ArVi SS-Will Be Together Forever part 10 , pg 13

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crazygirl4RD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

guys m sorry... i need some time for the next update..i hope its OK with u all

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NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: crazygirl4RD
guys m sorry... i need some time for the next update..i hope its OK with u all

not a problem Saddy😊

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Safoera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Wow! Soham n Neeti are working together!👍🏼...Great!...Now I really want to know how these two are going to bring Arvi together!

Please Update soonn!😃

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Khesnee B

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

this part starts with the next day..

A new day! A new start, a new hope that this day will be slightly better than yesterday!

neeti's studio:- ( neeti is practising her dance moves with her friends,when her friend manisha tells her that some one had come to meet her.)

M- neeti some one is here to meet u..

N- who?

M- dnt knw but that person is waiting for u in ur make up room.

N- mite be arjun or teju..let me check it though..

(neeti's makeup room)

Its not just someone who had come to meet her, its probably someone who had just entered her life, someone who will probably make this girl say

In a world full of wrong choices, someday, someone came into my life who made me say...'this time, I got it right!'- (unknown quotes!)

The prompt reply of Neeti that it may be Arjun or Teju just shows that she is a loner in this city, knowing no other person...no other bond!But probably, just probably she is wrong this time!Hopefully she is!

N- hello who is der??

(the person is soham)

Soham- the name means a lover or music and art---> no doubt he is falling for Neeti!!!!

S- hello halkat jawaani..

N- first of all m NEETI(sternly) n secondly what the hell are u doing here?

S- means ??i came to meet u here. (with this neeti runs towards him n catch hold of his collar)

Neeti asking Soham to call him Neeti and not Halkat jawani...shows that somewhere she is affected by this person who has messed with her best friend...with her...With her feelings!Thus avoiding the nickname and trying to keep a distance from soham!

But Soham being soham won't let go so easily!

N- listen u ... m not gonna leave u now..u shot my friend,kidnapped his love-life- ur sister n now u are thinking to hurt me...but m not gonna let u win.u n ur darling sister ovi had hurt him enough n m not gonna let u live.(neeti is about to punch him on his face when he holds her hand)

For once forgetting all her feelings, because she cares a lot for her friend Arjun!

This shows what a caring and protective girl she can be sometimes!

A girl who can go to any extent for his friends!

The way she said "kidnapped his love-life" shows that though she seem to be angry with Purvi, she is not really! She is just a girl who is hurt to see her best buddy hurting!Perhaps she just want the best for Arjun!

A true friend never gets in your way unless you happen to be going down. (quote by Arnold H.Glasow )

S- ohh so that arjun kirloskar is ur friend..welll unfortunately he is alive..if ever i had got chance i willl make sure he gets hospitalised atleast for ruining purvi's life.

The caring nature of a brother who cannot see his sister hurt, a brother who can get someone hospitalised for hurting his sister!

Soham may be seen as a goon, as someone not having feelings but he does care for those who he love, it's just that he doesn't want to show it fearing that this bad world will take advantage of his love(his vulnerability)

N- how dare u talk about that in front of me...what will u do ..i will myself make u n r darling sister ovi 's life a living hell ,where no one can heal u... u better get it ..

S- what will u do ... arjun has done much to make ovi's n purvi's life a hell.whats more he is a cheater..he has cheated purvi by leaving her on the marriage day..

(with this neeti is about to hit soham when she realises what all wrong he is talking)

A mistake is to commit a misunderstanding. by Bob Dylan
Soham commited the same the same mistake, but Neeti is wise enough to not commit this mistake, therefore not hitting Soham!

Who knows maybe this misunderstanding will pave a way for compromise,..for...friendship...for LOVE!

N- wait wait wait...what did u say ??arjun left purvi??

S- ya wats wrong in that..he left purvi n married ovi..

N- ohh hello its not arjun who left purvi in fact ur dear -cum- mahaan sister left my poor friend arjun..

