FF:-Ek Baar Phir updated CH03/PG05

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi all...I'm watching PR when it had begun.Its mainly Bcz of Sushant.Well its true Sushant and Ankitha together make a great pair.I do mostly as silent member.After reunion of ArMan.I thought I'll be an active member always.So i thought a good ff for ArMan.I need all your support my frndz.If u support it would be my 4th ff.



CONCEPT:-
As name suggests this is story of poeple who badly wanted to meet once again in life.

Main Lead
Archana and Manav

Others:
Sathish
Varsha
Savitha
Damodar
Sulochana


The characters posses same human qualities.They have better of living.More characters may add later.

A Glimpse...

Morning...At temple.Manav praying in front of bappa's idol.

Manav:Bappa tum mujhe voh sakthi do jo tu ne ab tak mujhe diya nahi.

He climb down the stairs.

RING...!!! R ING...!!!:-His mobile rang.He attended the phone.

Manav:Haan Satish bolo
Satish:Are you busy..?
Manav:Nahi toh
Satish:Well mujhe tujhse milna hain
Manav:Kya hua..?

Satish:Mein ne aaj kisi ko dekha
Manav:Kisko..?

He was curious.

Satish:Archna ko...

Manav started to sweat,he throat became dry and filled tears in his eyes.He cleared his throat.

Manav:Acha
Satish:Kithni asaan hain na

Manav kept mum.

Manav:Mein baath mein phone karoonga

Satish:Nahi dekhogey usse

Manav:Mein kyun dekhoon uski koi zaroorath nahi hain.

He cut the phone and left the place.


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A busy market...Archana looking to a far distance as she was waiting someone.Manav arrived there.He was doing the same.Finally they saw eachother.They walked towards eachother.Stopped leaving a certain distance between them.

Manav:Archana tum kaisi ho
Archana:Teek hoon aur aap
Manav:Haan teek hoon
Archana:Aur bakki sab..?
Manav:Haan sab teek hain

A greate silence came between them.To breake silence Mnave spoke.

Manav:Bas ek baar milna chahtha tha

She bowed her head.

Archana:Mein bhi...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great start i hope u continue writing the series as it unfolds👍🏼
Welcome to the land of Pavitra Rishta!!!!!!!!🥳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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the begining is superb! Loved it. Please continue.

Btw, welcome to pr forum.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiii
My first post in PR forum...
Good Start..👏
Pls continue.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice. Do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good job
keep going 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice FF
Realy loved this part, It is very intresting as well as well told!!!
The beging was mindblowing, so plz do continue
Will be waiting very eagly for the second part so plz update quickly
All the best
Hafsa
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: beauty_cool

welcome........to pr forum.....

thank u...........😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnaks.....keep readin😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akashspartan

Great start i hope u continue writing the series as it unfolds👍🏼

Welcome to the land of Pavitra Rishta!!!!!!!!🥳

thank u.......sure i'll writing......keep reading...😊

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