arvi fanfiction : pavitra rishta 'made in heaven'

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Arvi fanfiction:pavitra rishta "made in heaven" hey guys em new to ryt in dz forum ma first tym em a reader actually but i hav skills tons ov dm actually so here i am wid ma fanfiction on arjun nd purvi.. Its name is "pavitra rishta :made in heaven" its a family drama wid love ofcource nd different shade of emotions ... Ma story will contain high drama... Concept will be different in sm way 4rm da show nd same in some thngz as well... Nw 4 ma intro u cn knw me as yush... Likes will be big handly accepted nd comments will be cherry on da top... Gud cmntz indeed... U cn g4v me ideas as well.. Nd 4 all u should kmw em a slow ryter kbi post karu gi kbi ni so u hav to cmnt nd make me remember abt postng if u lyk ma story.. Ma style ov rytng will be mixed usualy slang.. Nd again em slow in posting bcz i also startng to ryt in ek hazaro ma nt done yet.. Ny way ma story will be surly based on arjun purvi nd archana manav more ov arvi as dy r amazng truly made 4 each odr.. nd other character story will also be dre.. Da concept start after 18 years ov leap as in da show da both manav archana hate eachodr da reason will be told later... Nw cumng to da character sketch... Lets start da fantasy world...<3 CHARACTER SKETCH MAIN CHARACTERS 1. Manav damodar deshmuk (same background first he wz mechanic nd nw a rich business man of s.p industry ... He lives in canada 4rm past 18 years , he hate his wife archana 4 sm reason which will be revealed later.. Lives wid hz family nd has one nd only motive left to get back his world his life hz daughter) 2. Archana manav deshmuk (she z no sacrifizng goat in ma story.. She hates manav as well reasn will be told later nd lives in mumbai wid her daughter her jaan her world purvi nd her aai sulochna.. She works 4 a branch of s.p industry which z ofcource manavz but she dnt knw ryt nw.. For archana her life revolves around purvi nd she tryz to keep purvi away 4rm her past nd try to 4get abt it but hardly nevr cn) 3. Sachin manav deshmuk( manav nd archana real nd biological son he z straight forward man nd z a lawyer hates hz aai archana nd loves hz baba manav nd has seen da whole hardworkng phase of hz father 4rm da past 18 years nd cn do nythng 4 hz dad..) 4. Purvi manav deshmuk( it will come as a shock but yes in ma ff purvi z nt adopted but instead manav nd archanaz biological nd only daughter , she z everythng to archana her aai nd manav her baba.. Archana told her dt her baba died 18 years ago nd dt nevr to ask nythng abt him nd purvi never did as she lovz her aai alot she z da apple ov eye ov her aai nd aaji.. Beautiful lyk her aai archana, sweet charmin angelic nd pure) here da main deshmuk family goes... Nw other deshmuk family members.. 5. Damodar deshmuk (gud man nd manavz baba same character as in da show nd is in favour of archana) 6.savita deshmuk(manavz aai nd evil women same in da show but here she loves her grand daughter purvi nd want her to come in dre lye) 7. Tejaswani manav deshmuk ( manav adopted both tej nd ovi as dy were hz brother sachinz daughter as he died nd alwayz cared 4 dm as hz own.. Tej z sweet nd bubbly same nature as in da show) 8.ovi manav deshmuk( tej sister manavz brother daughter is a model nd full ov arrogance nd attitude nd evil as well u cn say self obssessed hate purvi 4rm da beginng as manav nd all alwayz tawk abt her but stay calmed as she wants her shravni aai to come live wid dm nd marry her manav baba but failed) dy all live wid manav in canada accept archana nd purvi ... 