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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was beautiful... Loved how Arjun stood up for his love and told everyone about him and Purvi... And you portrayed Purvi's inner turmoil beautifully... She's worried about her Aai Baba and her long lost sister and not about her own happiness, well that's our Purvi. And Arjun could understand the real reason for her sacrifice... Aww just love them together...
Hope you continue writing such beautiful one shots...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I hope Ektha will see this wonderful story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Munni that was just AMAZING. I loved it! I can totally imagine this happening in the show. I wouldn't be surprised if you happened to be one of the writers on the show πŸ˜‰. Arjun would be totally forgiven if this is how the scene went down. I hope the creatives have written a scene like this because it would be wonderful. I have no criticisms as I think this is just perfect. You have nailed everything. From Arjun giving his coat to her, to Arjun kissing her and comforting her, everything is totally true to the character of Arjun. Please write more. If the CVs keep giving us awful jhatkas, we will need your take on how the scene should have been. ⭐️



Aww thank you nina.. glad you liked it...

yeah guessed.. it would not happen the same in the serial..so came up with thisπŸ˜†

yeah Arjun's character, came up pretty close to his character in PR...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thanee

Munni dear⭐️...fabulous post..πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


You know what...your write up is better than Ekta Maata and her team.
think you can email Ekta Your post for tomorrow..πŸ˜‰

Kash...i really want to see this track in that way...😊
If they trust themselves and have faith in thier love;.Nobody can hurt them..

My best part. all what you write are superb..my best part of course when Arjun return back to see her..after she call him Arjun sir Arjun sir..πŸ˜‰.For his question he want to ask her??

Its was so good dear...you can continue on your writing up...
sure you get a fan..πŸ˜‰ ME
Bye congrat dear..πŸ‘πŸΌand really like it..



Awww Thanee thank you so much and glad u liked itπŸ˜ƒ

yeah here in this we have a different Arjun when compared to the one in our show,, when it comes to the engagement scene
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Munni, I read it with my heart racing, wonderfully written, could see him say "miss Purvi" "come let's go" and everything else. Yes, if the CVs disappoint us, we will turn to you for solace and pretend only your script happened.πŸ‘



Thank you dear... glad u liked it.. 😊


yep it is for our sanity i came up with this ..πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Axiom123

Loved this!!!! πŸ‘


Thank you for giving us something to smile about.

I think you captured the characters beautifully and projected them the way most of us think of them in our minds.

Now... who do we send this to to make it happen???? ⭐️



Thank you Axiom... glad you like it.. appreciate your kind wordsπŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its beautiful.plsss write moreπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: canuckno1fan

Hope it happens just like that!! Beautifully written!



Thank you dear ...glad u liked it😊



Originally posted by: kasthury

loved this this is a true and loving story
make it happend


Thank you Kasthury ... 😊 '


Originally posted by: sai.janu350

really heart touching...


Thank you dear😊



Originally posted by: archverma10

Wow Munni,

This was really well written and actually believable too! 😊 I really wish it woul go his way for real but am baring for the worst



Thank you Archu...

glad you liked it😊 yeah we write OS for our sanity.. the show will have lot of drama in it😊



Originally posted by: mjht_ArVi4ever

nice os

continue if you want to 😊


Thank you... it is just a one part OS.. no continuation.. sorry😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheet_leher

It was beautiful... Loved how Arjun stood up for his love and told everyone about him and Purvi... And you portrayed Purvi's inner turmoil beautifully... She's worried about her Aai Baba and her long lost sister and not about her own happiness, well that's our Purvi. And Arjun could understand the real reason for her sacrifice... Aww just love them together...

Hope you continue writing such beautiful one shots...


Thank you dear..😊. yeah Purvi is a sweetheart she will endure anything to see happiness on her aai's face ..

and what is wonderful is Arjun understood Purvi's reason.. and he in his own way convinced her... as it would have immensely hurt archana eventually,,,,

appreciate your kind words
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramki1

I hope Ektha will see this wonderful story...


Thank you.. glad u liked it.. Ekta has a different story all togetherπŸ˜†



Originally posted by: zerro

its beautiful.plsss write moreπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


Thank you zerro.. glad u liked it and appreciate all the applaudsπŸ‘



Originally posted by: lola123

beautifully written...:):)


Thank you lola

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