Perspective ..... A Battle Within - Page 3

Originally posted by: khushi4eva

Wow...You are an excellent writer....Gosh I would die to be that creative in my literature writing.....You decribed the emotions of the character better than the actual writer of the show...You Rock!!!!! Loved it <3

Originally posted by: piya007

Excellent 'Perspective'.........U hve made me fall in luv wid Manav all over again...wat a generous soul.....even after goin thru hell.....he's still truly, madly, deeply in luv wid his wife....maybe this is wat true luv is...it sustains against all odds.

Originally posted by: dilwar

Seems as if you are living the characters...quite natural...hats off

Originally posted by: lotus1963

excellent as always skep. true perspectives all of them. perspectives from all angles and apt titles.

Hope the creatives read these and give true depth to all the characters.

I ll catch up now only with your writings. It will be more worth my while.

Take care skeppie dearest.

Padma

Originally posted by: mitts

I really love it.... I guess the CV's have forgotten how this character was... U reminded me wat was Manav n how his mind worked... HO was his love for his wife... Its really gr8 to have u writing for u... Thxx a lot.. Do keep writing...

Originally posted by: kshre25

OMG you are making it so hard not to fall in love with this totally fictional guy. .....Sweetie I know what dreamers like you are made of 😉.......Manav could commit murder in tomorrows episode of PR and i'd be like he's so amazing! (drool drool drool) Hahahaha !!! 😆
I love your writing (i know i've said that already) I honeslty just don't have the words like you do to express how awesome these are. Looking forward to more!

Originally posted by: Tanyaz

Excellent , brilliant .I was getting frustrated with Manav and was sort of giving up on him but your writing makes me see his plight in a different light.

He is desperate for her , isn't he?

But this battle wihin ................

I don't know what will happen but one thing for sure , your understanding of these characters is just perfect.

Originally posted by: *Resham*

Skep..if the makers could take ur points..wouldnt tht be interesting...

Mindblowing again...keep it up!!

Originally posted by: GHT_ArMan

all i can say Cratives need to read ur writing...u r Awesome buddy...awww my poor Manav...........i was in tears in da last part😭just luv ur writing...Hats Off yaar👏

Originally posted by: ~*Thamizhan*~

Excellent work, skep!👏 Can't wait to read your next update.. is it going to be Sulo or Savi?