9. Vandita deshmuk( lives in mumbai wid her family nd is manavz sister has a daughter nd after separation ov arman still meet archana vaini nd purvi she lovez purvi alot nd keep manav nd all updated wid purvi but archana dnt knw dz) 10. Sulochna karanjkar(archana aai same as shown in da show nice nd gud) nw 4 da info archana uses da sir name karanjkar as she dnt want purvi to knw abt her paternal family... Nd nw cumz da male lead our very own... 11. Arjun digvijay kirloskar ( handsom in hz late 20s workholic has values rules nd wen it came to work nthng cn be done instead da ceo of s.p industry as hz dad z manav uncle business patner nd close frnd lives in canada wid hz dad who z evrythng to hm nd luvz hz mom but she z no more wen he wz 8 she died . He z best frnd wid sachin gud nd close wid tej nd ovi as dy r only close relative nd manav z hz ideal) 12. Digvijay kislosker (arjun father nd same gud natured man as shown in da show) nw da other characters just names as dy potray same as in da show.. Vinod archanaz brother hz wife manjusha nd hz daughter punni .. Nd others are vaishali gud nyc archanaz sister nd her son aniket dy r gud.. Done wid da charcters... Part 1 cumng soon..:)

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arvi ff: pavitra rishta "made in heaven " PART 1... a man sitting on a chair holding a picture ov a young baby girl . Hz face z shown he z non odr dn manav deshmuk hz eyes filled wid tears love affectn nd he z lukng at da picture in da picture manav z standng holdng a baby in hz hand nd he smiles touchng da picture .. Manav: 18 saal hogye ma kahan sy kaha agaya aj bht upar ho zindagi ma par meri zindagi toh tm ho beta pata ni tm mujy yad karti b hogi ya ni par aek baat yad rakhna tmaray baba ny pichlay itnay salo ma srf aur srf tmay yad kia ha tmari baray ma vandu sy sun sun ky jiya hn ma agr tm na hoti toh shaid aj ma is maukam pay na hota tm hi ho meri zindagi meri kamyabi ka karaan i lov u purvi beta hmesha yad rakhna ky baba tmsay bht pyar kartay hn nd baba tmay jald lainay aein gay bht jald aur us aurat ky paas sy ly jao ga tmay mujy aj b yad hai wo din jb tmay meray hath sy cheen lia ta tmay... FLASHBACK: in da chawl in deshmuk house dre wz police nd a lawyer standng wid manav nd archana.. On da sofa dre were 2 girls were sittng who were tej nd ovi 3 years old nd wid dm savita aai wz sittng lukng angrily at archana damodar baba wz standng wid archana.. Manav wz holdng 2 year old purvi in hz hand nd 7 year sachin standng wid him.. Archana came angrily nd took purvi 4rm manavz arm in her own arm purvi hu wz nw cryng alot... Manav: archana yeh kia tamasha hai meri beti idhar lao.. Archana move back .. Archana: meri beti pay apka koi haq ni purvi meri ha srf meri apko kia laga ap meray bacho ko meri marzi kay begair canada lay jaein gay aur ma kuj ni karo gi yeh raha court ka order meri purvi kahi ni jaye gi na sachu kahi jaye ga... Manav: archana bholo mat purvi aur sachin meray bachay hn aur wo meray sath jaein gay ma unko tm jaisi laparva aurat ky sath ni choro ga.. Samji... (archana wz cryng) archana : ma janti ti manav ky ap meri baat ni sunein gay aek pehlay apki aur apki aai ki wja sy mera soham aur meri behn aj meray sath ni aur ap mujhsy meray bachay cheena cha rahay hn aisa ni hoga mr.manav deshmuk... Wakeel sahab inko court ka order dekhaye... Wakeel: mr.manav deshmuk purvi bht choti hai islye wo apni maa ky paas hi rahay gi yeh rahay papers mrs archana ny court ma prove kia ha ky aap aek mechanic hain nd ap unki bchi ka khyal ni rakh paein gay.. (manav wz shockd) par sachin deshmuk yeh bta saktay hn ky wo kiskay paas rehna chahein gay..