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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg i cant wait for the nxt parrt ...😊😊
plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey yushna where are you...please update you next chapter faster...cant wait to read your update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting story😳...eagerly waiting fr the nxt update😛😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey people i am so sorry i was busy with my other forums work
Sooo thankyew so much for your comments
It really does feel good:-)
Ff pavitra rishta:arvi 'made in heaven'
CHAPTER 5

Recap: manav sachin and arjun landed in mumbai..
(Scene starts from karanjkar chawl where sulochna and purvi were eating breakfast and archana came out all set to go to office )
Archana: aray purvi, tu ab tk beth kay naishta kar rai hai? Office nai jana? Dair horai hai bacha..
Purvi: aai tu tensn mat lay aj shaid mai office na aoon..
(Purvi said while eating while archana cupped her face)
Archana: ku teri tbiat toh tek hai na?
Purvi: aai tensn mat lay main fasclass hon bs aj new boss arahayy hain na toh aweij chuti karnay ka soch lia..
Archana: tu bhi na..
Sulochna: archu tu ja tera tiffin pack kar dia hai yad say kha laina samji?
(Archana nodded and kissed purviz forhead and went)

(The car parked outside sp industries
In car)
Sachin: baba ajj office jana zarori hai? Hum rest bhi toh karsaktay hain na?
(Arjun laughed while manav shooked his head)
Arjun: my buddy works comes first..
Manav: yes sachu while if u want u can go and rest waisay bhi i dnt knw but today i feel like going to work..
Arjun: great manav uncle:-)
Sachin: chill kar dude tu bachpan say hi aisa hai i dnt knw y baba and dk uncle choose such a workholic for my darling sister ..
(Arjun felt uneasy on the mention of purviz name and purviz face came in arjuns mind 'whatz wrong with you arjun?')
Manav: humnay arjun aur purvi ko bachpan mai engaged kia because yeh bappa ki marzi tii and they are meant for eachother..
Sachin: how lovely:-P
(Arjun glared at sachin )
Manav: lets go arjun and sachu take care..
(With that arjun and manav went to office while sachu left for dk house)

(Arjun became busy with new staff and checking each and every itchy detail and came to his serious and khadoos avatar while manav went to his cabin)
(Manav sat on his chair and took out the picture of baby purvi)
Manav: purvi beta baba is here. Abh kujhi dino ki baat hai u will be with us . Mujhy toh yakeen hi ni horaha ky mai tmay hakikat mai dekho ga. Tm janti bhi nahi ho shaid dt how much i missed u beta. Abhi toh kitna kuj baki hai tmay canada laijana hai phr tmaray aur arjun ki shadi karani hai aur bhi bht kujh bht kujh just jaldi say apnay baba kay paas ajao.. baba loves you..

(Here manav was still talking to purviz picture when archana entered the office and it was like everythng jammed .. wind started to blew really hard , archana looking here and dre started to walk towards the counter, archana thinking 'yeh aj mera dil itna bechain ku hai? Jaisay kujh honay wala hai' )
Archana: mr bakshi wo jo new boss anay thay agaye?
Bakshi: g archana g wo apnay cabin mai hain, hum sb mil chukay hain ap bhi mil lijay ..
(Archana smiled and went towards the cabin still feeling unesy, as soon as archana opened the door and something fell on her feet , it was a picture, archana bend and held the picture with archanaz hand a pair of smones hand also grabbed the picture, archana looked towards the person still holding the picture in her hand and froze to see manav holding the picture archana looked towards the picture to realize it was purviz picture. Manav without looking up)
Manav: i am sorry wo hawa ur
(And than he was also froze by looking at archana .. manav and archana still looking and holding the picture stood at dre places shoked it was 18 years)

BACKGROUD MUSIC
DO PAL RUKA
KHWABO KA KARWAAN
AUR
PHIR CHAL DIYE TM KAHAN HUM KAHAN
(Still looking into each other eyes as if demanding answers)
DO PAL
KI THI YEH DILON KI DASTAAN AUR PHR CHAL DIYEE
HUM KAHAN TUM KAHANNN
(Phone ringed tring tring and the trance broke and hatred took over )
Archana: yeh apki company hai? Ap yahan kay boss hain?
Manav: tum itni shatir aurat ho archana toh tumay itna toh pata hoga
(Archana felt hurt)
Archana: main iss company main kaam karti hon mr manav deshmuk aek employee hon koi jotish ni..
Manav: wah mana paray ga archana acting achi karlaiti ho tum
(Manav grabbed archanaz arm harshly and puhed her and archana fell on floorand looked towards manav disgustedly)
Manav: sp industries yani SACHIN PURVI INDUSTRIES..
(Manav shouted)
(Archana stood up and shouted equally)
Archana: ahista i smjh.. awaz ahista , wo wakt gaya jab mai apki har baat sunti ti par eb nai humara aisa koi rishta nai hai jo apko meray sath aisay baat karnay ki ijazat dayy..
Manav: tm jaisi ghatia matlabi fareebi aurat say isi tran baat kartay hain jisnay mujhsy meri betii..
Archana: purvi meri beti hai smjhay ap..

