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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really nice. I hope Cvs will allow purvi to think/act in this way. Pls continue. N i also want to join HRF
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arrrviiiluverrr

hey abhi u r a fab writer...u shud write an ff or os on arvi...and this is 1000 times better den what cv's r showing us...so creative and damn interesting...waiting for nxt part..!!



Hai there...thanks a lot for your support..you are the third person to make me blush today...😳😳 Thanks a lot again...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: PariD

its really nice. I hope Cvs will allow purvi to think/act in this way. Pls continue. N i also want to join HRF



Hello again Pari/ Deepika...You are most welcome to join HRF group..A big welcoming hug to you..😃😃 😃 currently the groups members are JaiShankar, Jhanvi, Naava and me...If you see their comments just reply..i know they will welcome you as i have...they are great...😊😊

Thanks for your support on my writing..means a lot to me...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really good SS 👏. when you finish this why dont you forward this to the cv's.

The cv's need to go and take a crash course on how to write logical and good script.

I even want the old Purvi back.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb. Wt happens if Ekta is taking PR Where ever she wants. Atleast you are taking it in a way it has to be. Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was fantastic...please update soon...thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunflower52

Really good SS 👏. when you finish this why dont you forward this to the cv's.


The cv's need to go and take a crash course on how to write logical and good script.

I even want the old Purvi back.



Thanks a lot...😊😊 Even i miss the old purvi so much...hence i started writing..i don't know what to say about the CV's anymore...😕 i just hope they get Arvi married...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aasthanup

Superb. Wt happens if Ekta is taking PR Where ever she wants. Atleast you are taking it in a way it has to be. Thanks





Thanks a lot for you comment...😊😊 shall update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: na_61611

It was fantastic...please update soon...thanks for the pm :)




Thanks again..😊will update soon..you're welcome for the pm..you are the first person who motivated me to continue...so i felt i should at least pm you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys…first of all let me thank you all for liking my work…it means a lot to me…Thanks again..please comment..let me know what you think...

PART 3

Day 2 7 days to Arman divorce

Sachin is leaving the D clan house

Aditi :- Sachu…are you going out? Can you please help me? I was supposed to go market to buy grocery and vegetables…you know like onion, rice, chicken

Sachu :- Can you get to the point…very rudely

Aditi thinks were has the cute little Sachin she used to take care as a child gone to…What could cause so much hatred?

Sachu :- Hello

Aditi :- Oh yes.. I was saying can you please go to the market and give Archana this list of things to buy…my mother in law slip and fell this morning…so I can't go… my husband is busy with the wedding preparations….and nobody is in the house to take care of her… Please Sachu..it will mean a lot to me…

Sachu :- Ok..whatever

Sachu leaves…angry that he now not only has to see Archana but has to talk to her… he didn't want to help but remembers clearly how she used to care for him as a child…

Aditi calls Purvi up and says sachu is on his way…

Purvi :- Thanks again aunty.

Arjun :- Meri Jaan…Are you sure this is a good idea? It is going to hurt him?

Purvi :- I know he is going to get hurt…that's the main idea…even I feel bad, he is my brother but I have no other way to make him realize.

Arjun :- And Miss Purvi. What happens if he doesn't realize?

Purvi :- Then My Goat…I shall sacrifice you..

Arjun :- My Goat ??? Enough with that you can call me sweet things also like maybe meri pati?

Purvi smiles at him, she thinks Sachu dada I might be selfish right now and this is definitely something wrong to do but I have do it for my mother and in some ways for you to.. You are not the dada my mother has describe to me. You have changed and only aai's love can change you back.

Sachin sees Archana and stares at her… Archana hasn't seen him yet. He tells himself just go give it to her and get it over with. Suddenly a punch lands on his face. It wasn't very hard but the suddenness of the hit makes him fall. He hits his head on the road and blood starts pouring. His hand also is hurt from trying to break the fall…

Archana turns and sees Sachin on the road…She runs to him.

The guy (Madhav) stands Sachin up and gives him a kick in the stomach…Sachin is gasping for air…

Archana pushes the guy away, he and his two big friends stare at her. Archana on the other hand wasn't scared like a mother bear when her cubs are threatened; she was staring at them fiercely.

Archana :- Touch my son again and I will kill you, you hear me..

Madhav :- Oh, so this your son. What a great son you have? You know what this idiot son of yours has done. He acted as if he was in love with my sister and then dumped her for some other girl.

Madhav takes a step forward towards Sachin and Archana takes a step forward and stands in front of Sachin. Archana looks at Sachin, before Sachin can answer her.

Archana :- I know my son. He can never do that. That's not the value his father or I have given him. He is a very shy boy, he is a good boy. If he really has fallen in love, he would have come and told his father and if he didn't I would have been able to read it from his face and action. I know my son very well. I know when he is upset, when he is angry, when he is shy and I for sure would know if my son has fallen in love. He is my son.

Sachin remembers the day in Archana's house during purvi-vinay almost engagement day. Without him saying a word Archana understood what he needed.

Madhav sister comes running.

Madhav sister:- Oh,brother! What have you done? This is not the guy… I don't even know who this is. Vikram dada called to tell me that you are about to beat my love. So I come running. She looks at Madhav's friend.

Madhav :- I am very sorry aunty. I got the wrong person. I didn't mean it. You, (looks at Sachin), I am sorry..You should be lucky to have a mother like her, first person brave enough to actually stand in front of me. Sorry again.

They leave. Archana helps to hold Sachin. She teares her saree and ties it on Sachin's head.

Archana :- Let's go to the hospital, I will tell Manav to complain to the police later. How dare they beat my son up. nobody harms my son…she holds Sachin face with her hand. You are okay right.

Sachin just looks at Archana, unable to trust his voice.

Madhav :- This is the first time I am actually getting paid to bring someone together. Feels really good. Thanks a lot sister. Next time I will do it for free.

Purvi:- Thanks a lot to all of you…but I don't think I can watch my brother get beaten again.

Madhav :- Don't worry. It wasn't that hard. He is just weak.

Purvi smiles as Arjun pays them…

Arjun :- So meri jaan, tell me sweetheart. Who is next and what's the plan?

Purvi :- Tejaswini Manav Deshmukh.

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