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it was amazing
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CHAPTER 5
truth




archana and sulochna was at mandir praying from GOD , sulochna saw archana who was crying she put her hand on archana's shoulder and tried to soothe her , archana looked at sulochana and hugged her

"bohat dukh hota hai aai, mai bs apni purvi ki khushian chahti hu par ovi nay toh hadh paar kardi hai . aai mai manti hu kay mainay teju ovi aur sachu ko palaa ni hai par aai manav , unkay sanskaro ko kia howa? yakeen ni ata kay ovi sachu teju manav ki parvarish hai , aur meri purvi wo bikul meri jaisi hogai balidaan aur tyag karnay lag gai mai aisa ni chahti thi aai" archana said helplessly

"archu chinta mat kar bappa hain na?" sulochana said "woh sb theek kardaein gay "

archana wiped her tears and nodded , sulochna and archana turned around to go and saw a lady in late 50's standing infront of them, the lady was looking at archana curiously, archana returned a curious look aswell, the lady came and stood close to archana
lady: pehchna apnay?
(archana and sulochna looked at eachother)
archana: apko kaisay bhool sakti hu, ap ny hi toh ovi aur tej kay time pay meri delivery ki thi, ap head nurse thi hospital mai kanika ji ..
kanika: kaisi hain apki betian? kafi bari hogai hongi eb toh , shadian bhi hogai hongi
archana: bhot bari hogai hai dono (archana sighed thinking about ovi and tej)
humay eb chalna chai, ap apna khyal rakhi jaga kanika ji .. chal aai
(archana and sulochna started to move when)
kanika: aek mint archana ji
(archana looked at kanika)
archana: ji?
kanika: mai apni zindagi kay aisay marhlay mai hu jahan say meri zindagi kabhi bhi khatam hosakti hai
(sulochan looked confused while archana held kanika ji's hand and squuezed it)
archana: yeh ap kaisi baatein kar rai hain kanika ji?
kanika: mujhy kehnay dijay archana ji, mujhy cancer hai.. cancer ki last stage pay hu mai
(sulochan and archana looked shocked)
kanika: shaid yeh bemari meri saza hai, aek aisay cheez ki jo mujhy ni karni chai thi
(archana arched her brows thinking)
archana: mujhy kuch samjh ni araha kanika ji kia kehna chahti hain ap?
(knika sighed)
kanika: aek bohat bara sach hai, bht bara jo mainay chupaya hai jo apki zindagi say related hai
(archana was utterly shocked)
archana: kaisa sach?
kanika: aj say theek 18 saal pehlay jis din ap apni bachiyo ki delivery keliye humaray hospital aai thi, usi din aek aur lady bhi delivery keliye aya tha , us din apnay twins larkiyo ko janam dia tha aur us lady nay ek larki ko birth di thi, children room mai rakhay thi apki bachian aur us lady ki bachi bhi apki bachiyon kay sath wali coat mai hi thi, us couple ko jaldi nikalna tha, isliye mainay nurse ko children room say unki beti lanay ko kaha, aur nurse nay galti say apki choti wali beti ko us couple ko day dia
(sulochana put her palm on her mouth to prevent from making a sound while archana eyes widened on this new found shocking news)

"choti beti, mat ... matlab ovi" archana stammered

kanika: jb mai children room mai gi aur mainay apki choti baby ka coat khali dekha toh mai ghabra gai, mainy nurse say pocha toh usny mujhy btaya, hum us couple kay room mai phonchay toh dekha woh ja chukay thy, humaray paas unka koi record ni tha mai kia karti, apni image bachanay keliye mujhy jo teek laga wo mainay kia, mainy us couple ki beti apki choti beti ki coat mai rakh di aur tabhi apnay akay apni dono bachiyo ko locket pehnaye aur unko naam diye, mujhy maaf kardijy archana ji plzzz us wakt mujhy jo teek laga wa mainay kia , mujhy maaf kardi jay mainay us couple ko dhondhnay ki bht koshish ki par wo ni milay par aj mai yeh sach aur ni chupana chahti thi, eb shaid mai chain say mar sako
(kanika looked down while crying, while archana open her mouth unable to speak and put her hand on her head tears skipped her eyes)
archana: is.. iska matlab ovi meri beti nai hai
(with this she broke on her knees and cried loudly, sulochana sat with archana and tried to calm her but archana cried more)
archana: aai ovi mera khoon ni hai, wo meri beti nai hai aai wo meri aur manav ki beti nai hai aai wo teju ki behn ni hai aai meri beti kahan hogi phir?
(archana stood up frantically facing kanika)
archana: kaun thi wo aurat jo meri bachi lay gai? bataye kanika ji? apnay aisa kaisay kia? mujhsy meri bachi door kardi? kaun thy wo log? koi naam? koi address meri bachi kaha hogi? aai wo kis halat mai hogi? boliye na kanika ji
(archana shaked kanika)
kanika: archana ji mujhy kuch ni pata sivaye unki aek photo ky meray paas kuch ni hai wo bhi camera recording say mili takay kabhi agr unka samna ho toh mai

