Imp. Note FF: VAMPIRE ROMANCE

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

NadaCinta

@NadaCinta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Fantastic update. The story is getting interesting by the chapters. Looking forward for more great updates!

Out of 3, 1 is Purvi but not sure of the other 2. These could be the good Vampires who are trying to protect the people from the evil ones. Waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

Update soon please.😊

Quote

zonan

@zonan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Becoming more interesting...👏
next chapter please...❤️

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

MagicalPari

@MagicalPari

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Hey Soumya, sorry for late commenting. Awesome update. I think those three people maybe Purvi, Archana, Soham.

Quote

WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Hmmm...The story is getting interesting...😳...Well...Another beautiful update...The story is progressing at a fast pace yet not in a hurried manner...Good job done on that!!

Well...I too agree with Neha...The three people seem to be Purvi...Archana and Sachin(old)

Quote

Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Well Well Well. Evry1 try 2 guess!! (10x 4 dat) Buttt...
But But But But But But
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
😃

No1 cn't ans properly. So BETTER LUCK NEXT TIME 😃
Opps Sry, For Next Update. 😉

Quote

priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

awesome update

can't guess who they are

maybe new entries like abhay and piya 😕

Quote

Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

awesome update
can't guess who they are
maybe new entries like abhay and piya 😕

Maybe...
Or Maynt 😃

Quote

Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Sorry guys 4 late updt. I m nt well nw days. So...
Anyways here is chpt 6(a).
Hope ew guys lyk it..
.
CHAPTER-6(a)
.
Dat guy consider himself Raj nd try 2 move away. Suddenly a group of ppl arrived deir. All r surprised 2 see dem. Dey all r in black dress up nd had a serious look on face. Seems dey r 2 Vampires!!
.
A girl cm 4m group 2 Raj nd hug him. He spared her nd walk 2wards a man looking lyk eldest nd respective 2..1st he hugged him nd talk wid him in a vry low voice. Den dat man step towards whr all r standing shockingly.
.
He informed dem dat dey r Saxenas nd Vampire 2!! Vampire word mk all scare bt he assures all dat dey r nt evil. Dey cm hr 2 help dem coz in whole city dey r the last alive family!!
.
He mk Manav understand dat Manav nd family hv 2 move wid dem as soon as, otherwise dey also die lyk others..
.
Manav agrees aftr a while coz he has no option. Bt bfr leave Savita wants 2 do Bapa's aarti as he called Bighnaharta.
Manav ask permission 4m Saxenas nd dat man said him dat dey r no1 2 stop dem 4m doing aarti nd dey hv 2 wait till Archi nd gang cm.
.
Hearing name Archi, Jenny nd Jazz become excited nd inform all Desmukh clan dat Archi z the most powerfull vampire among all nd if Archi wid dem dey hvnt 2 fear abt anythng.
.
Manav nd all started Aarti of Bapa nd also request Saxenas 2 join. Bt dey sobberly denies.
.
Aarti started...
.
Shendur laal chadhaayo achchhaa gajamukha ko Dondil laal biraaje sut gauriihar ko Haath liye guda ladduu saanii sukhar ko Mahimaa kahe na jaay laagat huun pad ko jai dev jai dev...

.

[COLOR=MAGENTA]A black mercidise arrived bfr Desmukh clan nd 3 ppls step out 4m dem... Savita nd Damodar doing aarti...
.
Jai jai jai jai jai Jai jai jii ganaraaj vidyaasukhadaataa Dhany tumhaaro darshan meraa mat ramataa jai dev jai dev...
.
They shown walking on stairs 2 upwards... Teju Ovi nd Sachin doing aarti nd den passed it to Arjun nd DK...
.
Jai jai jai ... bhaavabhagat se koii sharaNaagat aave santati sampatti sabahii bharapuur paave aise tum mahaaraaj moko ati bhaave gosaaviinandan nishidin gun gaave jai dev jai dev Jai jai jai ...
.
Jenny nd Jazz doing aarti. Saxenas watching dem 4m behind.
.
Ghaalin lotaangan vandiin charan dolyaannii paahin ruup tujhe preme aalingin aananden puujin bhaaven ovaalin mhaNe naamaa...
.
They r walking in dark towards the entrance...
.
tamev maataa pitaa tamev tamev bandhushch sakhaa tvamev tamev vidyaa draviNm tamev tamev sarvam mam dev dev...
.
They r still walking... Jenny handover thali 2 Manav...
.
kaayen vaach manasendriyairvaa buddhyaatmanaa vaa prakritisvabhaavaakaromi yadyat sakalam parasmai naaraaya Naayeti samarpayaami...
.
Manav doing aarti... They reached at door...
.
achyut keshavm raamanaaraayanam krishna daamodaram vaasudevam hari shriidharam maadhavam gopikaavallabham jaanakiinaayakam raamachandram bhaje...
.
Door opened nd dey entered 2 house...
Manav stoped aarti nd look backwards wid others...
A smile cm on saxenas's faces.
Back ground was so bright so cn't see deir face...
Dey walked 2 middle nd light cms...
.
hare raam hare raam raam raam hare hare hare krishna hare krishna krishna krishna krishna hare hare
.
Manav, Savita, Damodar, Arjun, DK nd Sachin stood speachlessly lyk dey get the biggest shock of deir lyf. Tears r flown accross the chicks of Manav, Arjun nd Dk.
.
Savita look scared nd Damodor, sachin happy wid tearful eyes. Ovi, Teju, Jenny nd Jazz look confused..
.
Manav: A..Ar..Archana??!!!
DK: Aashna??!!
Arjun: Mom... Pu.. Purvi??!
.
Archana, Ashna nd Purvi standing in a arrow 4rm emotionlessly.
Suddenly Manav drop the thali nd Archana caught it in a lightening speed...
.
If itz lame don't bash on me plz. Do lyk nd cmmnt sure coz it inspires me..

Edited by Soumya02 - 13 years ago

Quote

Jagruti

@AnAvidReader

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

heyy chapter was amazing...
archana aashna and purvi vampires.. 😲
ohh how devastated arjun will be kbowing that girl he loves is not alive...and archana a vampire..this was a shock..
wow..suspense is building up..waiting for ur next update..
get well soon.. 😃

Quote

Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr
heyy chapter was amazing...
archana aashna and purvi vampires.. 😲
ohh how devastated arjun will be kbowing that girl he loves is not alive...and archana a vampire..this was a shock..
wow..suspense is building up..waiting for ur next update..
get well soon.. 😃

10q u

Quote

1 ... 6 7 8 9 10

Imp. Note FF: VAMPIRE ROMANCE - Page 8

Related Topics

Explore Topics