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Posted: 12 years ago
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this story is super interesting
precap sound amazing
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was fab
great writer u r
new twist was good
i think the caller is soham
precap is interesting
continue sooner plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc update
interesting precap update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow yusa dt ws awsm...n d arvi scene ws jst amazn pls do update soon
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thanku so much 4 giving so much cute arvi scenes in one go...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello buddies i hope maii sabko yad hu yusa... i am really sorry to all for leaving a hanging story.. this account in india forum was making problems and till now it is so if this id stopped working i would update from my other new id that is yusramazhar1 buddy me dre aswell yad say.. i missed you all.. i hope i am forgiven.. i am enjoying my ashvik so much in nach and i know you all are enjoying them aswell.. okay so for getting back to my story re read the previous parts again...


CHAPTER 7



purvi was looking at the photoframe and was tightly hugging arjun while crying "arjun yeh sab kisnay kia hoga? humari picture pay yeh cross? mujhy bohat dar lag raha hai arjun" arjun was hugging purvi back and assuring her he kissed purvi's hairs "purvi... " he called her affectionatey "meri jaan plzzz stop crying plzzz " arjun cupped purvi's face , purvi looked at arjun who was looking into her eyes.. arjun wiped her tears "i am there na? phir kiska darr purvi" arjun said looking straight into purvi's eyes.. purvi shooked her head "arjun kahi ap mujhsy kuch chupa toh ni rahay? yeh sab.. " purvi was about to say when arjun sat on his knees and knocked on purvi's stomach which was bulged out purvi looked at arjun curiously "arjun yeh ap kia?" purvi sighed ..
arjun : plzzz purvi let me talk to my princess.. hey baby (arjun kissed purvi's stomach ) it me the arjun kirlosker your dad..
purvi smiled a little while arjun saw purvi smiling from the corner of his eyes
arjun: baby look at your mom she is a cry baby.. har wakt roti rehti hain.. mai kitna mana karta hu par meri toh sunti hi ni eb ap hi apni mama ko samjhaiyee ..
arjun got up and hold purvi's shoulder
"dekha meri jaan my princess listens to me hogai na tum chup.. purvi tumhay darnay ki koi zarorat nai hai mai hu na.. i am with you alwayzz aur mai tumhara sath kabhi nai chornay wala.. abhi nai kabhi nai its a kirlosker promise" arjun said proudly
purvi fully smiled on this
"that i know.. and now i know kay pari bhi apnay papa ki chamchi hai " purvi said making a face
"hey not a word against my daughter" arjun warned purvi showing her his finger , purvi arched her eye brows and intersected her finger with arjuns "else what? " purvi asked serious
arjun kissed purvi on her cheeks and purvi opened her mouth in shock and than playfully hit arjun
"else i would kiss you my sexy jaan" arjun said smirking
"arjun tum bhi na "
with that purvi hugged arjun smiling..
arjun thoughts: oh GOd kisi tran purvi ko toh samjha lia par yeh kaun hai jisnay office mai bhi agg lagai aur ab ghar tak phonch gaya? agar isnay kuch... ni ni i wont let anybody in this world harm my purvi she means the world to me...




15 days later ...


manav: aai aj na humaray business ki sabsay bari deal finalize hoi hai isliye party hai shaam ko sab tyar rahein...
archana looked at manav not even bothering .. to her only 15 more days were left for this naam ka rishta and then she would live happily with her purvi and aai

sachin: baba guards aa gayee hain

manav stood up

"guards for what?" tej asked
"beta for security koi bhi ghar say " he looked at archna "and i mean koi bhi .. begair guards kay kahi ni jaye ga" archana was confused


kirlosker mansion

arjun was covering purvi's eyes and taking her somewhere
"arjun yeh sab kia hai? plzzz meri ankhein kholo plzzz"
"purvi its a surprise just hold on na jaan"
but purvi was so anxious and was moving here and there

