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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tanya, Shravani sees Archana as a threat, she hates that Archana has such a hold on everyone in that household. Shravani refuses to see that Savita is only using her because of Sachin and greed. Savita still dreams of a life of luxury while Manav is content with what he has. Manav works hard to provide for his family which is why I am so disappointed in Dharmesh, like you said he could have given Manav time to find another job.
As for Archana trying to change others, I think she is through trying to do that.
Edited by bollywoodcrazed - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hope so mandy . She will do it again though , with Dharmesh ...I guess that is bcause it is Manav's job and his pride at stake here..

It's ok, but after this I would like her to take it easy when it comes to making this world a better place to live ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i agree with Tanya . She shud just let human beings be as they r and focus on betterment of HER life . How about buying a flat for herself since this house is mortgaged and Vinods flat will have no place for her ?How about asking the jewellery money back ? . Dharmu is fine as he is , its she who shud learn few things from him .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanyaz

Hope so mandy . She will do it again though , with Dharmesh ...I guess that is bcause it is Manav's job and his pride at stake here..

It's ok, but after this I would like her to take it easy when it comes to making this world a better place to live ....

Archana knows how much Manav values hard work and how much he needs this job, so I can understand why she fought for him. I understand Dharmesh had his reasons for firing Manav but I still feel he should have given Manav some time to find a new job. Hopefully Manav will find another job soon, same with Archana and hopefully it won't be at the same place again! I preferred the job Archana had before, she is not ready for the responsibilities that come with being a supervisor. Her job with Satish before was great, she needs the experience and confidence before having a job as a supervisor.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000

Kools commenting from base : Archu gives Manju good in PR

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<font color="#990000">Manju got the blasting of her life from the new smart Archu today . Manju was reprimanding Sulo for not finishing the cooking on time [ Rasika was coolly sitting on the sofa doing NOTHING 😆😆😆smart woman ] .</font>


<font color="#990000">Sack the Nokrani ! Sack the Kaamchor Lazy Nokrani ! Yelled Archu from the door .😆😆😆</font>


<font color="#990000">Sulo was totally zapped to hear herself being called a Nokrani .😆😆[ Actually its high time hoot calls r given to Sulo as she walks down the gullies of Dombivli .........Aie Nokrani ! Aie Manju ki Nokrani ! Sorry , I know , I know Im being harsh but Sulochna leaving Manohar has made me 😈...I HATE women who dump their spouses in old age for children }</font>


<font color="#990000">Wha...What r u saying ! Said Manju , shocked . How can u call AAI that !</font>


<font color="#990000">Coz thats what U were telling ur friend , Archu answered Smartly . At 3 in the afternoon after having lunch .</font>


<font color="#990000">Rasika tried to shut her by saying Dekho Archna but Archu showed her a dramatic trembling finger .😆😆😆BETTER BE QUIET HA she warned , smartness oozing out every cell of her lovely body . This is my GHAR KA MAAMLA . U STAY OUT OR I WILL INSULT U .👏</font>


<font color="#990000">Wake Up AAi Wake up ! She gave silly Sulo who was weeping a WAKE UP CALL . Ur Bahu is USING U ! Ur thinking this is UR house but she is using u so she can have a jolly good time outside ! GHUMNA FIRNA ! 😆</font>


<font color="#990000">Manju was bristling , bristling . The thorns in her butt wud have come out like Wolverine'sclaws and torn her sari , that much she was bristling . U have no ADHIKAAR to tell me such things in my house , she said angruly , wanting badly to pinch Archu's cheek .</font>


<font color="#990000">ADHIKAAR ??? Hah ! said Archu with a bitter laugh . U na , U dont talk of Adhikaar , relation etc , Samjhi na aap ! Doesn't SUIT u ! [ Good Good , go on . Shake her ponytail a little .Pull her gajras out . Then stuff them in her flaring nostrils . Bad Manju , Evil Manju .]</font>


<font color="#990000">Then Archu held a dramatic open palm in front of Manjus nose .😆</font>


