The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: luvly

Excellent writing...so professional!!!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Waiting for the next part!!!!!!! Post soon...n plz keep it all in one thread, otherwise its tough finding the threads!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š

Thank you Luvly ๐Ÿ˜Š
Great advice about keeping the posts together. I appreciate it. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Laurie, amazing, could feel Purvi's emotions, the floodgates are about to break open. Who is the Director of the new company, Arjun himself? He has not left for Canada with Ovi, has he? He couldn't bring himself to, told Ovi at the last minute before she boarded the plane perhaps and he stayed back? What a dumbo!

Thanks Janhvi ๐Ÿ˜Š Your feedback means alot ๐Ÿ˜ณ
This fan fiction writing makes me nervous ๐Ÿ˜† but its a story I've been toying with for a bit. I hope it turns out the way I see it in my head.
You've got a mother's instinct ๐Ÿ˜‰
As for the rest, what does your dhamad say again? Oh yes, wait and watch ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sashashyam

Dear Laurie,

Congratulations! You have a real flair for fiction, and not just for wicked humour. I truly like your writing style, it is spare and yet both evocative and gripping. I am waiting eagerly for Part 2 and then 3. Don't take too long!

I am NOT going to speculate about who is what; to reveal all that when you choose and how you choose is your privilege. But do hurry up!

Shyamala

Thank you Shyamala ๐Ÿ˜Š Coming from you, that really means alot too ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I am writng this story with a weather eye on the horizon so I hope I can do justice to ARVI before the storm breaks.
I appreciate your feedback and look forward to entertaining you again soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: ss4123

Vow Laurie, Brilliant๐Ÿ‘! Loved your writing style ๐Ÿ˜Š ...you seem to have a flair for writing! Looking forward to hear more...

Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Next installment coming soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: luvly

The same thought crossed my mind while reading...is tt Arjun??????

Me too thought the same...Arjun hi hoga behind this...
Brilliant Laurie ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...keep going...don't make us wait for so long for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SUPERB first part...luved it...please do continue further...I do hope that soon ARVI will face each other with even stronger passion & love for eachother...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Laurie, between the shopping sprees to NJersey, and the upcoming long weekend, i do sincerely hope that your thinking cap will be on (bells tolling like Noddy's cap)...and you will have some time at least to continue with ur ARVI fiction...gosh i have not read fiction in sooo long...this is amazing...love it...pls add a little touch of ur splendid humor in it too...BTW Uday Veer ji honge ki nahi? Hmm...can't wait...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Absoluv

SUPERB first part...luved it...please do continue further...I do hope that soon ARVI will face each other with even stronger passion & love for eachother...๐Ÿ˜‰


Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I always saw them as a power couple too. I hope I do them justice.

Enjoy ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhimg

Laurie, between the shopping sprees to NJersey, and the upcoming long weekend, i do sincerely hope that your thinking cap will be on (bells tolling like Noddy's cap)...and you will have some time at least to continue with ur ARVI fiction...gosh i have not read fiction in sooo long...this is amazing...love it...pls add a little touch of ur splendid humor in it too...BTW Uday Veer ji honge ki nahi? Hmm...can't wait...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ


Thanks Abhi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ A shopping spree in New Jersey is sounding better and better each time I hear it ๐Ÿ˜†

Its going to be a busy weekend for me too but I will try to get the next installment out soon.

Trying my hand at a bit more serious but it will always sprinkled with humor somewhere ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Laurie, you deserve a round of applause. I only read Tanya's updates and they seem so bleak. If there's any ARVI scenes at all then I catch them from Isa, otherwise this show is just too dreary to watch. Wonderful fan fiction. Keep it up. I rely on ARVI fan fiction nowadays anyway because they are so much better than what's happening in PR. Brilliant fan fic once again. ๐Ÿ‘

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