PR reloaded-FF-Pt 66 Pg 148, 27/4/11

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chdmc

@chdmc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#931

It was interesting reading "alternatives" :) Made me wonder how things would be if all this worked out.
What I liked was, how Shravani, Girishji, Sachin and Sav aai are convinced of what's right for them, though it doesn't necessarily mean it's right for other people involved. Sachin's and Manav's talk was also heart warming, the way Sachin was putting whatever was there in his heart/mind right in front of Manav. It was also probably preparing us readers for a probable fall that Sachin might face...

Nice work!

Happy Diwali to you as well.

- Kavitha

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Shikha

@lunza

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Posted: 14 years ago

#932

Niki yeh sab kya ho raha hai yaar ? Dont tell me it is going to end with Manav and archu eloping on their wedding day by ditching satish and shravani at their respective mandaps 😔

😆 Just kidding ... but I hope Varsha comes into the picture soon now .. things are beginning to turn messy 😕

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unknown18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#933

Really, she wondered, what was it in the Deshmukh blood that beautiful rich girls and their Dads fell for the Deshmukh men like flies for honey? Not just Manav and Sachin, but even oldie Damodar!- more than 2 decades ago, her own Baba had agreed to get her, such a beautiful young dashing girl 😆 married to that Bewda!!! Really what was in these Deshmukh men, she wondered.🤣🤣🤣

Dashing Deshmukh Men☺️😍

Nice part Niki!!

Btw, happy diwali!! How was ur diwali?😃

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#934

@rad4dev: Hi! I'm glad you like the story and even more pleased to know that you visualise the characters and the plot exactly the way I wanted readers to see it- Manav as a hero, Archana as helpless (as of now), Tarun as a steady friend, and Shravani as a manipulated girl who is very weak in love.

@Kavitha Di: Hi! Glad you liked the part! Well, guess how Sachin's track will proceed.

@lunza: Manav Archana eloping?

Lunza, you know how much of an ArMan fan I am... you think I will let them divorce even??? Abhi to FF mein ganpati puja is also approaching..😉

Hmmm... messy... as in confusing, or as in dirty???

After 2 parts, the 'mess' will start clearing. But I don't want to keep you hanging on false hopes- so let me tell in advance that the mess will clear to a large extent before Varsha makes a re-entry in the scenario. A good couple shouldn't need a third person to solve their problems- Manav and Archana will solve their problems by THEMSELVES.

@Sid: Absolutely, its the 'Dashing Deshmukhs' all the way. 😉 and the eldest Deshmukh son is my favourite🤗

Had a lovely Diwali with my family. Going back to hostel tomorrow.

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bhavini thanki

@bhavni88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#935

hi..belated happy diwali and sal mubarak...hope you had fun..

great update..

looking forward to the next part..

ps where r u in gujerat??

my parents and in-laws r in porbandar....😉

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toothbrush13

@toothbrush13

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Posted: 14 years ago

#936

Originally posted by: nikitagmc
Really what was in these Deshmukh men, she wondered.

Come on, it's obviously the smell. She must have become too used to it by now, but we all know it's the magic secret to driving all the ladies wild.

😆

Awesome job Nikita, on both of the recent parts. Your alternatives were quite convincing actually, but I look forward to seeing how you sort out the situations you have built up. Keep it up!

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Shikha

@lunza

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Posted: 14 years ago

#937

Messy .. as in complicated ...
The families are already planning their second wedding ...

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#938

@Bhavni: Thanks! I live in Jamnagar with my parents, and study in Mumbai.

@TB: Oh yes, the smell!!! 😆 I completely forgot about it.

@lunza: Let their families keep planning. As long as Manav Archu don't say yes, it doesn't amount to anything.

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#939

@nidhi: Thanks! Kya baat hai, bahut din baad dikhe aap?

Edited the time line part at the end of the part on Pg. 122. Sorry yaaron, I forgot a minor thing in my own story... blooper ho gaya😆

Edited by nikitagmc - 14 years ago