The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98

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AshaNegiFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

Finally! I'm speechless, awesome, fantablous!

Loved it!

Update soon 😊😊

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Jagruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

Laurie laurie laurie..!! my dear friend Kudos to you for giving us this mindblowing,mindbobling,amazing,fantastic..(i am out of words now)chapter and ff..
Atlast u updated..after a long break..after knowing dat u have updated i was dancing,jumping and singing in joy..rightly said by someone it was like we are drug addicts waiting for our 19th dose..and today v got it..
This chapter was amazing...(as i said before i am out of words)...!!
The clash of titans..the title was enough for us to know how fantastic this chapter was..i am in love with karan..sry laurie for eyeing your so called fiance but he is a man any girl would dream her whole life with..so caring..i also loved laurie here..calming karan..and also laurie's silent prayer to god to help karan hold his anger and not do anything to arjun else purvi will kill him..
I am wondering why those two bodyguards wer adressed with different names as in G.I joe and other i dont remember..
Their fighting was interesting..and also glad to kno that arjun was all over karan..
Arjun's 'come again please' was indeed awesome and my favourite dialogue..
Also loved how karan said dat his baby sister is all grown up...and unconscious..
And last but not the least ArVi's part was amazing..i was as always reading it real slow so dat it could never end but after dat 'never' was a bit depressed like Ash..
Waiting for our 20th dose..
(sry no emoticons frm my mobile phone)
Thankyou for this chapter laurie..u made my weekend..!!!

Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago

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soapwatcher1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

Laurie, my Laurie, magnificent! 👏 👍🏼After the wait you put us through, you have come through with flying, nay, soaring colors! I loved the phrase "zero hero", sorry, Ash, he is one not in RS but in real PR after speaking so normally to Ovi and for not getting out of that silly farce of a marriage haste post haste, he is one. Loved that you still kept the hero a hero, zero or not, by letting him split Karan's cheek, even though that must have pained you. 😆Ah, that witch, she tried to kill Purvi? Would not put it past her, she does not want anyone crossing her path and what she wants, does she? We all know by now how "she who must not be named" operates!

Thank you for the lovely treat, dil maange more! 😉

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peachesnplums

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Laurie!!!! 🤗

You just made my Saturday with this update...it's very difficult to restrain my excitement, first at seeing that there was an update and then after reading the chapter. I nearly squealed in delight when I saw a new chapter of RS! Wow, I sound a like ZOMG teenager at some much awaited movie premiere. What's that now, you guys are going to judge me? It's okay 😳

Anyway, let me read the chapter again. Thanks a lot Laurie! Have a great weekend.

Loved AK's "Come again please?" 😃. Also, let me join Ash and Jahnvi in thanking you for letting Arjun split Karan's cheek. It probably was difficult for you to write.

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Latika Gurung

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

what an update... it was freaking awesome... arjun-karan were fighting for one person and i.e. purvi karan's little sister and arjun's life and love... thanx for giving this update...as we all ARVI fans really missing ARVI scenes these days...and ur update just enlighten us and made my day... u r a fab writer and once again superb update...and ya purvi murmured ' love u my arjun' that was really sweet and awww...:):)

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Safoera

@ARluv16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#706

Woowww!! I lovvved everything!❤️...I didn't want it to end(this chapter)...so I read it again and again, trying not to make it end..Lol😆

I loved two Lions fighting for the same person, Karan for his dear sibling, and Arjun for His Love and life...Thank u for making Arjun "win" this...😃

I loved that last part with Arjun and Purvi, esp "love u ,my Arjun"... "love u too, my Purvi"...☺️.

and "Come Again Please?" and "Never" I could hear Mr AK say this with his own voice!!

Thank you for writing!...You lit up my day!...Update sooon!..I can't wait!👍🏼

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vgiri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Lauriiieee, Thank you. Our hard earned chapter,
Love Love Loved it
Enjoyed Karan AK attacks, glad AK had upper hand.
So the another Juice Lady drugged our Purvi.
As Ash said, AK's signature words...Forever, Never
Atleast he is still our old AK in RS.
Plz Keep it coming.. 😊
How dare He said Zero Hero, Karan is approaching my hlist. 😡

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jdronamraju

@jdronamraju

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#708

Aaah Lovely Laurie !!
I am late to the party, I see.. I missed seeing the early announcement in the LNT !
Finally, the Prince gets to the Princess, after such a looong wait, for us. But, well worth the wait, dear.. 👏..Especially for us, the disheartened ones with the real story...

Trust you to use the AK Signature words "Come again Please" in a totally different context from the original, and very well used.. Love you for that... !!
"Zero Hero" ??? How dare ur Karan say that? Atleast not to the RS Arjun !
The other one is too busy being "husbandly" to the ECD/JLO/CC, who wears her medals of honor with great aplomb ! 😡
MWAAAH to you for giving us a Juice Lady free chapter... How evil of her to drug our Purvi...Wait till Karan Arjun get to know if it... Fun times ahead...😉
BTW, any idea of adding our dear Punni Thaayi into the mix?
Liked the flow, short and sweet, but as always, like Jhanvi, Dil Maange More...

Oh BTW, u do know that once Karan is on Vila's hlist, it is going to take monumental redemption for him to get off the list !! 😆

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abhimg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#709

😃⭐️Lovely Lovely Laurie, finally, a chapter...zero hero indeed given the current state of affairs in PR...can imagine the writer's block given the happenings with our ARVI in PR...

But we hope that you are on a roll now...and our DILS WILL GET MORE...

The maleficent purple nail lady 😡...at least ARVI are together at the end of this chapter...Lovely title CLASH OF THE TITANS...indeed...Karan's cheek open gash...ooh painful ...he is such a good bro for Purvi's sake he did not bash up Arjun, that was very thoughtful of him...oh how Karan and Laurie have grown on me...😃

Cannot wait for Karan to figure out- whether its the guests or the video footage of the party, i wonder how he will figure it out and gosh wait till Ms Teju finds out what happened to Purvi...

What will Arjun do...hmmm...intrigued interested impatient happy waiting for MORE...

Thank you Laurie.. 👏😳