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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey! Thanks for the comments guys! ❤️ Here's Part 24...

Chapter 24: I See You
April 27th, 2012: Shopping Area, 3:00 p.m.

Siddarth: Hello?
Ranvir: Hey! Siddarth, sun.
Siddarth: Arre Ranvir, wait where did you get my number?
Ranvir: Doesn't matter. Um, I won't be able to make it today. Something came up at work, but I will for sure stop by tomorrow because I have the day off. Sound good?
Siddarth: Either way, it's fine by me.
Ranvir: Oh, hey! How's the search going?
Siddarth: Back to square one, boss.
Ranvir: Okay. You get back to work now and so will I. See you tomorrow yaar.
Siddarth: Haan. Bye. *smiles and hangs up*
___
Anushka: Kaun tha Sid?
Siddarth: Oh, no one. Ranvir ko yaad hain na?
Anushka: *suddenly shocked and confused* Haan….
Siddarth: It was him. Who kaal aa rahe hain au—
Anushka: Huh! Kaal?
Siddarth: Haan. Itne pareshaan kyun ho rahi hain?
Anushka: It's… nothing. Saare tayaarian karna hoga na.
Siddarth: *confused* Right….
****
April 27th, 2012: Shopping Area, 3:30 p.m.
Nikhil: When will they get here? It's been half an hour and I'm—
Arjun: And you're hungry. I know.
Nikhil: How did you know, though?
Arjun: Seriously, Nik. You're always hungry! And you never gain weight! You're like that guy from Scooby-Doo—Koi tension hi nahin life mein. Bus khao aur paise kamao.
Nikhil: That's life.
Arjun: For you.
Nikhil: Hah hah. Very funny genious.
*In distance*
Purvi: Kunjal! Jaldi karo!
Kunjal: Sorry! I dropped some change—
Purvi: Kunjal, that should be the least of your worries. Because of that driver, we're already half an hour late. Hey Sir. Sorry we're late.
Arjun: Punctuality isn't one of your qualities huh?
Purvi: Apparently not. Hey Nikhil.
Nikhil: Hey, Purvi. Sit down guys! Don't act like we're strangers.
Purvi: *sits down* Oh, well you're strangers to her. Sir, Nikhil, yeh hain Kunjal. She's who I confide everything in.
Arjun: So basically like Nikhil and I?
Purvi: Yeah!
Kunjal: Hey there strangers! *smiles*
Nikhil: Hi.*smiles back* So, why did you guys drag us here?
Purvi: Well, Sir and I were talking—
Kunjal: Huh! It's a miracle!
Arjun: What?
Kunjal: Let's just say I've heard a lot about you.
Arjun: *raised eyebrow, daggers at Purvi*
Purvi: Kunjal! Shush! Anyways, and you know all about Aai… and Baba… and everything we've been doing lately and—
Arjun: Basically, she's trying to say that they both want to be together, just everything's awkward for them and now… we're going to make that a reality.
Purvi: You're so boring na. At least add some details to the story.
Arjun: Okay, details are important, but we all would've been dead by the time you were done telling your story.
Purvi: Sir! At least I don't—
Kunjal and Nikhil: GUYS! Stop it!
Kunjal: Anyways, that's great news! So what's the plan.
Arjun: Well, here's what we came up with.
*silence*
Nikhil: Nothing?
Arjun: Miss Purvi, what happened to your story-telling?
Purvi: Oh, you wanted me to tell them? Okay so—
And then she went on, talking… and talking… and talking. Now that I realize it, Miss Purvi loves to… talk. She likes being the center of attention. No… not the center. She likes having attention. She could care less about whether or not I paid attention… right? Anyways I was about to dive in and tell the shorter version of Purvi's documentary, when I noticed this guy… sitting in the back. Smiling and laughing at the girls.
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Ranvir: Great! Kunjal's in India too! You know how much easier my job got? Make way Miss Purvi Deshmukh. I'll be in your life really soon. Don't worry, Kunjal will bring me into it herself. *laughs, but then notices Arjun glaring at him, so he asks the waiter for the bill*
