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Posted: 15 years ago
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One more slap to Shravani! Kya baat hai!!! I hope this time its her father.

Nice part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderful part...I think she gets slapped by Girishji.....

her hormones are playing havoc with her brain...😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: deepa101

That was soooooooooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! Continue ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!⭐️



hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you enjoyed this part :) hope you enjoy the next one too!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Akashspartan

Ah Naina ur making doll one vamp of sorts, itni bhi buri nahi hai woh, kismat ki mari thats it a bit insecure of her future😍

Brilliant yaar one more FF from ur end, loved reading to it and the suspense prevails again, who slapped my doll!!!!!🤣


Waiting eagerly for the next installment please continue👍🏼👏



hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ahah yes im venting out all my anger on sravani the character in this story :) hehe and im so glad you enjoyed reading this! aha poor girl, i feel bad though, no more slapping! hehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

One more slap to Shravani! Kya baat hai!!! I hope this time its her father.

Nice part!



hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha yes one more slap and who knows...maybe you're right :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhavni88

wonderful part...I think she gets slapped by Girishji.....

her hormones are playing havoc with her brain...😆



hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha yes pregnant women do sometimes act crazy, and sravani acts double crazy 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Chapter 2:
Chapter Two:

"Sravani!!!" someone screamed, and turned her around to slap her across her face.

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Sravani was once again shocked at seeing someone slap her for the nth time that day. It was Girish though. "Papa?" she questioned, her voice suddenly lowered and extremely soft.

Girish was furious at how his daughter was behaving. "Sravani. I know you want to get married to Manav, but that is no way in which to treat your family" he said, his voice strict.

"But Baba…" she bagan to whine.

"I don't want to hear anything Sravani. You have to learn to treat this family with respect. They will be your family in the future, ok?" he stated.

The poor girl could do nothng but merely nod, agreeing to her father's words.

To everyone's surprise though, Manav then came to Sravani's side, "Sravani don't worry about it. We're all family now and well, this happens. And don't get worried about the wedding, We both will be married this Sunday, just the way you wanted us to be married" he said, softly, his hands around her shoulders, as he actually met her eyes for the seemingly first time.

Everyone gasped, and Savita Aai and Vandu had the most shocked looks on their faces. "What are you saying Manav? You're getting married to Sravani?" Savita Aai spoke out, after a seemingly ten minute long silence.

Manav merely bowed his head down, unable to look his Aai in the eye, as he responded "Well, It was supposed to happen anyways. That's the only reason me and Archana even got divorced, so that Sravani and me could get married, and raise the child with a name in society. Now what difference will it make if we get married this Sunday or next year? It's going to happen no matter what at some point."His voice was filled with dejection, and sorrow, as he mentioned Archana's name.

Girish then spoke up, "Well then beta. Now we have a lot of preparations to make for the wedding. I'm going to take Sravani home with me now, and she'll come to your house permanently on Sunday" he smiled, trying to ease the tension in the room.

Manav just nodded, no real happiness on his face, as everyone realized he was getting married again to someone because of his promise, his duty as an older brother, rather than out of love.

As everyone got up to bid Girish and Sravani, they were in for another surprise. There stood Archana, in the doorway of the house, and the sorrowful expression on her face told everyone that she had heard everything. Tears were brimming over in her eyes, and she quickly wiped them away with her end of the pallu.

"Archana? Koi problem hain?" asked Manav, breaking the silence that had formed.

"I…I just wanted to let you know that the doctor said Baba's completely fine, that he woke up and was asking for you all" replied Archana, her voice low and soft, as she tried to control her tears.

"Oh well, um thank you" said Manav, not knowing what else to say to this woman, the love of his life, after she had heard that he was getting remarried.

"Well, I'll take your leave now. Bye Aai, Vandu, Sravani" Archana said, slowly backing out of the house. Before she left though, she turned around and said "Bye Manav, Congratulations on the wedding" and immediately turned to run away.

Those last words of Archana's seemed to stab Manav in the heart. The way she had said Congratulations brought tears to his own eyes. Only the two of them understood the pain which they had to endure, the pain of the separation from one's own love.

Vandu and Savita Aai had tears streaming down their eyes after seeing Archana, while Sravani merely stared into space, the expression on her face incomprehensible.

"Well, now that Baba has waken up, shall we go see him and tell him the good news?" asked Sravani, a smile once again appearing on her face.

The Deshmukh family merely nodded in response, realizing how out of hand the situation was, where they seemingly had no say in anything anymore.

