The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 42

Originally posted by: latika19

niceee update...thanx for adding my name in it...please continue soon and i want 2 tell u that u r a fab writer...:)

Originally posted by: ramki1

Hi my dear friend Laurie...sorry for late reply...Superb characterization laurie👏👏...this time no words from my end to describe you...now I am going to read 10th chapter...

Originally posted by: kritika_arvi

I really-2 like ur writing ,loved it. Plz continue.

Originally posted by: ramki1

Laurie...oh my dear 🤗 you made my day ,lovely written👏👏...so finally KD and purvi are brother and sisters...

Laurie Karma(MD of karma group of companies).🥳..now I am expecting some wonderful and funny conversation between Laurie,Purvi,Arjun and Karan in your next chapter...

Before KD and Laurie Karma meeting ..Please introduce new characters and assign those characters to Thanya, Archanaji(Archverma),Darlyne,Shyamala,Jahnvi and Abhi...then will have more fun in coming chapters..

Originally posted by: abhimg

Hello my friend Laurie Karma,👏

Wow! I am thrilled...i like Laurie's fiestiness and how Karan and her met at the tower...could totally see the scene...and the tower key chain was a nice touch...Karan's port key i see similar to Purvi's lotus locket...😉

Very nice, your chapters have different tastes, this one was very interesting, with an interesting turn of events...and the peaches...hmmm...

Loved Shyamala's post too- and yes, the 21 chapters gives hope that there is plenty more to read and enjoy good writing and good comments by our friends here...

You have this nice knack of inclusiveness and i see some of our other friends were off to different destinations in Europe...wonderful and happy...

I like this touch and i really am thankful for Laurie, so that our Purvi is just for dear dear Arjun 😉

Thank you Laurie, you satiate, you gratify, you pique, you arouse more interest at the twists and turns and dil maange more and more and more...

😆

Originally posted by: vgiri

yay.. thanks for the mention Laurie..Wish I get the same desitination for my work assignment.

hmmm I am a software person..may be i can do some CAD design for the construction...

Laurie Karma...interesting features and personality...your writing style and personality goes hand in hand.. I can totally visualize your personality..finally you've created/developed (missing right word here) a charming guy for yourself, careful though.. Tej also likes him I think.

so Purvi is all set to meet our Arjun.. two weeks gone by and they never bumped into each other in the elevator or lobby..both are very workaholic I should say..

Here I am.. on a busy monday morning.. reading about PD/KD relaxing at the roof garden of Butlers Wharf. This doesn t happen very often but thx.. Awesome Chapter and Looking forward to your next Chapter Laurie..

Originally posted by: white.band

my god...hot news...laurie kamra de new gf..wah arre wah...😆

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Laurie, it seems like each time I try to savor your updates, another one just pops up right after. I don't mind, I love that your quick with your updates, but I don't what you feel that you have to have each chapter out so fast to satisfy our hungry appetites😆. Your writing is brilliant and I am enjoying each and every chapter. Loved this chapter as well.

I loved the conversation between Purvi and Karan. Purvi's advice to Karan is great. I just hope Arjun, with his telepathic connection to Purvi, realizes that this is what Purvi also wants. She wants Arjun to fight for her and redeem himself in her eyes.

So, Laurie you are the inspiration for Karma Group of Companies? You sly little devil! Karan will definitely have to put in a lot of effort to win his "brown-eyed girl" back. 😉

At the same time I was wondering, this Karan is Soham? I thought it might not be, but I won't stress my brain. You can write out your brilliant chapters. I'm in no rush to see the ARVI reunion so fast because I am enjoying the buildup to that grand event. I know you will make it more memorable than what the CVs have planned for us.

Oh forgot to mention, thanks for the sendoff to Switzerland, Laurie. I feel honored to be a part of your magical tale.

Originally posted by: Axiom123

Thanks Janhvi 😃 Trying my hand at a little intrigue. I hope I do it some justice 😆

Is he real??? Hmmm 😉

Not to worry your ladli is in safe hands I assure you - where she needs to be - in Arjun's hands 😍 (at least in PR land) and yes, she's quite smart that girl of yours. 😃

Next chapter coming up later today 😃