The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 33

Originally posted by: vgiri

Laurie, I hardly got 5 hours of sleep after a looong day and woke up at 4 AM with splitting headache. But...I was looking for your next chapter in IF. There you are.. didn't disappoint me.

Awesome Awesome.. such a romantic one!!! I think you are a professional writer just not declaring that fact. It is 7.30 am, have already read it twice..

why did Karan chose to or excited about sitting next to Purvi..looks like he knows how much Purvi-Arjun love each other, still he has this small crush on her.. just like yours for Arjun/RD. ofcourse now Karan is your heartthrob.

Beach dream and telepathy... It is kind of soft/delicate & sensational.
Over all this chapter is very filmy, but CVs can use big chunk of your fanfiction.
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Originally posted by: abhimg

👏Dear Laurie,

🤗

BRILLIANTLY DONE...i had tears in my eyes at the ARVI scene...gosh...could feel every single thing you said/wrote, and my heart was racing like crazy - trying to relish each moment, and yet my eyes and mind egging me on to lap up the rest and keep moving on...on to the next line...

Superb...😳👏⭐️

Oh how easily, Laurie, you bring back the passion, the fire, the magic between our dear dear Arjun and Purvi...that was the best scene from this chapter...and how they both FEEL it, how their SOULS are so linked...gosh...

👏

Please, keep writing...heartfelt thank you to Celine, Frank and Air Supply...😉

Originally posted by: abhimg

LAURIE LAURIE LAURIE...thank you thank you thank you...

The best chapter so far...

Love your Title for the chapter...and also tying in with the grand title of the RAGING STORM...

The attire- the change in Purvi's attire- you gave her new attire, and brought out her beauty, without make up...one can feel her innner beauty too and how caring she is and her natural radiance too.

Tej is her self as we know her. How come Tej does not know of Ovi - Arjun break up (did Ovi not tell her?) and how come then she has not told Purvi, since she is even closer to her now. Tej likes KD...😉

Thank you for reinforcing Purvi's love for Arjun, that felt SOOO good and so TRUE and so meant for each other...felt that no Karan or no other Dhanjani will ever fit the puzzle the way our Arjun does...

Our Arjun, in reality is from Dubai 😉 so Purvi has to love Dubai.- and they take Emirates, through Dubai...and which are those bangles he gave her- she returned the ones from the engagement right? Oh, Laurie, pray, do tell more...

Karan scooping up her locket, similar to Arjun giving her payal back at the engagement party...hmmm...Arjun will be Arjun, though...I did not like Karan opening her locket, it was very private, why...Also, there has got to be something more to the KD and PD, somehow...

The soul connection- between the two (ARVI) of them is just amazing. The dialogues between them at the beach, Arjun's attire, Purvi's white=purity=mandir scene-dress, lovely lovely lovely...How she bared her soul to him and told him, her dialogue was excellent...reminded of the confession scene at the airport, but this one here was like that one pure, and simple, but this one was OMG 😳 and no hesitation...thank you for letting Arjun put his jacket on Purvi...very familiar romantic, nice touch...

Loved how you intertwined the four lives - as you stated in ur title- Tej, Karan and our Arjun Purvi...loved how you describe the place- or time, GMT...flying somewhere above the Mediterranean Sea...reminded me of flying to India- the skies, the scenery...the moments, the memories, the love...fabulous Laurie...Like Vilasini, i say you are a natural writer...This is definitely your second calling...and how different from accounting...waiting for you to show up too in the story...hmmm, superb, Laurie...😃😆

Ah Laurie...THANK YOU...best chapter...felt sooo goood!!!👏😳

Originally posted by: jdronamraju

Wonderful !! This chapter is SIMPLY AMAZING !! The best so far...Even if they do end up showing ARVI romance in PR, it is going to be PALE compared to yours...Lovely work...Thanks for this..

Originally posted by: jamkarajj

what a story line. Laurie I'm convinced that you are a professional writer. I've always wanted to indianize Nora Roberts novels but somehow I was not able to put my full concentration to it. But your's is superbly beautifully written. There's so much of love and emotion blended so well in Arvi's expression. If you are not writing professionally, then you must be in love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

As much as I want this Arvi to patch back, I've also fallen for this Karan. I always get carried away reading novels as such your story has taken me far away.

No words to describe your talent. Bravo!!!!!

Originally posted by: purethought

Laurie

This chapter is awesome. 👏

Thank you for describing what each one of them is wearing at the airport, helps me visualise them better😆😳

Since PR has no ARVI now.. I am thankful to have your story to come to and read. It makes me feel good to know that atleast someone somwhere has her heart in place and is uniting ARVI in the right manner. 👍🏼

Trish

Originally posted by: arrrviiiluverrr

awsumness to da core...
it ws brilliant...luvd it vry vry vry much...
eagerly waiting 4ur next update...

Originally posted by: archverma10

Wow Laurie...this was an amazing chapter. The romantic beach scene was phenomenal and so vivid in my mind. The coming together, kisses, caresses, etc. was just so sensual and the setting was amazing. (hope the PR CVs give us something like this when ARVI reunites 😉)

Now to me (unless I am really wrong) it seems obvious that Karan is not Purvi's brother or any kind of family relation. If he were, why would he grimace at the sight of Arjun's picture in her locket? Also, why would he be constantly watching for Purvi's expressions/reactions at thoughts of Arjun if his interest in Purvi is purely platonic? The way it is written- it seems to me that Karan's interest in Purvi is not platonic- otherwise why would he be interested in Purvi's feelings for Arjun? Even if he was a family member who disliked/disapproved of Arjun- there wouldnt be that intensity to try to capture her every thought about him.

The locket scene is a great added touch as well as the fact that both had the same dream at the same time. Im glad you are not making Purvi as frigid as the CVs are currently doing.

I love the fact that you manage to create a balance for Purvi too. No doubt this "Adonis" of yours is some serious eye-candy (love how Teju grabbed Purvi and almost hit the floor when she saw him). And does have an effect on Purvi- but not to the point of her forgetting Arjun. You make it realistic by showing that she is attracted to him- but at the same time keep to the point- which is of course the love story of our ultimate jodi, ARVI. You show that she is still very much in love with Arjun and her dreams/subconscious is focused on only him.

This story is indeed incredibly intriguing and I cant wait for the next chapter of course!! 😊

Originally posted by: ArVirocks

Doo update soon please 😊

That was beautiful .. you're an excellent writer 😊

Originally posted by: white.band

it was sooo nyc...i think kd will be de mediator along wid tej and dey both will be a pair...

waiting 4 arvi to meet...😃