And so the five headed off to the hospital once more, wanting to tell Baba about the impending wedding [hehe and give him a heart attack once again 😆]

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Manavi, Savita Aai, and Vandu entered the hospital room, only to find Baba connected to a bunch of different tubes and machines. The ever so loud and happy Baba had a more serene, serious look on his face as he watched everyone enter the room. Tears welled up in their eyes as they saw the man whom they adored lying so weak, after battling for his life.

"Manav…" said Baba slowly, calling out to his son, trying to lift his hand but being unable to do so. Manav immediately rushed to his father's side. And the family sat, talking, talking about anything and everything except Manav and Sravani's wedding.

However, Baba finally asked "Where is Archana? I saw her before, but she left…"

Manav signaled everyone out of the room, and when it was only him and his baba, he explained "I'm not getting married to Archana Baba. I'm getting married to Sravani this Sunday. We decided today, and everyone's just going to be happy if Archana is not even mentioned in this house anymore." Baba noticed Manav's eyes were downcast, his face the epitome of sadness, and tears were pouring down the sides of his cheeks.

Before he knew it, Manav had buried his face in his hands and began to sob uncontrollably. "Manav…" called Baba, "You made the decision, and now you have to deal with it"

Manav just looked up showing his tear stained face as he asked "Why me Baba? Why does Bappa always find it fun to play my life? When I get any happiness, he just wants to take it away from me? My Archana? But I know, I'll try and keep her out of my thoughts" he ended, turning his face away and getting up to leave.

Baba just nodded at seeing Manav's breakdown and recovery almost instantaneously. He sighed, knowing that there was literally nothing he could possibly do at this moment in time. Baba looked up to see Sravani standing right outside of the glass door, and called out to Manav. "Tell Sravani to come in Beta, I want to talk to her."

Manav merely nodded and indicated to Sravani that she should go inside.

"Sravani Beta…." Baba began…

And the two sat and conversed for a short period of time. Everyone standing outside was surprised to see that Baba seemed to not hate her, and seemed to have accepted her as his new daughter-in-law. Needless to say, they were all happy with thi turn of events.

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"So yeah Sravani Beta..I just want Manav happy" said Baba smiling, as he held onto Sravani's hand, who was sitting by his bedside.

She gave him a small smile as she replied "Han Baba, of course. I know that once the baby comes Manav will be happy once again." Giving his hand a tight squeeze, she got up and left the room, where the rest of the family was waiting.

Stepping out, she bent down to get Savita Aai's blessings before she turned to Girish and asked "Shall we leave?"

Girish was happy to see his daughter behaving normally again, not like the psychotic maniac she was a few hours ago. And sayng good bye to Manav, Baba, Vandu, and Savita Aai, the father-daughter duo left the hospital, telling everyone they would begin to make preparations for the wedding on Sunday.

Up Next: The Wedding!

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Hi Everyone!...please please don't throw any rocks at me yet :) wait till after the next part 😆

anyways, jokes apart, i didn't want to drag this any more than necessary so this will have two more parts to it and then it will be done :)

As always, I really hope you enjoyed this part and please do read and comment :)

Thanks!
~Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Brilliant one Naina, and Shravani getting one tight slap from Girishji, hmmmm sounds cool😍
Well the suspense will unfold in the coming days then, so will Manav marries doll is a billion dollar question on the show, and Naina u too have kept us waiting👍🏼 So i am eagerly waiting for the next installment!!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akashspartan

Brilliant one Naina, and Shravani getting one tight slap from Girishji, hmmmm sounds cool😍

Well the suspense will unfold in the coming days then, so will Manav marries doll is a billion dollar question on the show, and Naina u too have kept us waiting👍🏼So i am eagerly waiting for the next installment!!!!!!!!👏



hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! i definitely do appreciate it :) ahah and i sure hope you like the next update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 3:

Girish was happy to see his daughter behaving normally again, not like the psychotic maniac she was a few hours ago. And sayng good bye to Manav, Baba, Vandu, and Savita Aai, the father-daughter duo left the hospital, telling everyone they would begin to make preparations for the wedding on Sunday.

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It was Sunday, the day of the wedding and Manav had woken up amidst a lot of hurry and commotion. His mother, sister, and Baba seemed to be flying about the house preparing for the wedding, getting the last minute things together. Not wanting to be involved in any of this, Manav quietly slipped out of the house, and walked towards the beach (which was coincidentally nearby). For him, a walk along the beach always seemed to help calm him down, regain control of his thoughts, of his life.

The beach was deserted at this time of day, so early in the morning. Manav sat himself on a rock and watched the sun begin to make its way out of the clouds, the beginning of a new day. He thought of himself and Archana, how the two had shared so many memories, both good and bad, them on the train, them during their wedding, her at his home, oh what sweet memories! Tears streamed down his face as he thought about the conclusion of their journey, of how the two had gotten a divorce, how she had stepped out of his life forever, how she had seemed the other day after finding out about his and Sravani's wedding.

