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Posted: 12 years ago
Woaaww!...your story keeps getting better and better...and funnier also!!😆👏...I have nothing else to say than that I loved it!!❤️...I kept on laughing and laughing while reading it!...I love the Arvi part Tha most!...since in PR we bearly get to see Arvi these days...and if we get to see them its all very sad and painful 😒...
Thankkss for writing and making us laugh so much!👍🏼
Keep Updating!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part all

K clan house

Tej :- Aaji…Aaji…where are you?

Sulo :- In the kitchen Tej. So, what brings you here today?

Tej :- Aai ask to give you this.

Sulo :- She didn't come?

Tej :- Well…aai, she is kind of angry right now.

Sulo:- What happened?

Tej tells Sulo everything that happened with Purvi's birthday party after Sulo left. Sulo is laughing.

Tej :- You and aai are so different, you are laughing and she is screaming.

Sulo :- because I am a grandmother and she is my mother. If archu did any of this I would have slapped her. I am surprised you and Purvi didn't get any.

Tej :- Well, I can't speak for Purvi since I was sleeping when she got it from aai but I got it pretty bad. Aai was screaming so loud the neighbours thought Savita aaji was fighting with someone and come to watch.

Sulo :- At this time I presume you took the food and ran here.

Tej :- Yes, I had to escape. A minute longer I think my ear drums would have broken.

Sulo is laughing.

Sulo :- You have to go back soon and face the music.

Tej :- I will go back home when baba is home and my hangover is over. I am going to sleep now.

Sulo :- Ok, I will wake you up later.

Tej :- Thanks aaji, if aai comes don't tell her I am here. Tell I went shopping ok.

Sulo :- Ok.

Coffee shop.

Sachin is pulling a chair for Ria. She smiles at him.

Sachin :- What kind of coffee do you drink?

Ria :- I will take a cold drink. I like coke.

Sachin :- You come to a coffee shop and you don't want to drink coffee. Why?

Ria smiles at him.

Ria :- Why don't you think about it while I go get some ice-creams. You do like ice-cream don't you?

Sachin :- Yes.

Ria :- Flavor?

Sachin :- I trust you choice.

Ria goes to the order the ice cream and coffees.

Purvi is walking on the street; she receives a call from Sachin.

Purvi :- Dada, you are supposed to be talking with Ria not me.

Sachin :- I have a question, she comes to a coffee shop but doesn't want to drink coffee. What is wrong with her?

Purvi is laughing.

Sachin :- Is this a girl joke I don't get.

Purvi :- Idoat…

Sachin :- I am elder than you, you better respect me.

Purvi :- Idoat, she come all the way to a coffee shop not to drink coffee but to spent time with you. It means she also likes you and wants to get to know you better.

After a minute. Sachin realizes…

Sachin :- Oh…

Purvi :- I swear guys lose their brains when they fall in love.

Sachin cuts the call. Purvi looks at her phone and smiles.

Sachin beams at Ria. Ria gives him his ice-cream.

Sachin :- Strawberry?

Ria :- I thought you trusted my choice.

Sachin :- Ya…sure…

Ria laughs, she takes the strawberry and gives him the chocolate flavored ice-cream.

Ria :- Next time just say what you want ok.

Sachin :- Ok.

OVT industries.

Manav :- Good job, Arjun. The quotation is just what the client wanted. That was a very big contract we have just got.

Arjun :- Thank you uncle but the quotation was done by Purvi yesterday.

Manav :- Where is my daughter?

Arjun is quiet.

Manav :- She went to see her family, didn't she?

Arjun :- Yes.

Manav is angry.

Arjun :- Even I don't like her seeing them uncle but we have to understand her feelings too.

Manav :- I know Arjun, but I don't trust them.

Arjun :- Me too uncle.

Arjun is looking at Manav.

Arjun :- Uncle, I wanted to talk to you about something.

Manav :- Yes.

Arjun :- Well…I…

Manav :- You?

