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ARVI PART 14 page 11
in deshmukh's house:
archana:manav my heart saying that something happened to purvi.
manav:archana purvi ko kuch nai hoga.
archu:no,manav.kabhi mujhe aisa mehsoos nahi kiya.aaj mujhe pehli baar aisa lagta hai ki purvi ko kuch hua.mera man kabhi ghalat nahi ho saktha.
manav:archana u r thinking to much.
in karanjkar's house:
arjun waiting outside for purvi.purvi is not coming outside.arjun feels boredom and he went outside to call purvi.arjun is 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲 seeing purvi lying on floor unconciously.arjun ran towards purvi.he touches purvi's fac.her body temperature is high.it is the effect of rain.he called doctor immediately .
doctor went there
arjun:doctor my wife suddenly fell down and her body temperature is very high.i think it is the effect of rain. i mean yesterday she enjoyed alot in rain.doctor checked temperature.it is very high nearly 104.doctor:mr.kirloskar her body temperature is very high.don't worry i will give prescription.use the tablets which r mentioned in prescription at the time.she will get well soon.arjun:thank u doctor.doctor:u welcome.arjun:doctor plz come tomorrow for checking.doctor:definitely.arjun:thank u so much.arjun called server and send him to get the tablets fast.arjun moves towards shivji's idol and starts praying"shivji u know purvi is my life.and i am warning u she must get soon well.shivji up-to-date i never asked u anything.but today i am begging u plz save my purvi.she is my life.i can't see her in that position.it is ur responsibility to cure her.and purvi daily says that u always will be with her.if it is true then make cure her fast.plz i am begging u"arjun called archana immediately to home.manav:archana wat happened?archu:manav arjun called me immediately to home.manav:why?archu:i don't know.manav:ok.i will come with u.archu:okthey went to karanjkar housearchana:arjun wat happened?arjun:aunty purvi is suffering with fever.archu:wat?arjun:ha aunty.morning also she is well suddenly she becomes ill.
archu ran towards purvi and seeing purvi unconciousness.archu starts crying.
archu:purvi luk ur aai came for u.i won't leave u.and i will take care.i will there with u purvi"koi fever tumko kuch ni kar sakthi.jab tak mai zinda hu tumko kuch nai hone doonga.
archu:arjun u need rest.i will stay here with purvi.i will take care of her.
arjun:no,aunty.i don't need any rest and i will stay here untill purvi recovers.
manav:arjun i & archu will take care.u go and take resty.
arjun:no,uncle plz don't force me.i will stay here with my purvi.
archu:ok arjun.
archana kepts wet cloth on purvi and she is cleaning purvi's body with wet cloth.
arjun is luking at purvi.archana feeds purvi and gave tablets at time.
it is night:
archu:arjun go and have some food.
arjun:no,aunty.i don't want any food.
archu:i can understand arjun.but eat some.otherwise it may effects to ur health.
arjun:plz aunty.
manav:ok.
they all r taking care of purvi whole night.in three one person bi nahi soya.
morning:
arjun checked temperature.temperature becomes normal.arjun felt relief.
archu:arjun atleast now go and take rest .
arjun:no,aunty.i am fine.
archu:ok i will prepare coffee.
arjun stops archu and said that i prefer tea bcoz purvi likes tea.
archu manav luks at each other.
archu(in heart):arjun loves purvi alot.
archu went to prepare tea.and manav left the room to fresh up.
arjun slowly moves towards purvi.he tooks her hand.
suddenly purvi getting disturb bcoz of sunrise.sunrises falling directly on purvi's face.arju luks at that and he sit as a wall b/w sun and purvi.
arjun:purvi i worried a lot.and thank god.purvi i love u so much...u know i warned shivji.he really cares for u purvi.ur faith on him is true.purvi when i am child my mom taught me how to walk properly.after her death there r nobody to taught me.only my dad.and i never expected that again another woman enters in to my life.but it happened.u know purvi after my mom u r my second mom u taught me how to live in world and u taught me heartful laugh.ur entrance in my life is god gifts.u filled my life with colours.if there is no purvi then there is no arjun.after my mom u r my best friend.u know purvi before ur entrance in my life i always thinking that my life is only business and nothing else in my life.but u changed me.that u remained me that my life is not only for business also some more that is u.purvi in u the best thing is ur talking.i love ur talking and scolding me.i can't bear ur silence.plz purvi break ur silence.open ur eyes and talk to me scold me purvi plz purvi plz😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
purvi listening all and tears r rolling from her eyes.tears r touchd arjun hand which hand is holded purvi's face.arjun luks at purvi.purvi slowly opened her eyes.
