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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: sami01
wah skepy .....
human heart indeed is a mystery, sometimes one needs one jolt to learn lessons of life...thats what happened with sachin,as i always say about ur writting,i love it when u bring out emotions of characters out of words into reader's heart.Atleast I feel so......

I can understand sachin's guilt and his wish to finally do something meaningful,lets hope for the best..looking forward to next update already

I had wanted it write a bit more about the way Sachin was thinking, but I thought that would be a bit morose for a FF. So I left it. Hope I can update next Saturday...........

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: h&rblock
Skep, can't wait for more...amazingly written, I am so hooked, it is scary...I so wish you would write & publish a book, I would be first in line to buy a signed copy!!!

Kal, how are things with you................ I hope I am helping you to keep yr mind off the approaching D-day. 😉 😆

Best of Luck .............. ❤️

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: rusha4003

Thanks for the PM Skeptical !!!

This part is brilliantly written .... I grieved along with Sachin ... And could totally understand Savita's helpless anguish !!!

Hope you'll bring Manav to India quickly ..... be patient......... 😳

the ultimate finish for me would be ... Manav watching a dance performacne of Archana !!!!!!!!! 😍

@pink

Hahahahahahaha ...................

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: *Resham*
Awwwwwwww...its wonderful update skep...

Thanks Resh ..............

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Arch has to wake up. What happens to her? How has the accident affected her? How she and Sachin become gr8 pals will be the focus of the next 2 -3 updates. I am trying to keep the pace brisk and have to create a scenario for Manav's entry. The story has to proceed that way.............

From then onwards there will be no looking back for Manav ............ how he gets this stubborn girl to get back on her feet will be the focus. Falling in love for him and the fear of falling in love for her shd keep up the interest I think ........................

Is that incentive enough, Piya? 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

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Padmajaan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

yes wow it is.

what a fantastic storyteller you are skep dearest!

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Lekha Ishwar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

This Writer is a pure genius ....

magical I say & pure Fun reading
my god skep you potrayed the emotions soo welllllllll

Skep you rock dear

Edited by -Destiny- - 15 years ago

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: lotus1963
yes wow it is.

what a fantastic storyteller you are skep dearest!

Come with me to this other place

Where there is a beautiful face

Full of love, fun and grace

Bringing heartbreak and solace .....

Avez-vous d'accord?

Edited by skeptical - 15 years ago

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pennu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#149

I liked this update Skep... (it took me back to last year...) especially the Sachin's part... its soo true that... when some unexpected thing happends on an unexpected day... it hurts a lot... what can we do other than prayng to the almightly... still there is no garantee that the things will become all right.. there will be some loss... which we will miss in our whole life.. but still we beive on GOd and will have faith on him... bcos we know he will do the right thing on the right time... Thanks for the update Skep... you brilliantly portrayed the real feelings...👏