(archana hu wz holding purvi nd one hand 4rwaded da odr to sachin but he lukd at manav baba nd huggd him ) archana: (cryng) sachu? Sachin: ma baba ko chor kay ni jaon ga... Wakeel: toh decided purvi mrs deshmuk ky paas rahay gi nd sachin mr.deshmuk ky paas nd ab agr ap ma sy kici ny bhi yeh order neglect kia toh wo court ki saza ka hakdaar hoga... (while da lawyer nd da police left archana wid purvi nd manav wid sachin standng infront ov eachodr manav tried to touch purvi but archana move back) damodar: archu beta yeh kia hogya hai .. Archana: ni baba is parivar ny aur manav ny mujhsy aj mera sbkuj cheen lia eb meri beti meri ha bs meri.. (archana lukd 1 last tym wid teary eyes to sachin nd dn turned to luk at ovi tej nd dn turned back to c manav wid hatred in her eyes nd dn to savita aai nd left..) manav while tears in eyes... Manav : ma wapas ao ga apni beti ko lainay.. Aai canada janay ki tyari kar... FLASHBACK ENDS manav: wo din ma kbi ni bhul sakta us din sy mainay archana sy bs nafrat ki hai aur purvi tmay wapas lanay kelye ma wo bna jo aj hon ( manav took da pic to hz heart closed his eyes nd said) purvii... On da odr hand a lady wz in a chawl infront of godz pics nd opened her eyes her face came to focus nd it wz archana ... A tear went to her cheek... Her aai came.. Sulochna aai: archu kia howa? Kahin mana ( nd she stopped wen archana turned back angrily) archana: kuj purani yadein srf dukh daiti hn aai aur zakhmo ko taza kardaiti hn aur nafrat ko bht barha daiti hn.. Khair meri purvi kaha hai ... Purvi: maain yahan hn( sulochna nd archana turned to c da angelic girl dre purvi nd smiled purvi came running nd hugged her aai archana) scene divided in two parts 1 manav huggng purvi nd hz pic nd odr archana huggng purvi both cryng... THE END... precap: dk: manav nd mainay toh tm dono ki shadi paki b kardi ha ajsay ni jb manav canada aya tbsy... (the man turned around wearng pent court shocked) the man: its utter non sense dad..:)
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heyy it ws nice..
do continue..!!
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pavitra rishta " made in heaven" PART 2 : recap: manav archana crying 4 purvi . manav took da picture of purvi nd him again in his hand nd wiped hz tears dn he felt sm1z hand on hz shoulder and stood 4rm da chair to luk who it wz ... Manav: sachu tu sachin: (took da pic 4rm manavz hand nd lukd to it nd gave it a sweet smile) she lukz pretty baba ryt? manav: very pretty... Sachin: dnt wri baba jald purvi humaray sath hogi humaray paas yaha apnay baba nd apnay dada kay paas manav: haan sachu eb wakt agaya hai kay meri purvi meray paas ho eb meray paas wo sb kuj hai jisay ma archana say apni beti wapas lu ga... Sachin: baba ap fikar na karein is bar wo aurat kuj ni kar paye gi .. manav: bs aek bar yeh deal hojaye phr ma tm mumbai chaltay hn .. Sachin: jee baba filhal ap neechay chaliye ku ky function ma b jana hai (sachin noticed dt manav shifted hz gaze) baba ap tek hn na? Manav: u knw mujy tensn hoti hai thori koi b deal crack karnay ma but arjun ny akay sb kaam sambhal lia waisay dk sir aur arjun kaha hn.. Sachin : atay hi hongay... (scene changes to a big house in canada wid a name plate digvijay kirloskar, in a living room dre were 2 men 1 ov around 50z nd da odr around late 20s) d.k:arjun my son stop workng nw humay manav ky ghar b jana hai lets just go we gettng late... Arjun: yes dad 5 mintz... D.k: arjun stop being a workholic u knw is deal ky bad manav gng to india to mumbai to get da preciour gift ov urz .. (arjun still working on laptop) arjun: wt gift dad? D.k: arjun nt again ok fine ur life gift ur wud be wife purvi ma daughter in law u knw na ma ny nd manav ny tmara nd purvi ka rishta bachpan sy karanay ka tay kia tha.. (dz caught arjun attention he fliped da laptop down nd stood nd turned to hz dad, hz strong features, well built body nd perfect nd sorted dressing da handsom arjun) arjun: its utter non sense dad , oky dad i knw u manav uncle even mom wanted ky ma nd manav uncles daughter get married i dnt care dad apka faisla ill accept bcz i respect nd luv u nd mom even manav uncle tbi ma ny ni socha dt wo larki kaisi hogi wtevr but dad get a life u knw manavz uncle background hz wife nd daughter unko pata b ni hoga nd kaisay bt oky wen da thng cumz we will luk to it bt jzt stop it dad dnt make fantasy stories it gng to hurt u nd manav uncle specially he z been w8ng 4 hz daughter since 18 years pata ni wo kbi