Imp. Note FF: VAMPIRE ROMANCE - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
I lovd the story. Plz pm me whn u update it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
I knw many ppls r hate Ovi & want 2 kill her. Bt ovi isnt 1 Stop sign 4 ArVi deir will be many more.
So Ovi's death z nt solution of all prblms. Bt it'll cause many prblms. So hv patient & wait 4 a positive twist.
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Edited by Soumya02 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Chapter - 6

Ovi demands her mother 4m Manav, whch mk Manav speechless.
He cn't able 2 say 4 sm tym. He try 2 change the topic. Bt Ovi keep asking whch mk Manav irritate & he walk away 4m their.
In his room, Manav tk out a pic of his wife Archana frm a hiden box & started 2 remind all his gd tyms whch he spend wid her.
Meanwhile in news a waring gvn 2 stay inside home & nt 2 cm out. Becoz a huge nu of deadbody is found around city whch r killed mysteriously!!
Bt Ovi z already out widout inform any1 as c want 2 get rid 4m her frustration.
While walking c o9ly thnk abt Arjun.
How he denay 4m dance wid her, bt hurt himself 2 dance wid another grl.
Suddenly c feels dat sm1 is behind her. C turned bt cn't find any1 & again start walking.
Suddenly sm1 grabs her frm behind & try 2 bite her. She yells 4 help bt it is useless. Becoz c reached unconsiously near the forest & it has no sign 2 hv mankind their.
Ovi started 2 faint bt suddenly sm1 approach their & save her 4m dat.
Ovi faints bt bfr 2 loose her sense c o9ly able 2 catch dat's eyes becoze dat covers it's face by a black cloth.

In Desmukh mension, Jenny & Jazz reached their in a vry bad condition. Dey get hurted in manywhr on deir body.
Dey informed Teju dat deir family members were killed by vampires. Bt dey hw evr mk a narrow escape.
Teju assures dem & search Ovi 2 gv her de news. Bt c cn't found her any whr in house.
Teju called out 4 Manav who lost in Archana's memories, suddnly cm in sense & go 2wards her aftr wipe his tears nd hide dat pic in a safe place.
Teju informed Manav abt Ovi & the going circumtances.
He bcm scare 2 thnk abt Ovi & leave 2 find her. Bt whn he open the door 2 leave he found Ovi laying on ground unconsiously.
Manav carries her 2 her room & lay her on the bed. He tried 2 call doctor bt he didn't pick up his phone.!!
At dat tym Ovi cm into sense. 1st c hugs her Baba & sis den narrates all.
Jenny & Jazz told her dat c z so lucky dat c z alive & 10x 2 dat angle who send by God 2 save her.
Meanwhile Savita, Damodar & Sachin arrived, who r out 4 smdays.
Sachin asked Manav dat Why is city looking so empty?? He also told him dat he usually drive slow bt 2nyt he drove 1st as he felt sm1 following dem.
Manav narrets all & also told them nt worry abt Ovi as c z alrit nw.
He also informed all dat he called DK & Arjun 2 cm here.
Meanwhile DK & Arjun also arrived. Dey also told smthng whch Sachin had told bfr.
Suddenly light gona off.
Whn all r wondering abt the suddn cut of current, Arjun & Sachin cm & informed all dat nthng gona wrong wid feuz.
Teju, Ovi, Jenny & Jazz lightend up the house through candels.
Suddenly a knock on door was heared whch mk all scared. Savita told Manav nt 2 open the door.
Manav asked who z their 4m inside. Bt no ans cm.
Suddenly a glass breaking sound heared. And 3 ppls jump 4m the windows.
Vampires!!! Jenny & Jazz whishpered.
Wow u'r so intelligent dear!! U recocnize us. Sm1 among them told dem.
They 3 r looking so furious. Their eye balls r red & the waredrobs r black. And a vry bad smell of dead bodies cm frm dem whch z enough 2 mk a prsn 2 lost its sense.
Manav asked them wht dey want?? & its nt a way 2 rush into a gentelman's house.
They all laugh loudly & furiously. And started to step forward 2 dem.
Manav screams all 2 ran bt they quickly surrounds dem & told nt 2 try escape coz its hv no use.
Suddenly a word heard 4m back STOP!!
All look at dat place 4m whr de sound cm.
You!! a vamp said.
Yes I, opps nt I its we. nd sm ppl shown walking 2wards. All r in black dress up.
Sachu!!! Savita whishpered wid tearful eyes. Manav & all cn't belive their eyes 2 see Sachin(old) standing infront of dem who already died bfr 20yrs.
The previous 3 vamps try 2 run out bt caught by dem & draged 2wards out side.
Savita steps 2wards Sachin(old) & admire him by telling dat c knws her son will return 1day.
Dat prsn who rmv her hand 4m his face & told dat He isnt her son. He z a vampire & his name z Raj!!
Precap: Manav & family doing Aarti of Bappa. Suddenly Main door opened & 3 ppls shown walking 2wards in a arrow form.
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Hey guys, its a challenge 4 u all. Guess who de 3 ppls r??
Cm on i knw u cn do it.

I mnt so gd at wording as all. So if any mistk found then plz excuse me.
Plz don't 4 get 2 lyk & coment.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Heyy awesome update..damn interesting..
Sry m not able to recognize the three persons..will wait for u to reveal the suspense..
Edited by ashvikluverrr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Hey it is awsm.. Lvd it a lot
I don't knw abt other 2 bt i cn bet on it dat 1 must be PURVI 4m dem.
Plz plz plz PM me whn u update it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Wow, this update was really an awesome one..really i can't put my expressions in words...all i can say is tat when i was reading ur story i was really curious about wats going to happen next...Really can't wait for ur next update pls pm me if possible...pleaseee...
Now coming to ur challenge, i think the 3 person iz Sachin (old one), Purvi n Archana...I don't know whether its true or not, but this is my guess...lets just wait n see...
Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Rocking update yr!! 👏👏👏
Lvd the update much. Its damn intresting.
As others I also cn't guess the 3 ppls.
Keep up the gd work & 10x 4 the PM.
Whn u updt u'r next chpt plz plz PM me.
Edited by Attitudeboy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
awesome update... i loved it... just like NEHA i also think that those three people r sachin(old one),purvi and archana... ur updates r always interesting... cant wait for ur next update... thanx for the pm...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Just Awsome. Who Are Those Three People??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
U'r updates r always subrb. Bt 2 day it was awsome. I lvd it a lot. Plz updt soon. I cn't wait 2 knw who dat 3 peoples are...

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