Wow SD, nice question.👏
So the competition has finally begun.
Now SD, I'm a deewani but I'm a composed, calm deewani. I will propose Manav strategically. 😉
Okay, so here is how I will be proposing him. Basically I have some ideas of my own on how guys should be approached- never be so desperate, use your heart and your brains, and say the right thing at the right time. Make a good impression first. Now since I like being realistic, so I am trying to make up a sort of believable encounter of a 3rd year medical student studying in Byculla, and a mechanic of Dombivili. 😃
In 3rd year we have a subject called PSM (Preventive and Social Medicine) which focusses on the social aspects of medicine- how to prevent diseases, spread awareness among people, vaccination, public health facilities for people and surveys. For this, we often have to take a tour of residential areas, especially slums.⭐️
Okay enough blabbering!😆
Copyright: Nikita Lakhe- Manav ki Sabse Badi Deewani
Yeh kahani hai ek seedhi sacchi prem kahani, jiski shuruaat hai kuch khaas, kuch alag. Jahan sab kahaniyan shuru hoti hain aankh michoni se aur anjaam pahunchti hai milan se, yeh kahani hai alag, kyun? Kyunki yeh kahani puri asli hai!😆
"Shirt nikaliye aur bed pe late jaiye."😉
Manav ne uncomfortable nigahon se idhar udhar dekha. "Zaroori hai?"😕
Maine apna stetho apne gale mein latkaya aur boli, "Of course, warna examination kaise hogi? Aaj world health day hai, aaj is chawl aur aas paas ke area ke sab logon ka check-up karna hai aur survey report banani hai."
"Sabka??? Usse kya hoga?"
Main hasi aur boli, "Authorities ko yahaan ke logon ke baare mein pata chalega tabhi to woh yahaan cheezein improve karenge- dispensary khulvaenge"👏
"Sacchi??? Aap kitni acchi hain, matlab aap log kitna karte hain hamare liye!"
Maine apni best smile di, "Aap bhi to itne acche hain Manav, kitna karte hain sabke liye- chote bacche, pregnant aurtein, terrace se giri aurtein, aapke mann mein bahut daya hai- aapke jaisa koi nahi dekha maine." 😳
Manav sharma gaye, "Arey, woh to aise hi... aap bahut tareef karti hain"😳
"You deserve it, ab comeon, insaaniyat ke naate, apne chawl walon ke health ke naate shirt nikaliye aur mujhe examine karne dijiye."😆
Manav bed pe baith gaye, fir bole, "Ek aur idea hai, aap joothi moothi mein likh dijiye ki apne examine kar liya. Apka bhi time bachega- abhi kitne saare log bache hain."⭐️
"Jooth bolna paap hai, nadi kinare saap hai, mujhe jhoot bolna bilkul pasand nahi. Jooth bolne se bappa naraaz hote hain. Samajhla ka???"
Manav impress ho gaye. "Mujhe bhi jooth bolna pasand nahi- aap sachmuch badi aadarshon wali hain. 👏Chalo aapka time waste nahi karte."
Manav shirt nikal kar let gaye. 😳Maine examination shuru kiya.
"Aap is tarah touch kyun kar rahi hain?"
"Hey bhagwan! Manav, aapki problem hai kya? Main medical student hun, don't worry apka rape nahin karungi main."😡
Manav ka chehra chhota sa ho gaya.😭
Maine stetho nikala. "Apko female doctor se problem hai to pehle batana chahiye tha. Mera dost Sandesh bahar hai, main usko bhejti hun."🤢
"Nahi nahi," Manav bole. "I'm sorry, meri galti hai. Ab main chupchap rahunga." Aur late gaye. Maine fir examination start kiya. "Aap badi cooperative hain. Thankyou. Darasal pichle baar jab mera examination is tarah hua tha toh khidki se sab ladkiyan jhaank rahi thi. OOh aah kar rahin thi, main sharam se laal ho gaya. Main to kabhi Archana ke aage bhi aise nahin gaya."
"I can understand, you see, par its your fault also. Kisne bola itna sweet, cute banke sab ladkiyon ko apni taraf attract karne ke liye? Dekha Shravani bhi Sachin ko bhool gayi apki wajah se. Apka to sharmana bhi cute lagta hai."
