The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 54

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Posted: 13 years ago
😃 Another nice chapter Laurie, with tons of detail, so we can recognize each character and their fine details, can visualize them as though they were in front of our eyes, that's the beauty of a well written piece!

Lots of designer names...I only know Ritu Kumar...lovely Laurie is so thoughtful...presents...just like Arjun's gift to Purvi at Pune...

Interesting that Tej and Laurie in Lehngas and Purvi dear in that gorgeous saree...the Saree has got to be symbolic, and again RED the color of passion, romance, the color of her blouse😳

Really thrilled that they are going up to the party...

Am also wondering on the parallel what dearest Arjun is doing, thinking, getting ready, what is he wearing, suited up, red shirt or our other favorite the mauve one 😉...

Wonder if Ms Limpet will turn up at the party just to size up Ms. Purvi? Will Ovi be the one to tell Tej about the dhamaka of the breakup ( surprised even Savita the loudmouth that she is has not told Teju even)...and in turn Teju will tell Purvi...once Teju knows the truth, will she turn hostile to even in the least towards Purvi...or not as their bond is much stronger..😊

What will happen to Purvi when she really finds out Arjun is not with Ovi😃, what is more than fainting, gosh, she will be...cannot wait for that either...and I do think maybe that revelation comes first, just maybe...or maybe not and both Arjun and Ovi land up at the party😲...

What fun these three chapters have nice weavings of positivity, and good flow yet meandering along, not rushed at all...

Thank U Laurie for this excellent Sunday morning chapter to awaken to👍🏼
Edited by abhimg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
What a wonderful thing to wake up to, Laurie !!! Thank you..:) With my fav coffee and fav story ..

Hmm.. Girls all geared up with designer wear and Manolo Bhlanik shoes to boot :) Purvi all armored up to wow the pants off Mr. Cranky-Loskar !! Cool !! Now, it is his turn to have the fainting spell !!

I think u are going the jealousy way for Mr.CK, as he thinks PD is KD's gal. Arjun deserves it for what he put Purvi thru .. but, not for too long though. Cant see even this Arjun baba sad for long :)

You are on a roll, Laurie !! You go, gal !!

Your descriptions were beautiful, can even visualize them. Nive going there. Just hope the 'eyes' dont come there ..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Laurie, I'm in ArVi heaven. I'm smiling like a cat that swallowed the cream here... or better said - I'm smiling like an idiot here! :D. OMG - I cant believe that im now soo excited for them to meet.
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!
Loved the chapter and loved the descriptions. Now I can envision each one of them to the T.
Don't worry Abhi, I had to google most of the brands and get up to date with the trends. lol. So ure not alone.
Jyothi and Abhi, enjoyed reading ur analysis of Laurie's RS. Abhi... so many possibilities and questions u brought out hun :-). esp loved "Red - the colour of passion, romance, the colour of her blouse". Now like u girls, I wanna know what Arjun is wearing and if he has on a matching red shirt... like how they matched up in the May 14th episode I think... the flashback scene with the pic from thr dhaba (love that moment btw, even as a FB).
Great chapter Laurie... looking fwd to the next... eagerly :D.
p.s. U can call me Ash... Ashlaika is kind of a mouthfull sometimes... esp if ure chewing while typing. hehehehehe
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awesome update dear...loved it...i must say that u r an amazing writer...
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW laurie...another nice chapter.👏👏👏
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Wow it was amazing...can't wait for arvi to meet :)
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WOW!!! amazing chapter!!!! OMG OMG OMG i'm sooo excited for ArVi to meet!! eeekkk... plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon!!!!!!!! PLZZZ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arrrviiiluverrr


wow laurie ur surprising me day by day...3 updates in just two days...thats awsome..i kno dat ur nxt update will be a.bigger one..u'll need tym..bt for ur amazing updates i m ready to wait days and months...and so on...
this update ws vry sweet..u wrote it so nicely dat i could imagine why all girls wer wearing..laurie u shd be a cv..u r a great writer..


Thank you so much for the comments and being such a wonderful fan 😃 (What do I call you dear?)

With all these lovely words I might just consider that as my next career move 😉

Enjoy!

P.S. I still do love saying your user name out loud. It's so fun!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhimg

😃 Another nice chapter Laurie, with tons of detail, so we can recognize each character and their fine details, can visualize them as though they were in front of our eyes, that's the beauty of a well written piece!


Lots of designer names...I only know Ritu Kumar...lovely Laurie is so thoughtful...presents...just like Arjun's gift to Purvi at Pune...

Interesting that Tej and Laurie in Lehngas and Purvi dear in that gorgeous saree...the Saree has got to be symbolic, and again RED the color of passion, romance, the color of her blouse😳

Really thrilled that they are going up to the party...

Am also wondering on the parallel what dearest Arjun is doing, thinking, getting ready, what is he wearing, suited up, red shirt or our other favorite the mauve one 😉...

Wonder if Ms Limpet will turn up at the party just to size up Ms. Purvi? Will Ovi be the one to tell Tej about the dhamaka of the breakup ( surprised even Savita the loudmouth that she is has not told Teju even)...and in turn Teju will tell Purvi...once Teju knows the truth, will she turn hostile to even in the least towards Purvi...or not as their bond is much stronger..😊

What will happen to Purvi when she really finds out Arjun is not with Ovi😃, what is more than fainting, gosh, she will be...cannot wait for that either...and I do think maybe that revelation comes first, just maybe...or maybe not and both Arjun and Ovi land up at the party😲...

What fun these three chapters have nice weavings of positivity, and good flow yet meandering along, not rushed at all...

Thank U Laurie for this excellent Sunday morning chapter to awaken to👍🏼


Thank you Awesome Abhi! 😃 ⭐️

I'm trying my hand at detailing for the important stuff. Its hard to do without becoming boring or repetitive so I hope I'm doing a good job on that.

If I could only show you these outfits, yowza, they are gorgeous 😃

Lovely questions and unfortunately there's no SBS/SBB with the Raging Storm so it's a wait and watch... or more like a relax and read type situation 🤣

Thank you for all you encouragement and lovely comments.

Couldn't do this without you 🤗

Enjoy!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jdronamraju

What a wonderful thing to wake up to, Laurie !!! Thank you..:) With my fav coffee and fav story ..

Hmm.. Girls all geared up with designer wear and Manolo Bhlanik shoes to boot :) Purvi all armored up to wow the pants off Mr. Cranky-Loskar !! Cool !! Now, it is his turn to have the fainting spell !!

I think u are going the jealousy way for Mr.CK, as he thinks PD is KD's gal. Arjun deserves it for what he put Purvi thru .. but, not for too long though. Cant see even this Arjun baba sad for long :)

You are on a roll, Laurie !! You go, gal !!

Your descriptions were beautiful, can even visualize them. Nive going there. Just hope the 'eyes' dont come there ..:)


You're welcome Joythi 😃 Sumatra blend?

Oh yes, Miss Purvi had to be drop dead gorgeous for this party. In my mind, its Gold Awards times ten 😆

I think Mr. K needed a wake up call too. Let's see how this pans out.

Enjoy!

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