I am out of it , I wish even I feel same . Maybe my indifferent behaviour made them feel I am free.



I laughed at nothing, I behaved normally like nothing happened, letting my inner turmoil to twist and twirl every part of me . I let time to cure me, I made no efforts to come out of it.


As I expected intensity with which feelings attack reduced to a great extent.


I thought I am over Megha ,I thought Megha was my past.


I went out , tried to hang out with my friends, enjoyed like before after 3 years.



After when I was back to home, I lied on bed savouring taste of joy. I was not sure when I slipped into old memories , counting moments. Few among them were with Megha .


Megha was special, especially that day with her was so magical. Intensity of pain boosts little. Till then I made no efforts to forget but after that I tried forgetting her. It's not simple ! It's not easy to forget memories whose end result were misery .



Trying to forget is nothing but digging ! I dig ways , ways to come out of memories. More I dig , more I am falling in them. It's hard for any one who knows Megha to forget her.


this vague promise I made her Shoots into my memory back while I am digging ways . vague ! Very vague ! But I saw trust in her eyes , though she knew I made promise playfully, without any serious intention to keep it.


" Do you like travelling ? " Megah asked me once .


" yes, I like " I replied her.


" but, I love it, what if I go missing in my adventures ?? What will you do??" she questioned dramatically.



" I will find you darling " I said kissing her.


" if you cannot find me ,then ? " Megha questioned looking intently.


" I will search for you , until I find you . " I said .


It was not a promise ,an assurance , a vague word, never expected of a situation to arise where the vague word shapes as a promise but ,I saw that admiring look and trust in her eyes listening my words.



Intensity of pain redoubles, we made attempts to find her , but I never made any efforts personally finding her. I was busy untaming me.


unintentional promise I made is slaying me . Assurance might not be serious but, love and trust I saw in Her eyes were true, so true that thinking of it an acute pain booms out of heart.


I should find her at least for the trust she had on me.


End of update .


Sorry for giving a long prologue , I tried putting it little , but u know I am a dragging queen😆😆

How was it ?? Hope it was not lame !! Drop ur comments and feed back . Would love to read it . Buddy me for pm'S.

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I dont know why this story didnt worked on wattpad ... i mean it has intresting plot...something different among other... u have a great style for writing it...
i loved both idea and narresation of your story...
its a quite inresting start... i will love to follow and read more of it...
all the very best for the story i know it'll be awesome...
Love
harshita
p.s- i love long update for good stories...
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I forgot to tell plz do pm me so i can read it...
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Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

I dont know why this story didnt worked on wattpad ... i mean it has intresting plot...something different among other... u have a great style for writing it...
i loved both idea and narresation of your story...
its a quite inresting start... i will love to follow and read more of it...
all the very best for the story i know it'll be awesome...
Love
harshita
p.s- i love long update for good stories...


Aww thank you so much sweetie for lovely comment ,
I will do my best to keep it awesome , if the forum wasis love storyline
Even I cannot give small updates , I mean , I just blabber so much u know . Hopefully u won't find it boring
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Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

I forgot to tell plz do pm me so i can read it...

Sure dear pakka I ll pm u , whenever I update.
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Abey madhu it's really awesome
Continue it dumbo Otherwise I am gonna hit you hard on your nose 😡😆

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