milay gi b ya ni unko wid hz wifez will... D.k: i knw manav is bar wo india bs deal kelye ni ja raha wo waha apni beti ko lainay ja raha ha nd he ll get successful hopefully dn u 2 will tie da knot... (Arjun sighed) arjun: fine watevr dad 4 nw just lets go to manav unclez place... ( scene shift to deshmuk house where savita aaji wz running behind a girl wearing mini skirt ) savita aji: ruk ovi yeh magazine dekh kaisay kapray pehnay ha tunay ruk ja... (ovi ran nd collided wid manav nd sachin who were cumng down 4rm da stairz) ovi:baba luk na aaji mujy dant ri hn 4 da photo shoot.. (nd she hugged manav) manav: aai rehnay day na isnay jo kuj kia meri ijazat ky sath kia aur ismay koi masla ni hai... Savita aai: par manav... Manav: chor na aai (dre entered another girl wearing jeans nd shirt) savita aai: teju dekh apnay baba ko kuj kehnay ni daita (after teju came 4rm behind damodar baba) damodar baba: waisay hi tm itna bolti ho ky kbi toh chup raha karo .. Savita ai: tum chup karo tmhi ny begara ha in sbko ... (behore damodar sed nythng at da door d.k nd arjun were standing ) d.k: tek kaha apnay savita jee... Savita ai: d.k sir ap aye na ao na arjun ...( ovi got excited nd went to arjun nd hugged him ) ovi: hi arjun hw are u ma ny kitni calls ki y didnt u pick it up? Arjun: ovi dear actually i wz bz well exusemee .. ( arjun went to manav uncle nd took hz blessings as he wz hz ideal nd dn hugged him dn went to sachin nd hugged him too nd sed hi to tej) arjun: manav uncle today z a big day lets go... Manav: ya arjun par aek bar vandu ko call karlo aek dafa purvi ka sunlo ga to releive hojao ga... (arjun shifted to hz place after hearing purvi name again nd ovi hu wz nw standng wid tej just showd dt she wznt bothered bt inside she wz) tej: kia howa ovi? (she whispered) ovi: i dnt understand teju purvi say 18 years tk baba ni milay but har wakt purvi purvi purvi em kind ov fed up wo na hotay howay b humaray sath hi hai lagta hai disgustng us aurat nd unki beti baba alwayz stay lyk dz... (she sed to teju wid lower voice teju just askd 4rm her face dt wt da hell) teju: barbie doll purvi baba ki beti hai unki aaji ajuba sachu dada sbki jaan hai 18 saal sy humari behn hai so just relax nd arjun ki honay wali wife hai... (ovi just lukd at teju shockd she knew ovi luvd arjun since 12 but being her blood sister she z takng purvi side jo larki ko kbi mila ni deka ni ovi inside hated purvi bcz alwayz da attentn love went to purvi) ovi: honay wali hai hoi toh ni na... (teju stared at ovi to whch ovi replied) ovi: just kiddng... Savita aai: haan manav vandu ko call kar phne speaker pay kar ma b suno meri poti kaisi hai..(sachin, damodar, d.k tej were all smilng) (while arjun didnt showd nythng on hz face nd ovi wz jaleoused) manav dialed da number sat on da sofa nd put da phone on speaker... Phone ranged nd after 4 bells sm1 picked da call it wz a gal... Girl: hello (her voice wz lyk a music to ears to evry1 arjun thought her voice z lyk bird chirping) manav: hello em manav deshmuk vandu hai... Girl: ap kaun hn ? Manav smiled nd sed... Manav: ma vandu ka dada baat kar raha hn nd ap.. Girl: oh ap vandu atya ky dada baat kar rahay hn? (savita nd damodar perpelexed who cn call vandu atya?) savita: kaun ho tm ...? Girl: ma main purvi baat kar ri hn (by listeng da name manav stood up nd wz shockingly smilng sachu nd tej came near manav nd smiled wid savita nd damodar arjun thought purvi manav uncle daughter? Nd ovi just stared.. Manav wz on cloud nine as he wz first time hearing hz daughters voice first time da wordz didnt came out he had tears ov happiness ) savita: purvi? (she wz happy but wanted to confirm dt wz it really dre purvi) purvi: g ma purvi, purvi archana karankar... (the full name brought all back to da reality) manav: p p purvi beta.. (sachin put hz hand on manav shoulder) purvi: vandu atya ghar pay ni hn manav deshmuk g wo aein gi toh ma bta du