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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow..!! Awesome..!! Loved the whole part..!! 😛

Tej :- What the….Why didn't you stop him.
Purvi :- Too shocked.
Sachin :- What? I am lawyer of course I know how to talk. If I didn't nobody would hire me. Anyways, I am hungry.
Purvi :- Give me some time, I am almost done cooking.
Sachin :- As long as Tej doesn't cook I am fine. I don't need a stomachache with this headache.

Lol..!! 🤣 sachin is so funny..!! 😃
Waiting for the next part.. Update sooon..!! 😊

And the poem is awesome..!! Great writing..!! 😊 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi abhi sorry for late comment both updates were awesome i love arvi scenes i love all arjun's dialogues and the poem was perfect reflecting arjun's feelings perfectly
your updates are great 😊
anxiously waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg what a treat you have given us!! An update and a Poem!!
to you update: OMG Sachin is awesome in this OS!!!! Just love him, he lovs Purvi so much and is very possessive about her.. But more importantly I love the way Sachin explained to Soham why Purvi could not come. Teju just cant keep her mouth shut can she? Loved how Arjun called Purvi "my fiance". Hopefully Purvi will be able to tell Arjun at their dinner date.
To your Poem:
Abhi you just surprise me over and over again! It was short crisp and sweet. Showed Arjuns feelings very well.
Keep writing!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
A-MA-ZING!!!!!!! Keep it up!!!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

hei abhi...this chapter was amazing...
it was not an ok chapter...it was great one...which was very interesting..
let me start now..was really bored from morning as I have not watched AshVik's set..so was really very pissed but after reading your update I was like this 😃
I really love your sachin..he is so understanding..so caring...his dialogues were awesome..
tej..hehehe Purvi might be thinking dat she made a big mistake by telling truth to tej..
and arjun ahhh I just stop thinking about him...so love him...he would love to call her wife...what a fantastic line...really I envy purvi for getting someone like arjun..obviously in your OS...in serial they have destroyed ArVi...
and dat grandpa grrr he is so annoying..ohhh see he is thinking about punishing purvi...nd for star of the day was sachin..just loved him..
thankyou for saving my day...!!
PS-that poem was superb..match arjun's current situation...



Hei Jagruti...thanks...i somehow feel i can never disappoint you..glad i could make you smile...i have a feeling everyone here likes Sachin...ah, Puru would have been great with this lines... That is Arjun everytime he sees Purvi...thanks for liking him and the lines...envy Purvi? Don't worry yaar you might just get someone like Arjun in real life...though it will be hard...he is too perfect, in this story, isn't he? the bolded part...there is a reason for it...when it happens Purvi will need Arjun more than ever...the second bolded part..very kind of you...hopefully the next one will make you laugh...
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all thank you everyone...😃😃

Gaurav :-Thanks
aathya :- Even i miss archana-purvi moments...first they take away Arvi and then they don't give us any archana-purvi moments also...glad you like this...
shahdevanshi :- Awesome??...thanks...Arjun is that great but i didn't want Purvi too rub in...😆😆 will update very soon...
achyutha :- Thanks...
anoogna :- you like Sachin too...Yes...thanks for quoting my lines...now i no which line you guys like...yes, will update soon...and it will be a funny one too...
sweet_basket :- No problem...as long as you comment...thanks for that and thanks for liking my poem too...will update soon...
Avni :- My friend...you like Sachin too..he is too cute here right...i miss puru..nope Teju can't keep her mouth shut...who can blane her, she meet him after so long...thanks for liking the poem...your review of it was also sweet...thanks...i shall start writting soon...
omg11apiz :- Thanks...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Abhi

What a wonderful post. I will not say its an ok update not at all. I loved how Tej n Purvi were trying to hide the truth from Sachin. In this post of yours, Sachin is damn cute and such an interesting character. Meanwhile love the way Arjun romance Purvi every time he sees her. That's really a treat😛. Here Purvi is so protective over Arjun especially with Grandpa as she knows his true color. How they are going to get Soham out from grandpa's clutches and protect Arjun is a big question.

The bonding between Archana and Purvi that has no words to describe. Archana's concern that Purvi will leave her is just natural. I was touched when Archana fed Purvi and vice versa. Although she's sad of the whole incident and can't come to terms with it, yet the minute she knew Purvi has not eaten she immediately took the plate to feed her. That's what you call a mothers love.😊

Lastly the surprise birthday party was that's it!😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NadaCinta

Abhi


What a wonderful post. I will not say its an ok update not at all. I loved how Tej n Purvi were trying to hide the truth from Sachin. In this post of yours, Sachin is damn cute and such an interesting character. Meanwhile love the way Arjun romance Purvi every time he sees her. That's really a treat😛. Here Purvi is so protective over Arjun especially with Grandpa as she knows his true color. How they are going to get Soham out from grandpa's clutches and protect Arjun is a big question.

The bonding between Archana and Purvi that has no words to describe. Archana's concern that Purvi will leave her is just natural. I was touched when Archana fed Purvi and vice versa. Although she's sad of the whole incident and can't come to terms with it, yet the minute she knew Purvi has not eaten she immediately took the plate to feed her. That's what you call a mothers love.😊

Lastly the surprise birthday party was that's it!😆



Veno,

Thanks...you love Sachin too...i need to get a new emo, since i have used this monkey too many times...😆😆 The Arvi scenes are for you guys...glad you like it...Ya, purvi is protective here, she is like you can do whatever you want to me, but don't you dare tell him what to do...Yes a very big question...i haven't thought how to get Soham and Purvi out of the mess i have created...i don't think that far...😆 Post leap i have loved archana-purvi relationship, it is just lovely...of course now we can't get any scenes between them...😭 so, i try my best to make it work here...glad u enjoyed it...the birthday party will be in the next part...😃 stay tuned..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
You know what Abhi, your post is just amazing😛

You keep us glued to the story because in your post, there is Archana Purvi bonding which we have lost in PR and also Arjun Purvi romance as currently we don't know where their track in PR is heading towards.

Yes will stay tuned to your next post on the birthday party.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved it!!! It was great I hope Sohom's truth comes out soon and I love the poem so soul touching😊

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