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Purvi: So that's what we'll do. Hain na, Sir?
Nikhil: Arjun! Where are you lost man?
Arjun: Sorry…. *sits up straight*
Kunjal: Okay, that's… simple. And really… easy. Wait when all is this happening?
*Arjun looks and Purvi, Purvi looks at Arjun and both take a deep breath*
Arjun and Purvi: Tomorrow.
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Kunjal: *walking* Okay, reality check. He was totally handsome.
Purvi: Huh? Who?
Kunjal: Tsst. Arre! Your boss, dear!
Purvi: Kunjal! He's my BOSS!
Kunjal: Haan toh? He's YOR boss. Not mine. And he was totally handsome with those shades on, and the white t-shirt….
Purvi: Earth to Kunjal! You know how delirious you sound right now!?
Kunjal: C'mon! How could not think he was handsome when you first saw him!?
Purvi: Kunjal, I wanted to rip him to shreds when I first met him.
Kunjal: Grrr. Talk about anger issues. Calm down now. Purvi, you that I think most guys like him are handsome.
Purvi: Yes, but this was plain out just weird.
Kunjal: Right.
Purvi: KUN-JAL!
Kunjal: *runs away laughing with Purvi chasing her*
******
April 27th, 2012: Kirloskar Residence, 6:30 p.m.
*ring ring*
Riya: Hey, Nikhil. Where are you guys?
Nikhil: Arre, yaar. You're starting to sound like my mom. We're coming up.
Riya: Oh. And why didn't Arjun answer his phone? I needed to talk to him about some… office work. *yeah, that sounds good*
Nikhil: Well, you see he was on the phone with Purvi for two hours, and then his phone died.
Riya: Okay. I'll see you.
Nikhil: Bye…?
Two hours? With Purvi? God, they couldn't even talk to each other peacefully for 5minutes before. Now—2 hours? What?
____
Nikhil: Riya! We're home!
Riya: Hey, guys. Arjun woh file—What's that?
Arjun: What's what?
Riya: That! Behind your back!
Arjun: Nothing.
Nikhil: You're such a liar! Riya, he went shopping for himself.
Arjun: Nikhil!
Riya: At a jewelry store?
Arjun: Yes.
Riya: What!?
Arjun: Maybe I like…. Bracelets and stuff too.
Nikhil: *trying not to laugh* Yeah. That's it.
Arjun: Nikhil! I swear! *walks off to his room*
Nikhil: Well, I'm taking my box of chocolates to my room to enjoy. All for myself.
*in background*
Arjun: He wouldn't stop bugging me for food!
Riya: Okay….?
Nikhil: I will see you, at the dinner table. *leaves too*
Riya: *out loud* What the hell is going on!
*****
Precap: Kunjal/Purvi convo, Arjun and Nikhil worrying Riya, someone visits Soham at work, Siddarth/Viren convo and finally, the moment you've all been waiting for: The First Real ArMan Meeting!
Things to think about: What are Kunjal, Nikhil, and Arvi doing tomorrow? 😲 What did Kunjal mean? 😆 What was Arjun doing with those shopping bags? What were Nikhil and Arjun up to? 😳 And for God's sake, Ranvir knows who Kunjal is too!?!?!?!?!?!!??!?!?
Thanks for reading! Love, Esha!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Esha, just caught up with chapter 23/24 (did'nt receive a pm for 23:( but wow fantastic updates and loved them both. So so glad ur writers block is over n you got something brewing which u sound totally pysched about:) Omg the suspense is killing me...so many questions lingering. Thank god Arjun noticed Ranvir looking at the girls so when he does make himself known, Arjun is going to be a step ahead and know something is fishy. Plz plz plz update soon...welcome back and thanx for the PM:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey esha you know what ?
i really dont need to ask you what i think, because you do it😆
but i would love to know what this ranvir want from purvi...