<font color="#990000">Whats this NATAK NOW .........Manju asked uneasily and aptly .{ I cudnt help agreeing with Manju , the action was rather melodramatic 😆😆😆}</font>


<font color="#990000">GIVE ME SALARY FOR THE NOKRANI ! Archu yelled . YUP ! PAGAAR ! SALARY ! 35 days my mom worked her for FREE , I want Payment NOW NOW NOW !😆LEMME SEE ..........</font>


<font color="#990000">400 rupees for cooking </font>


<font color="#990000">400 rupees for looking after Punni Ruchi </font>


<font color="#990000">400 rupees for JHADU POCHA ! [ What ! Sulo was doing Jhadoo Pocha too ? Shame Shame ! }</font>


<font color="#990000">Now just when I was wondering if Archna was gonna charge even for washing the Bathrooms of Manju's house , Archu stopped . BTw IM sure Sulo has even washed the bathrooms and toilet with phenyl .</font>


<font color="#990000">GIVE GIVE ! AAJ TO HISAAB LEKAR JI JAOONGI ! OMg the way Archna screamed here na ? Ultimate ! Manju chupchaap gave 1200 rupees as Sulo wept and Rasika squirmed .</font>


<font color="#990000">Then Archna went out dragging Sulo and her bag 😆While Manju stared open mouthed .Phokat ki Nokrani GONE and 1200 rupees also gone .</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#330000">My Comment : Ultimate perfomance by Archu . She made Manju pee today . She used her smartness and courage today for a fair purpose and constructive purpose .This was long due for Manju . My only sadness is it did not have a public audience like manju's office or Vinod and his colleagues or a family gathering . Btw Archu charged less for Sulo's work . My moms cook takes 1200 rupees only for cooking per month . But Archu mentioned she was taking less .One more thing i liked was she admitted HER MISTAKE in the whole thing . That she was wrong to encourage her mom to come here and Varsha was always right about Manju . I am hundred percent sure COmmentary is being read as this was what we talked about constantly in this week .That Varsha vaishu were right , Sulo needs to wake up , Archu herself is at fault . Sulo's later dialogue of ATMA SAMMAN cliched it , we had talked of dignity too . Not just that , later Archu made a comment that if Manju doesnt change we have to change OUR RAVAIIYA towards Manju . Defo our Commentary is read . Am very very happy .</font>

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<font color="#0000cc">Rasika , indomitable as ever told Manju she wud MANAGE with VINOD , not to worry . 😆😆😆She is going to spin a story and tell her lallu son in law . Not just that , Rasika also commented that ARCHU IS DOING HOSHIYAARI COZ OF HER EARNING CAPACITY AND MONEY KI GARMI . [ TRue . Call it Hoshiyaari , call it Self confidence .}</font>


<font color="#ff0000">The THREEK SISTERS met to talk about their Mom's situation . Gosh ! Said Vaishu . Wud have given her one ! And I wud have given her Mom good , said The GUNDI Varsha , with a gleam , thinking about her old foe Rassi .😆😆😆Manohar looked constipated and tearful . All these womanly tamashas wud one day give him heart failure like VIshwasrao whowas recently declared as a not so innocent bachelor who had actually experienced the FACTS OF LIFE and had a BETI and DAMAAD tucked away secretly someplace . Earlier he had told Archu tearfully TUM MAA BETI MERA HEART FAIL KARVAOGEE KYA .😆[ Darling Manohar . He desrves the smoochy hussy .Not this Holy DUO who first do foolish things then big tamashas to clear them up .}</font>


<font color="#ff0000">Sulo wept . She cant do anything else anyways . She was still defending Vinod , true to her blood . Its Not his fault , she wept . He wasnt even there . Manju is the bad one .Beta is good , Good .</font>


<font color="#ff0000">Yup , he is a bholu like u , said Varsha cynically . Cudnt he figure out his wife's sudden love for u that he came to take u there , she said RIGHTLY .😃😃😃</font>


<font color="#660000">Dharmu fired Bhagwan . This is ur last paycheck he said . Todays Pay included .U dont have to work . Im sorry I have to do it but u broke company rules . I sacked Prakash and I gotta sack u . Cant be unfair coz all workers have to follow same discipline .</font>