S- what nonsense??

N- ohh now it seems nonsense to u..what about ur darling sister ovi 's doing ,isn't that nonsense??

S- what has ovi done..its arjun who had married her to get her dad's business??

N- wait wait lets be clear ..its all messy.. arjun told me that purvi had told him to marry ovi as ovi made a deal with her .i.e if arjun marries ovi then ovi will accept her aai. n this made arjun to marry that spoilt brat..

S- what?? i dnt believe it!!

N- i care less about u believing or not,but u have no rite to point finger at my friend..btw who told u that arjun married ovi with his wish?

S- aa..a.aa... no one ,i ..i just thought, thought that (neeti cuts him)

Wethern's Law: Assumption is the mother of all screw-ups

Its normally assumptions that is the root of misunderstanding, and same with Soham who believes that this world is just too bad, hopefully with Neeti around him he will be a little positive!

N- ohh so u had ur own conclusions..thats y people say thinking before saying n believing ..u heard only half baked story n with it u r cursing my friend..

S- oh m sorry i just thought ke arjun cheated purvi..m sorry really sorry..

Realising your mistake, and not blaming others and saying sorry doesn't make you low in somebody's eyes but it rather prove that u are wise enough to acknowledse your fault and apologise!

N- leave that ..but how dare u shoot my friend m not gonna leave u (neeti again goes to hit him ,n he again stops)

S- SORRYYY(getting afraid) .. i didnt knw he was ur friend , i just ,i just did it with frustration..m sorry really sorry..i repent shooting him.. i committed a sin.plzz forgive me..

Soham getting scared is just a surprise, atleast Neeti can stir this feeling into him!

N- not so easy m not gonna forgive u .u have to pay for it (by grabbing the collar tightly)

S- no plzz forgive me ..i will do what ever u tell me??plzz forgive me

(a plan hits neeti's head n she thinks this idea will be the best)

N- well if so ..then i will forgive u if u will help me n do what ever i tell u,n with out questioning me .so tell will u do it??

S- y not sure ,tell me whom to kidnapp,whom to shoot .. i will do what ever u will tell me.

Soham being himself always thinks that people around him expect bad things from him that thinking of whom to kidnap but it isn't the case with Neeti!

N- well its nothing like that.but if my work doesnt gets complete ,then u will surely see me from the skies n u should ask forgiveness from there(in sense she will shoot him or kill him😆)

S- okay..okay..but what can i do for u??

N- well i will tell u later..for the time being take my num ,so that i can call up n tell u urs work(n neeti gives her num to soham n takes his as well n soham saves it as Halkat Jawaani😆)

Soham saves the name as HJ shows that he doesn't wants this distance between them!He will break all the barriers for sure one day!

S- well halkat jawaani ..what about u n me having a song shoot like that day..

N- (glares at him)NEETTIII... well u can have a dance if my work is being done proper.

S- okay i promise .. nothing will go wrong..n we will surely have a dance..anything for a dance with u.

N- i will pray for ur wish to come true MR..what so ever(n she walks away from there)

S- SOHAM..dnt forget it halkat..(soham gets all happy n leaves from there singing the song halkat jawaani)

No matter how much she tries Neeti won't be able to create distance between her and Soham's relationship

Gosh i hoped i made sense!

I was obviously re-reading your updates and this interpretation came in my mind!

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crazygirl4RD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

@ keshu..that was indeed too good dear... really like it..

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crazygirl4RD

@crazygirl4RD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

PART -7

starts with arjun n neeti having their break fast. just then ovi comes

O- arjun juice..

A- no thanks ..

N- well ovi arjun needs more food in order to bear u,juice wont work.

O- neeti u better dnt interfere , i knw whats good for arjun.

N- really i dnt think so ..

A- neeti we better leave ,m getting late..

with this they leaves..

arjun's car

N- arjun i still dnt understand why are u struck with her..just leave her.

