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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: LovePRSoham

OMG can this family get any more cuter... Such a happy and complete family 😍...

Aha Anu so it was Damo Baba and Savi Aai'entry itself ... I guessed it right 😃
It was so nice to know Savita Aai supporting Archu and they both being so comfortable with each other which is missing now in PR 😭...
Loved every scene Anu...Be it Manav - Ishika, Archu - Soham, Manav - Soham and Archu - Ishika... Evertything was fine and entry of Savi Aai and Damo baba was a cherry on the cake 😳
I am loving Ishi boo a lot 😆 I am becoming her fan.. She is naughty and also very understanding... very good combi... 😳
Waiting for the next update 😛

First of all thank you sooo much di for taking the time to comment!!!! 🤗
There will even more cute family scenes coming up 😊 and yes u did guess correctly 😆 It was wonderful to see the supportive savita on the show but the cv's dont care about what we think and just butcher charcacters🤢 and make them take 180 degree character turns whenever they like...i promise you that none of that ridiculous stuff will not happen in this FF 😳
and im glad u liked it 😳 next update will come soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Swati_

Hey Anu 🤗 Lovely update 😍

Awww... such a happy family 😊 I so so want to see Manav with his daughter now , always wanted a daddy's girl 😳
The way Manav helps Archu is very nice to read 😊
Archu's comfort with Savita is very pleasant to read 😊 Your damo too is good , unlike PR😊
The original PR is pathetic to watch 🤢
It really feels good to read your ff 😊
Thanks for the PM 😊

Thank you so much Swathi for taking the time to comment 🤗and im glad u liked it 😳
and i totally agree about the origianl pr...i always get really excited for the next episode hoping that the cv's will show us something we like but everytime i am left with disappointment 🤢 Once again thank u so much!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Thanks for this treat Anu! I really needed it today. I liked the happy family bonding that was shown between all the characters, grandparents included.


Waiting for the next! :-)

thank u so much nikkidi 😳 im glad u enjoyed it 😳 todays episode was so upsetting especially the precap...the only scene that made me forget about everyone else was the dream scene when Manav and Archana are holding Sohams hands and walking with him 😍 but for the rest of the episode i wasjust like 🤢...hope that will also happen in reality on this show 😍 the next update is coming soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: bonnefille

I love Ishiboo. *muah* becoming my fav character of your FF. Soham is being just a typical young boy. 😆


The bonding between parents and children is beautiful and love the pancakes and chocolate cookies that you are offering us on the platter along with FF update. Was craving for the heart shaped chocolate cookies at the end of it.

Have one complain...no Arman romance in this part, huh??? I hope granny-grandpa don't defuse the romance further. 😉

Thank u so much for taking the time to comment di 🤗!
It seems like everyone's favorite character is now ishiboo 😆 Im glad u like her😊
Ill definetley have more delicious treats for you in the next update 😆
The next update will also most definetley have more arman romance 😉 granny and grandpa are actually going to give arman some private time so dont worry about loosing arman romance...its coming right up 😎


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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: umayal

Hi Anu. 😊

Another lovely part.
Loved the bond and the relation they all share.
while reading only they look cute cute. Typical mom-son-dad-daughter convo's with cuteness and then the scene of sav aai and archu chatting and making dinner. so pleasant.

In PR also i looked for this only.

Between your word 'Pumpkin pie' remains me of Kool di and her commentary threads. 😊
Remembered of those nice moments.. 😊

Anu, Thanks for the PM .

Thank u so much for taking the time to comment di 🤗and im glad u enjoyed it 😳
i hope the cv's will eventually show some cute family scenesin the show also just get rid of alll the negativeness in the show right now 🤢 its too painful watch any episodes at the moment
kool di's commentary threads always put a smile on my face after a terrible episode and im glad i was able to connect back to her threads in this FF 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys!

Thank you so much tone everyone who left comments 🤗
I really appreciate ur support!! 😳
Next part will be updated soon!!