(Here arjun was checking staff files when he came accross 2 names and was shocked)
Arjun: what the hell
1.archana karanjkar
2.purvi archana karanjkar
Oh shit matlb archana g aur purvi iss company mai kaam kartay hai? Oh noo i have to tell manav uncle..
(Arjun went to manavz cabin)

Manav: purvi meri bhi beti hai..
Archana: manav lagta hai ap bhool gaye court kay orders kehtay hain toh yad karaon?
Manav: archana mujhy sab yad hai kay kaisay tmnay court mai yeh sabit kia tha kay mai aek mechanic hon apni bachi ko paal ni sakta par archana wakt bdal gaya hai eb meray paas sb kuj hai aur eb aek aur case hoga humaray divorce ka aur purvi ki custody ka
(Archana shocked)
Manav: aur janti ho case kaun laray ga? Sachin manav deshmuk mera beta..
(Tears came in archanaz eyes)
Archana: sachu bhi aya hai?
Manav: band karo apna dikhava mai achay say janta hon tmay aur tmaray dramo ko. Meri beti kahan hai?
Archana: apka uspay koi hak nai wo apko kbhi ni apnayee gi..
(Just then arjun came inside and stopped looking at the tense situation)
Manav: mai usko btao ga ky tm ny kiya kia tha aur tm kaisi aurat ho phr wo mujhy baba zaror bulayee gi..
Archana: apsay umeed bhi kia ki jasakti hai bilkul apni aai pay gayee hn ap..
Manav: archanaaa
Archana: chilayee mat . Pichlay 18 saal say mainay apsay nafrat ki hai nafrat par kbhi purvi ko apkay khilaf ni bharkaya chahti toh bharka sakti ti par ni mai ni chahti ky meri purvi usky baba say nafrat karay. Purvi keliye uskay baba ka wajood aek paheli hai. Aur rahay ga. Aek bachay ko uski aai ki zarorat hoti hai aur purvi ki aai uskay paas hai.. usko kbhi uskay baba ki zarorat ni pari na paray gi..
Manav: aek bachay keliye beshak uski aai zarori ho par uska baba bhi zarori hota hai aur purvi ko bs uskay baba ky honay ka ehsas chai phr usko bhi uskay baba ki zarorat hogi..
(Archana laughed)
Archana: meray jeetay ji toh aisa ehsas purvi ko ni aye ga..
Manav: tek hai archana mai purvi ko kuj ni btaoon ga par usay khud ehsas hoga ky mai uska baba hon..
Archana: aisa kabhi ni hoga
Manav: howa toh?
Archana: toh mai khud purvi ko apko dayy jaoo gi.. aur hmesha keliyee uski life say chali jaoon gi..
Manav: toh janay ki tyari karlo archana.. 1 mahina 15 din baad purvi ka janam din hai yeh janam din wo apnay baba ky sath manayee gi aur tb tk tm yeh company chor ky kahi ni jao gi..
Archana: done
Manav: done
(Arjun looked at manav and archana in a shock)
(Archana turned around to go when she saw arjun)
Manav: yeh arjun digvijay kirlosker hai. Meri beti purvi manav deshmuk ka fiancee honay wala pati..
(Archana looked at arjun again and dn went out)
The end
This part was important for the progress of story. So plzzz comment tbhi i am going to update soon.. nd sorry cant pm buddy list is at a mess..


Precap: arjun standing outside chawl.. and dn being slapped by..
Keep guessing
Yush updating:-)a
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Hey yeshu again an awesme part👏...update the next part soon yeshu...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Wow nice! So Arman just kinda had an explosive argument... I wonder who slaps Arjun...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: xoxoarvi

Wow nice! So Arman just kinda had an explosive argument... I wonder who slaps Arjun...


Just wait nd watch:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woow that was a great update..
arman challanged each other.. that's interesting..
the precap is interesting..
pls update soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyya
nice part..!!
archana and manav's fight...and someone slapped arjun..omg..who..??
eagerly waiting for next part..!!
plz update soon..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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VEry nice update plz update very soon

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