A- i told u before neeti, i need to be with her..for purvi's happiness(neeti gets angry with it)

N- arjun u better understand what u are loosing before its too late.

just then neeti spots purvi standing on the bus stop.

N- arjun stop the car...

A- why what happ?

N- purvi

A- what

N- see there purvi is waiting for the bus.we better give her a lift.

A-(with a heavy heart)no neeti if ovi comes to knw she will think wrong of me..

N- as if she always thought good of u..come on arjun nothing will happen..u r not alone in this car.m also there , u better listen to me.

A- okay neeti,u wont leave till i fulfill ur wish rite..

N- abso rite arjun.

neeti comes out of the car n approaches purvi..purvi sees arjun n starts walking away,when neeti stops her..

N- purvi where r u going ,come with u we will drop u

P- no i will go my self..

N- well i didnt asked u will u come or not.come n sit in the car.

P- no neeti its ok.

N- u wont listen na(with this she drags her to the car.)

dnt worry purvi i will drive the car u wont feel uncomfortable then(sarcastically)

neeti n purvi sits in the front n arjun at the back n then a idea hits neeti's head.

N- oohh no i forgot...damn how could i!

A- what happ neeti??

N- arjun i had an important work some where here, i need to finish it..

A- okay so go we will wait for u .

N- no it i will take a lot of time arjun..i suggest u drop purvi where she wants to go n then go to ur office.

A- no neeti we will wait u complete ur work

N- arjun i m ordering u not asking u. u both go i will manage it..plzzz

A- but neeti..

N- arjun come n drive the car

A- Are you sure Neeti?

N- Yeah!

A- Ok, i will send a driver for you, just tell me where you are going!

N-I will manage, Arjun!Bye!

Neeti left and Arjun moved to the driver's seat and drove away the car!

Arjun glanced at Purvi, she looked uncomfortable!

Nobody talked during the journey, Arjun kept glancing at Purvi once in a while and he could see that Purvi was looking a bit annoyed! Purvi was feeling very uncomfortable whilst sitting next to Arjun, she couldn't stop herself from remembering those moments they spent together, when she and Arjun used to on shopping for their wedding. Their wedding, Purvi thought with a sigh, Their wedding which she always dreamt of, after falling in love with Arjun!

It hurt her alot to see Arjun with Ovi, hurt her more than she would ever e able to express in words! She did feel guilty sometimes for being selfish and sacrificing her love for her mother's sake, she did feel guilty for tying Arjun in an unwanted bond! But she reasoned herself that everything happens for a reason, perhaps Arjun and Purvi weren't meant to be together, Perhaps We weren't made for each other!

Purvi turned towards the greenery, not wanting to worry Arjun with her tears as she wiped them silently.

On the other hand, the silence was killing Arjun'..He was not liking this silence, infact he had started hating silence ever since Purvi entered his life! Arjun switched on the radio, the silence was gnawing his heart now and he wasn't able to bear that! He looked at Purvi, so she didn't even want to see his face now! She has already given up on their love!!!!!!!!

[On the radio]

Meri kismat ke har ik panne pe, Mere jeete jee, baad marne ke

Mere har ik kal, har ik lamhe mein... Tu likh de mera use

Arjun's heart clenched on hearing these lines, it was as if these lyrics was written on them! He couldn't stop himself from asking God that why didn't He write her in every sheet of his destiny! Why didn't He write her in his every minute, every second, every little moment of his life! Why couldn't God let her belong to me! WHY????WHYYY????

Har kahani mein, saare kisson mein, Dil ki duniya ke, sache rishton mein,

Zindgani ke, saare hisson mein, Tu likh de mera usse...

On the other way, Purvi couldn't stop her treacherous tears from rolling down her cheeks hearing those lines! So apt!!!!