He loved her. He knew that she loved him. But fate seemed to have something else in store for the two of them.

Sighing as he looked at his watch and realized he was running late, Manav made his way back home, telling himself there was nothing he could do to change anything.

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"Arre Manav Beta? Where were you for so long? We have so many preparations for the wedding!" exclaimed Baba, as he walked around the house. Even though the doctor had suggested he take rest for a few more days, Baba had been really energetic and excited, taking everyone by surprise, considering he was the most attached to Archana, after Manav of course. But no one chose to say anything.

"Oh Baba mein..I just went out for a walk…" replied Manav, slightly downcast.

Baba walked up to him, placing a hand on his head as he said "Manav, I know that life has been unfair to you, but just remember everything that happens happens for your own good, I promise."

Manav merely smiled and nodded, leaving to get ready in the wedding clothes.

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Three hours later, Manav was sitting in the mandap at the temple, his Baba sitting on the side on a chair, watching everything, while his mother was busy yelling at the Panditji for not having everything that he needed. Vandu had gone inside to help prepare Sravani for the wedding.

Panditji: "Ab dulhan ko bulalijiye" he said, and Manav's heart sank, this was it. He was getting married. He looked up to see Sravani entering the wedding hall, dressed in a light reddish yellow sari, a faint blush on her cheeks, and her pregnancy bump visible.

As Sravani was made to sit down next to Manav, everyone heard a sharp cry from Baba, as he clutched his chest, "Ma..Manav…" he screamed.

Manav and the others were by his side within seconds, "Baba!" he screamed, as he yelled to Tarun, who just happened to be there, to get a taxi so they could get Baba to the hospital. Manav held Baba in his hands, "You'll be fine…Nothing will happen" he said, softly. Savita Aai had tears running down her cheeks as she went and stood in front of Bappa, praying to God that her husband would be alright, that he would be in no danger.

Baba's face had seemingly gone pale, as he struggled with his words. Sravani, who had remained quiet the entire time, suddenly clutched her stomach as pain seemed to shoot through her. "Arghhh!" she let out a scream as she fell down on the floor. Girish was by her side and had lifted her to take her down.

The taxi had come by then, and the four Baba, Manav, Sravani, and Girish, rushed ahead to the hospital. Savita Aai and Vandu were following closely behind.
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"Doctor! Aap please do something" pleaded Manav, as he saw both Sravani and Baba being taken to different rooms to get their check ups done. He collapsed onto a chair, hiding his face in his hands, Why me? It's always me! He sobbed.

Everyone stood around solemnly, waiting for the doctors to come out and say something, anything about their two family members who were inside.

Finally, after what seemed to be an hour, the doctor emerged from Baba's room, "Woh. Mr. Deshmukh? Your father s fine. I had said he shouldn't do too much work and he didn't listen. This time though you were lucky and got to the hospital on time. Next time, f this happens again, you definitely will not be as lucky" he said, his eyes stern and accusatory.

A small smile of gratefulness appeared on his face as he looked at the doctor "Thanks a lot. Thanks so much doctor saab. I promise, no exertion any time. Ever"

The doctor nodded, smiled, and left, and the family was sitting there waiting for Sravani's doctor to come out and say something.

Soon enough, Sravani's doctor did come out, a very serious look as she talked to Manav and the rest of the family. "Her condition is very serious right now, and we're going to have to operate on her. She's stable for now, and wants to talk to someone named Manav, so I would suggest you do whatever she says. It seems as if she's in this condition because she faced some serious stress" the doctor ended, a grim look on her face.

"But..but she'll be ok, right?" Manav asked, the worry clearly etched on his face.

"Nothing is for sure now…." replied the doctor. "Anyways, as I was saying, you have about two hours with her before we operate." Saying so, the doctor turned and left needing to tend to other patients.

Manav rushed inside with Girish, where the two saw Sravani connected to a bunch of tubes, looking quite pale and weak. It was obvious that she was facing some stress. However, as she saw them enter, Sravani looked up to the two and slowly called out "Archana…" her voice weak and obviously very strained.

Manav looked at her confused "Archana? She's not here, we told her not to come, remember? Don't worry."

Sravani however once again called out Archana's name. "Bring her here….I want to talk to her…"

Girish was more than confused but heeded his daughter's words, and so he left to call Archana and tell her to come to the hospital as soon as possible.

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Thirty Minutes Later….

