Originally posted by: -Mansi.-
So I decided to type my comment here cause YOLO ! 😛 Hahaha. No problem😛
First of all I have to say: Good job Twinnie: Hum September 8ths ka aisa hi hai, we're so competitive! 😆 Hehehe😆.
Now to my wonderful Smartie- girl I need to take lessons from you on this romance stuff: you do sooo good each time! Aww I am flattered😳, really.Lessons from me😲, I am blushing man☺️ I still don't get why you were so nervous about this update: it's so damn good! I thought its OTT Infact, it's perfect! Thank you😳😃 But anyways- meri Smartie aise Drama Queen hai na? Hehehe, Drama Queen han😉😛 😳Miss.Perfectionist! 😉🤣 Awww😳 But hans kyun rahi ho?😕
So fave parts: in a nutshell, everything! If I told you one by one I'll end up writing the whole update over again! Awww😳
One part I will say though:
He smiled seeing her reaction. And he walked towards her. Her back was facing him. He has a naughty smile on his face. He holds the doris in his hands and using that, pulls her closer to himself minimising the already short distance. She could feel his breath on her neck and the hair on her back rose. He tied the doris while she kept fumbling with her hands.
This part reminded me of Hasee Toh Phasee and Parineeti-Sidharth, except it was cuter with ArVi! 😳 Haha, girl you are smart! I took it from HTP😳😃 I loved the scene, it was so intense!
All in all, this is one of those updates that I will never, ever get tired of reading, it was just perfect. ❤️ Aww thank you😳😳
And I'd just like to add that I love how you put my little lecture to you on the introduction, I remember I was plotting in my mind and had it decided that if you didn't post it I would have said: "IF YOU DON'T POST I WON'T UPDATE FOR A WHOLE MONTH!!!!" 😆
Hahahaha,😆 would you have really done that😲?
Glad I did that though, everyone deserves to read this! Thank you for doing that😃
Shiv Shakti