<font color="#660000">BHagwan looked Holy and stricken . I will work today and then go , he said in a holy , valiant way . Dharmu looked impressed but unbending .</font>


<font color="#660000">My comments : Dharmu was RIGHT in firing Manav . Yesterday I read comments about how unfair and inhuman Dharmu was , He shud consider Vaishus feelings and ARchu was his saali this and that . I wish to respond to that .</font>


<font color="#660000">1] Vaishu is in no way related to this professional maamla .</font>


<font color="#660000">2] Although Archu is Vaishus sister , she is an employee of that company , he cannot deal with her on a sister in law relation with her there</font>


<font color="#660000">3] Archu behaved conspicuously in a work place by standing outside canteen with sheera , limping with Manavs support etc which set tongues NATURALLY wagging</font>


<font color="#660000">4] Manav had FULL OPTION to immediately walk to Dharmeshs cabin and complain verbally about Prakash and get action done .He Didnt .He banged Prakashs head on a wall till it bled . It is serious offence , like it or not .Im amazed Praksh didnt do a police complaint against him . Coz if blood comes , Indian Police accept a complaint , its the law .</font>


<font color="#660000">5] Manav shud have taken the fight outside company premises if he wanted to respond personally as Archus husband to the man .Within Company u MUST follow rules .</font>


<font color="#660000">6] If Manav is excused , Prakash can take matter upto UNION and demand explanation as to why Manav is not sacked but he is</font>


<font color="#660000">7] If workers unite , Dharmus factory closes down . He cannot take RISK .</font>


<font color="#660000">8] Today Manav hit for personal cause .Tomorrow other workers will .</font>


<font color="#660000">So u see ? INHUMAN as it looks , Dharmu is right . Perfectly right .</font>


<font color="#660000">I think while working in the day Manav will with his expertise get some machinery started that was shut down and will benefit the company .Impressed with his loyalty to the company till the end , Dharmu will re instate him on the job and Archu will follow .</font>


<font color="#336600">Shravni gave Damodar Chai pleasantly. Sachu is sick and Savita wants to show him to specialist .</font>


<font color="#336600">Shravni is very dutiful and nice as a bahu till this point , very unlike Manju . I hope CVS keep her that way . There is NO NEED to turn her totally negative . She really is ok with Manavs family , she is not at all hoity toity till this point . Its refreshing . Her only animosity is with Archna as a souten . That makes her character CREDIBLE not TYPICAL . Keep it up CVS .</font>


<font color="#336600">Will Manav be reinstated in job ? Or will the lack of money for Sachus specialist make Shravni go to Girish ? Let us see .</font>


<font color="#336600">Like button if u liked , Comments even if u dont . For all those who understand my commentary in such a perfect understanding way ....a bigg , loving muvaaaaa . A big muvaaa to Archu today for firing Manju and giving us viewer satisfaction . On this note I call it a day ..........CIAO and Enjoy . </font>






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Side splitting commentary particularly the comments about Manju and rasika.!!

Was thrilled to know about Archu lambasting Manju. Shall see if I can catch the repeat today.

Hope CVs think of a track where Manju is driven out of the house by Vinod.SHe will hav no place to go.!!!! coz her mommy dear too is on the streets. They cud show these two evil women staying separately in a house and suffering. That would be a good tit for tat.

Why should the K family lose their house and move in with Vinod. Dont they hav a back bone?.What about Archu? She is earning.So she can support them. They shudnt show such mindless tracks anymore. Even if they were to fall on such bad times Varshu and Vaishu should be shown helping
them.Nothing wrong in showing a daughter helping her parents post marriage. It would be a good trend setter.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice commentary Kools. Archana finally did something to make us all proud of her. Now I hope that they don't forgive Manju if she comes crying begging for forgiveness.