Arjun :- Uncle…well you see…I wanted…

Manav :- You wanted…

Arjun is sweating.

Arjun thinks to himself…Come on, you can do this? Just ask Manav uncle for Purvi's hand.

Manav looks at Arjun.

Manav :- What? I swear you and Sachin have lost your brains lately.

Arjun is scared seeing Manav. He is quiet.

Arjun :- I wanted to ask if I can take Purvi out for dinner.

Manav looks at Arjun closely. He takes his spectacles out. Arjun is very scared.

Manav :- Ok, be back by 10.

Arjun :- Ok, sir.

Manav :- What?

Arjun :- I mean ok uncle.

Arjun runs out of Manav's room and looks up.

Arjun :- Beta Arjun, you better get the courage to ask Manav uncle or you are never going to marry Purvi and Purvi is going to laugh at how scared you.

Arjun shakes his head.

Arjun :- Love as changed me so much. I can talk in front of thousands of people but can't ask Manav uncle for Purvi's hand and they say Love makes you stronger. Which idoat said that? I am going to kill him.

Paani puri stall.

Soham :- This is delicious.

Purvi :- I know.

Purvi is looking at Soham.

Soham :- What?

Purvi :- If I ask you something, will you do it for me.

Soham :- Of course. If I don't do it for you, who will I do it for? Anything for you baby sister.

Purvi :- Promise.

Soham puts his hand on Purvi's head.

Soham :- Promise.

Purvi smiles at him.

Soham :- Now, tell me what is it?

Purvi :- I want you to learn how to read and write.

Soham is shocked.

Soham :- Are you mad? Me learn. Never. What would people think of me? I am a gunda. My friends would laugh at me. Sorry, I will die for you but I won't learn ok.

Purvi :- Ok.

Soham smiles at Purvi.

Purvi :- I totally understand. If something happens to me, it's ok.

Soham :- What are you talking about?

Purvi :- You promised. Don't you know when you break promise bad things happen?

Soham is quiet.

Soham :- What is the point of learning? I am happy being a gunda.

Purvi :- I am not. I want you to be a boss like baba.

Soham :- Don't bring his name. You know I don't like him.

Purvi :- but don't you want to be like him. Rich, no need to kidnap people. No need to run away from police all the time. No need to be scared.

Soham is thinking.

Purvi :- Imagine a big house, all the food you can eat.

Soham :- It's nice but I don't want to work in some company.

Purvi :- No problem. You can work where you want.

Purvi is looking at Soham with a lot of hope.

Purvi :- Will you learn? You can go for some night class.

Soham :- Night class? No…No way.

Purvi is acting that she is sad. She is about to cry. Soham looks at her.

Soham :- Ok…Ok…Don't cry. I will learn.

Purvi is smiling.

Soham :- Stop smiling. I will learn but I will learn only from you.

Purvi :- Ah?

Soham :- Mahaan ji…if you want me to learn you will teach…Do we have a deal?

Purvi :- You are smart too.

Soham :- Of course, look who son I am.

Purvi :- True, like father like son.

Soham is beaming, feeling proud unable to understand Purvi's meaning.

Purvi :- Ok, we will start tom.

Soham :- Do I have to?

Purvi :- Yes, see you tom.

Purvi smiles at Soham and leaves. Soham continues to eat his paani puri.

Purvi on the road side thinks to herself. Dada, one day you will take over baba's company and work with us.

Purvi looks at the sky. Life just can't get better than this. Thank you God.

D clan house.

Archana phone is ringing.

Archana :- Yes, Manav tell me.

Manav is laughing.

Archana :- What Manav?

Manav :- You should have seen Arjun's face.

Archana :- What are you talking about?

Manav :- He wants to ask my permission to marry Purvi.

Archana :- That's great. What did you say?

Manav :- He was too sacred to ask. He was like…ah, uncle…well uncle…

Manav is laughing again.