~Anu
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu,
Sorry I'm so late with my comments. Am a bit busy these days, preparing for Diwali (cleaning the house 😊).
I loved this part. The scenes showed a typical happy family, doing typical family activities. Wished they showed this in the real PR.
Missed Arman romance too, but as you said it will be back in the next part, so I'll wait 'till then.
I just love how Arman share parental activites, e.g. putting the children to bed, entertaining them, etc. A beautiful thing to see.
Savita and Damo seem to be the normal happy grandparents, who are only too willing to spoil their grandchildren. Looking forward to what they get up to during their visit with Arman and the kids.
Eagerly awaiting the next part, and thanks for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: suan

Anu,

Sorry I'm so late with my comments. Am a bit busy these days, preparing for Diwali (cleaning the house 😊).
I loved this part. The scenes showed a typical happy family, doing typical family activities. Wished they showed this in the real PR.
Missed Arman romance too, but as you said it will be back in the next part, so I'll wait 'till then.
I just love how Arman share parental activites, e.g. putting the children to bed, entertaining them, etc. A beautiful thing to see.
Savita and Damo seem to be the normal happy grandparents, who are only too willing to spoil their grandchildren. Looking forward to what they get up to during their visit with Arman and the kids.
Eagerly awaiting the next part, and thanks for the pm. 😊

Thank u sooo much for taking the time to reply during this holiday full time 🤗oh dont worry i completley understand 😳!! my mom has been yelling at me to get off the computer and help her clean up for diwali also 😆 first it was navaratri and now navaratri is almost over so now i have to help her get the house cleaned for diwali 🥱
i will make sure to include plenty of arman romance the next part along with cute family scenes 😆 next part is coming soon 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 4

One month had passed by since Savita and Damo had come and things had settled in at the Deshmukh household. School had started for the kids. Summer was coming to an end as the leaves started changing from green to beautiful shades of red and orange bringing in fall.

It is night time at the Deshmukh's. Archana and Manav have just finished tucking the kids in and Savita and Damodar have also retired for the night. Archana and Manav also change and settle down in their bed. Archana is reading a new book she had gotten from the library while Manav is checking over some bills. Suddenly the phone rings.

Archana: Who could be calling so late at night? she said to herself as she reached to the night stand to grab the cordless phone.

Archana: Hello?

Rajni: Hi Bhabi! It's me Rajni.

Archana: Rajni! How are you??

Manav's face perked up when he heard his sisters name and he turned and looked at Archana.

Rajni: I'm fine Bhabi how are you? And how's Bhaiya and of course how are my two cuties Ishika and Soham?? And Ma and Bauji are at your house right now also right?? how are they??

Archana: Everyone is doing fine Rajni. You tell me, how was your honeymoon?? she asked teasingly

Rajni blushed slightly

Rajni: Amazing Bhabi, she said dreamily, I never knew Ajith could be sooo romantic.

Archana: Oh wow, romantic, she said teasingly.

Rajni: Bhabi!

Archana: Okay okay sorry! Here talk to your brother. She handed the phone over to Manav

Manav: Hey lil' sis how's it going?!

Rajni: Hey big bro! Things are well here.

Manav: Looks like you have forgotten us after getting married, He said teasingly

Rajni: On no bhai its nothing like that, Ajith and I just got back last week and we just settled down. Anyways, I called to ask if you guys have any plans for Thanksgiving break yet.

Manav: Not yet, why?

Rajni: Then why don't you are all coming over here for Thanksgiving and stay for a week. Sachin Bhai and Preeti Bhabi have already said yes so if you guys also come then we can have a full family dinner.

Manav: That sounds like a good idea. It should be fine for the kids as they have that full week off for Thanksgiving. I'll have to check my office calendar to make sure I don't have anything major planned but I don't think I do. Talk to Archana and check with her once though. He handed the phone back to Archana.

Manav: Rajni wants to know if we can go over to her place for Thanksgiving, he said as he gave the phone to Archana and took out his laptop to check is schedule to see if he had any major things during that week at work.

Archana: Hello Rajni, That's fine with me and kids also have the week off from school as Manav said. I'm sure Ma and Bauji would also love to see you guys.

Rajni: That's great Bhabi! Is bhai free though? Archana looked over at Manav who gave her the thumbs up indicating that he was free that week.

Archana: Yes your Bhai has said yes. We will be there for thanksgiving break then.

Rajni: Awesome Bhabi!! Can't wait to see you all! Anyways it's late and I'm sure you guys are tired so I'll talk to you later.

Archana: Bye!

Rajni: Bye Bhabi!

