ARVI FF:BEINTEHAAN(updated chapter 7 on page 19)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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forgive me for my mistakes😳😳😳

(disclaimer:all characters are imaginary n story also is imaginary... imagining from dreamland of arvi😳😳😳)

this ff starts from the train scene of arvi...

chapter 1


purvi was about to fall when arjun came n saved her...she hugged him tightly n hugged and clutched his shirt...

arjun:purvi tum thik ho na...
purvi:arjun tumne mujhe kyun bachaya arjun...tum mere peecha kar rahe the...arjun mujhe mere haal par chod do...
arjun:purvi mai aise kaise chod doon tumhe...
purvi:kyun nahi arjun????mai margayi hoti toh kitna acha hota

arjun just put his fingers on her lips n said

arjun:aise kaise chod doon purvi...tumhaare marne ke baad mere paas jeene ka koi wajah hi nahi hogi...
purrvi:tera shaadi hua hai arjun uss shaadi ko bachaneka koshish karo...mujhe bhul jao...apne mann se un yadon ko mithado ki tumne kabbhi mujse pyaar kiya tha
arjun:mai usse nibhaaneka koshish nahi toh aur kya karraha hoon purvi???...mai tumhe bhul jau...kaise purvi pari jo meri aur teri beti hai woh hamesha mujhe yaad dilati rahegi ki hum dono ek dusre se...tum chahti ho ki mai tujhe bhul jauna toh mujhe bata ki kya tum mujhe bhul payi ho...

purvi: shaadi hua hai mera onir ke saath arjun... aur mai is shaadi ko nibhaane ka har koshish karungi

arjun:mere sawalon ka jawab ye nahi hai purvi...maine pucha ki tum mujhe bhulkar aage badgayi ho ya nahi...kya tum aaj bhi mujse pyaar karti ho

purvi turned away n said:arjun tum jao yahan se
arjun held her by shoulders n asked:maine pucha ki tum mujhe bhul payi ho ya nahi
purvi:arjun mujhe please chod do
arjun:mujhe mere sawalon ka jawab chahiye

suddenly they both were pushed out of the train...they both fell down from the train...n were bleeding...their breath level were experiencing a raise n fall...


in train

(just imagine ki jaise serial mai dikhate hai...revolving camera around a person in 360 degress😆)

their stood ovi n onir laughing out very loudly...n giving hi-five to each other

ovi:ye humne kiya onir...humne arjun aur purvi ka prem kahani ka the end kardiya...we did it
onir:yes ovi hamare plan kaamiyaab hua...aur is plan ke wajah se maine apna doctor ka license bhi kodiya
shalini:koi baat nahi darling...itna chinta kyun karte hai aap...ab ye purvi toh margayi ab aap mera buisness sambalna

onir:haan shaalu darling(n hugged her n asked ovi )ovi tum kya karogi???
ovi:aur kya mai aaramse apna modelling career ko continue karungi...ye arjun margaya..aur mai bahut kush hoon...agar woh zinda rehta toh mai...mai...dar ke saath jee rahi hoti...iss dar se ki woh mera sach baba ko...nahi agar woh batadiya hota toh...mai...
onir:oh common ovi...ab woh margaya...uske saath ye sach bhi...
kinshuk:haan onir sirf ovi ka sach nahi...tera bhi...kabhi kisiko bata nahi chalega ki tum purvi ka zindagi mai kyun aaye
ovi:onir thanku so much
onir:aakhir mai tera friend hoon...tere liye itna toh kar sakta ta na...aur zyada mujhe uss purvi se badla lena tha...

(the spot where both arjun n purvi were lying)

arjun:purvi... purvi:arjun...
arjun:purvi aakhri saans tak mai tera saat dena ka wachan diya tha...lo mai nibha raha hoon...par tumne nahi nibhaya
purvi:arjun maine...
arjun:haan purvi tumne waada kiya tha ki tum hamesha meri hi bankar rahogi par...

purvi:aisa mat bolo...mai hamesha teri hi thi aur hamesha teri hi rahungi...tere bina mere mann mai kisi aur ke liye jagah nahi hai...arjun maine tujse kiya hua wada puri ki hai aur kar bhi rahi hoon...

arjun:kya marne se pehle meri ek sawal ka jawab ka dogi
purvi:she was crying...n nodded her head

arjun:tum mera woh sawal ka jawab do jo maine tumse pucha
purvi:haan arjun mai tujhe bhulkar kabhi aage nahi bad paayi...aaj bhi mai sirf aur sirf tujse pyaar karti hoon
arjun:mai bhi tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon purvi...

n they both struggled hard to come close to each other n held each others hand in the process...

purvi:agar bhagwan ne mujhe phirse iss dharti par janam lene ka mokha diya toh mai waada karti hoon ki mai tujhe kissi bhi haalat mai dur nahi karungi...waada raha mera ki tujhe paane keliye mai kisi had tak jaungi...par mai tujhe apna banakar hi rahungi...apne aapse alag hone nahi dungi...tumhe chod kar kabhi nahi jaungi

arjun:aur tum chahogi toh bhi mujse kabhi dur jaane nahi dunga...mere pyaar ki khatir mai ladunga...apni jaan ko apne aap se dur nahi jaane dunga...i love u purvi...i love u...
purvi:i love u too...

a tear dropped escaped from both arjun n purvi's eyes n they closed their eyes...holding each other's hand as a symbol that even death cannot make them apart

suddenly wind started blowing...it strated raining heavily as if it is very angry by seeing the death of that couple to which it had blessed every time in their each n every beautiful moments...
due to these variations in atmosohere the train in which onir n ovi were travelling met thru an accident...n they died...


after 100 years

(zyada leap hogayana...just imagine ye story 1913 mai hua tha n the present story that i'll write from next update is happening in 2013)
i think ye zyada filmi hogaya...but still tried to write it...

thot of writing os but ended up with ff...
i was literally😭😭😭when i wrote arvi scenes imagining them😭😭
but i wanna bring lotz of happiness in their life also in this story so tried to write this ff
still didn't think abt the name of ff...
tell me should i continue or not...


INDEX

chapter 1 - pg 1
chapter 2 - pg 5
chapter 3 -pg 8
chapter 4 - pg 12
chapter 5 - pg 14
chapter 6 - pg 17
chapter 7 - pg 19

Edited by harini_arvi - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayy ranju m the 1st one to comment 😃
Abt ur ff it is awesome...arvi ka scene padhte waqt mujhe 😭 aa raha tha...plz do continue soon,.waitng fr ur next update...aur haan mujhe pm kar 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved ur ff ranju pls update soon 😊

plss update ur other ff also 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice one capi...do continue soon and pm me too>>

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update.😊
pm me😃
update your other ff please😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was wonderful dear. loved it 😳
but you have made arvi die, then how will you continue it ? 🤔
please don't make them die 😊
like archana bring them back 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice ff
arvi conversation is nice
plzz update soon
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amazing ff...
loved it...
plz pm me for d updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow its awesme badi :) contiune kar yeh le RD wala hugge 🤗 btw ek baat bata agar hum log 1913 hai toh yeh INTERNET kaha se aaya re :P 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arvifan1

yayy ranju m the 1st one to comment 😃
Abt ur ff it is awesome...arvi ka scene padhte waqt mujhe 😭 aa raha tha...plz do continue soon,.waitng fr ur next update...aur haan mujhe pm kar 😳



thank u eshu😊😛😃

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