"bs bs jaan agayee" arjun removed his hands from purvi's eyes and purvi opened her eyes to see a closed door "lo yeh kia hai? darwaza?" purvi asked disappointed arjun saw her expression and laughed "jaan you so funny darwaza toh kholo" arjun said signalling her to open the door . purvi opened the door "kiaa hai andar" and she went quite... she looked around and was shocked to see a full on ready baby room it was all pink there was so many toys , dolls all the girly stuff and pictures of dools and small babies on the wall... purvi put her both hands on her mouth.. it was soo perfect and she looked at the front wall opposite the door it was a big picture of arjun and purvi togeather .. arjun was hugging purvi from back and purvi's arm were on arjuns arms and they both were fully laughing.. a long tear skipped from purvi's eyes she was about to wipe it away when arjun held her from back just like the front picture of them.. arjun nuzzeled in purvi's neck and she closed her eyes..
"this is our princess room.. pari jab 7 saal ki hojaye gi na toh she would sleep here" arjun said still holding purvi
"toh abhi say? ku?" purvi got nostalgic words werent coming out
"are you kidding meri jaan humari pari is coming is just 4 months aur uskay anay ki tyari bhi na ho?"
purvi cried and turned around to hug arjun
"i love you arjun mai bohat pyar karti ho bhot zada mai kuch ni without you meri zindagi ka matlab hai arjun muujhy ni pata , nii pata ky mainy aisa kia acha kia kay i deserve you par mujhy khud say kabhi dur mat karna kabhi ni " purvi said while crying
"you are wrong purvi " purvi came out ofc the hug and looked at arjun who held both purvi's hand in his hands and touched hus eyes by her hands "tum ho tabh hi mai hu tumnay is pathar mai jaan daal di you made me crave for you for thisife i am having with you mai toh yeh kabhi bhi ni bta sakta kay how much i love you bss itna pata hai kay bss i love you aur mai apni purvi zindagi sirf aek insan ka chehra dekh ky guzarna chahta hu aur wo ho tum" he went closer to her ad kissed her forehead "you are my everything"
they hugged again
"chalo chalo bsss eb raat ki biggest party keliye tyar hojaooo baby you are my lucky charm mrs purvi arjun kirlosker" purvi was about to say something when arjuns phone started to ring he excused from the room while purvi started to touch all the toys ...



phone convo
arjun: hello who is this
boy: ram ram kirlosker ji bht btya rahay ho apni mrs ky sath
arjun got frustrated and look here and there
boy: eee ap idhr udhr kia dekh rahay ho bht security karwa li par bat ee hai ky humka jo karna hai ooo toh hokay hi rahay ga apka acha bakat khatam eb..
arjun looked at smiling purvi
arjun: listen you..
and the phone disconnected
arjun made a disgusted face


here the boy laughed and a lady came to him yes the lady is non other than varsha
varsha: bishnu mana kia tha na ku peechay para hai oo logo kay chorday na sab kuch kucho ni milay ga ee sab karkay

vishnu: maii tu kia keh rai hai ooo kirlosker aur deshmuk khandan ki waja say humaray baba jail mai hai aur oo log khushian manaein kabhi niii

varsha shooked her head
vishnu: tu dekhti jaaa kaisay hum un logo ko barbaad karta hu

with that vishnu went away

varsha: hey bhagwan kaisay samjhaye isko ky deshmuk iska apna khandan hai aur yeh unka soham hai galti hogai jo tai say soham ko cheen lia aj pachta rai hu pata ni tai kaisay hogii...


at party :


arjun and purvi went in the party hand in hand smiling to eachother arjun kissed purvi's hand and purvi looked down she was wearing a black netted sari and arjun was wearing black coat matching to purvi.. archana came to purvi and hugged her
archu: kaisi hai tu purvi?
purvi: mai theek aai tu bta tu kaisi hai? aur aaji tu?
sulochna: mai bhi sai aur yeh humari choti c purvi kaisi hai?
purvi blushed and arjun smiled
arjun: aaji choti c purvi bilkul theek hai aur jaldi say apni mom ki godh mai ana chahti hai
archana smiled and put her hand on purvi's head "purvi meri jaan mujhy pura yakeen hai kay tu bht achi aai banay gi"

ovi looked at all this and burned in jaleousy manav was with her
manav: ovi sambhal apnay apko...
ovi: baba jab jab mai us purvi ko hastay vay dekhti hu mera khoon kholta hai khoon wo jga wo haq wo khushian sab meri thi jisay us kachray ky dibay say uthai hoi purvi ny cheen lia baba
manav put his hand around ovi to soothe her
manav: jo hogya usay janay day na beta
but ovi was still looking at purvi with hatred , purvi also looked at ovi but as soon as she saw ovi glaring at her purvi uncomfortably looked down...