purvi:arjun(slowly)
arjun:purvi oh my god oh my god.aunty luk purvi opened eyes.come fast.(shouted)
archu ran from kitchen towards purvi's room.
archu:purvi😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
purvi:aai.
archu:purvi how r u?
purvi:aai i am alright.and i gave u lot of trouble.
archu:shut up purvi.u r thinking this is a trouble.u r seperating me.
purvi:i don't mean that.
manav:purvi this is not a trouble and u know ur aai loves u so much.
purvi:u??????????????
manav:ofcourse i am also.purvi we r glad to take care for u.and u r thinking that it is trouble for us.
purvi:thank u baba.u again proved that u always with me.
manav:purvi i am ur baba and i always with u.purvi:i know baba thanks.
archu:ha ho gaya tumhari baba se baath.arjun tumhareliye raat bar soyi nahi thi.
purvi luks at arjun.
next part continues next day.
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SORRY FOR MISTAKES.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey as usual its grt
plzzz cntinue soon
there's nuthin interstin in serial track nwadays but ur posts make me hapy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its awesome!!!!! eagerly waiting for the next part!!
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ARVI PART 15 PAGE 13archu and manav takes leave from there.purvi luking at arjun with teary eyes.arjun gets close to purvi and he tooks purvi's hands in to his hands and started crying.purvi wipes tears of arjun.
purvi:arjun r u scared?
arjun:ha,purvi one minute i really scared.and god is really there.
purvi:arjun i promise u i will never leave u alone.for this if i want to fight with god.then i will do it.but i won't leave u.
arjun:thanq.i know u always there for me.
purvi:go and get fresh up.i will prepare ur fav.dood.
arjun:no.first u take rest and i will stay here with u.today i will stay in home.
purvi:arjun office?????????
arjun:no,office today.
purvi:but arjun work will be pending.
arjun:purvi office work after first my life(purvi).
purvi:arjun.
arjun:purvi stop all these and take rest.
purvi:ok but i will prepare food.
arjun:no,server is there there is no need to prepare food.
purvi:u r really self-willed.
arjun:ha, i am self-willed.bcoz u r my life.
purvi😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
in deshmukh's house:
tej:aai,baba aap donon kaha gaya?
manav:purvi ke paas.
tej:wat happened to purvi?
manav:fever.
tej:fever.is she fine?
manav:ha,she is fine.
sachu:wat purvi affected with fever.
archu:ha,sachu.
sachu:tej.come we will go there.
manav:sachu ther is nothing to worry.purvi is fine.
sachu:baba,purvi is also my sister as ovi,tej.then how can i stay here with relief?plz baba we r going that's final.tej come.
tej:ha dada.
in soham's home:
soham clled amritha
soham:amritha where r u?
amritha:at home.
soham:come fast.we need to go to purvi's house.
amritha:wat happened?
sohm:amritha plz it is not the time to talk come fast.
amritha:ok.pick up me.
soham:ok.bye.i will be there in 5 min.
soham and amritha r going to purvi's house.
amritha:wat happened soham.why r u nervous?
soham:amritha purvi is ill.
amritha:oh...how do u know?
soham:u know i am running a hospital.in my hospital one doctor is family doctor to karanjkar.he gave the information.
amritha:oh ok.
in karanjkar house:
arjun:purvi come on get up and have this soup.
purvi:no,arjun.plz i don't like soup.
arjun:purvi u have to drink it.otherwise i will never talk to u.
purvi:ok.
arjun:gud that's my girl.
purvi completed soup.arjun gave tablets to her.
sachu,tej reached there.
sachu:purvi how r u?
purvi:sachu dada,tej i am fine.😊😊😊😊😊😊
tej:purvi ki bacchi tumne mujhe kyun nahi bataya.
purvi:tej i don't wnt to trouble u.
sachu:purvi this is not a trouble and arjun sale wat r u doing?ha tum meri sister k ghyal bi nahi rakh satha hi kya?
arjun:sachu really it's ny fault.
purvi:dada it's not arjun fault.
