Perspective ..... A Battle Within - Page 2

Excellent , brilliant .I was getting frustrated with Manav and was sort of giving up on him but your writing makes me see his plight in a different light.

Skep..if the makers could take ur points..wouldnt tht be interesting...

all i can say Cratives need to read ur writing...u r Awesome buddy...awww my poor Manav...........i was in tears in da last part😭just luv ur writing...Hats Off yaar👏

The last part got to me as well, where he keeps repeating Archana , Archana....omg how very very sad . 😭 You are doing a better job than the entire team of creatives.

Excellent work, skep!👏 Can't wait to read your next update.. is it going to be Sulo or Savi?

Originally posted by: ~*Thamizhan*~

Excellent work, skep!👏 Can't wait to read your next update.. is it going to be Sulo or Savi?

Originally posted by: toothbrush13

Wow!!! That was amazing, I doubt that any one of the actual makers of the show understand the character of Manav that much.

I hope they show Manav realizing all of this in the show as well.

Great job! 👏

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

I don't really know what to say... you've described Manav's state of mind so well... and the title is so apt- 'the battle within'... he desperately wants her back.. but his wounds are so deep that he doesn't even want to try now...

Excellent is all I can say!!!

Originally posted by: h&rblock

Amazing as always Skep - love the way you detail each person's feelings...makes us feel with them...