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: J12L85

Hi Esha, just caught up with chapter 23/24 (did'nt receive a pm for 23:( but wow fantastic updates and loved them both. So so glad ur writers block is over n you got something brewing which u sound totally pysched about:) Omg the suspense is killing me...so many questions lingering. Thank god Arjun noticed Ranvir looking at the girls so when he does make himself known, Arjun is going to be a step ahead and know something is fishy. Plz plz plz update soon...welcome back and thanx for the PM:)


I'm sorry about the pm thing. I don't know what happened...
Hmmm... thanks for the whole comment! It was great!
You seem to be on track here... I won't elaborate more on that.
-Esha
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Esha😛

Chapter 23 - Well it's a nice title

Purvi seems to be overjoyed after her convo with her aai.

I like the way Soham tease Purvi on her khadoos boss. Purvi was about to say something but decided not to which made Soham wonder😉

Hahaha, Purvi is so cute as she was talking to herself about Arjun at the sane time trying to figure out why is he so nice to her leaving aside ArMan's matter😊.

I enjoyed the whole convo between Arjun and Purvi. They're so cute and funny too. Well I think both have fallen in love with each other while in the process of reuniting ArMan.

Seems like Sid is right down to get more details on Purvi and is not going to give up. Oh gosh Ranvir has hatched up some plans on Purvi 😲.

Waiting for the next chapter😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 24 - wonderful Esha😛

Well Ranvir is not able to meet Sid and rescheduled his appointment the next day. Anushka the way she asked Sid as though she suspects Ranvir😉

I like when Arjun teased Purvi about punctuality not being one of her qualities and she said apparently not😆. Finally Arjun realised Purvi loves attention as she keeps talking non stop but notice someone laughing at the girls.

Oh no, Ranvir is going to be on Purvi's life soon! This guy is going too fast and Arjun has to beware of him.

Hehehe, after Purvi's story telling which Arjun did not pay heed since he was busy glaring at Ranvir. But both said at the same time mission starts tomorrow 😃

I love Kunjal's openness about Arjun to Purvi and finally Purvi had to disclose the truth to Kunjal about her wanting to rip Arjun when she first met him😆

So Nikhil told Riya that Arjun was on the line with Purvi for 2 hrs after which his why his phone died. As I guessed, Riya must be wondering what's happening between Arjun and Purvi.

It's so cute when Riya shouted out loudly what's happening as neither Arjun nor Nikhil is telling her anything. The best part is Arjun went to jewellery store to buy bracelet and some other stuff which I'm sure is not for him as claimed 😉

Your precap is interesting and so are the rest of the things to think about which makes me think hard and eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update eshaa..
precap is damn exciting.. and u are really making me crazy about this ranveer.. pls do give more regarding him..😉
wanna see what arvi planned for armaan...😊
pls do update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was a very interesting part esha...!!
amazing update👏

our purvi loves being center of attraction😆 lovelyyy
thanx for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update esha love arvi nok jhok and what have arvi planned for arman thanks for pm plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 25: Crossed Paths
April 28th, 2012: Karanjkar Chawl, 4:00 a.m.

I woke up to find a pair of two dark brown eyes staring at me. There was only one other person...
Purvi: *screams*
Kunjal: Shhh! Seher will wake up!
Purvi: What was the need to wake me up at 4 in the morning? That too, scaring the living daylights out of me?
Kunjal: I couldn't sleep last night.
Purvi: ...why?
Kunjal: I was thinking about what I said yesterday and... I'm sorry.

