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SimplyAshVikian

@SimplyAshVikian

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

RES 😃

*UNRES*

Yes i did finally 😆 Twinnie I know september 8th are really competitive 😆 live example yaha hai

Loved the update sara and thank you for updating it on Twinnie's dhamki ...Twinnie good job with it 😉😆

U wrote the romantic scenes so well 😳 ☺️ and it was so good

One scene I loved was the dhori scene 😳 😳 HTP lovers i guess 😉 😃

The present day ..where is arjun where has he disappered what happened between them

all this questions running in mind now and i am sure u will answer it all at right time

so waiting for it

Update soon 😃

Edited by SimplyAshVikian - 11 years ago

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ArVi_SS

@ArVi_SS

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

OMG TWINNIE BEAT ME!! 😲😆

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-Mansi.-

@-Mansi.-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

OMG what the heck did I just do?!?!?

Good job Twinnie I'll get ya next time! 😈

Oh and BTW: That SS comment above mine was mine as well, I'd like to see someone else call my Twinnie Twinnie but me! 😛

Edited by -Mansi.- - 11 years ago

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-Mansi.-

@-Mansi.-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

So I decided to type my comment here cause YOLO ! 😛

First of all I have to say: Good job Twinnie: Hum September 8ths ka aisa hi hai, we're so competitive! 😆

Now to my wonderful Smartie- girl I need to take lessons from you on this romance stuff: you do sooo good each time! I still don't get why you were so nervous about this update: it's so damn good! Infact, it's perfect! But anyways- meri Smartie aise Drama Queen hai na? Miss.Perfectionist! 😉🤣

So fave parts: in a nutshell, everything! If I told you one by one I'll end up writing the whole update over again!

One part I will say though:

He smiled seeing her reaction. And he walked towards her. Her back was facing him. He has a naughty smile on his face. He holds the doris in his hands and using that, pulls her closer to himself minimising the already short distance. She could feel his breath on her neck and the hair on her back rose. He tied the doris while she kept fumbling with her hands.

This part reminded me of Hasee Toh Phasee and Parineeti-Sidharth, except it was cuter with ArVi! 😳

All in all, this is one of those updates that I will never, ever get tired of reading, it was just perfect. ❤️

And I'd just like to add that I love how you put my little lecture to you on the introduction, I remember I was plotting in my mind and had it decided that if you didn't post it I would have said: "IF YOU DON'T POST I WON'T UPDATE FOR A WHOLE MONTH!!!!" 😆

Glad I did that though, everyone deserves to read this!

Edited by -Mansi.- - 11 years ago

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beautifulchaos

@beautifulchaos

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Thanks for updating the SS. .

Lovely update as usual...

"The course of true love did never run smooth". I sometimes feel that Shakespeare had Arjun and Purvi in mind while coining this phrase.

So Arjun's disappeared. May God keep him safe and sound..

I know, the mystery behind Ajun's disappearance will unfold when the right time will come.

Shall patiently waiting for that day to come..

And waiting even more patiently for them to reunite irrespective of all the barriers and hurdles-- human and others.

After all there is nothing that true love cannot surmount.

Don't forget to PM me when the next chapter is ready.

Awesome You ⭐️

Awesome chapter..👍🏼

Edited by bitasta - 11 years ago

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shagufta2211

@shagufta2211

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Nice wedding night was beautifully written

Eargr to know what is happening in present

Where is arjun

Thank u for pm dear do update soon

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Arohi

@.Peeves.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Beautiful update Sara!!

awwie it was soo romantic ❤️ ☺️

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sunidhi

@MadloverofRD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Is is awesome and the way you described the wedding night is good.
But where arjun is gone .
Thanks for the pm and update soon I can't wait.

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: -Mansi.-

So I decided to type my comment here cause YOLO ! 😛 Hahaha. No problem😛
First of all I have to say: Good job Twinnie: Hum September 8ths ka aisa hi hai, we're so competitive! 😆 Hehehe😆.
Now to my wonderful Smartie- girl I need to take lessons from you on this romance stuff: you do sooo good each time! Aww I am flattered😳, really.Lessons from me😲, I am blushing man☺️ I still don't get why you were so nervous about this update: it's so damn good! I thought its OTT Infact, it's perfect! Thank you😳😃 But anyways- meri Smartie aise Drama Queen hai na? Hehehe, Drama Queen han😉😛 😳Miss.Perfectionist! 😉🤣 Awww😳 But hans kyun rahi ho?😕
So fave parts: in a nutshell, everything! If I told you one by one I'll end up writing the whole update over again! Awww😳
One part I will say though:
He smiled seeing her reaction. And he walked towards her. Her back was facing him. He has a naughty smile on his face. He holds the doris in his hands and using that, pulls her closer to himself minimising the already short distance. She could feel his breath on her neck and the hair on her back rose. He tied the doris while she kept fumbling with her hands.
This part reminded me of Hasee Toh Phasee and Parineeti-Sidharth, except it was cuter with ArVi! 😳 Haha, girl you are smart! I took it from HTP😳😃 I loved the scene, it was so intense!
All in all, this is one of those updates that I will never, ever get tired of reading, it was just perfect. ❤️ Aww thank you😳😳
And I'd just like to add that I love how you put my little lecture to you on the introduction, I remember I was plotting in my mind and had it decided that if you didn't post it I would have said: "IF YOU DON'T POST I WON'T UPDATE FOR A WHOLE MONTH!!!!" 😆
Hahahaha,😆 would you have really done that😲?
Glad I did that though, everyone deserves to read this! Thank you for doing that😃