Archana put the phone back on the nightstand. Manav was now watching the news headlines while Archana continued reading her book. Manav turned and looked at her. He was feeling very romantic and naughty. He switched off the TV and moved closer to Archana. She didn't even notice Manav as she was really into her book. Manav gently ran his fingers down the side of her face moving the hair that was falling in her face aside. Archana swatted his hand away and made an irritated face at him. She then continued to read her book. Manav got really upset. He moved away from her and laid down so his back was facing her. archana looked at him and knew he was upset. Her husband looked very sexy when he got angry. She put her book away and moved next to Manav. She laid down on top of him so that her head was on top of his and cuddled up with him.

Manav pushed her off

Manav: I need to sleep. Good night. he lied down again and shut his eyes

Archana knew that he was still very upset but she also knew how to manofy her husband. She laid back on top of him

Archana: Manav, did I ever tell you how….. what's that word?... oh right, sexxxyyy your looking tonight she whispered huskily into his ear and then kissed his neck.

Manav could not stay away from his wife any longer. He suddenly turned around and pinned Archana down underneath him.

Manav: Oh really he whispered huskily.

Archana giggled. Manav moved towards her lips and they both kissed passionately. Archana tangled her fingers in Manav's hair while Manav started taking her clothes off. And now I think it's time to give them some privacy 😉

The next morning, Archana is downstairs with Savita making Breakfast and getting Manav and kid's lunched packed while damo is also awake and is watching the morning news. Manav has taken his shower and is now going to wake the kids up for school.

He walks into Soham's room.

Manav: Soham buddy it's time to wake up, he says as he opens up the window curtains and sunlight floods into the room and disturbs Soham who wrinkles his eyes from the bright light.

Soham: daaadd….5 more minutes, he says sleepily taking his pillow and putting it over his head to lock out the sunlight.

Manav: Beta you're going to be late for school, he says sitting next to him on the bed,

Soham grudgingly gets up still sitting on the bed with his eyes closed.

Manav: At least open your eyes, He says chuckling while heading to the closet to take out clothes for Soham. He hands Soham his clothes

Manav: Go and quickly get ready okay? And call me if you need anything. I'm going to get your sister ready.

Soham: Okay dad, he said sleepily while heading to the bathroom.

Manav: Good boy!

He next goes to Ishika's room where she is sweetly sleeping hugging her favorite doll.

Manav opens her window curtains. Ishika wrinkles her eyes at the sudden brightness and turns around facing the other side away from the sunlight. Manav sits next to her on the bed.

Manav: Ishiboo, sweetiepie it's time to wake up, he gently turns her around so she is facing him. She opens her eyes slowly and gets up. She rubs her eyes and then curls up into Manav's lap.

Ishika: Good morning daddy she said as she leaned on Manav's chest and shuts her eyes

Manav: Good morning honey bun, he places a kiss on the top of her head. He then looked down at her and saw that she had gone back to sleep.

Manav: Oh so this is Ishika's new trick, he said out loud. he then started tickling her.

Ishika was laughing like crazy ad was now completely awake.

Ishika: DAADDYY STOP IT!! PLEEASEE! she said as she laughed

Just then Archana walked in to Ishika's room

Archana: What's going on here she asked angrily. Ishika! you're not ready yet?! And Manav don't you have to go to work! You both are sitting here fooling around instead?!

Manav: Archana why are you getting so tensed. We'll both be down and ready in 30 Minutes. Right ishi?

Ishika: Yes! she said jumping out of her daddy's lap. She ran over to her mama and pulled on her hand so that Archana bent down. Ishika planted a large kiss on Archana's cheek.

Ishika: Daddy come quickly okay? she then skipped happily to the bathroom to get ready while archana looked at her in shock.

Manav: Yes sweetie. I'll be there soon.

Archana: I fail to understand this girl, she said in disbelief while Manav laughed.

Soham's bus was in the first shift as he was in a higher grade while Ishika's bus came afterwards.

Soham came down after getting ready and saw his daddu watching ESPN where sports highlights were being played.

Archana came out of the kitchen and saw Soham sitting before the TV instead of coming to eat his breakfast. His bus would be there in 10 minutes.

Archana: SOHAM! What are you doing?! can't you see the time? You're going to late and you know the rule, if you miss the bus that's it, no one will drive you to school.