dk: may i have your attention please
all looked at dk .. arvi were holding hands
dk: i would love to call manav and family here to cut the cake its a big success with them i would like to call my son and my daughter in law purvi both of them looking perfect togeather..
all came towards the table..
dk: purvi is more of my daughter i cannot imagine my life without her thankyou beta for coming into my and my sons life and change us for good
archana was proud arjun and purvi smiled.. the cake was cut and all were standing .. archana was talking to sulochna when she stopped in her tracks
sulochna: kia howa archu?
archana was shocked than sulochna looked in the way archana was looking and was shocked to see kanika coming towards savita tai...
archana looked at purvi who was with dk sir and arjun smiling and archana gulped down the fear
kanika: namastay savita ji ..
savita looked at kanika and smiled
savita: aray kanika ji ap agai..
kanika smiled and savita called manav
savita: manavvv
manav: haan aai?
savita: idhr aa manav tujhy kici say milwana hai..
manav came all were looking at them
manav: haan aai kaun hai
savita: tujhay btaya thana manav mandir gai thi tooh mujhy kanika ji mili yeh woi head nurse hain jinho nay ovi aur tej ky time archna ki delivery ki thi..
manav smiled at kanika who smiled back
kanika: namste manav deshmuk ji..
manav greeted her..
kanika: archana ji ni dekh rai
kanika looked around and saw archana who was sweating
kanika went to her and hugged her but archana didnt reacted
kanika: ap log to sach mai nht achay hai
(she said looking at manav and archana)
archana: kanika ji mujhy lagta hai ky apko jana chai
savita: aai tujhy kia hai? pagal hai tu? yeh meri mehmaan hain tu kaun hoti hai inko yeh kehnay wali
archana closed her eyes
kanika: archana ji apnay lagta hai mujhy ab tak maaf ni kia..
archana: aisi koi baat ni hai wo bss
manav was sensing something fishy he came forward arjun and purvi also mobed forward
manav: kis cheez ki maafi kanika ji..
kanika looked at manav
kanika: us gunha ki jo mujhsy bht saal pehlay hogya tha .. par yakeen maniyee aj jakay sakkon aya jab yeh jana ky wo gunha hotay hotay bach gaya
all were hell confused savita came forward
savita: yeh ap kia ghuma phira ky bol rai hai
archana moved to purvi
archana: purvi mujhy lagta hai tujhy ghar jana chai iss halat mai itna khara hona theek ni
archana said in nervousness while purvi was confused she looked at arjun who was equally confused
purvi: par aai
archana: par vr kuch ni kaha na ja matlab ja arjun tum isko lay kay jaoo..
archana was hell scared now arjun saw archanas changing expression
arjun: oky aai par app
archana: arayy kaha na jaoo
archana said a little louder.. all looked at them confused
archana: purviii tu jaaa plzzz
kanika smiled and moved towards purvi and arjun stood between archana and purvi
kanika: toh yeh hay purvi.. bilkul ap jaisi dikhti hai archana ji shukar hai bhagwan 18 saal pehlay wo ni hua jo hosakta hai.. warna
manav: warna kia?
manav curiously came towards kanika
kanika: warna aek beti apni maa say dur hojati...
purvi looked shocked at kanika not understanding a word and arjun held purvis hand more tightly while savita and manav looked shocked archana closed her eyes..
manav: yeh ap kia keh rai hn? kaunsi beti?
manavs heartbeat was getting fast
kanika: manav ji jb apki twins paida hoi thi toh unmay say apki choti wali twin aek couple ki bachi kay sath exchange hogai thi
it was shocking for all savita put her hand on her mouth to prevent from making a noise .. purvi looked at ovi whose eyes got bigger.. manav couldnt believe his ears
manav: choti beti.. matlab ovi..
he said under his breath..
kanika: par bhagwan ky kaam dekhiye kay jo bachi aplogo gi badal gai thi archana ji ko woi bachi wapis mil gai airport kay bahar ..
purvis world tilted listening to this she stumbled a bit and arjun held her shoulder for support..
kanika: mai iss guilt mai chain say mar bhi na pati agr mujhy pata na chalta ky archana ji kabhi apni sagi bachi say dur hoi hi ni jis bachi ko unho nay adopt kia asal mai wo unki apni bachi hai..

