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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Abhi,

Have copied my favourite dialogues below (my quote/edit button acts up now and then). Needless to say, any ArVi scene done by you is a refreshing change from recent PR tracks and always tops my list 😃. Loved Purvi-Teju conversations, reminded me of their bonding when Teju lived at K house. Liked the sensitive/emotional scenes between ArMan and Purvi.

Originally posted by arjunaluis

Tej :- So, why did you tell me?
Purvi :- I don't know, I couldn't take it anymore. I was overwhelmed and aai is not talking to me. I thought I was going to go mad. I had to tell someone.
Tej :- So, you decided to make me mad.
Purvi :- You are already mad. It was easy for me to choose you.
Tej :- You'
Purvi laughs'
...

Tej looks at Purvi.
Purvi :- I choose aai, baba, Sachin dada, Soham dada, Ovi and you over them.
Tej :- Why?
Purvi :- This is the only family I know.

...

Arjun :- Yes, I love you.
Purvi :- I love you more.
Arjun :- I love you the most.

❤️
...

Tej :- Cramp'my leg has cramped'
Archana :- How? You were fine a minute ago.
Tej :- How am I supposed to know'do I look like a doctor to you?
Archana :- What is wrong with you? Why are you talking rubbish? Everyone has gone mad, first Purvi, then Ovi now you. I had enough.
Archana goes to the kitchen.
Purvi :- You idoat.
Tej :- It just come out.
Purvi :- Next time make sure it doesn't come out or I will kick you even harder.

😆

Purvi :- Aai'you are my mother. The only mother I know. You took care of me and brought me up; you have every right to tell me what to do and what not to do. You are my mother and this is my baba. This is the only family I know. I love you aai. I love you a lot.
Archana :- Do you really love me?
Purvi :- Of course aai.
...

Sachin has returned and is listening to the fight. Sachin thinks, another fight, what number is this? God, I think by the day's ends, I will go mad. I seriously should have gone for a drink. What was I thinking going for fresh air?
🤣

I enjoy his remarks. Didn't miss Ovi, forgot she was gonna jump, so won't mind her absence.

Edited by peachesnplums - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Peaches...thanks a lot...reading it again after u writting it down...makes me laugh at my own dialogues...something i never thought possible...come to think about, my line was kind of good...the tej-purvi-archana part i think was the best after Sachin...everyone seems to like Sachin here...😃😃 keep doing this Peaches...i love it...guess you and ameillia really don't care if she jumped or not...good news for you then, she won't be around in the next part...😃
Edited by arjunaluis - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all thnxx for the link...the part was superb...the way u described purvi- tej...and purvi hitting her leg was also fun in that serious atmosphere... 😊 just lved it to the core...the mst i loved in this part was arvi's conversation... ❤️ ❤️ ...nd the care of arjun towards purvi...waitiing 4 d nxt part...arvi's dinner...nd soham's lunch...pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice abhi that arvi part was awesome waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wooowww!...sorry for replyng this late...AWESOME Updates!!!...👏.I reaally love this story and ur writing!...the way u write about the bounds and relations between Arjun and Purvi, between purvi and her sibliings, between arman and their kids...
I know I'm late but I loved Purvi's answer on the proposal, The reaction of Tej+Sachin+Arman on Arvi's relation..
I like it that Soham loves Purvi so much that he went to work to buy her birthday presents!
I love Tej-Purvi sister bound
I love the way arjun accepts purvi and understands and supports her
God! I can go on and on about everything I love from your Updates, Lets say I love everything!!...Keeep Going!
I'm waiiiting for next parts!
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART: - ALMOST

Sachin :- What?

Purvi and Tej :- Nothing…

Sachin :- Weren't you talking about dada and some plan? Whose dada?

Tej :- Our dada…I mean her dada.

Sachin :- Purvi's gunda dada?

Tej :- Don't call him that.

Sachin :- Why not?

Purvi is staring at Tej.

Tej :- Purvi might get hurt.

Sachin :- Well he is one. Anyways what the plan?

Tej :- Nothing.

Sachin :- You just said something about a plan?

Tej is looking at Sachin worriedly.

Purvi :- Nothing, dada. What she meant was, I need a plan because I told dada I would come have lunch with him but now I don't know what to do because aai is upset and baba also doesn't want me to go.

Sachin sees that Purvi is holding her phone in her hand; he takes it and calls Soham.

Soham :- Purvi…how

Sachin :- It's Sachin.

Soham :- Why are you calling? Is Purvi ok?

