.*. Fantasy World: ArMan, Written By Myself .*.

Hey Guys,
Here is my FanFic.. I wanted to write something for you guys.. I hope that you will enjoy it!! Have fun! 😳 😳 😃

Story name: Ek Atoot Rishta
'Archana..?' Manav was looking for Archana everywhere.. He couldn't find her..
'Archana..?' He called her for the second time.. Still no reply.. The house of the Deshmukh's was empty.. Manav puts his bag on the floor.. He was sad.. He thought about Archu.. After staying at her home, he really remember her every day.. He wanted to see her.. He doesn't care about the marriage with Choo (Shravani).. He only wants Archu.. Manav walks to the kitchen and took something from the fridge.. He eats and sits in the living room.. Waiting for Archu......

Suddenly he heard a sound.. 'Manav, aap waapas aa gaya..?' Manav turned around.. 'Finally..' thinks Manav. Archu is standing in front of him.. She wears a beautiful pink saree with her mangalsutra and sindoor.. 'Archana, kaha thi tum? Main kab se tumhara intezaar kar rahi hoon..'
'Manav, Manav, main..' says Archu..
'Achha, kuch na kaho.. Tum agaya hoon na, yehi kaafi hain mere liye..' says Mana to Archu.
Archu smiles.. 'Manav, aap thiek to ho na?'
'Main bil kool thiek hoon Archana.. Tumhe dekh kar, mujhe aisa laga ke....' SILENCE
Archu looked into the eyes of Manav.. 'Manav, mujhe aap se ek zaroori baat kanir hain..'
'Kaisi baat Archana..?'

Suddenly their heard some footsteps.. Archu and Manav turned around.. And they see.....

To Be Continued.. 😳 😃

Please let me know if I have to continu the story.. 😳
Thnx!

Its lovely! Kya yaar climax pe rok diya!!!

Please continue!!! I really want to know who is coming. 😊

Ek Atoot Rishta
'Yeh sab kya hain Manav😡 ..?' It was Shravani standing at the front door.. She looks anger with tears in her eyes.. 'Shravani, please, tum beech mein math bolo!' screams Manav angry. Archu looks surprised. 'Likien Manav..' says Shravani scared. 'Bas! Keh diya toh keh diya!' Manav's anger grows.. 'Manav, tum shant ho jao..' Archu takes Manav's hand.. 'Mere liye..' Archu looks Manav deeply in the eyes.. 'Nahin Archana, main shant nahin ho sakta! Yeh sawaal pe sawal karti hain, mujhe achha nahin lagta Archu!' Archana looks down to the ground.. 'Archana, tum mere patni ho, tumhe sawaal karni ki puri haq hain, likien yeh kaun hain? KAUN HAIN YEH?' Archana looks very surprised. Shravani is crying a river and she wants to walk away, but Manav walks towards Shravani and hold her hand. 'Shravani, mera ek baat sun ke jaa; main Archana se bahut pyaar karta hoon, aur tumhe beech mein aane ke koi zaroorat nahin. Tum kya sochte ho, tum Sachin ke bachhe ke Maa banne wali hoon aur tum mujhse shaadi kar na chaati hoon? Kya hain yeh? Tumhe sharm nahin aai? Dunya ke koi bhi aurat aise kabhi nahin karti!' Shravani looks surprised with big eyes.. 'Manav, main aap se bahut pyaar karti hoon..' 'Aur Sachin ka pyaar? Kaha gaya Sachin ka pyaar..? asks Manav. 'Aap mujhe nahin samjhenge Manav.' says Shravani. 'Nahin samjhunga, kyu ki mere patni aise kabhi nahin karte.' Archana looks at Manav. 'Ab jao jaahaa se, aur mujhe akela chhordo Archana ke saath. Mujhe Archana ke saath baat karna hain. Jao jaahaa se Shravani.' 'Manav, main jaanti hoon..' 'Shravani, tum JAO!' jells Manav. Shravani leavs with tears in her eyes.

ARCHANA: 'Manav, tum thiek toh ho na?' asks Archana
MANAV: 'Main thiek hoon Archana, tum thiek toh ho na?'
ARCHANA: 'Ji'
MANAV: 'Accha tum mujhse kuch kehna chaati thi, kya baat hain..?'
ARCHANA: 'Manav, woh.. Main aap se.. Talaak ke baare mein kuch baat karni thi.'
SILENCE.....
MANAV: 'Mujhe talaak nahin chaahi yeh Archana..'
Archana looks shocked
ARCHANA: 'Manav.. Aap yeh kab..?'
MANAV: 'Hamesha se Archana, main tumse pyaar karta hoon aur tumhare saath apna zindagi bitaa na chaati hoon..'
ARCHANA: 'Manav, main aap se bhi talaak nahin chaati hoon..'
Manav looks lovely to Archana
ARCHANA: 'Manav, please mujhe talaak mat do..'

Manav looks at Archana and says...........

To Be Continued.. 😳

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Its lovely! Kya yaar climax pe rok diya!!!

Pls do continue. I want to know ki kaun aya.

Thnx Nikita.. 😳 Hope you like the second part.. 😃

Wow thats cool, superb keep it coming!👏😊

wow its cool waiting for next

wow ur ff is very very nyc....
i really really liked it.....
do cont. soon..

awww just started to read it n simply luving it:)