archana: kaha hai wo photo?
(kanika opened her purse and handed a picture to archana, archana held the picture in her hand and her eyes again wided seeing the couple in the picture so does sulchana she again covered her mouth with her palms)
sulchana: archu yeh? yeh wo..
(archana unbelievably shooked her head and started to move, sulochna and kanika followed her, archana went to chawl in karajkar house staright into the room and opened the cupboard and tookout an album opened it , sulochna and kanika too came in the room and saw the album nd saw the picture of the same couple whose picture kanika just gave to archana)
kanika: archana ji ap inko janti hain?inhi ko toh di thi apki choti beti us nurse nay

(archana looked at sulochana and more tears cane to her eyes)
archana: 18 saal pehlay jb mainy apni bachiyo ko janam dia, uskay kuch din baad meray pati meri bachiyo kay sath apni aai baba kay sath mujhy chor kay canada chalay gaye, mai unky peechay gai airport gai par bht dair ho chuki thi, wo sb ja chukay thy mera parivaar ja chuka tha aur mai akeli thi toot gai thi, jeenay ki koi icha ni thi, mai airport say nikli aek bejaan ki tran par bahar dekha ky aek car ka accident howa tha, paas gai toh dekha wo couple usi wakt mar chukay thay par unki pyari si bachi theek thi ro rai thi jaisay mujhy pukar rai ho mainy usay godh mai uthaya aur wo chup hogai apni bachiyo say dur honay kay baad us choti si bachi ny mujhy jeenay ki icha di, usky saath hi yeh album thi, mainy bht pata karaya yeh pata chala ky yeh couple annat tha inkay parivaar mai koi ni tha, bht pta karanay kay baad mainy us bachi ko adopt karliya aur uska naam purvi rakha
(archana slided down with the help of the wall)
kanika: iska matlab ky us nurse ny jis couple ko apki choti beti di, unki accident mai death hogai aur apko apki hi beti wapis mil gai
(sulochana smiled through tears and archana wiped her tears)
archana: iska matlab kay mainay apni khud ki beti ko apny khud kay khoon ko adopt karlia
(sulochana hugged archana )
archana: purvi meri beti hai , meri aur manav ki, 18 saal say mera apna khoon meri bachi meray saath thi aur mai usay yeh kaha kay wo anaat hai? ovi ni purvi meri beti hai..
(kanika smiled thinking that archana own daughter was with her only, her guilt went away and she went from the house)
sulochana: yeh sab bappa ka tay kia wa tha archu , humay purvi ko manav ko btana chai
(sulochna stood up excited archana hold sulochana )
archana: niii aii hum manav ko kuch ni btaein gay warna wo mujhy meri purvi ko bhi cheen laein gay, aai hum kici ko kuch ni btaein gay na manav ko na purvi na kici ko
sulochana: par ku archu?
archana: aai purvi toh hamesha say meri thi aur hai, mera pyar is cheez say usky liye kum ya ziada ni hoga ky eb wo mera apna khoon hai, mujhy khushi hai par obi ka kia? wo yeh baat ni samjhay gi rishtay aur uljh jaein gay aai isliye iss raaz ko raaz rehnay day..
sulochana: hmm
(both cried and hugged eachother tightly)



kirlosker residence

arjun : jab mai baat kar raha hu purvi mujhy mat kataa karo okay?
(purvi was trying to talk to arjun since half an hour but arjun was so hyper necause of the party fiasco, they went to a party and ovi was there and insulted purvi again and arjun was about to burst her when purvi intrupted and took arjun away)
arjun: damn that ovi !
purvi:arjun wo meri behn hai she is ny sister
arjun: behn hai toh kia? kabhi bhi kuch bi bolay gi?
purvi: jhoot kia kaha arjun usnay sach hi toh kaha aai meri apni aai ni hain mai aek anaat hu arjun mai yeh sbkuj deserve ni karti aur agr humari shadi na hoti toh shaid mera baby bhi anaat aur najaiz hi kehlata
(purvi cried)
arjun: i don't believe this, how dare you talk this about you and our baby?
(arjun went close to purvi and kissed her tears and then planted a kiss on her forehead )
arjun: i love you purvi and i can die for you, tumharay bina meri koi zindagi ni, tum meri jaan ho.. ovi is getting on my nerves i hate her when she says a word against you..
(arjun stood up and placed his hand on purvi tummy)

arjun: princess kirosker and mummy kirosker needs rest..
(he kissed her tummy when his phone rang)

arjun: hello, yup ya What??