Archana :- Then how did you know he was going to ask you for Purvi's hand?

Manav :- I had the same look when I wanted to talk to your father.

Archana is smilling. Both are thinking about their sweets memories.

Manav and Archana together: - I love you.

They smile.

Manav :- I love you.

Archana :- Me too.

Archana :- So, what are you going to do?

Manav :- I am going to torture Arjun.

Archana :- Manav.

Manav :- He is asking my daughter's hand. My princess hand. No way, I am going to let him get an easy answer from me.

Archana :- Don't be too hard on him.

Manav :- I will try.

Archana :- Come home early, I am cooking your favorite food.

Manav :- I am leaving now.

Archana :- Now? I haven't cooked.

Manav :- I am coming to help you.

Archana :- Ok.

Manav hangs up.

Ovi comes home. She sits in the sofa and is watching Tv. She is watching Purvi's birthday party video. She is shocked to see Arjun and Purvi romancing each other. She runs out and goes to the balcony. She is standing at the edge of the balcony, tears flowing from her eyes.


First of all...very very sorry for the late update...i know it has been a month or so...i have been busy...i have made it longer to tell u guys how sorry i am...Thank you for the lovely comments...this is the only reason i still write...without your support i wouldn't have writen this part...so thank you...and please do comment...Thank you so much...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
firstly welcome back🤗missed your updates a lot
its great to see yoou again and read your work.

the sachin-ria scene was adorable, poor sachin had to ask purvi why ria didn't want to drink coffee

and the soham-purvi scene was as usual amazing, i love reading about their scenes, they are such a cute bro-sis duo, and soham is going to learn how to read and write for purvi's sake, that is just so damn cute❤️

and my fav scene had to be manav-arjun scene...it cracked me up🤣...arjun was so scared and manav was torturing him, how mean...and i loved how in the end arjun wanted to kill the person who said that love made you stronger...amazing work👏

and ovi is going to suicide...yeah...jks.., she is so annoying

do update asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG OMG Abhi you made my day!!!! It was such an Awesome part!!
Beechara Arjun is so scared to ask for Purvi's hand he made dinner as an excuse.. Lol and Manav is going to torture him.. Beechara Arjun 🤣.. Sachin and Riya are so cute Sachin is really clueless so ofcourse he has to call the love guru in the middle of the date.. lol atleast he called when she left!!
After all that is happening in P.R. this gave me relief!
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Posted: 12 years ago
its great abhi...u knw i hav been checkin regularly for ur update. i was terribly afraid tht u hav stopped writing. im so happy to get ur pm. i loved the part whn arjun is stammering while askin forpurvis hand.tks for making my day. 👏 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: xoxoarvi

OMG OMG OMG Abhi you made my day!!!! It was such an Awesome part!!

Beechara Arjun is so scared to ask for Purvi's hand he made dinner as an excuse.. Lol and Manav is going to torture him.. Beechara Arjun 🤣.. Sachin and Riya are so cute Sachin is really clueless so ofcourse he has to call the love guru in the middle of the date.. lol atleast he called when she left!!
After all that is happening in P.R. this gave me relief!



You're welcome...😃😃 Sachin like Manav said has lost his brain after meeting Ria...😆😆 would be nice to watch right Manav giving Arjun a hard time...😃 Ok...i am off going out for lunch with my family...it's my birthday...
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Posted: 12 years ago
abhi clean out your inbox, i am not able to send u PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was really a vry long wait indeed...but totally worth it ...this part was just too good...missed ur updates badly...i luv the part where purvi tells him tht ven a girl cmes all d way to a coffee shop and doesnt have coffee it means she wants to spend sum time wid u ...the manav arjun part was more than awesome ...the manav and archana convo even better...this part was really really tooo good...loved it👏😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
u back with a bang abhi...! awesome update... thanx for the PM...:):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a bit of all and laugh so much by the arjun and manav part. super as always and PM me for the updates plz. and update soon

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