Perspective ..... A Battle Within

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Tanyaz

@Tanyaz

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Excellent , brilliant .I was getting frustrated with Manav and was sort of giving up on him but your writing makes me see his plight in a different light.

He is desperate for her , isn't he?

But this battle wihin ................

I don't know what will happen but one thing for sure , your understanding of these characters is just perfect.

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*Resham*

@*Resham*

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Skep..if the makers could take ur points..wouldnt tht be interesting...

Mindblowing again...keep it up!!

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GHT_ArMan

@GHT_ArMan

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

all i can say Cratives need to read ur writing...u r Awesome buddy...awww my poor Manav...........i was in tears in da last part😭just luv ur writing...Hats Off yaar👏

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Tanyaz

@Tanyaz

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

The last part got to me as well, where he keeps repeating Archana , Archana....omg how very very sad . 😭 You are doing a better job than the entire team of creatives.

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271043

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Excellent work, skep!👏 Can't wait to read your next update.. is it going to be Sulo or Savi?

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ~*Thamizhan*~
Excellent work, skep!👏 Can't wait to read your next update.. is it going to be Sulo or Savi?

Oooh... please Sulochana.. please... waiting eagerly for this one...

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pennu

@pennu

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

No words to praise Skep... you write everything sooo delicatly dear.... loved the way you to precaped the whole story thru his thought... wow.. great... and the last part where he was repeating Archna... it took my heart out dear... Excellent....

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: toothbrush13
Wow!!! That was amazing, I doubt that any one of the actual makers of the show understand the character of Manav that much.

I hope they show Manav realizing all of this in the show as well.

Great job! 👏

The storyline has many potholes in it. I am just trying to make some sense of the senseless ................. 😉

@ pink

I sincerely hope so too. 😕

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

I don't really know what to say... you've described Manav's state of mind so well... and the title is so apt- 'the battle within'... he desperately wants her back.. but his wounds are so deep that he doesn't even want to try now...

Excellent is all I can say!!!

This what I hope he is going through. I don't want just anger oozing out of him. He has to realise that he still loves her and regret his decision. His decision........... 🤢