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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Mind blowing update
Loved it

Keep smiling

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Oh this is amazing. And I can't tell you how excited I am for the next chapter!

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1017333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Kriti luv u thank u so much for updating. It was awesome. I find it hard to digest that the other guy is nice!!!!! Seriously I mean it... Is there anything fishy??? Abeer u gotta rock it..go and get ur meher!!! And yeah waiting for more he! He! He ! * we greedy people* ; D

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

That was brilliant Kriti , just read both parts together girl

Your humour is flawless just loved it , the way it flowed with story , too good

I am liking this Akash guy , aww Bechara will become Salman in the end 😆

I was reading so seriously and then

" I have had enough of this matured Abeer shit " 🤣 Rofl I laughed for good 2 minutes and then read remaining .

And that make out ☺️ on office desk girl 😆 sattu office has glass doors 🤣

So Akash came in the end , I hope he didn't see our mehbeer make out 😆 pls pretty pls that will be embarrassing for Meher , Abeer is besharam that's different 😆

Meher Abeer Malhotra that sounded so good .

Loved it girl and yeah update soon, thank u so much for PM .

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@.SSSS.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

^^

@madhu

Sattu office glass doors?!🤣 madhu ,you seriously.. Itani baddameez kaisey?🤣

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: .SSS.
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@madhu

Sattu office glass doors?!🤣 madhu ,you seriously.. Itani baddameez kaisey?🤣

I have a habit of visualising 😆 then I started visualising then suddenly it striked in my mind 🤣

U know for a moment I was even worried ki , will some one barge into her room now Kya ??😲🤣

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Isha

@tereliyex

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Unres...
So FINALLY an update 🥳
Gahhh Kriti you don't know how much I love this FF
I'm loving jealous Abeer!!!
Rati ne pehli baar kuch sahi kiya 🤣
Damnnn, Abeer and Meher on the desk? 😳 I thought Abeer was going to stop and say yaha nahi baby uncomfortable hoga tere liye #GandiBaat 😳

But damn. I really want Abeer to cry more! Please update soon dear ❤️

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@.SSSS.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

I have a habit of visualising 😆 then I started visualising then suddenly it striked in my mind 🤣
U know for a moment I was even worried ki , will some one barge into her room now Kya ??😲🤣

I was amazed by your intelligence and presence of mind. I was like: Why didn't I got that doubt before, about the Office glass doors🤣

@Red Don't tell me, you, yourself wanted to be that someone🤣 You please give some privacy to our babies 🤣

Edited by .SSSS. - 10 years ago