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btw niki why the crying face .for mannu ? . Have posted Humor Aug 18 in Pratigya forum .Anyone watching this serial and interested in reading , read .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000

Taran .........Prakash had verbally passed sleazy comments on Archu . . Manav is NOT archus husband anymore to take it this personally . . Also , A verbal commemt desrves a verbal warning , action .Appropriate measures wud be turning his heel , walking to Dharmu and telling about it . Which Manav most emphatially didnt . . Did u see the scene where he hit Prakash ? He went on beating his head to the wall till he bled .Had he been not stopped , Prakash wud have easily died or become a vegetable . . Legally , Praksh had not lifted a finger on manav to get this kind of assault .It was not self defence but aggression on Manavs part . . Earlier Manav had held his collar when he had passed a comment . That time DHARMESH had clearly asked Manav what the problem was but Manav dID NOT TELL HIM .Any justification for this ? Archu is Dharmeshs employee cum sister in law , he wud have taken sTRICT acion against Prakash . . Later This matter went far . Outside Prakash pulled a kind of hit on Manav .But see his legal knowledge ....he did it OUTSIDE his companys premises . . So he was fired for spreading rumors about his superiors character and spoiling work atmosphere . . The comments Prakash did when Manav flared up did not indicate any rape intentions or anything .He was being sleazily crass . She is hot , we will all have a turn , Ill go out on dates with her . . The thing is , before NOT showing recognition to each other in front of workers and later suddenly becoming intimate in front of them bombarded on ARMAN reputation .they INVITED IT . . I agree with u on the notice part ........notice of at least some days shud be given . But that said ..........Dharmu is correct in etiquette . His reaction was not kneejerk , he was thinking about this from many days . Manav was way out of line . On what basis can he keep Manav after firing Prakash ? The Union will be after his goat and demand re installation of Prakash . . ARMAN brought this on themselves .



KS, I dont disagree with you that Archana & Manav brought every misery in their lives all by themselves - with a lot of help from 'well meaning' relatives and frenemies. They have very little sympathy from me w.r.t that - however, I want them to get married because its clear its a codependent relationship that they are in and both will only be happy with each other. Period. Everyone else in their life in a romantic role is wasting their energies with them.

I am more interested in Dharmesh's actions today. It just sounds very curious. Lets take facts :
1. Your wife's sister and her ex hub are both your employees and you dont expect drama? Lets say he didnt know this when Archana was hired. he knew of it after - so why didnt he relocate her immediately?

2. When the first scuffle happened, as the owner of the company, Dharmesh should have investigated the roots or as a smart guy, put two and two together in the light of all the lectures of this so called pavitra rishta - even then it was not too late.

3. When the scuffle that broke the camel's back happened, Manav was reacting as Archana's husband - granted. However, the fact is - Dharmesh knew Manav and Archana still loved each other and obviously, if someone verbally insinuated a lot of rubbish abt Vaishali - I am sure Dharmesh would retaliate - immediately. Again, I am not condoning violence but what Prakash said to Manav was no less than him slapping him several times.

4. I agree what happened after that was not Dharmesh's fault. Manav kind of brought it on by engaging rough play with a ruffian. However, Manav was still his employee and nearly killed. If you dont show compassion when a man nearly died - what does that say about you as a person and when you are such a heartless person, how do you expect loyalty from the rest of the workers in your small business??

5. KS, the point is not about Manav at all - this act shows Dharmesh's character. If indeed he took a lot of time as you say, he should have consulted with legal counsel before taking any action. All small businesses do. I speak from experience coz I own one with my sister. In addition, again - firing people is not at all simple in both Indian and American legal system. Everyone who is on the list should be offered a plan to improve their status - a second chance, if you will.

My objection is in how everything is handled so lightly by the creatives. Balaji itself is an organisation - is this how they hire and fire people??


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nicki is right . Even I want the focus to go on manav now . The problem is that the day manav turns into a hero all the problem of the show will be solved .
He just cannot be shown as the hero doing the right thing for his love , as yet ..
They still want to make more money . So now they are showing Archana as the hero who is single mindedly on a mission to love manav and do whatever she can ....while all she gets from manav is heart break and getting abandoned by him ....
Manav is the one who caused the mess, I am sure he will be the one who will correct it ...But not as yet .....
Maybe when the second lead for archana will be introduced , that is when Manav will start doing all the right things .

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