Phoolon ke Sheher mein ArMan-4 (New Part) Page-5

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Phoolon ke Sheher mein ArMan-1

Assumption:

1. ArMan decide to leave Mumbai and settle somewhere far away from Mumbai and Shravani

2. Damodar and Manohar support them

2. However, they have maintained their inherent character i.e. Pavitrata

4. The writer does not intend to make you laugh

After travelling a lot (by 2 trains, 3 trucks and 4 bullock carts), ArMan finally find a destination "Mohabbat Nagar". It's a small town, kind of a hill station. Weather is amazingly sweet and refreshing. Firstly, they need to find a shelter for them. They don't have enough money to stay in hotels.

Archana- Manav main thak gayi

Manav-main bhi

Archana- ab pata nahi kitne din aur ghar khojna padega

Manav-ghar to mil raha hai

Archana- par wo ek room wala hai

Manav- ab do room wala ghar na mile to kya karein?

Archana-main aap ke sath ek room mein nahi so sakti..samjhe?

Manav- kyun bhala

Archana- Kyun ki aap bade wo ho. Kal hotel ke room mein kaise neend mein chalne ki acting kar ke do baar mere upar aake gire wo jaise aap ko yaad nahi

Manav- wake hi yaad nahi

Archana- do chante lagaye the maine wo to yaad honge

Manav-(gaal mein haath rakh ke) hmm kaun se chante

Archana- achha ji. Mujhe nahin rehna single room mein aap ke sath. Samjhe?

Manav-par ab do room wala ghar mil nahi raha to kya road side mein puri zindegi bitayenge? Upar se hotel keliye paise nahi hain. Main kuch nahi janta aaj dhaniram ka wo wala ghar main book kar leta hun

Archana- hey bhagwan mujhe kitna dant rahe ho..koi bhala aisa dantata hai kya?

Manav- maine kab danta

Archana-( ro ro ke) mujhe pata tha aap mere sath aisa hi karoge

Manav- ab rone kyun lagi..maine aisa kya kar diya

Archana-jao main aap se baat nahi karti

Manav-ab man bhi jao na archana..jab tak mujhe koi kaam na mil jaye tab tak adjust karna padega na!

Archana- par promise karo mere sath koi harkat nahi karoge..warna main wapas Mumbai chali jaungi

Manav-tum jaogi to mujhe bhi jana padega. Aur finally tum mujhe fir se Shravani ke hawale karnewali ho kya? Isse behtar hoga tum mujhe is unchi si ghai se dhakka deke jaan se mar do

Archana- (feels sorry aur Manav ke honthon pe apna haath rakhti hai) do baara aisa mat kehna..main aap ke sath kahin bhi chalne ko tayaar hun..

Manav-sach?

Archana- haan 'are maine aap ko bataya nahi..maine kal ek sapna dekha

Manav-kab? mujhe chante lagane se pehle ya baad mein

Archana- chal hat. Wo ekdum subah subah'hamara ek ghar hai..chhota sa pyara sa..pahadi ke upar..aas paas koi nahi'charo taraf bas phool hi phool

( Ekta madam chillati hai BT ke staffs ke upar..are heroine sab kuch muh se bolegi kya..jaldi gaana play karo. Song plays..

Dekho maine dekha hai yeh ek sapna

Phholon ke sheher mein ho ghar apna

Kya sama hai tu kahan hai

Main aayi aayi aayi aayi aa ja..)

Manav-ghar mein ek kamra tha ya do

Archana- ek

Manav- wow.

Archana- wow kyun bol rahe ho gande

Manav- Bathroom ka darwaja andar se band ho pa raha tha ya nahi

Archana- chup karo. Ab sapne mein wo sab dikhta hai kya

Manav-par haqiqat mein aisa ek ghar hai..wo chhoti si pahadi ke upar..aur uske charo taraf phhol hi phool hai

Archana- mujhe le chalo na udhar. Hum wohi rahenge

Manav-par jaisa maine kaha bathroom ke darwaje mein problem hai

Archana- wo hum theek kara lenge

Manav-wo baad mein dekhenge. Pehle ghar to dekh le

Archana- haan chalo na'.par bathrrom ka darwaja aaj hi thik karna

Manav- thik karwa dunga..ab chalo to

(both carry their luggage and make a move towards their new house)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesme again
hats off 2 u thnxx 4 such a nyc creations😆😆😆
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SD when will u update the Part 2 of this ??
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Aree wah aree wah!!!

SD, mast as usual. Please update quickly.
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SD Bhai 👏
assumptions were followed by a very funny line.🤣
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sweet story SD do continue 😆
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no body was responding to this post so I thought it should not be continued. anyways i will update it with the next part.
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Originally posted by: -SD-

no body was responding to this post so I thought it should not be continued. anyways i will update it with the next part.

thanks




accha yeh hamara response nahi tha toh kya tha😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
no seriously plzzzz conti asap😃😃😃
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😆😆
awesome SD bhai.👏
please do continue........
waiting for the next part.😃
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waiting for next part 😆

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