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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is my first fanfiction .if you ppl like below summery and want me to continue plz like and comment my post

Two best mates scince childhood arjun ,purvi
Arjun gets engaged to purvis sister in his mid-teens due to Arjun's mother,but they never mind it
later they grown up and arjun-ovi marriage date is going to be fixed both the families were over joyed except the bridegroom.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👍🏼 pls continue dear... I love reading ArVi stuff😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds v nyc dear..pls do update soon...waitng
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Posted: 11 years ago
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purvi deshmukh
younger daughter of bussiness tycoon mr manav deshmukh. she aspires to become a follow her father. Arjun's friend

arjun kirloskar
He is handsome ,intelligent, only successor of kirloskar industries pvt. He is engaged to Ovi at the age of sixteen. he feels ovi and purvi as best pals

ovi deshmukh
elder daughter of mr deshmukh ,arjun's fiance and frnd

manav deshmukh
father of Ovi and Purvi. Chairperson of deshmukh industries.He owes Digvijay kirloskar a lot due to his kindness to him during his early stage

archan deshmukh
mother of ovi and purvi,she also feels arjun as her son due to the promise she made to her friend ashna on her death bed

digvijay kirloskar
father of arjun. He doesnt belive any one except manav and arjun in his work, Manav's friend

ashna kirloskar
mother of arjun . she died due to cancer

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey would love to read
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please continue soon:)
looks very interesting:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for your response . i will post my first part shortly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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here is my first part




A 15years boy was outside the ICU leaning on to the wall, his eyes were filled with water ready to fall, his mind was full of rolling memories with his mom. He want to be strong infront of his mother but can't gather energy, his mother is most important person in his life. He is ready to enter the room to spend with his mom, then he noticed a hand on his shoulder and turned back and can't hold his pain he hugged her tightly and let his tears roll down,she is a 12 year girl trying to console . "Arjun don't cry aunt will be ok,she will be back home and we can play with her as before ,she makes us delicious food and make us eat plz Arjun don't cry for my sake don't cry Arjun"she said "no Purvi mom is not going to be ok ,she never returns home I heard doctor saying dad "it's her last days",I LOVE HER a lot purvi I can't live without her I can't purvi I can't..."Saying he fell on the ground. She can't see her friend breaking down, tears fall on her cheeks

Inside ICU:

A 35 years lady in the bed was surrounded by his husband DK ,friend ARCHANA and Archana's elder daughter OVI .she tried to talk some thing and his husband stopped her saying "Ashna doctor said not to take stress .Relax yourself we can talk a lot after going home".

Ashna:"DK I know I don't have much time left with me let me talk my last words

DK:"plz Ashna don't say such word"

Ashna : I have a wish DK can u complete my wish

DK:how cant I Ashna

Ashna turns towards Archana

Ashna : my wish needs yours and Manav's approval Archana

Archana:how can we ignore your wish Ashna let us know it

Ashna: where is Manav call him

Archana: he went for medicines ,I think he is on his way

Outside ICU:

Manav is returning with Ashna reports and medicines.he is about to enter the room and stooped by seeing purvi consoling Arjun .he turned his steps towards them and placed his hand warmly on Arjun's head. Arjun lifted his head by the touch and wiped his tears acted strong and bold, he never let his pain out before anyone except his dear ones

Manav: Arjun don't cry my son mom will be ok we all are here ,we wont let Ashnaji go from us .come lets go near mom she will be waiting for you

Arjun:I know uncle lets go.

Manav entered the room followed by Arjun and purvi holding hand .Arjun wants support to enter the room as he can't see his mom in such condition so he held his friend hand tightly

Ashna smiled to Arjun and sighned him to come near. He was hesitating to go near his mom because he cant control himself if he went to her. She understood his felling and sighed it's ok and turned toward Manav and DK

She don't know how to start because she was going to make them a big decision which changes their childrens life forever. she also knows it is not the correct time for that decession, while thinking she decided to start

Ashna:DK ,Manav I am going to ask you something which cannot be decided now ,but I am being some selfish in this matter

Manav: we can do anything for you mam,plz let us know the wish

DK: Ashna first let us know what you want

Ashna facing towards Manav and DK

Ashna: i never let any difference between Arjun ,purvi and Ovi do you agree with it

Manav and DK: yes we don't have any second taught in it

Ashna: Manav I always wanted your daughter to be my daughter in law

Manav: after they grew up we can do according to their Ashna ji

Ashna : I know Manav but I don't have time I feel it but, I cant see my son getting married and cant play with my grand children...

DK: plz Ashna stop those harsh words you are making me die with your words

Ashna: plz let me continue DK

DK: hmmm

Ashna:I at least want to see my son getting engaged

There was silence for 5mins after Ashna's words everyone was confused and it was clear on their faces including Arjun, Ovi and purvi

Manva: how can that be possible Ashnaji

DK: Ashna what you are asking can't be done ,I agree they are good friends ,every friendship doesn't leads to marriage,ok if let do this what after they grew up they have their own plans about life what can we do then

Ashna: "no DK I know my son very well he can do this for me "

She sighned to Arjun come to him .this time he moved towards Ashna and the "holding hands opened". Arjun went to his mom and sat beside her .she asked him "can u do this for me son". He gave a fast reply "yes mom I can do anything for u".

Ashna: DK I told u that my son loves me a lot and turned towards Archana and pleased her to agree

Manav: Ashna ji I don't think this is a right decision how can we...

Manav was stopped by Archana

Archana: Manav let us first discuss with our daughter

Manav agreed to Archana and they moved towards their daughter , purvi and Ovi are standing side by side they were reached by their parents

Archana said beta we want to talk to you for five minutes come with us and they forwarded to door and OVI followed them.



this is my first FF please let me know my mistakes and encourage me by hitting like button and your comments

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its fab yar continue nd pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update :)
Really want to know what happens next :)
Please update soon and a big thank you for the PM :)
Edited by Avina-Ashvik - 11 years ago

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