gi unko ny message? (manav smiled ) manav: aj meri lyf ka bht bara din hai da big deal ov ma life ma apni behn sy share karna chahta tha... Purvi: oh congratz nd best ov luck your day will go superd bs bapa pay bharosa rakhiye.. (manav smiled thnkng dt hz daughter wz intelligent nd relgious to) purvi: waisay ap baray hn toh i need blessngs too aj meri life ka b bara din ha aur baro ka ashirvad milay toh jeet zaror hoti hai manav deshmuk g mujy ashisvad dijye na.. Manav: tmay dunia ki har kamayabi milay beta ... Purvi: thankyew so much ma vandu atya ko bta du gi ky unky dada ka phone aya tha oky nd best ov luck again bye... (purvi hung up phone) nd manav took da phone nd touched to hz heart d.k came nd assured manav dt evrythng gonna be ok... Manav: tunay deka aai meri purvi meri beti aj mainay pehli bar usay baat ki deka tunay (savita wz cryng too) savita: haan manav tu chinta mat kar wo bht jald yaha hogi humaray sth... Sachin: haan baba ma ly ky ao ga apni behn ko ... Dnt wri.. Manav: haan eb bs bht intezar karlya ma araha hn bht jald apni purvi ko lainay archana yeh humari zindagiyo ki nai shurvat hogi aur tmari khushiyo ka anth... The scene divided into four parts one manav standing wid tears 2nd archana workng in office 3rd purvi smilng nd 4th arjun just starng at nai shurvat... (HOPE U LIKE IT PLZ LIKE ND COMMENT AS WELL TBI ILL RYT 3RD PART ) precap: deshmuk nd kirloskar standing nd starng at big screen tv at deshmuk house nd vandita on screen dada its a gift 4 u here it goes nd purvi face came ever1 shock arjun just lukng at her manav cryng nd ovi jaleousd.. :) yushna...
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awesome post..lovd it...
do continue soon..
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nice one... continue soon nd plz pm me for d updates...
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It was super... update soon plz... and if possible pm for the updates

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Heyaa people look who is back:-P:-P i am sorry jo bech mai itna gap agaa tha. Par now you all will get updates:-) please story ko shuruh say parhein takay u understant the concept...
So here i goo ..
Ff:arvi "made in heaven "
Chapter 3
Recap: manav , arjun and whole deshmuk family listened to purviz voice..
(Scene starts from purvi who was smiling to herself , she didnt knw why but talking to manav deshmuk felt so good, just then vandita came )
Vandita: aray mera pyara sa bacha ku itna khush hai?
Purvi: vandu atya kujbhi toh nai.khair apkay liye phone aya tha..
(Vandu kept on arranging the pillows)
Vandu: kiskaaa??
Purvi: apkay dada ka manav deshmuk ji ka
(Vandu was shocked, she turn around and held purviz shoulder)
Vandu: aek bar phr bol kiskaa?
Purvi: manav deshmuk g ka, unko apsay baat karni ti kia hai na aj unki bht bari deal hai toh wo apsay share karna chahtay thay , mainay unko best of luck kaha aur unsay ashirwad bhi lia.. bht achay hn wo toh..
(Vandu was happy)
Vandu: dada toh bht khush howay hongay na
(Purvi got confused but before she ask anything further archana came towards purvi)
Archana: purvi tubhi na aj teri itni important meeting hai aur tu yahan hai jana nai hai office?
Purvi: aray aai ti chinta mat kar mai bs thora nervous ti toh pani peenay aii phr yahan atay hi atya kay da..
(But before purvi could complete vandu cut her)
Vandu: araypurvi chal ab jaa warna dair hojaye gi..
(Purvi smiled and took vandu ka ashirvad than archana ka ashirvad , archana kissed purviz forehead)
Archana: mera bacha kameyabi teray kadam chumay:-)
Purvi: bye aaii byeee atyaa ..
(Purvi left)
Vandu: aek dum apnay baba pay gai hai..
(Archana glared at vandu)
Archana: aek baat jaan lay vandu tera meray sath jo rishta hai wo manav deshmuk ki waja say nai hai. Purvi meri beti haisirf meri. Aur purvi keliye tu meri bht kareebi dost hai.. bhool say bhi meri beti pay ateet ki parchai nai parni chai..