"unki apni bachi hai"

these words were ringing in each and everymind .. it was clear that ovo wasnt manavs and archanas daughter but purvi was there own blood.. manavs eyes were full of tears he looked towarda purvi and remembered how he aways felt a connection towards her... whenever she said him baba .. ovi sat on the stairs shocked realizing what was said.. she wasnt a deshmuk .. and purvi was just looking at her aai whose eyes were closed and tears were all over her face.. arjun was looking at purvi no one said a word..

kanika: ab mai chalti ho..
(she went)
rest all the guests also left but noone moved... archana opened her eyes to see purvi looking at her with affection purvi was on the verge of crying archana moved towards her when ovi came in between

ovi: app meri aai naiii hain...
ovi said cryingly archand was shooked her head
ovi: ap jaisi shatir aurat mainay aj tak ni dekhi .. apko shuruh say hi pata tha kay may apki beti ni hu apka khoon ni hu aur apka asli khoon yeh purvi hai tabhi apko iski khushi ky agay kuch ni dekhta tha tabhi ap hamesha purvi kay gun gaan gati ti meri gar khushi apnay purvi ko day di ku ky wo apki apni thi aur mai kici aur ki

archana shooked her head crying..

ovi: arjun kisay pyar karta hai purvi say arjun ki shadi kisay hogi purvi say apka kiskay sath khari hongi purvi kay sath ab sab samjh agaya hai mujhy.. purvi purvi purvi ku ky wo apko beti hai

ovi shouted..

savita clapped

savita: wah kia khel khela hai tunay wah archana tera demag toh bht taiz chalta hai re..
archana got confused
archana: savita aai yeh ap kia?
savita: anjaan mat ban .. tu itni chalak niklay gi mainy socha hi ni tha tunay bachian paida hotay hi apni aek bachi kici aur bachi say badal li ku ky tujhy pata tha ky manav apni bachian lay jayee ga isliye tunay apni khud ki bachi badal dali aur humaray janay kay baad adoption ka natak kia takay teri khudki bachi bhi tujhsy dur na ho aur manav ko pata bhi na chalay..

archana was shocked

archana: yeh ap mujhpay galt ilzam lga rai hai aai mai aisa ku karo gi? yeh sab aek utefak hai purvi say mainy hamesha khudsay zada pyar kia hai..

savita went to manav

savita: dekh manav dekh iss aurat ki chalein dekh humaray ghar ki beti ko humsay dur rakha humay usay nafrat karnay pay majoboor kia aur tujhsy teri apni bachi ko dur rakha purvi teri beti hai..

savita went to purvi who was just still and hugged her

savita: mai apnay khoon say hi nafrat karti rahi meray manav ki beti hai tu.. tujhay iss aurat nay humsay durr rakha purvi tujhy apnay baba say dur rakha

savita shaked purvi
archana was about to touch purvi
savita: khabardar jo meri poti kay kareeb bhi aai samjhi dur reh meray manav ki beti say.. tera saya bhi na parhay..

