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NadaCinta

@NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Hi,

I loved the way DK explained all about love to Arjun. The best moment was when Arjun was on his knees asking for Purvi's hand for marriage, when it was raining - so romamtic! The way you epicted Archana's love towards Purvi was so touching especially whe she said that 'doesn't mean she's not my daughter just because I didn't give birth to her.' Very well said! A bonding between a mother and child is beyond words. It can't see if its biological or adopted.

Pl continue.

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Maleena

@*Maleena*

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

I loved it! Arjun's proposal was so cute! I can't wait for your next update.

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arjunaluis

@arjunaluis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: peachesnplums
OMG, the proposal!!! Sure as hell didn't see that coming, but what a lovely surprise 😃

Now, thanks for the update and PM

DK sorting out Arjun's dilemma, big thumbs up 👍🏼

🤣

The love poem and the proposal were wonderful. I want to know your inspiration there Abhi 😊

I can visualise the scenes very well, so let me get over my excitement and will then add more 😛

Hei Peaches...
even i was laughing writting the Devdas line...😆😆 Glad you approve...the love poem, well poetry is something i actually do a lot...not like writting this story...the story is a first...i like to write poems when i have free times...inspiration?? all my friends use to ask the same thing, i don't know...i think it is natural...it just comes...though i don't think this poems were that good...usually i take days or weeks to write a great one...this i wrote with the story in couple of hours only...now they stop asking and just pay me to ask me to write for them to give to their girlfriends...😆😆

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arjunaluis

@arjunaluis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: NadaCinta
Hi,

I loved the way DK explained all about love to Arjun. The best moment was when Arjun was on his knees asking for Purvi's hand for marriage, when it was raining - so romamtic! The way you epicted Archana's love towards Purvi was so touching especially whe she said that 'doesn't mean she's not my daughter just because I didn't give birth to her.' Very well said! A bonding between a mother and child is beyond words. It can't see if its biological or adopted.

Pl continue.

Thanks for the comment...welcome here...🤗 😆😆 of course it had to rain...can this two do anything when it is not raining...well, i guess i am bias because i just love rain...so had to write it with rain...One of the reason i loved PR after the leap was the bond between Archana and Purvi...glad u love it...😊 will continue soon...

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arjunaluis

@arjunaluis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: *Maleena*
I loved it! Arjun's proposal was so cute! I can't wait for your next update.

First of all i love Radev too...😳😳miss them so much...thanks for the comment, i have always seen that u have liked my story, but this is the first comment...guess i did Arvi right today...😃😃

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Safiqa

@saf2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Amazing part once again! 😛 I loved everything in this chapter - right from DK advising Arjun and to Arjun proposing Purvi! The rain sequence that you added was very good...the entire proposing part was very cute and the way you put forward Archana's views too was very good! I am pretty sure Archu would have reacted the same way in the show as well had it been the track...update soon...😊

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arjunaluis

@arjunaluis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: saf2012
Amazing part once again! 😛 I loved everything in this chapter - right from DK advising Arjun and to Arjun proposing Purvi! The rain sequence that you added was very good...the entire proposing part was very cute and the way you put forward Archana's views too was very good! I am pretty sure Archu would have reacted the same way in the show as well had it been the track...update soon...😊

Hei Safiqa...finally we are together in IF at the same time...the bolded part...thank you...what a great compliment...would be great to see this wouldn't it...at least a little of it...😆😆 thanks for the comment my friend...Ah, Arvi and rain is just perfect...don't u think?? thanks again for the comment...will try and update soon...but it will take time...will be busy the next couple of days...will write after that...😃😃

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Safiqa

@saf2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: arjunaluis

Hei Safiqa...finally we are together in IF at the same time...the bolded part...thank you...what a great compliment...would be great to see this wouldn't it...at least a little of it...😆😆 thanks for the comment my friend...Ah, Arvi and rain is just perfect...don't u think?? thanks again for the comment...will try and update soon...but it will take time...will be busy the next couple of days...will write after that...😃😃

ArVi is actually synonymous with rain...😆 most of their very cute moments had them in rain...which included their confession of course!

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-LiveLaughLove-

@-LiveLaughLove-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Awesome job Abhi!!! Love how Dk says that Arjun is probably the only devdas that drinks without even losing his love!! The proposal was just adorable!! I did not see that coming at all!! I love the way you show the bond Archana has with Purvi. Love how it was raining when Arjun got down on his knees! Love how he made the list but then it got wet so he had to say his words straight from his heart!! Update soon!