(With that archana left)
Vandu: vaiini na tu galt hai na dada galt toh halat thay par tum aur dada milo gay toh hi dada ko apni beti milay gi.. aur mai janti hon ky jald sab tek hoga. Aur tu maan na maan purvi gai tohapnay baba par hai:-)
(Scene changes to karanjkar house where sulochna was making tea when she heard the phone ringing)
Sulochna: hello kaun ?
(And after sometime sulochna hung the phone and was uite tensed)
(Arjun and sachin with dk an manav were standing outside deshmuk house and when manav opened the door he was shocked to see a party organized)
Everyone: surpriseee
(And there were shoutsand clapping.. manav came inside and took aii babaz blessings )
Savita: manav tjhy bht bht mubarik ho tu contract jeet gaya na mujhy pata tha :-)
Damodar: haan beta bht bht mubarik ho..
Ovi n tej: congratulations baba:-)
Dk: manav u really deserve it..
Manav: kia dk sir ap bhi.. aii baba ovi tej agr kici ko credit jata hai toh woh future son in law ko jata hai arjun did it very well..
(Arjun lowered his face as he was not used of this son in law thing and thought "really now sab tyar hai dad and manav uncle toh itnay khush hain but koi manav uncle ko btaye kay jab purvi ko yeh tak nai pata keh manav uncle is her dad tohwo shadi ki baat ko kis taran lay gi..its gng to be tough khair whatever")
Tej: aek min everyone baba apkay liye aek surprise hai ,
(Everyone was confused)
Manav: surprise? Par kia?
Sachin: haan teju bol?
Tej: araymujhy bhi surprise nai pata vandu atya nay aek cd bhej vai hai. So ladies and gentelman baba ki is kameyabi par baba keliye aek gift unki behn ki taraf say ..
(Tej put the cd and played it everyone was looking towards the big screen arjun dont knwy but he was feeling restless and dn movie played and vandu came on it)
Vandu: ahaaan dada apka surprise yeh nai hai.. mai janti hoon dada kay kis cheez sayapko sabsay zada khushi milti haai eb toh ap wapis arahay hn to khaas aur khaas apkay liye.. aek angel apki angel..
(And dn on screen came a name)
PURVI MANAV DESHMUK
(Everyone was shocked manav was hell shocked with arjun and all and dn came a little baby on the screen)
Manav: yeh meri prvi hai meri beti :-)
(Tears came in manavz eyes sachin put his hands on manavz shoulder and arjun didnnt knw y but he gave genuine smile)
(On the screen came different stages of purviz childhood. There were pictures in some she was running and in some she was eating.. everyone was touched manav was cryng )
Vandu: yeh toh dada apki angel ka bachpan tha jo guzar gya par abaraha hai uska aj jismay apzaror hongay aur haan zara dehan say meri purvi ko nazar na laga di jaga..
(Everyone laughed on it but ovi was jaleouse.. arjun rise his brow he was curiously waiting for ab ki purvi and den the movie was darkened manav eyes got big and then come purvi on the screen holding candles.. and she was looking beautiful and suddenly video got lightened.. arjun was just lost in purvi when dk came and nudged arjun)
Dk: stop staring at my bahu tmarihi honay wali patni hai:-P
(Purvi smiled on the screen and manav was holding back himself. His blood his only daughter sheis beautiful oh my God bilkul archana jaisi dikhti hai dn hatred took over him but dn again he saw purvi on screen and went to hug the screen)
Purvi: kehtay hai kay jo log achay hotay hai na unkay sath hmesha acha hota hai toh mayoos nai hona chai ku ky buray wakt ky baad aek acha savaira zaror ayee ga .. zindagi bht khubsurat hai aek acha life patnar ho family ho sb apnay ho to life is all what u need.

(Arjun was just blankly looking towards the screen 'arjun whatz wrong with you' manav was struck in the moment when in the video he saw archana coming, manav eyes flashed anger he took a bottel and threw it on the screen nd the screen broke)
Manav: mai arahahon archana apni beti ko lainay...
The end
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PRECAP: manav and arjun in india mumbai..:-)
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hey i just love ur ff alot.. i was sad that u didnot update it since a long time.. im happy that u are continuing it now...
woow i just loved the purvi's entry on screen and arjun has fallen...
precap is interesting.. pls update soon... pls pm me if u can...
i just love love loved it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Auww Loved it!
Manav was so emotional on seeing Purvi.. But he still hates Archana..
Arjun was taken away by Purvi😳

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