Why God, Why didn't you let him belong to me! Why did I have to sacrifice him to make my mother happy! That was when, she realized that Arjun wouldn't be there for her, at every step of her life, he would''..he would be with my sister,'.with Ovi!!

Aey Khuda, Aey Khuda, Jab bana uska hi banana...

At this sentence, the lovers had only one thing in their mind;

Why couldn't I be hers?

Why couldn't I be his'?

Uss ka hoon, uss mein hoon, uss se hoon, ussi ka rehne de'..

Main to pyaasa hoon hai, daariya woh, zariya wo, jeene ka mere'..

She is the real reason I am breathing for, she's the reason I'm living! Then why did You distance me so far away from her! Don't You know, God, that I will never be able to forget her because I belong to her, I'm coz of her!!!

Mujhe ghar de, gali de, sheher de, ussi ke naam ke'..

Kadam yeh chalein, yaan ruke ab ussi ke waste''

How much I wish Arjun was with me at every step of my life, holding me through every difficulty, with me, by my side at every little step! How much I wish that he was with me, that his name, his love cocooned me!

Dil mujhe de agar, dard de uska par, Uss ki ho wo hansi, gunjhe jo mera ghar...

I demand You God, give me all her pains, even though today I am sad because of her, I still do not want any pain to even come close to her! Even though she won't be mine, she will live in my heart, even though her laughter won't resound in my house, I ask You to keep her happy,now'.FOREVER!

Aey Khuda, Aey Khuda, Jab bana uska hi banana...

Arjun let his tears flow, he didn't feel the need to hide or wipe them today!

Mere hisse ki khushi ko, hansi ko, tu chaahe, adha kar...

Chaahe le le tu meri zindagi, par yeh mujhse wada kar...

I pray that he gets all the happiness in the world, Please give me all his pains and give him all my happiness! Take even my life, God and I swear I won't feel bad, just make him happy! He deserve evry little happiness in the world, he is a GEM, and as much as I hate losing him, I can't help but ask you to keep him happy with my sister!

Uske ashqon pe, ghumon pe, dukhon pe, har uske zakhm per'.

Haq mera hi rahe, har jagah, har ghadi haan, umar bhar!!!

It should be my right to feel her pain, to cry her tears, to feel her sadness; it will always be a privilege for me to bear her pain! It will always be; everytime, everywhere!

Ab faqat ho yehi, woh rahe mujh mein hi... Ho judaa kehne ko, bichade naa par kabhi!!!

(Both thinking)So what if we are not together, we will never be separated because in our hearts, in our memories we will be together till the last breath! We will be with each other and continue to die a little every day by making others happy!

Aey Khuda, Aey Khuda, Jab bana uska hi banana...

God! Make him mine, every time I'm born''.

God, if you do exist, Then, make her mine, everytime I'm born!

Arjun stopped the car and Purvi descended without even sending a look at him, Arjun didn't wait to see her, instead he drove away the car! Today he didn't want to see her going! It hurts him to see her going away, leaving a lifetime gap between them!

Sometimes silence speak louder than words!

guys the credit for arvi scene goes to my Keshu

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Jagruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Heyy Sadoo...🤗
I LOVED this part..
it was superb and emotional😭
I wanted this to happen.after arj ovi marriage..
but it didnt..*dumb cv's*
wanted to know what arjun and purvi fellings after their(arjun ovi)marriage..thankyou for this part..
m really happy..
Uss ka hoon, uss mein hoon, uss se hoon,
ussi ka rehne de'..
I loved this lines...m gonna dwnload this song..😛
once again thankyou very much for this part.
do update soon..!!

Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago

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rithika2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

out standing update saddoo..👏 loved it alooottt...
the arvi part was superb.. u just made tears in my eyes with some of the lines...😭
the way u wrote their feelings was awesome...
thanks to u and keshu for such a lovely update dears...
i think we in IF are very good at framing ARVI scenes than the cv's.. it may be a romantic one or a pathetic we are best...😉