Archana came rushing in to the hospital. As soon as she had heard that both Baba and Sravani had been admitted to the hospital, she hadn't heard anything else. Dropping whatever she was doing, she had taken the first auto she could find to get here.

"The Deshmukhs…What room are they in?" she questioned the woman at the reception, panting, out of breath.

As soon as the woman told her, Archana ran inside the hospital, trying to find the room, when she came across the hallway where she found Girish, Vandu, and Savita Aai all standing, looking lost and numb.

She ran to Savita Aai, holding her by the shoulders, "What happened? Is Sravani ok? The baby??" Archana was frantic with worry. Although the other girl had treated her cruelly, Archana could not help but sympathize, feel bad for her, and worry about her.

Savita quietly pointed to the room in front of her, and Archana rushed in, only to find Manav sitting next to her, holding her hand, while she had her eyes closed and was lying calmly. "Manav.." she slowly whispered, not wanting to wake up Sravani.

Manav looks up at her, but before he opens his mouth, Sravani opens her eyes and calls out to Archana, telling her to come closer. Archana went and stood next to Manav, and Sravani took a hold of both of their hands.

"Archana, Manav" she began, "First of all, I want to apologize. I know that I will probably not make it through the operation, but I want to see you both together, rectify the mistakes I've made and bring two lovers together. I want to see you married…"

The couple looked at each other in shock, and then back at Sravani, their mouths slightly parted with confusion. "Sravani, what are you saying? What about you, the baby? Don't worry about Archana and me. We were probably never meant to be…We will get married, for you, for Sachin's baby…" Manav said, his voice calm and controlled, as he looked at Sravani, who was as pale as a ghost.

"Han Sravani. You both have to get married, for your baby…" supported Archana, as she smiled softly at the woman lying the hospital bed, looking defeated.

Sravani looked at the both of them, and continued. "Guys, both of you, It hurts me to talk, so just listen to me and don't argue. Manav, go bring Baba, Papa, Savita Aai, and Vandu here. I need to tell everyone."

He silently nodded and went outside to go to the doctor, and bring everyone into the room. Soon 15 minutes later, everyone was assembled in the room, waiting to see what Sravani had to say to them.

"I know, I probably don't have much more of life left in me, and I want to see that Archana and Manav are married, right now, right in front of my eyes. Consider this a dying woman's last wish, but I've realized that I've made mistakes, and Archana and Manav are the two that belong together" she pleaded with everyone, as they all stared at her dumbfounded.

"Getting married, now?" asked Girish. "You sure about this beti?"

"Han Papa, I've never been more sure in my life" she responded, as she once again took both Archana's and Manav's hands and placed them in each others.

"Anyways Manav, you're already dressed for a wedding" she joked, a small smile on her face. "Just get some sindoor from the mandir outside, and marry her again Manav. Please"

However, no one responded. No one moved, not even flinched as she spoke those words. They remembered how the doctor had told them that she shouldn't face any more stress, how they should all do whatever she wants them to.

When Sravani asked once again though, she told Savita Aai to go get the sindoor, and she listened, walking out of the hospital room, thinking how her son's life had changed miraculously within a matter of minutes. He was not remarrying his ex-wife, he would be getting the opportunity to restart his life, and she had never been more content. Her son was finally getting the happiness he deserved and she was more than happy.

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Savita Aai slowly made her way back into the hospital room, and she saw Archana smiling, tears flowing down her eyes, as Manav held her shoulders and the both of them thanked Sravani. On seeing Savita, Sravani called her out "Aai, yeh Manav ko dijiye" referring to the red powder that was in her hand.

When Savita Aai finally came in front of Manav, she held her hand out, indicating that Manav take that as sindoor. Archana was standing in front of him, dressed in a simple blue sari with a green border, no jewelry on her other than a simple pair of bangles, and some earrings. A small black bindi adorned her face, and to him, she had never looked more beautiful. Stepping forward, he took some of the sindoor with his two fingers, and raised his hand to her head.

The couple looked at Sravani once again, who gave them a reassuring smile, her hand on her stomach, as she felt her baby kicking.

Manav turned back to Archana, to see the twinkle in her eyes. The happiness that they would finally be one again. Not turning away, as the two continuously stared into each others eyes, the love shining bright, he filled the parting of her hair, marking her as his once again. His, and his alone.

Tears were glistening in their eyes, and they didn't turn away from each other, standing there, just savoring the moment, while everyone watched the couple relive their happiness. Only when Sravani began clapping were the two suddenly disturbed out of their thoughts, and quickly looked away.

Everyone in the family came up to them, congratulated them, blessed them, and gave them their love. Indeed, Sravani had made a wise decision, she had done something right.


Hi! So there's one more part left! please do read and comment! :)

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