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Part 4

The D clan house

Sachin is in the room and tej is looking after him'Manav comes in and screams Sachu, Sachu

Tej :- In here baba..

Manav :- What happen, Oh, my god! Your head?

Sachin :- It's ok baba'I am fine. Archana Ji took me to the hospital, the doctors have checked me. They said it is a small wound, I should be ok in two, three days.

Manav :- You haven't told me what happen?

Sachin tells what happen in the market and how Archana protected him.

Manav :- How is Archana? Is she ok? Nothing happen to her right.

Before Sachin or Tej can answer him, he runs out of the room screaming for Archana, but she is not in the kitchen or in her room. Manav is now worried sick. An expression Tej has never seen on her father's face until today'

Archana comes in. Manav hugs her very tightly, not wanting to let her go.

Archana :- What's the matter Manav? Why are you so worried? Is Sachin ok?

Manav :- Yes he is fine'what you did today. It was madness, what if the guy hurt you, what if he had a knife and harmed you. I could have never lived with myself if something happens to you.

Archana :- It was nothing Manav, they were just low life tugs. I have am fine, and what am I supposed to do, stand there and watch them harm my son. I would die, but I would never let anything happen to my son.

Manav is about to speak, Archana puts her hand on Manav's mouth and says

Archana :- Don't worry, I am fine. With you by my side nothing can happen to me. Besides you would have done the same thing. How can you not allow me to carry out my responsibility towards my children? A mother's job is to protect her children and that's what I did today.

Manav smiles, Archana goes to the kitchen to prepare lunch. Manav looks at her and thinks about all their happy memories'

Ore piya song plays in the background.

Tej in the bedroom thinks'What is with this lady? One minute she wants money the next minute she talks about her responsibility towards us. I guess she was lying to get more money from baba, but if all she wants is money. Why would she risk her life to protect Sachin? But then if she really loves us why would she get Purvi married to Arjun, first she says Arjun is not good for both ovi and purvi and then she says Arjun and Purvi can get married. A frustrated Tej walks out to get some fresh air.

Archana brings Sachin his lunch

Sachin tries to eat it but his hands hurt. He calls for Tej, but Tej is nowhere to be found.

Archana :- Let me feed you.

Sachin :- It's ok, when Tej comes back she can feed me.

Archana :- You have to eat your medicine on time, so you have to eat your food now. I have cooked all your favorite dish.

Sachin just looks at her. Archana takes the spoon and starts feeding him. He eats quietly, remembering the time when he was small and how she used to feed him. He remembers how he never eats unless Archana comes to feed him. Tej looks from outside and remembers how Archana used to take care of her when she was sick.

They both are becoming a little confused. Who is this lady? This is not the lady, their grandmother have had them believing all this years. She is the complete opposite.

Manav looks on. This is the Archana he has always loved and will always love. The person who would do anything for others.


Scene shifts to Arjun and Purvi. They are both eating paani puri. Arjun is talking about their future but Purvi isn't listening.

Arjun:- Mars Calling Earth. Miss. Purvi are you with me.

Purvi :- Ah?? Yes'What?

Arjun :- What is wrong? He holds her hand. Are you worried about tom?

Purvi :- No, tom will be ok.

Arjun :- Are you sure? You are going to face them tom?

Purvi :- I am sure. We will follow our plan.

Arjun :- If you are not thinking about tom? What are you thinking about?

Purvi :- Ovi

Arjun :- Ovi?

Purvi :- Yes, Ovi. She needs help. She is still in denial; she still thinks you love her. Arjun, we need to help her. I am worried she might do something to herself.

Arjun:- You are right. In a way I am responsible for her condition. I should have told her earlier that I didn't love her. That I was marrying her only for dad and Manav uncle.

Both are lost in their own thought. After a few moments.

Arjun :- First, we get your parents together, then we will deal with Ovi. We are going to need manav uncle and Archana auntie's help to make her understand. Don't worry Purvi, I will make her understand, we all will make her understand. But first, let's get ready for tom. You are going to give the performance of you live. I hope you acting skills are as good as you claim them to be.

Purvi :- Not Manav uncle and Archana aunty'it's Manav baba and Archana aai'

Arjun smiles at her. He sents her home, Purvi goes to sleep knowing she only has 6 days left and she will need tom to count.


Edited by arjunaluis - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update!!! 👏 ❤️ it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb,awesome,amazing and fantastic...loved it...please update soon...thanks for the pm...and my name is Nazeema :)
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wow abhi..dat ws awesome...vry interesting..luvd it..cv's can never think of dis track..dey r dumb want to show more and more drama..this is superb..u r a fantastic writer..waiting for nxt part...thnx for pm..
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Hello everyone, First i would like to thank all of you guys who have liked my work so far and commented...It means so much to me, that word can't desricbe...I would have liked to thank all of you..personally..but since my status is only a groupie, i can only post 20 comments in 24 hours..and i would like to save those comments for the shock i just received today morning..that is the new promo of PR...

I have no words right about now..this is what i posted in a different thread

To me, this is beyond ridiculous...if purvi did this to arjun..i doing think there is a bigger betraying episode in the history of PR...at least manav told archana he has to marry shravani..we purvi fans will be beyond disappointed..this is not the character we have loved and liked...Oh dear CV's why did you have to do this...the only we i can accept this is if ovi kidnapped purvi and took her place..
This is a copy of Choti Bahu, at least there Dev married Radhika, he just didn't know it..this is cruelty to all of us...As a HRF member all i can say is that i am filled with hopelessness and negativity right now..If Purvi did this, i don't mind Archana slapping her..she totally deserves it...

So guys thanks again for your loving suport,
Arvi_fan
:- that was a big loving AWESOME, THANKS.
arrrviiiluverrr:- Thanks again for your great words..
Nazeema :- Thanks for loving it.
butterfly624:- Same goes for you, Thanks again..

I will write as soon as this disappointment washes away...😭😭

Edited by arjunaluis - 13 years ago
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Please do continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey abhi (can i call u abhi, i dont know ur age) its really awesome. i like d idea of sending savita aaji n ovi out of town so that sachu dada n teju can understand archu aai i better way. i wish u r there to write pr story. sorry for my english. i know its not so good😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: PariD

hey abhi (can i call u abhi, i dont know ur age) its really awesome. i like d idea of sending savita aaji n ovi out of town so that sachu dada n teju can understand archu aai i better way. i wish u r there to write pr story. sorry for my english. i know its not so good😔



Hello..Pari.yes you can call be abhi...no problem what so ever...thanks so much for your comment...the reason i sent savita and ovi away is because i don't feel that archana can ever have a chance with both of them around..if it is not for them i feel tej would have accepted archana as her mother by now...and purvi would have been happy with arjun...and sachin wouldn't hate archana so much...your english is good, don't feel shy, the fact your are trying to write here in front of everyone. shows me how brave you are..so good job on that...👏👏👏 keep writting and reading english, and it will get better in no time...😃😃
Edited by arjunaluis - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful writing dear...:) i loved the entire story specially Sachin getting beaten up😉...do continue...

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