Manav sharma sharma ke tamatar ho gaye.😳
"Aap kya kar rahi hain?"
"Heart problem aur lung problem ke liye check kar rahi hun- aap mechanic hain- to iski probability zyada hai."
"Aap to bahut jaanti hain mere baare mein..."😛
"abhi to history li thi aapki maine. Waise bhi aap itne acche hain, aapke baare mein sab jante hain. Mumbai mein waise bhi handsome ladkon ki bahut kami hai."😉
"Kya aap har patient se itni baatein karti hain?"⭐️
"Nahin sirf aapse kar rahi hun kyunki aap bahut nervous ho- heart rate galat aa jayegi. 😆Aur fir har patient aap ke jaisa sweet, seedha aur shareef bhi to nahi hota."😳
Manav emotional ho gaye. "Itne din se mujhse kisi ne itne pyaar se baat nahi ki. Har koi mujhe hate karta hai. Dumbo, weak, spineless, shameless bolta hai. Archana ko rone ke aur Shravani ki seva karne ke alawa koi kaam nahin, Shravani to chillati hi rehti hai.. mujhse koi pyaar nahi karta." 😭
Maine examination rok di. "Arey aapka to physical nahi mental examination karna chahiye tha. 😲Aap baithiye... Manav ab bataiye kya problem hai."
Manav baith gaye aur baithte hi sabse pehle shirt pahen li. 😆Fir bole- "Main bahut thak gaya hun. Do minute sukoon se nahi baith pata main- har samay ghar mein koi na koi problem rehti hai, ya fir koi jhagadta rehta hai. Mujhe ek normal life kyun nahin mil sakti?"😭
Maine Manav ke haath pe haath rakha. 😉"Normal life kaise milegi apko agar aise abnormal logon ke beech rahoge.🤢 Thodi positive energy to rahe life mein- yeh kya rona aur chillana. Hum medical students to har roz KITNA KUCH depressing dekhte hain, itni padhai hai, seniors daante hain, hum to frustrate nahin hote. Hum koi ajoobe to nahin hain."⭐️
Manav ne meri ore dekha, "Har koi itna strong nahin hota, main bahut majboor hun. Zindagi fir se shuru karne ke liye sahi saathi ki talash hai, main to do naaon mein hun aur fir bhi udaas hun."
Maine determined expression se uski ore dekha. "Manav, mana kar dijiye shaadi ke liye. Is shadi se kisi ka kuch nahi hoga."👏
"Aur Archana...?"
"Uspar bahut zulm kiye hain aapki Aai ne aur apne kuch nahin kiya us waqt... ab apko haq nahin raha use rokne ka... use apni duniya alag se basane dijiye."😃
Manav udaas ho gaye. "Aur main... akela?"😭
❤️"Main hoon na Manav, main dungi aapka saath- Maine kabhi apko khud se alag samjha hi nahi- jis bhi situation mein aap they, hamesha yehi sochne ki koshish ki- Manav abhi kya soch rahe honge, kya feel kar rahe honge. Aur poori duniya ko bataya. Poori duniya se apke liye ladi main. India-forums pe sabko pakaya. Aap aur main ab koi alag nahin hai... isse zyada pavitra rishta hai koi?"❤️
Manav shocked they. 😲Emotional hokar bole... "Mujhe koi idea hi nahin tha... kabhi pata hi nahi chala."
"Archana ke hote hue, aap kahan kisi aur ko dekhte hain... fir bhi ek baat kahungi.. us insaan ko jivan saathi banao jo tumse pyaar karta ho, na ki jisse tum pyaar karte ho... aap samajh rahe ho na main kiski baat kar rahi hun?"
Manav ne sir hilaya. "main sochunga."👏
"theek hai, toh phir main intezaar karungi. Ab aap jaiye, aur agle patient ko andar bhej dijiye."😊
Manav bye karke chale gaye aur main apne sapnon mein fir kho gayi.😳
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End of my proposal! As I said, I wanted to follow a strategy, make him know me a little, before I proposed. Main deewani hun, par deewanepan ko sahi direction mein channelise karti hun!
I hope it was not so boring... even if it was boring, I don't care. Manav ko to accha laga na... hahaha!!!😆
Edited by nikitagmc - 15 years ago
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