(purvi looked at arjun all tensed)


the end
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one
good twist
want to what happen further
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome yaar!
Yusa partner u r a very good writer.
Loved the new twist.
Waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wohoo wht a twist awsmmm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really thankful 4 the pm dear...i'm having exams and its nowadays really difficult to spend my time leisurely in if...so ur pm was like a lifesaver...lovely update...next time give me more arvi scenes plzzz😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey..

*first of all you guys commented a big thankyou for that but only 4 likes? thats a little depressing yar .. the ones who are getting pmd should atleast hit the like button and comment it wont take alot of time..
*i know some of you finded the last chapter a little boring but that twist needed to come out as it will play a very important part ahead..
*the one who needs to get pmd please buddy me..

CHAPTER 6

"arjun kia howa? kiska call tha? is everything fine?" purvi asked
arjun was in tension but looking at a panicked purvi he controlled himself and held purvi by her shoulders looking straight into her eyes
"its office thing, i need to go dad and manav baba are waiting for me i'll have to go but what you need to do is calm and rest, okay? what you need to do is?"arjun asked
"rest" purvi answered
"good girl" arjun placed a kiss on purvi's forehead
"be safe arjun" purvi said concerned
arjun held her hand closer to his heart "i will, bye" arjun waved purvi and went away..


the phone ranged at deshmuks, i was archana's cell, archana ran out from kitchen and took her cell phone in her hand to see purvi's name flashing on it, by seeing the name archana's eyes filled with tears, she controlled her emotions sat on the chair and took the call
"hello , haan purvi kaisi hai tu?"
"aai mai theek hu, arjun abi abi office gaye hain toh socha tujhay phone karlu..tu kaisi hai?" purvi asked
"purvi mai teri aai hu, tu paas ni hoti na tabh bhi bta sakti hu ky tu itni low sound kar rai hai .. kisi nay kuch kaha?"

there purvi sealed her lips and tears skipped her eyes and she thought 'aai tu kaisay jaan jati hai meray dukho ko'


"kuch ni aai , wo bs yuhi" purvi tried to lie but archana was a mother its hard to lie to a mother
"tujhy meri kasam purvi" archana said
"aai aj mai aur arjun aek party mai gaye thy wahan ovi bhi thi usny drink ki v thi bs phir thori behas hogai mainy arjun ko rok dia jiski waja say arjun bhi naraz hogaye par ab sab theek hai" purvi took a deep breath
"purvi aek larki ki jab shadi hoti hai na beta tabh uskay paas aek ni doo ghar hotay hain , aek larki ko yeh ana chai kay wo apnay dono gharo ko kaisay sambhalay, purvi arjun tera pati hai tera farz banta hai kay tu uska sath day chahay wo galt ku na ho aur tu ovi keliye arjun say behas kar rai hai?purvi apni khushiyo ka soch, arjun ka soch kisi ky baray mai sochna band karday samjhi" archana reasoned
"aai ovi tera khoon hai phir bhi tu mera sath day rai hai?" purvi said

archana felt a knife through her heart which pierced her badly, she put her hand on her heart and thought "kash mai tujhy bta sakti purvi kay tu mera khoon mera apna khoon par mai tujhy wpi samjhao gi jo sahi hai"

"purvi khoon ky rishto say baray dil kay rishtay hotay hn samjhi, tu jakay rest kar baad mai baat karti hu" archu hunged up the call and cried her heart out



OVT industries

"how could this be? compound mai aag lag gai and everyone was damn sleeping? kici nay kuch bhi ni dekha?" arjun shouted on staff
"calm down son" dk said
"haan arjun inmay insabki koi galti ni hai it was supposed to be half time thank god kici ko chot ni aai" manav said
"thats the thing kici ko chot ni aai par aa toh sakti thi ? dad even security guards don't know kay aag kaisay lagi this is rediculous" arjun sarcasticlly said
"we will figure something out son" dk answered
"we have to, nuksan howa wo alag .. now what are we threatened?" arjun asked not believing

company phone ranged

"geeta turn it on speaker" arjun said who was standing with dk, manav, sachin and staff