Soham: Just one minute Mom, he said half listening to her as he was more focused on the sports highlight's

Archana was about to yell at him again when Savita came out of the kitchen and hold her hand, she indicated Archana to not say anything indicating that she would handle the situation.

Savita: Soham beta this isn't right. You have to listen to what mama says right? Now I know you're a good boy so can you come over you now to eat your breakfast?

Soham: Yes daddi. He obediently went and finished his breakfast.

He then went into the kitchen to get his lunch. Archana was there adding some snacks to his lunch.

Soham: Mom can you please give me my lunch now?

Archana didn't respond or look at him but instead just handed him his lunch bag. Soham knew she was still angry at him for not listening to her right away.

Soham: Mama I'm sorry, he said holding his ears. from now on I'll listen to whatever you say right away.

Archana: Promise, she said turning around

Soham: Promise he said sweetly with a smile.

Archana: Then can you give mama a kiss, she said turning her head so her cheek was facing him. Soham kissed her cheek and then archana also gave him a kiss on the cheek.

Archana: Now go, you're going to miss your bus, she said gently pushing him towards the door.

Soham: Bye Mom!

Archana: Bye sweetie!

Soham ran out the front door after saying bye to his daddu and daddi and Manav and ishika who had just came downstairs and were eating breakfast. After some time, Ishika also left for school. Savita and Damo settled down to watch TV while Archana went up with Manav to help him get ready for work.

Archana: Manav do you still not know how to properly match a tie and shirt. What kind of color combination is this. I have to do everything for you, she said with frustration

She walked over to the closet while Manav began removing his tie. He also walked into the closet and saw archana looking for a matching tie. He walked into the closet.

Manav: I thought Indian house wife's are supposed to enjoy serving their husbands, so why are you complaining about having to do everything for me, he said teasingly.

Archana: haha very funny, she said sarcastically, she picked out a silver tie that matched with his black shirt and put it around his neck, she was about to walk away when Manav caught her hand and pulled her back towards him.

Manav: I need my dutiful wife to tie my tie now, he said teasingly while wrapping his hands around her waist and pulling her closer.

Archana: Who said I am a dutiful wife, she asked teasingly

Manav: Only a dutiful wife would allow me to do this, he said and then kissed her neck

Archana: Manav you have to go to office! Let go of me! she said trying to push Manav away but his hands were too strong.

Manav: Nope, not until you tie my tie, he said mischievously

Archana: First let go of me and then I will,

Manav: Okay then, he lets go of her and Archana finishes tying his tie. Archana walks away again but Manav grabs her hand and pulls her back again.

Archana: Manav what is wrong with you today, she said as she tried to get out of his grip, you're going to be late for work. I don't understand why I seem to be more worried about this than you, she said still struggling to get out his grip.

Manav: There is still one more thing my dutiful wife needs to do for me.

Archana: What now? she said exasperated

Manav starts tapping his lips with his pointer finger and Archana understands what he wants and smiles at him.

Archana: Well this dutiful wife does not have problem doing that she said as she moved towards his lips. They kissed and when the kiss started getting passionate Archana pushed Manav away.

Archana: That's enough Manav, she said pushing him out of the room and downstairs.

Manav said bye to his parents and walked outside to his car with archana. He got into his car and Archana was standing outside near his window. He lowered the window. She leaned over the door and gave him a peck on the lips.

Archana: Come home early okay? she said smiling

Manav: Of course darling.

Archana: I love you

Manav: I love you too, he then gave her another peck on the lips and reversed out of the driveway.

Archana went back inside the house and sat with her in-laws.

Archana: Ma, bauji, rajni called last night

Savita: Really!! how is she!!??

Archana: Very good, she and Ajith just got from their honeymoon last week. She is asking us to come over during Thanksgiving break this year. Sachin and Preeti have already confirmed that they are going and Manav and I can also go. Are you guys okay with going?

Damo: Achana beta why wouldn't we? We will be surrounded by all of her children and grandchildren! Of course we would love to go!

Savita: Exactly! We will most definitely go!

Archana: Okay then, its confirmed!

Hey guys! 😊

So I actually do not like this part as much 🤔…..I tried to get in as much arman romance as possible but I was having trouble being creative and trying to think of new ideas…I'll try to be more creative in the next Chapter 😳. Please leave comments and suggestions!!!! Don't be shy!!😃

~Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww so cute their going to have a family get together can;t wait for the nxt update 😃

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