Update || FF: Poker Face || Chapter 4: Dil-E-Muztar : Page 14 - Page 7

Omg omg omg!!!!!!!!!!! Kriti u updateddd!!!!!!! Thank u so so so much!!! I love poker face to death and i mean it*** it was so goddamn awesome just a request if u can update soonish then plzzz di and yeah it was worth waiting ;) I'm waiting for another masterpiece love, ananya( tisha)

Mind blowing update
Loved it

Keep smiling

HAWWW.

OMGOMGOMG YOU UPDATED <33333
I effing KNEW IT!
While reading the 2nd chapter I was like bro, why is she marrying some Akash dude when she still likes Abeer? 😕 and then I was llike what if she and this Akash dude are faking it? Because Meher oobviously doesn't love him and she totally is!!!!
I love reading sadistic stories so I'm all down for Abeer crying for his baby 😆
Plzzz update ASAP

mind blowing part yr Kriti...
awww abeer is too adorable na...
and abeer fighting with his mind devils..
and that was actually funny when he said to akash ..Who asked u. omg ...I was literally laughing at that...hehehe..it was way too funny .
well I hate akash in this part...he made abeer so jealous and pain..*sob* *sob*
waiting for next..plz continue soon..
thanx for pm..
love Nikki

Originally posted by: .SSS.

Oh my lord.

Trust me when I say this, comedy the hardest genre of all. ..😆...I totally can understand you here.

Ugh.. this is so awkward to read this update, and that Akash: It would have been hell easy if this guy is any negative character but alas, seems like he is a sweet heart..or I don't know I'm expecting to be Grey.. :( .. would be looking forward to see how you handle this.)

I love the fact how you incorporated the humor very well, even in this situations..He was like Hrithik Roshan and Ranbir Kapoor had a love child. Like seriously,🤣

I for, one am, not so great fan of triangles, but then again I'm reading because this is by Kriti, don't give me any heart attacks okay.😆. That Akash in Meher's bedroom.. jeez.. any way this is very well written.

Will be waiting for the next UD. I can understand how hard it is for you to handle all this.. Thanks for the update, take your own time for the next, will be happily waitin'.. Much love <3

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...

Originally posted by: ananya925

Omg omg omg!!!!!!!!!!! Kriti u updateddd!!!!!!! Thank u so so so much!!! I love poker face to death and i mean it*** it was so goddamn awesome just a request if u can update soonish then plzzz di and yeah it was worth waiting ;) I'm waiting for another masterpiece love, ananya( tisha)

Originally posted by: VaticanCameos

HAWWW.

This is cruel.

I have so many, I repeat, SO MANY questions.

Is she trying to make him jealous? Is that guy helping her? Is Akash in love with her? What is happening? Is she still in love with Abeer? Are they getting married, for realz?

So many questions.

You're a beast of a writer, K. Angst, Romance, Comedy - You can do it all.

I used to write a lot of comedy so I completely 100% get your sitch.

But you killed it with the 'HELL TO THE NO' - that totally reminded me of Mercedes from Glee 😆

And the whole inner voice thing always adds to the humor - why is it that inner voices are 1000 times more hilarious than the actual people?

You know when you told me Akash was absof**kinglutely adorable and then I read the blessing part, I was like WHAAAT.

And then the reveal, and I was OOOHHH.

(Legit reactions)
Also I squealed like a little girl when I saw this in my PM box. Look what you're doing to me.
Anyways, if you don't update soon, Mrs Senior Member...

I might have to call Shyam. *evil laughter*

- Shruthi 🤗

Originally posted by: -Ishana-

OMGOMGOMG YOU UPDATED <33333
I effing KNEW IT!
While reading the 2nd chapter I was like bro, why is she marrying some Akash dude when she still likes Abeer? 😕 and then I was llike what if she and this Akash dude are faking it? Because Meher oobviously doesn't love him and she totally is!!!!
I love reading sadistic stories so I'm all down for Abeer crying for his baby 😆
Plzzz update ASAP