Manav invites everybody for lunch - Page 4

Originally posted by: -SD-

@nirvanlove

I have been writing these kind of stories from 2009. I guess nobody has reported it like the way you have or told it degrading/B Grade etc. When I say nobody, I understand that majority of this forum are women. All others (perhaps except you) understand that these are for fun and not to degarde anybody.

@Prasad1991- you can go ahead with your post with the dialogues you have suggested. I am not here to support your case and write as you wish. The readers are free to like it , hate it or ignore it.

@Devashree/any mod who is going through this post- I have never tried to hurt anybody's intention, nor have I been partial. I have always criticized all the characters like Sulo, archu or manav. I am really shocked to see the responses from Nirvanlove and prasad1991. I want your reply on this.

well dude u wrote a post on which i replied & wrote my comments ... i fail to understand what was shocking in my response

prasad, i dont agree with u cz ur my friend but cz u r right.
i understand there are differnt type of humor but IF is a place where people below the age 18 also come even if its not allowed. and not that the members are immature but filthy humor being glorified is not acceptable 🤢

my friend SD,
thanks for writing this super comedy story...
even words will fall short for me to praise ur talent ... u r just simply too good.
as u know it very well that i m not only ur biggest fan here but also ur friend too..
u r one of the most talented person i have ever witnessed here on this forum
as a friend i m telling u plz always entertain with us such brilliant stories..

btw why u didn't include rasika in ur this story 🤣 ha ha ha

sorry SD for commenting late on ur this story ... becoz i m little busy in my life ...


here r four lines which i have written for ur talent ,,,



kabhi kabhi shabd bhi kam pad jaate hain aapke honur ki tareef karne ke liye
shukriya kis tarah kare hum aapka mujhe aur mere dosto ko hamesha haasne ke liye
inder dhanush ke saat rang ki tarah aap bhi apni kahani ke madhyam se humari zindagi mein haasi ke rang bharte hain
yeh is forum ki khud kismati hain ki aap jaise beshkeemati phool bhi yahan khilte hain

Originally posted by: acre

my friend SD,
thanks for writing this super comedy story...
even words will fall short for me to praise ur talent ... u r just simply too good.
as u know it very well that i m not only ur biggest fan here but also ur friend too..
u r one of the most talented person i have ever witnessed here on this forum
as a friend i m telling u plz always entertain with us such brilliant stories..

btw why u didn't include rasika in ur this story 🤣 ha ha ha

sorry SD for commenting late on ur this story ... becoz i m little busy in my life ...


here r four lines which i have written for ur talent ,,,



kabhi kabhi shabd bhi kam pad jaate hain aapke honur ki tareef karne ke liye
shukriya kis tarah kare hum aapka mujhe aur mere dosto ko hamesha haasne ke liye
inder dhanush ke saat rang ki tarah aap bhi apni kahani ke madhyam se humari zindagi mein haasi ke rang bharte hain
yeh is forum ki khud kismati hain ki aap jaise beshkeemati phool bhi yahan khilte hain

oh man im jumping with joy...double double bonus...one was sd bhai's OS and now shayarji's shayari ...! @blue:You took the cake away man..so so so aptly put...hats off to you sd bhai for your work...!

OMG you cracked me like...🤣
I wish you were writer of show, show itself is so boring.

I follow sparingly with the language barrier but i had a good laugh. Thank you for this.

SD i just lub ur story bro🤗

Just ignore certain things and continue writing it...
I always enjoyed ur style of writing and shall continue to do so👍🏼

You just rock SD bhai

@Shikhar..awesome shayari dear..I m just flattered. bahut dino se aap ki kalam khamosh hai. aapke exams khatam hote hi hum aap se kuch sunna chahenge..

awesome write up!!

SD