Sachin :- She can't come to lunch today.

Soham :- Who are you to tell me that?

Sachin :- Her brother. I don't want to fight with you, so let me get to the point. Purvi is not coming because right now her mother needs her more than you do. Aai is crying a lot and she is scared she will lose Purvi to you. This is all new to my mother and she doesn't know how to react, so I am asking you to give her and Purvi some time to adjust. Purvi will come and see you and she will celebrate her birthday with you. She just can't come today, and if you really care for her you will not push her to come because it hurts her lot to see her mother in this state. If you care for Purvi, you will have to understand that she is part of this family long before you come. So, her first family will always be this family. We are not perfect but we love Purvi and if you love Purvi you will not make her choose.

Sachin hangs up and gives Purvi the phone. They are both looking at Sachin.

Tej :- What the….Why didn't you stop him.

Purvi :- Too shocked.

Sachin :- What? I am lawyer of course I know how to talk. If I didn't nobody would hire me. Anyways, I am hungry.

Purvi :- Give me some time, I am almost done cooking.

Sachin :- As long as Tej doesn't cook I am fine. I don't need a stomachache with this headache.

Tej :- Dada.

Sachin smiles; Tej and Purvi go to the kitchen.

Tej :- Are you thinking what I am thinking?

Purvi ;- Yes.

They both are looking at Sachin.

Purvi brings food for Archana. She sees Archana lying on Manav's lap. Both look worried.

Manav gets up when he sees Purvi. He is about to take the food from Purvi.

Purvi :- Can I ?

Purvi is looking at Archana.

Manav nods his head and leaves.

Purvi goes to Archana and sits on the bed.

Purvi :- I have cooked your favourite dish, have some.

Archana :- I am not hungry.

Purvi :- Then, I am also not hungry.

Archana :- You haven't eaten?

Purvi :- No.

Archana takes the plate from Purvi and feeds her.

Purvi :- I am not going.

Archana :- Where?

Purvi :- To see dada.

Archana looks away.

Purvi :- I love you aai and I promise you I will never leave you. You trust me don't you?

Archana :- Yes, but I don't trust them.

Purvi :- Then trust me, there is a reason why I am doing this and I will tell you soon. I promise. Just trust me aai.

Archana is quiet. Purvi takes the plate from Archana and feeds her. Archana is looking at Purvi.

Purvi :-For me, please.

Archana eats. As Purvi takes the plate and is about to leave, Archana holds her hand.

Archana :- Sit with me.

Purvi puts the plate on the table and sits beside Archana.

Archana :- You promise, you won't leave me. No matter what, you always will be my daughter.

Purvi :- I promise aai. You are my only mother, how can I leave you.

Archana cries and kisses Purvi's forehead. She lies down on Purvi's lap. She falls asleep; exhausted from everything that has been happening. Finally able to sleep after her daughter assures her, she will never leave.

In the evening.

Sachin :- Come Purvi, let's go out. I want to buy you something.

Purvi :- Now, I don't think it is a good time. Aai needs me.

Manav :- It's ok go. I am here. You two go.

Tej :- I am also coming.

Sachin :- Ok, Ovi you want to come.

Ovi :- No.

Ovi goes to Savita's room.

Manav :- Leave her. You guys go enjoy.

Purvi :- But…

Tej :- Let me convince her. Dada you start the car.

Sachin goes out. He and Manav are smiling at each other.

Tej :- This is the best time to tell him. You wanted to tell Arjun the truth also right. Now we can tell them together.

Purvi :- Ok. I will call him to come.

Shopping complex.

Sachin, Tej and Purvi are sitting in the caf. Arjun has just arrived; he kisses Purvi on the cheek.

Arjun :- My fiance, how are you?

Purvi is shy.

Tej :- You just love saying that don't you.

Arjun :- Yes but I would love to say My wife more.

Arjun holds Purvi's hand. He is drinking Purvi's coke.

Arjun :- So, what's up. Why did you call me here?

Purvi :- I have something to tell you but you have to promise me you won't tell anyone especially not to aai and baba.

Arjun :- What is this about?

Purvi :- Dada.

Sachin :- Me.

Purvi :- No..So

Soham :- Must be me then.

Purvi is shocked. She sees Soham, grandpa and Balan standing behind her.

Purvi :- What are you doing here?

Soham :- We come to buy you a present.

Soham hugs Purvi.

Purvi :- You already bought me a present.

Soham :- Well, grandpa wanted to buy you one.

Purvi :- There is no need.