archana has a limit

archana: bsss aai bsss bht keh lia apnay
apny jo ilzam lagaya mainay suna par bss kal tak ap mujhy tej aur ovi say dur rakhti thi ku ky apko lagta tha ky wo apki potian hn aur aj apko purvi ka pata chala toh purvi ko dyr kar rai hn .. par aisa ni hoga ku ky mainy kuch ni kia mujhy sach mai ni

manav: jhoot !
manav said seriously he came to archana and held her arms tightly and archana hissed in pain .. purvi cried

manav: tum aek jhooti aurat ho archana..
archana: ni manav ap galt
manav: bss karoo 18 saal tak tum paisay mangti rahi aur meri beti mujhsy dur rakhi itna bara dhoka itna bara jhoot
archana: ni manav plxx meri baat suniye
manav: kia tumhay aj say pehlay pata tha ky purvi humari beti hai
archana: manav
manav: pata tha ya nai ..
he shouted demanding for an answer

archana threw manav arms and equally shouted
archana: haan pata tha pata tha par
and a slap... manav slapped archana shocking everybody and archana
manav: nafrat hai mujhsy tumsay nafrat

purvi couldnt believe she came between manav and archana
purvi: aur mujhy nafrat hai apsay.. i hate you mr manav deshmuk i hate you..

arjun came towards purvi..

arjun: purvi relax..

manav: betaa (he said in crying tone)

archana was standing still putting her hand on her cheek still in shock of the slap

purvi: mat kahiye mujhy betaa mat bulaiyee mujhy kuch bhi ku ky mai apki kuch ni hu.. ap meray baba ho hi ni saktay ni hosaktay .. mai hamesha say chahti thi ky apka aur aai ka kabhi talak na ho par mai galat thi ku ky ap meri aai ko deserve hi ni kartay aur aj apnay yeh harkat karkay sabit kardia ky ap meri aai ko deserve ni kartay .. mai apki kuch ni aur jab tak zinda raho gi nafrat karo gi apsay aur apkay puray parivar say ..

purvi cried and ran outside arjun ran after her... all ran outside too..



arjun: purvi ruk jaoo plzzz
purvi was crying and running and suddenly a truck came and hit her purvi went up in air and fell on the road .. arjun felt his life went away for a moment..

arjun: purviii iii iii
he shouted and ran.. arjun sat and turned purvi holding her in his arms purvi head was bleeding so much her eyes were still open ...

arjun: oh my god oh my god blood purvi tmay kuch ni hoga tmay (he cried) kuch ni honay du ga kabhi ni purvi stay with me purvi oh shittt helppp (he shouted) koi ambulance ko bulaye meri purviii oh my god (arjun acted frantic while archan and all came out to see purvi in arjuns arms )

archana: purviii (she shouted)

purvi was not able to breathe and she was sinking purvi touched arjuns cheek trying to wipe his tears

purvi: i... lo.. v...
and she closed her eyes...


at hospital


arjun was crying profusely while dk was soothing him.. archana was sitting with sulochna and crying


archana: aai meri bachii.. aai agr usko kuch...

manav was standing still ..



arjun: dad if anything happens to her i would die dad i would die dad i want my purvi...

arjun put his face in his palms and cried...


doctor came out

arjun got up and went to her

arjun : doctor purvi? hows she ? she is fine right? btayeee na..

dr: mr kirlosker.. i am sorry hum apkay baby ko nai bacha sakay..

everyone shocked..

before dr could further say arjun went inside.. and stood still looking at purvi whose eyes were opened.. arjun went to her and held her hand.. purvi looked at him confused

arjun: purvi i...

purvi: ap kon?

arjun got shocked and rest all too who were standing in the door..


precap : twist twist twist


next part would be soon if you guys are going to like and comment... and buddy me if u want pm.. and if any of you want to talk just pm me...



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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Great comeback Yusa! Well Written!
But this ended on a sad note😭 Arjun and Purvi lost their baby, and Purvi is in a state of shock.. and the D's wont believe that Archana just found out and now Purvi hates Manav..
Edited by -LiveLaughLove- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Nice update:)
But the end 😭
Please update soon:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Wow nice dear
Loved all arvi scence .
Very much eager to know what us going to happen
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Nice update !! Omg Arvi lost their baby :'( and cant see Purvi like this :(

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