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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: samarth_050









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<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">What to do? Much as I resolve to curb my naive writing, on one hand 'vitriol' and on other hand 'Basundi' keep on spurring me in to tactless slips and blabbering. But you will have to keep on tolerating me as I am valiantly exercising my open forum privileges and protection of a distance equivalent to the diameter of this blue globe. This from a timid, shy not shameless, clueless person.😊</font></font>


<font size="3" face="Calibri">P.S. what is 'what-not'?</font>



samarth , but you musn't stop writing . U have that something in u ..........that talent , not gifted to many . In ur spare time write sumthing , your innermost thoughts , essay , whatever that comes from ur heart . If u dont post on forum ok i understand but write seriously and one day you will be published . You are too good samarth .Promise me this .

C , I hate FF's and as a rule I dont read them . They bore me . But I read u as your way of expressing yourself gives me pleasure . Whenever I read u , I end up feeling I cud never write this way { Sigh] and then I re read u all over again . Then again the next day . I keep wondering how you can express yourself so effortlessly with so many heavy words ...........as you are a 'heavy' writer . Vocab is so good . that u substitute words in a jiffy and never repeat them , and this is done naturally , it isnt contrived . f you write a short story , you will do it with perfection . I have no doubts about it at all . The entire picture standa before my eyes when i read u .Isn't that what writing is all about ?

My vitriol and humor in my comments keeps me entertained . bahut mazaa aata hai ! Its Fun . Simply love it as I do it . Hope one day I will be able to write seriously with those very qualities . Dunno .God willing .


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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow! that was simply awesome👍🏼.......u have described whole scene so nicely......👏

thanks for the weekened treat.......😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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C .. I love ur writing style !! everything was perfect !!
I loved how you described each and every feeling so perfectly and I could absolutely visualize this scene !! it was so ArMan-ish, Although Manav will never consume his marriage with Archu, and Archu will never give herself to him esp. at this moment, I could still feel our Manav and Archana thnks to the way u've portrayed it .. wonderful nd fabilous Miss Chashmish 😉 !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Woww amazing C!!!

This was indeed a treat!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000



samarth , but you musn't stop writing . U have that something in u ..........that talent , not gifted to many . In ur spare time write sumthing , your innermost thoughts , essay , whatever that comes from ur heart . If u dont post on forum ok i understand but write seriously and one day you will be published . You are too good samarth .Promise me this .

C , I hate FF's and as a rule I dont read them . They bore me . But I read u as your way of expressing yourself gives me pleasure . Whenever I read u , I end up feeling I cud never write this way { Sigh] and then I re read u all over again . Then again the next day . I keep wondering how you can express yourself so effortlessly with so many heavy words ...........as you are a 'heavy' writer . Vocab is so good . that u substitute words in a jiffy and never repeat them , and this is done naturally , it isnt contrived . f you write a short story , you will do it with perfection . I have no doubts about it at all . The entire picture standa before my eyes when i read u .Isn't that what writing is all about ?

My vitriol and humor in my comments keeps me entertained . bahut mazaa aata hai ! Its Fun . Simply love it as I do it . Hope one day I will be able to write seriously with those very qualities . Dunno .God willing .


The respect that you command, that respect which you never sought, cared or initially aware about, is entirely due to your basic honesty and internally caring nature, and not because of vitriol or humour, though they are very much there- enhanced with a very sharp mind. And as such, I naturally feel touched and honoured at your compliments. I am enjoying whatever or whenever I write, not caring about linguistic correctness but writing as a vocation or hobby is a far cry for me, mainly because of professional engagements, inherent inadequacy of training and above all lack of any serious motivation.

But as C had hoped earlier and you have kindled it here, we would certainly look forward to your own fiction with a fond wait.

Edited by samarth_050 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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"…messages that zig-zagged into him like lightning across a stormy night sky. Now there was no turning back, no looking ahead, no hoping for a what-if miracle. Now there was only this scented evening, and in its ragged and tempestuous grasp the two of them alone."

Rasa shringar, eva shabdo thi sparshya,

ho..evo zankaar, jaane Shachi ane Indra
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Posted: 15 years ago
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c'mon cee how can you leave us hanging like that...two more paragraphs please...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yes C. what happens next ???😉 😆😆
Edited by Tanyaz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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C thank you for an awesome FF. please write more frequently

Samarth if you don't mind me saying the following
Listen to us and

...just let yourself go and write...😆




Edited by carpe-diem - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh god, C... that was brilliant!!!
Are you a writer or something??? I always feel that when I read your stories, even your comments are so rich linguistically, as kools very well said it all... each para is a literary delight... and a nice way to enrich your vocabulary.
Will have to read it again.. and again.. and again..!!
Do post the next part soon, all of us definitely want to know what happens next... as I have been telling kools too, I really want a romantic yet ethical ending to this whole Shravani- Manav-Archana fiasco. Hoping that you can come up with a good take on that as well.
And kools, I agree with C, with the creative ideas that you often throw our way, ("The creatives should have shown this... creatives should have shown that..") I really feel you can write a nice FF... maybe your take on the 'Pavitra Rishta'? Do consider.
Samarth, waiting for your fabulous writings as well... you haven't written quite in a while.

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