PR Reloaded- II (FF) Note on pg. 76- do read! - Page 18

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Thanks for your detailed comments, Minks, as always I loved them. You made some very good points, and I would like to discuss them in detail.

Originally posted by: Swati_

Nikki 🤗 Missed you dear 😊 Me too!

How was your stay at your home ?Nice! Enjoyed a lot.

Coming to the FF,

Um...Nikki this was the twist which made me love Manav more in the show 😳 I felt for him, and wanted him to have things his own way after the twist in the show Unfortunately exactly ulta happened 🤢

I was of the opinion that come what may , i want Manav happy Same here Swati. Archu will make both of us happy, is all I can say.

Hm...I wont say i loved this part but i liked this part 😃

I personally felt bad to see Manav suffer so much because of his love for Archu But that is the point na Swati! Manav didn't suffer cos of his love for Archu, he suffered cos of Savita and Manjusha. These two people have created havoc in the life of both Archana and Manav. Archana is also a victim like Manav.

the whole D family suffer

Nikki Manav has suffered a lot , i want him to have some relief. I know he will get happiness but i dont want it to be too late It won't. And it looks late, but actually we have crossed very little of 'serial time'.

I would have liked if Manju was punished for her actions, she must not go scott free 🤢She won't. She will pay for this in multiple ways.

But may be you can make the story better by putting this NGO twist in the show 😊

I agree that Archu refusing to witness in the court is better for Manav's safety 😊

Coming to Archu , well i want her to prove herself simply because Manav loves her..I want him to be happy 😳

Sweety dont worry , i am sure people will like your next parts 😊

I trust you Nikki , you have never disappointed me with your FF 😊Thanks Sweety.

OH, You have your exams now So will the next update be after a month Depends. A normal update like this one can be put sooner. But since people were asking for ME or two updates back to back, I confessed it would be difficult for me to write so much at one go. Will try.

ALL THE BEST NIKKI 👍🏼Thankyou

Love you 😊Love you too.

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Where Manav's suffering is concerned, again, that issue will be addressed and he will get the due for that too, but again I cannot put everything in one part. There will be no story left for the future. This part actually paves way for many new substories here--- Manjusha's punishment, Savita-Archana relationship, Savita- Manav relationship, will Manav get justice?, will Archana learn and become bolder etc., relationship with Karanjkars etc.

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Originally posted by: lunza

And ya .. they made a hash of it by unnessarily killing sachin .. and from that point viewers like me felt more sypathetic towards savita ... all that harrassment/abuse archu faced became "insignificant" compared to this loss savita experienced ... Agreed! I hated Sachin killing twist too.

They handled the whole thing pretty badly .. completely took away attention from harrassment/abuse .. the whole issue was put on the backburner , heck .. it wasnt even explored...Ditto!

I actually found this part very gripping , a bit difficult to read at times tbh .. ( thank god u skipped some stuff..) .. but i have just one request .. please dont make manav go to the k's and apologize on his mom's behalf after he comes to know the truth .. I would hate that ...Frankly speaking would hate that too... but it would show Manav as the bigger person in this mess. A sorry does not make anyone small, but rather accepting graciously when the mistake is yours is a sign of a gentleman and a fair person. Am not saying that this is going to happen for sure in the next part, but this is a point to ponder- do we want Manav to shine as a character , or do we want him to be a hypocrite who does not admit his Aai's mistake and proves that he is no different than the ordinary husband who supports his mother in public even if she has behaved like a witch, so that we can get audience satisfaction that Manav didn't apologize to Karanjkars? Sometimes, behaving better than the enemy actually makes you bigger than them, the enemy falls in his own eyes. Not to forget, Manav did use some very harsh words for the Karanjkars too.

Whatever be the case, one thing is for sure- I am going to find it very difficult to write the next part, it will be difficult to find a balanced track that will please both me and the audience.😆

And yeah .. I would have liked it if archu herself gathered the courage to tell manav the truth about his mum .. rather than some third person ... well , archu should at least be present when manav has this session with that NGO lady , instead of completely chickening out ...

Its not a case of chickening out, but I personally think Mrs. Ruhia can do a better job of explaining things- she has more legal knowledge and is better equipped to convince Manav. Anyway, let's see.

I

ouch ... i am already feeling bad for manav's state of mind .. when he comes to know about his mum ...

niki , manav ka aur kitna waat lagaaogi ... give him some happiness yaar ... and please tell me manju will at least get her bu*t whipped .. i loathe her ...Okay this is the last one. Happy?😃 Ab aur waat nai lagaungi.😛 And yes, as I said, Manjusha will get punished in multiple ways.

I am waiting for the day manav gets an apology from the k's .. i.e queen sulo and popat vinod ... hated their apathy in this part ...He won't get an apology, he will get much much more than that.😉

oh the poor kids .. the embarrassment they will have to face in school ..Sab theek ho jayega, Dr. Niki has a magic cure for everything.😃

btw how old are they exactly ? what are they studying ? ...12 th standard. Both are studying so that they can get into good colleges next year. I never wrote about their studies in detail as of now (though its there in my mind) but yes, I did mention at one point about Vedant wanting to go to medical college, so yeah, Vedant is studying the Sciences.

Oh , and can u show manav slapping sachin the next time he makes an appearance and lays guilt trips on his dada ? ... feeling angry at his absence from the house .. that coward .. he has run away to live his life .. not giving a damn about whats happening back home ...😆 Abhi se thappad?!? Lol, his backstory will come up after some time.

i hope the kids grow up fast and give their dada the much needed TLC ...

EDIT : ATB for ur exams 😃.. have fun 😆

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

nikki I hope u will not go off to another month vactaion after this fabulous update... I like this update as its logical.