Purvi: Why are you sorry? I wasn't offended on any level. Just really weirded out. *smiles*
Kunjal: Oh... well then I'm sorry for weirding you out. I'm not taking anything back though.
Purvi: Kunjal...
Kunjal: You can go back to sleep now. *smiles*
Purvi: I'll tell you when I have luck with that.
Today, Kunjal being weird is the least of my worries.
****
April 28th, 2012: Kirloskar Residence, 7:30 a.m.
Riya: You guys? You're up and ready? Before me? That seriously, never happens.
Nikhil: C'mon. It's never to late to start something new. Plus today's a really big day.
Riya: Why's that?
Arjun: *groans* Seriously, Riya...
Riya: What? What's going on?
Nikhil: Hmm... shall we Arjun?
Much to her surprise, the guys burst out singing Happy Birthday to Riya. She stood in the middle of the kitchen as the danced around her singing like the weirdos that they were. They did this every year, as instead of pondering about why she forgot about it this year, she told herself that no matter hoe weird everyone was being, some things were the same. Almost.
Riya: You guys!
Arjun: C'mon! *puts his arm around her* It's my little sister's birthday, and she forgot about out little routine? *shakes his head*
Riya: Mhmmm. If you haven't noticed, I've been very busy lately.
Nikhil: *puts his arm around her other shoulder* You know, pulling your brother's leg won't make him want to gift you anything.
Riya: Gift or not, I call dibs on the cake first.
Both Arjun and Riya made it a point to look at Nikhil when she said this. Instead of shying away, the trio just laughed and cut and fed each the cake.
Arjun: *Hopefully today is a good day. I'm gonna need it.*
****
April 28th, 2012: Mumbai, 8:00 am
Siddarth: Please pick up!
Viren: Hello?
Siddarth: Look bhai, Ranvir-
Viren: Siddarth, look you're my younger brother and I love you. But how many times do I have to tell you that I don't want to hear the nonsense about Ranvir and our sister?
Siddarth: Bhai, please. Try and understand.
Viren: No, Siddarth. You understand. She's not coming back. What if you do find her? What then?
Siddarth: It's not what-
Viren: Look, I have to get to work. I'm sorry, but I can't support you in this.
Siddarth: Bhai- *hanged up*. Fine! All I was trying to say is that Ranvir is coming to visit today and I would appreciate it if you could come. But no, he hung up on me.
Anushka: Give him time Sid. He'll come around.
Siddarth: I hope so.
****
April 28th, 2012: Mumbai Garages, 3 pm
Soham: *working on a bike* At least they should pay me more for all of this. It's not like I don't work hard.
Soham's boss: Arre! Shut up and work. You don't get paid for running your mouth.
Soham: *shakes his head*
*In background*
Teju: Anyways Dada, I think we should get something... different for her birthday.
Sachin: I gave you my suggestion, and she refused to have a party. We already cut the cake and stuff at the office...
Teju: Arre haan, but- Oh look… If it isn't Mr. Mechnic.
Soham: Aap?
Sachin: Tum?
Soham: Kya? Have you come to return my money?
Teju: What money?
Soham: The 200 rupees short you paid me.
Sachin: Hey! We paid for service.
Soham: Arre service ko bhul jao. I had to pay him *gestures to his boss* 200 from ny pocket. Ab mujhe de do.
Teju: Hmm. Pehle kaam nahin karte phir paise ke liye-
Soham: Chal. Forget it. I have work to do. *mumbles* Hey God. These foreign people na. Don't understand anything about money and hard work.
Teju: *turns around* Excuse me, but kya kaha tum?
Sachin: Forget it Tej. Let's go na.
Soham: I said what you heard.
Teju: For your kind information, we know all about hard work. Mera Baba ek mechanic tha samjha?
Soham: Oh wow! *sarsactically* My dad was too!
Soham's boss: Aye! Get back to work!
Sachin: Chalo na, Tej.
And thus Soham continued to work and Sachin and Teju left.
*****
April 28th, 2012: Karanjkar Chawl, 5:00 p.m.
Purvi: Aai! Aai! Aa-aai!
Whatever was going to happen, it was going to happen now.
Purvi: Aai!
Archana: Kya hain Purvi!? Why are you screaming?
Purvi: It's nothing serious. I just wanted to make a trip to the temple today before the sun set.
Archana: But why?
Purvi: No specific reason. Chalo na Aai. Please! Please! Pleeeaaassseee!
Archana: You know I would love to go with you, but who's going to do all the work here?
Kunjal: *walks in* Arre Aunty, mein hoon na? Jao Purvi ke saath. *winks at Purvi*
Purvi; Pleaaase Aai!
Archana: You sure you'll be fine na Kunjal?
Kunjal: Haan Aunty. *smiles*
Archana: Well…
Purvi: *gets sad*
Archana: *smiles* I guess. Let me get ready okay beta?
Purvi: Yay!
One down, two to go.
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April 28th, 2012: Deshmukh Residence, 5:00 p.m.
*ding dong*
Manav: Oh hey, Arjun! Is Riya with you? I haven't had a chance to tell her happy birthday and Teju and Sachin are out too—
Arjun: Oh no, uncle, it's just me. I actually wanted to talk to you…
Manav: Oh! Come in! Go ahead!
Arjun: I wanted to ask for a favor… if that's alright?
Manav: Hmmm. Depends. What is it that you want?
Oh crap. What's my story??? Uhmmm