"jay raam ji ki" a man said
arjun, dk manav sachin looked at each other
"who is this?"sachin asked
"bai hum kaun hain yeh janna zarori ni hai par baat ee hai ky compound mai aag lag gai usay bhi bari baat eee hai kay kici ko chot ni aai " the man laughed
arjun went closer to the phone
"shut the damn up" arjun said angry

"kaun bolat hai? arjun kirlosker? kia hai na arjun seth.. chilao mat humka unchi awaz sunay ki adt ni hai aur jab insan ki bura tym cha raha ho to apay say bahar ni hojana chai samjhay ho kay ni" the man said

"kehna kia chhtay ho? ho kaun tum?" dk asked

"hum ooo hn jo compound mai agg laga gaye, chahty to aur bhi nuksan karsakty thy par abi toh shurvat hai agay agay dekho hota hai kia?" with this the phone disconnected

"damn" arjun punched the table
manav was about to go closer to arjun but a stone hit the window and came inside breaking it , sachin took the stone in his hand which was folded in a paper type thing , when sachin opened it , it was a family picture which included everyone the kirloskers , deshmuks, karanjkars and a cross was made upon it , dk manav arjun all saw the picture and changed confused looks..


purvi was waiting for arjun wearing a red saari ..
"anay do baby apky papa ko mai aur ap milkay unko mana laein gay" purvi said to herself and smiled "kia hai na apkay papa thoray kadoos hain par he is the best dad" purvi placed her hand on her tummy "i love him alot and i know so do you" purvi smiled "he is so excited for you pari" purvi walked and sat on the couch "and i already named you pari kirlosker, arjun is going to get happy bcz your papa calls you princess kirlosker, u knw sweety pie you are going to get the best daddy in the world and the man who is going to ruin you bcz apkay mu say farmaish niklay gi ni kay arjun kirlosker going to fulfill it" purvi kissed her fingers and than put it on her tummy.. "come fast we are waiting for you jaan "

"pari kirlosker is a nice name baby " arjun said standing at the door with folded arms giving his top looks , he heard all the conversation between them
"toh jab papa office hotay hain toh mother daughter duo conbersations karta hai?" arjun smiled coming towards purvi who stood up and hugged arjun, arjun than sat on his toes and kissed purvi's tummy whisperring "papa loves mama and pari even more" arjun got up and interlocked his hand with purvi and sat on sofa with purvi resting her head on arjun's shoulder
"kia howa office mai?" purvi asked
(i cannot hide all stuff from purvi .. picture ka ni btata but rest she should know)
"compound mai agg lag gai thi" arjun said tried to be calm
purvi got up with a shock
"what?" purvi asked shock
arjun stood up aswell
"hey baby relax nothing happened workers ki galti ki waja say aag lag gai bs eb sb theek hai " arjun said
purvi hugged arjun
"no ones hurt na? ap theek hn arjun?" purvi asked concerned
"look at me i am as oky as i could be " arjun said smiling
"dont ever leave me apkay bina mai jee ni paao gi mar jaoon gi " purvi cried
"purvi shut up oky kbhi aisa mat kehna i am breathing bcz u r.. the day u stopped breathing i would also stop living aswell, you are my sole reason to live" arjun confessed and brought his face closer to purvi's and placed a kiss near her lips suddenly the bell rang and arvi got startled
"bad timings" arjun pouted and purvi laughed they went to open the door and saw no one standing but a gift was placed on floor arjun bend down and took it and read on the card
"for the would be mother" arjun read while purvi took the gift
"yeh kisnay bheja hoga? humnay toh kici ko btaya ni sivaye family ky maybe aai nay bheja ho" purvi said while opening the gift and got shocked to see it was there wedding picture and a cross was made upon it and with that a knife covered with blood, purvi left the frame and it broke down while arjun engulfed purvi in his arms trying to calm her down and purvi cried..



the end

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precap: the truth will come out of purvi being manav and archu daughter infront of all and a shock for you all ..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update partner!
The precap sounds amazing.
Waiting for the nExt part.
Thankx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice update😊.arjun purvi convo is soo lovely.very excited for the next part😳
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wow...i have got to say ur story is great n super interesting...though i have some problems understanding the hindi parts...i juz try to get the gist of it...do update soon...tq

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