The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98

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-LiveLaughLove-

@-LiveLaughLove-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#711

Omg Laurie you are too good of a writer!! Just love how portrayed Karan, Arjun, and Laurie so well. Love how Karan didn't beat Arjun to shreds for the sake of his "baby sister". Also loved how Arjun came out on top,, poor Karan had a gash on his perfect face :( But he had his Laurie by his side to help get it patched up :). Loved how Arjun said " come again please" he was in total disbelief that his Love was drugged. Loved the last part, it was too cute!!

Please update soon!!

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Hey Laurie u did an amazing job love your skills. It was beautifully written

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Azaad_Panchi

@Azaad_Panchi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

omg Laurie wat an amazing part it was ...i could actually visualise everything happening ryt n front of my eyes...n pls pls pls unite Arjun n Purvi soon...

eagerly waiting for the next part#20...

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shreya2094

@shreya2094

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

wow...!!!another mindblowing update...how i was longing to read ur update...@axiom u made my day.honestly...thank u so much for this wonderful post,,,,,,,,,,,,,i think i am starting to lyk karan more than arjun nw(cant completely get over arjun tho😉he will always b loved😊)...i love the protective bro side of his...i am falling for ur ff more n more...plz do update soon...dying to read the nxt part😊

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--Jenelle--

@--Jenelle--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#715

Omg Laurie. Take a bow.👏

what an amazing update.i'm speechless. and as always you always leave me hungry for more...

loved it from beginning to end. the fight sequence was awesome.

update soon hun.🤗

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Silvy

@SilverBell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#716

Aww Loved The Chapter. Karan Should Tell Arjun That His Purvi's Brother.

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ptamom

@ptamom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#717

⭐️Laurie Thank you Thank you

You don't know how many times I've checked if you update. i was missing our Arjun- Purvi and you've done such justice to them. Loved how you took AK's dialogues and incorporate them into the story. It was a fast paced, heart racing chapter...just sped through wanting to know what would happen next. How wonderful that Purvi has people that love and worry for her. They want what's best for her. I think of the present PR she doesn't have that luck. Everyone seems so ok with her sacrifices.

Anyway, Laurie keep them coming and thanks 👏

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Amanda126

@Amanda126

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#718

Plz plzzzxz...

Update soon I have been waiting for this update a long time

I love this ff

Plz

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Pancham101

@Pancham101

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#719

Hi Laurie...if I may be so forward as to call you by your name?

This is such a balm for all of us starved souls! The best part is that I can completely picture Rithvik and Asha doing justice to such WONDERFUL lines!

Yeh Dil Maange More!

Thank you!!!