tej:ha,ha,tumhari pathi dev ko koi kuch nahi kahega ma.
soham amritha also there
purvi 😲😲😲😲😊😊😊😊😊
purvi:amritha
amritha:hi purvi.
purvi:hi.
soham:how r u purvi?(anxietily)
purvi:i am fine.and wat about u?and aapko kaise pata?
soham:i already said i am also a doctor in same hospital.ur family doctor is my friend.he said about u.
purvi:ho.anyway thanks for coming.now i am fine.
arjun:wat?no soham she is not fine totally.i said to take rest.but she is refusing to take rest.
soham:arjun at this time she needs a natural air.i mean some garden air like that.
sachin:then we will go for a picnic.it is helpful.i mean it will chnge our minds nd some fresh air also will be there.
tej:dada u r really right.then we will go for a picnic.
arjun:no,no.
soham:yes,arjun they r right.go to a picnic with ur family.
tej:thanks baiya.
soham luks at tej😲😲😲😲😲😲and his eyes r filled with tears.
tej:sorry i called u baiya.but i don't know why i called u baiya?but really i called u with my heart.
soham:thanks for calling me biya and u r same as my sister.
tej:oh really then i can call u baiya.
soham:ha.ok then i will take leave.
purvi:baiya.
soham luked at purvi.
purvi:sorry.
sohm:no,no.i like it.
purvi:thanks,then plz join with us for picnic.
sohm:no,no.
tej:baiya plz join with us.plz plz
purvi:ha plz
arjun:ha soham join with us.
sachin:ya,arjun is right.join with us.
tej:then i will book the tickets.and we will enjoy a week.
purvi:week.no,no,office...
tej:purvi plz don't talk like arjun jeeju.baba is there.
purvi:no,no,tej.there r a lot of works pending and i don't want to suffer baba.
arjun:purvi u r coming.tej book the tickets.
purvi:arjun dada aap samjayiyena use?
soham:ha at the same time sachin:ha
sachin luked confusedly towards soham.
sohm said sorry.
sachin:no,no.
(but sachin got a doubt on soham.)
tej booked tickets to ooty.
in deshmukh's house:
manav:wat?
tej:ha baba plz...
manav:no,no,tej.i don't allow purvi.she wants to take rest.
archu:wat manav?
manav:archu bacchone tour plan kiya.they want to go to ooty for week.
archu:manav let them go.and fresh air is better for purvi and we get time to know who is the girl suffering our child.before returning purvi to mumbai we want to clear the problems.
manav:ok.
manv called teju
manav:tej permission is granted.
tej:thank u thank u baba.
manav:enjoy the whole week and take care of purvi.
archu:tej take care of purvi.
tej:ha mama i will take care.
tej mama granted permission to ooty.
all r happy.
precap:in ooty arjun and purvi r in their room.suddently current was gone.arjun slowly touching purvi.
SORRY FOR MISTAKES.
from today onwards i will write the precaps also.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this part is awesome...i want 2 say that u r a fabulous writer...please continue soon...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os really fabulous...cntinue soon

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❤️as always luvd ur post ❤️❤️
do cntinue soon

Edited by aakanksha7 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please update the next part soon
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ARVI PART 15(a)arman arrived to airport to give send offarchu:ok take care and take care of purvi.tej:ha mama.archu:time par khana khao.tej:ha mama.by the by she is amritha.
amritha bend for blessings.
arman:kush raho.
manav:purvi take care and i will call u time -to-time and i will check that u r taking tablets at time r not.purvi:ha baba.manav:ok.for whom u r waiting?purvi:for soham baiya.manav:wat?arman r shocked and eager to see soham.soham is reached with hai.and suddenlu luked at arman.soham eyes r filled with tears arman luking at soham.soham controlled himself.and soham heart cried loudly to hug them.but he can't do it.soham bend for blessings.(in kabhi kushi kabhi gham sharukh entrance in to house song plays)
they blessed him and luking at him.
anouncement"plz all passengers be ready,ooty flight is ready to take-off"
tej:ok we need to go.
arman luking at soham.soham luked at them.
tej:ok come baiya.
soham:ha(sharukh kajol leaving the house that song plays now.)
tej:come fast.
soham joined with them pavithra rishta song plays.
all r in flight.
sorry my system is not working properly.
so i will update next part in after noon.
sorry for late update.

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