Grandpa :- I only have only one granddaughter.

Grandpa gives Purvi the present. Purvi takes it.

Soham :- Come on, ask his blessing.

Arjun and Sachin are feeling uneasy. Purvi falls to her grandpa feet. He blesses her. Grandpa looks at Arjun.

Grandpa: - So, you are the guy who is going to marry my Purvi.

Arjun :- Yes.

Grandpa: - Aren't you going to ask my blessing? After all you are going to be part of my family. Let's forget what happened yesterday. Today is a new day. Let's start a fresh.

Arjun :- Yes, of course.

Arjun is about to go seek Grandpa's blessing when Purvi holds Arjun's hand.

Purvi :- There is no need to. Aai and baba have given their blessing that's enough.

Grandpa smirks at Purvi.

Soham :- What is wrong with him asking grandpa's blessing. Is this boyfriend of yours that great?

Purvi is quiet. She thinks, I will never let Arjun go anywhere near this man. Ever.

Tej :- Dada, what would like to eat? My treat.

Soham :- Dada?

Tej :- Yes, you are my brother.

Soham :- What are you talking about?

Purvi: - What she means, is that my brother is like her brother. That's all.

Soham :- Oh, ok.

Purvi is looking at Tej. She shakes her head.

Grandpa, Balan and Soham join them. After half an hour.

Soham :- Ok, we better leave. See you tom little sister.

Purvi :- Ok.

Grandpa goes near Purvi and whispers.

Grandpa: - There is a reason why you are close to him and I will find out. Just wait and watch. You will pay for not respecting me and I will make sure you say sorry.

Purvi is staring at him.

Tej :- What did he say?

Purvi :- Nothing. Just rubbish.

Arjun :- So, what you wanted to tell me.

Sachin gets a call from Manav.

Sachin :- Ok, we are on our way back.

Purvi :- I will tell you at dinner.

Arjun :- What is wrong? I know something is wrong, I can feel it.

Purvi :- I will tell you. Let's go home first.

D clan house.

Purvi opens the door. Everyone from the chawl is there. Neighbours, friends, little children. They scream Happy Birthday together.

Archana :- Happy Birthday.

She hugs Purvi. Purvi is lost for words.

Hei everyone. How was it? Did you like it? I know it wasn't that great but well, sometimes you just get an ok episode. So, this is my ok episode. It is a build up to something better. Anyways, if you liked it hit the like button and do comment. Below I have written a poem to show Arjun's feelings for Purvi (it's shows Arjun pain in the current PR track-nothing to do with my story) Let me know if you liked it. Thanks in advance and thank you for the lovely comments…

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Posted: 13 years ago
From Arjun to Purvi,

My day has turn into night,

My dreams have been crushed,

My heart is filled with sorrow,

So much pain in it,

I can't even breathe,

All i want is too be away from you,

I try, i wish and i pray,

For this heart to forget you,

But i can't,

You are my shadow,

You are my hope,

You are my life,

Words are never enough,

To tell you the pain I am in,

Look into my eyes and feel it,

Can't you see,

I can't live without you.


Did you like it? Do you feel it shows Arjun's pain.
Edited by arjunaluis - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hei abhi...this chapter was amazing...
it was not an ok chapter...it was great one...which was very interesting..
let me start now..was really bored from morning as I have not watched AshVik's set..so was really very pissed but after reading your update I was like this 😃
I really love your sachin..he is so understanding..so caring...his dialogues were awesome..
tej..hehehe Purvi might be thinking dat she made a big mistake by telling truth to tej..
and arjun ahhh I just stop thinking about him...so love him...he would love to call her wife...what a fantastic line...really I envy purvi for getting someone like arjun..obviously in your OS...in serial they have destroyed ArVi...
and dat grandpa grrr he is so annoying..ohhh see he is thinking about punishing purvi...nd for star of the day was sachin..just loved him..
thankyou for saving my day...!!
PS-that poem was superb..match arjun's current situation...
Edited by ashvikluverrr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved purvi nd archana scene now adays v r not gettng to c such scenes in pr.. Mising arjun purvi nd archana purvi scenes
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Posted: 13 years ago
again a gud 1...actually awesm...lved d possessiveness of sachin toward purvi...also liked d caring nature of archana nd prvi toward each other...nd d line which i lved was ...is ur byfriend dat gr8...nd i wuld say ya he is gr8...w8ing 4 d dinner date...pls update fast...once again awesum update...w8ing eagerly 4 d nxt one...

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