The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 32

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Posted: 13 years ago
what a story line. Laurie I'm convinced that you are a professional writer. I've always wanted to indianize Nora Roberts novels but somehow I was not able to put my full concentration to it. But your's is superbly beautifully written. There's so much of love and emotion blended so well in Arvi's expression. If you are not writing professionally, then you must be in love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

As much as I want this Arvi to patch back, I've also fallen for this Karan. I always get carried away reading novels as such your story has taken me far away.

No words to describe your talent. Bravo!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Laurie
This chapter is awesome. 👏👏👏👏
Thank you for describing what each one of them is wearing at the airport, helps me visualise them better😆😳
Since PR has no ARVI now.. I am thankful to have your story to come to and read. It makes me feel good to know that atleast someone somwhere has her heart in place and is uniting ARVI in the right manner. 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsumness to da core...
it ws brilliant...luvd it vry vry vry much...
eagerly waiting 4ur next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Laurie, was able to only do a cursory reading, awesome! Loved the dream scene and the locket! Will be back!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Laurie...this was an amazing chapter. The romantic beach scene was phenomenal and so vivid in my mind. The coming together, kisses, caresses, etc. was just so sensual and the setting was amazing. (hope the PR CVs give us something like this when ARVI reunites 😉)
Now to me (unless I am really wrong) it seems obvious that Karan is not Purvi's brother or any kind of family relation. If he were, why would he grimace at the sight of Arjun's picture in her locket? Also, why would he be constantly watching for Purvi's expressions/reactions at thoughts of Arjun if his interest in Purvi is purely platonic? The way it is written- it seems to me that Karan's interest in Purvi is not platonic- otherwise why would he be interested in Purvi's feelings for Arjun? Even if he was a family member who disliked/disapproved of Arjun- there wouldnt be that intensity to try to capture her every thought about him.
The locket scene is a great added touch as well as the fact that both had the same dream at the same time. Im glad you are not making Purvi as frigid as the CVs are currently doing.
I love the fact that you manage to create a balance for Purvi too. No doubt this "Adonis" of yours is some serious eye-candy (love how Teju grabbed Purvi and almost hit the floor when she saw him). And does have an effect on Purvi- but not to the point of her forgetting Arjun. You make it realistic by showing that she is attracted to him- but at the same time keep to the point- which is of course the love story of our ultimate jodi, ARVI. You show that she is still very much in love with Arjun and her dreams/subconscious is focused on only him.
This story is indeed incredibly intriguing and I cant wait for the next chapter of course!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Janhvi,

Even I, at my mature age and with Sasha having long since flown the nest (if not the coop!), went to the biggest bookstores in Ottawa at midnight on D-Dayin July 2005, when Book 6, The Half Blood Prince,was released. I was then the Indian High Commissioner there, and I was sorry no one spotted me. I would have liked a cheeky Page 3 shot proclaiming me a Harry Potter fan!

I remember taking photos of several of the kids there and e-mailing the snaps to them the day after. It was all great fun.

Yes, Laurie is getting to be majorly addictive, all the more so as the actual PR is getting to be such a drag. I was even more put out than I had expected to be when Purvi "statued" Arjun yesterday, not so that Archana would not have to face even worse trouble in the Deshmukh chawl, but because Ovi Ma'am would be even more emotionally affected! And then she pushes him into going and meeting Ovi. For crying out loud!!

I begin to think that the girl deserves what is coming to her tomorrow. Even the way she handles Purvi is so weak and ineffective. She blurts out, totally unnecessarily, wrt the MMS scandal, that there was nothing between her and Arjun sir " then", on which Punni is quick to pounce.

One may have a very weak hand at poker, but the whole idea is not to show it. How on earth can she handle tough negotiations in business if she shows her hand so easily to such a vicious opponent (whom she was praising to the skies to Arjun when Punni had joined the office).

I do not know WHAT she wants now; Trish says she acted that way yesterday out of anger against Arjun. If so, she needs (doubly) to get her head examined. Time and tide wait for no (wo)man, and if she does not look sharp, their love story will be history.

The one good thing about the Arjun-Purvi segment yesterday was the look on Arjun's face as he says with barely concealed bitterness "Now it is Ovi who needs me more, is it?", or words to that effect. It was very well done.

What I liked best, however, was the precap at the end, when Archana launches herself like a rocket on an unsuspecting, bewildered Manav, who, initially, obviously does not know what to make of this unexpected visitation. However, he rallies quickly, and hugs her back. It was priceless.

I also liked the two of them bickering over the water buckets. This what Mira Nair called "old shoe love", referring to the Naseeruddin Shah-Lilette Dubey couple in Monsoon Wedding.

The problem for Arjun and Purvi is that the happy, unshadowed part of their relationship did not last even 2 days, and they thus do not have such memories of warm togetherness to fall back upon when the going gets rough.

Shyamala

PS: I missed that poll of yours, but I voted for a new hairstyle for Purvi. And if the Balaji lot will do nothing about it, we should all put together a collect and have them get at least 6 new salwar suits for Purvi. She needs that desperately!

Shyamala!!! Greetings my dear friend!! 😊 Love this analysis of yesterday's episode and it is right on the mark. This simpering need on the part of our 2 lovers to pamper that spoiled brat is quite frankly ridiculous.

Another thing that put me out greatly is the fact that Purvi is just so cold and frigid. The CVs have succeded in butchering the emotions the 2 have for each other. Except for the scene where Purvi cries and kisses Arjun's photo, if it were not for her confession, I would swear she is not even in love with the boy.
On a lighter note, I'm thrilled that 2 good friends of mine here (you and Jhanvi) turned out to be fellow Harry Potter fanatics as well!!! Join the club- I, of course, have got all the books as well as all the movies- and have watched them hundreds of times. Well, in addition to tea at the Savoy, all of us should attend an all-day screening of all 8 movies while sipping on some good Butterbeer.
Where is Harry when we need him? I wish he could wave that wand of his and reunite Arjun and Purvi and give us some beautiful love scenes with only the 2 of them besides. While he is at it, he could also make Purvi more soft and loving towards him, give Arjun his backbone back, sort the brat Ovi out by messing up her looks, as well as Punni by turning her into some creature of some kind, do the "avadacadabra" on Savita so we are spared her constant harranguing, and get our "Malfoy" (aka Sachin) in line like he did in the good old days. 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
Doo update soon please 😊

That was beautiful .. you're an excellent writer 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was sooo nyc...i think kd will be de mediator along wid tej and dey both will be a pair...
waiting 4 arvi to meet...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: *Maleena*

I loved it! Arjun and Purvi both miss each other so much it's heart wrenching. Wonderful update! I can't wait for your next update!


Thanks for all your support Maleena 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aakanksha7

hey awsum post

m luvin it so much
plzzz do cntinue soon


Thank you Aakanksha 😃

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