Arjun: Um, you see, uh at work… there's um. Well okay, first things first I was wondering if you could show me some… uh… temples around town.
Manav: Oh. Wait, what suddenly drew your attention to mandirs…?
Arjun: Well, see there's this… *thinks momentarily of Purvi* really annoying employee that I have. Uhm, she—
Manav: Let me guess? You, being the businessman you are made her mad and she claimed that you knew nothing about the religion and culture here. Want to prove her wrong huh? *winks*
Why not?
Arjun: Ho—how'd you know?
Manav: I'm your "uncle" remember?
Arjun: *nervously laughs* Yeah. How could I forget that? So you'll take me?
Manav: I don't see why not. *gets up to leave*
Arjun: *behind him* Yeah!
One down, one to go.
******
April 28th, 2012: Mandir, 5:30 p.m.
Arjun: *outside* Okay, so I'm not completely clueless. I've heard and remembered enough from my childhood *cringes* to know basically what to do. Just… don't go in with your shoes on and look for someone you know and copy them. I should get through this fine. *sarcastic chuckle, walks up*
Hey look! There's someone I know!
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Purvi: Keep your eyes closed Purvi. Things'll work out. Just pretend you don't know that—*peeks* Gah! Don't look. Pretend you don't know anything. *peeks again* Purvi! Keep your eyes closed and pray! Pray for what? That everything goes smoothly? *peeks again* PURVI! Wait….
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Purvi: Sir… What are you doing?
Arjun: What does it look like I'm doing?
Purvi: Hmmm…. You're pretending to act like you know what you're doing.
Arjun: Am I that readable right now?
Purvi: No… According to me you seem like an okayish… actor.
Arjun: *sarcastically* Thanks. And it's like you were doing any better! Looked like you were about to have a heart attack there.
Purvi: Really!?
Arjun: Really. Wow. I don't think Uncle noticed I left…. He's feeding the children sweets… and so is Archana aunty.
Purvi: *looks up* What?
Arjun: Look over there… *gestures with his eyes*
Purvi: *gasps* Sir, what are we supposed to do when the realization happens? This all went by pretty quickly.
Arjun: No it didn't! You've been standing here paranoid for at least half an hour.
Purvi: God! What do we do though?
Arjun: Well, if it were me… I'd do what I'm doing now and act like we know what we're doing.
Purvi: So basically you want to wing it.
Arjun: Pretty much.
_____
What the two didn't know is that the realization already happened. No, they hadn't seen each other, but forces—of love? Of God? Of Destiny? Who knows. Signs were everywhere that these two were bound to meet today. That they would hear each other's voice once again after 21 years. Even the two clueless "accidental cupids" as they put it, knew what was going to happen.
What wasn't clarified is that Purvi had taken a vow. No, the vow was not to ensure that the two united, but the vow was to let the Almighty do his job. If love existed, these two would be together again. And if not, the world was just full of misery and hatred as it had been before. She was merely a pawn in the game of life. Unknown to anyone, Purvi's hope was that the world would make sense again. Her balance was being tested, as was Manav and Archana's love.
_
Which is what happened.
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Purvi: Ab kya ho raha hai?
*loud crash*
Purvi: Heeehhh. Nevermind.
Both Arjun and Purvi turned slowly, to find a extremely pale, extremely shocked Archana staring at a rather calm Manav.
Arjun: This is going… rather… well?
Purvi: For you!? *looks at him exasperated*
Arjun: Sorry! Calm down.
Purvi: *takes a deep breath*
Arjun: Now what?
Purvi: We wing wing it.
Arjun: Let's do it then.
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Archana: Aa—aa—aap? *flinches*
Manav: Ummm…
Archana: *:O*
Arjun: Uncle? What—
Purvi: Aai?
Hearing Purvi call out, Archana ran out, shocking everyone, especially Manav.
Purvi: Aai! *to Manav* I'm—I'm really sorry. I—I have to go. *runs after her* Aai!
Manav: Wait!
Arjun:*And this, is where is all gets tied up*
Manav: Arjun. Don't lie. You know who she is.
Arjun: *really super confused* Uhmmm… Aunty's daughter.
Manav: I asked you—
Arjun: *still confused* I swear I'm not lying!
Manav: We have to go.
Arjun: Wait! Uncle!
Well that went sort of like it was supposed to. Except for Aunty running away and stuff. But why do I feel like I'm missing some major part of the story?
****
Precap: Back at the Karanjkar/Deshmukh Residences (No elaboration here ;)
Things to Think about: Well what's gonna happen between Archana/Manav/Purvi? Will Arjun find out about Purvi or not? 😲 Considering Archana reacted the way she did, what's next for our "accidental cupids"? Who all will be in on the big sting operation? 😕
If you were wondering, by any chance, why this update was so long, it was partly because I couldn't wait any longer (or make you guys wait) to have ArMan meet. Also, you can start expecting the updates to be this long for another 10-11 chapters. So yay! More reading! :D

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