ArMan in Switzerland ( Aakhri Lamhe/Pg-8) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
@Satyamdas : Wow, back to back updates.. good! I always wait for your stories eagerly...Excellent as always!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
excellent. m likd da part whr the swiss kastiwala speaks paise mile to hindi gaane bhi ga sakte hain🤣. a true romantic trip it's been. hope diz stories keep coming till PR is on Zee TV. prolong the swiss trip. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gd 1 SD, waiting fr yr 'children park' ep.......just a req...wen Manav-Archu reach Mumbai....do something similar on Mumbai's local train as well since both hve wonderful encounters there 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wowwwwww Great!!!!!! 👏 👏
U are superb in writing and i really like way u add BT thing in ur story.....
very time i read it makes me kind of restless that i have to wait for next part...
do something similar of Arman scenes with rain as we know that Manav and Archu saw each other for the first time in rain and it's typically BT type
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
You stories are not only funny but this time it was very very romantic, especially this part
Sun peeping out of the mountains and spreading its golden rays is just telling everyone that it's time for love.

And the funniest part was when Archu says how come a Swiss guy is singing Italian song.🤣 This was really good SD. Keep it up.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haha that was really good SatyamDas !! so cute nd so "romantic" .. 😆 .. I also like the background lnes such as BT music nd all .. it ws perfect
eagerly waiting for the next part, can't wait to know what happens at the children park .. 😳
ohh btw once they r in Mumbai, give the rain nd train an important part to play as well 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you all for these lovable comments and valuable suggestions. Certainly writing is not my profession. Its your comments that inspire me to write the next. Hope this silsila continues.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part-6

Archana takes Manav to a children park. Cute children and their parents are enjoying out there. Perhaps ArMan are the only couple who don't have a child accompanying them.

Manav- Are Archana kahan le aayi yeh?

Archu- kya buraai hai is jagah mein dekho. Kitne achhe phool khile hain aur kaise kaise games hain bachhon keliye

Manav- tum games khelogi?

Archu- hato ji. Meri thodi na umer hai bachhon ke sath park mein khelne keliye. Main to unhe khelte hue dekhungi.

Manav- jahan tak mujhe yaad hai hum honeymoon keliye aaye the

Archu- offo!!!! Aapko bas 24 hr usi baat ki padi hai.

Manav- Kaun si baat

Archu- wohi jo aapko sab se pasand hai.

Manav- par kya?

Archu- offo..jyada bhole mat bano…

Manav- par jab tak tum bataogi nahin main samjhunga kaise

Archu- thik hai aaj raat ko main neeche letungi aap bed pe so jana

Manav- are aisa mat karna

Archu- ab pata chala aapko kya pasand hai sab se

Manav- ( hasne lagta hai) tumhe pasand nahin?

Archu- bachhon ke park mein aake yeh gandi batein karna aapko achha lagta hai Manav?

Manav- par yahan samjhega kaun?

Archu- yaad hai kastiwala kaise hindi mein bol raha tha?

(park mein kuch bachhe has uthte hain)

Manav- hey bhgwan inhe bhi hindi pata hai kya

Archana- dheere bolo jo bolna hai

Manav- main puch raha tha tumhe woh pasand nahin hai kya?

Archana- Kya?

Manav- are woh jis ki baat tum kar rahi thi. Jo mujhe pasand hai.

Archana- main bhul gayi main kya mean kar rahi thi. Aap bata do na

Manav- (dimaag pak jata hai. Kitni pakau biwi hai uski) tum na bachhon ka khel dekho

(Archana ke mann mein khayal aata hai woh kab maa banegi)

Archana- Manav

Manav- bolo

Archana- aap ko bachhe achhe lagte hain?

Manav- bachhe bhi bhala kisi ko bure lag sakte hain

Archana- main keh rahi thi ki

Manav- kisi bachhe se baat karna chahti ho…jao dekho koi Hindustani bachha mil jaye to

Archana- are nahin na

Manav-to phir kya?

Archana- aap samajhte kyon nahin

Manav- is baar to na samjhun to hi behtar hai ( jan jata hi ki archana child plan ki baat kar rahi hai. Saath rehne ke 7 din bhi nahin hue aur abhi se child! Use kam se kam 1 saal taak baap nahin banna)

Archana- Kya matlab hai aapka?

Manav- yehi ki tum se kam dimaag daudta hai mera

Archana- aap samjho na main kya keh rahi hun

Manav- tumne kuch abhi kaha bhi hai jo main samjhun?

Archana- offffffffffffo…nahin aapko bina kahe hi samajhna padega nahin to main aap se baat nahin karungi

Manav- yeh lo!!! Maine kya kiya. Mujhe bas seedhe seedhe bol do kya chahiye

Archana- bachha chahiye…

Manav- bola to tha dekho koi Hindustani bachha hoga usse jake baat karo ya kisi bhi bachhe ke sath khelo

Archana- jyada bano mat aap. Mujhe apna bachha chahiye

Manav- ab kahan se lake doon tumhe apna bachha

Archana- kahan se aayega aur kaise aayega jaise aapko nahin pata

Manav- matlab abhi se bachhe ka plan!!!

Archana- aapko bachhe achhe nahin lagte

Manav- lagte hain..par doosron ke

Archana- chup karo. aap aise honge mujhe pata nahin tha

(Ekta ka phone aata hai BT officials ko jo online monitor kar rahe hain is episode ko. " kya abhi tak koi gaana nahin bajaya tum logo ne. mere serial ki TRP ghatati ja rahi hai. Officials bolte hain kya Karen madam ji..woh log jhagad rahe hain. Kya gaana bajayen? Ekta ji bolti hain- mujhe kuch nahin pata agar naukri bachani hai to jaldi gaana bajao)

Manav- tumhe nahin lagta tum bewajeh naraz ho rahi ho? Itni jaldi bachha kahan se laayen. Bachhe to bhagwan ki den hote hain. Mere tumhare haath mein thodi na hain.

Archana- bhagwan kya karega jab aap hi nahin chahoge

Manav- maine kya nahin kiya kya nahin chaha ( itne dino baad Archu ko chhedne ka mauka mila hai chhodega nahin aaj manav)

Archana- aap natak kam karo. Suno main sach kehti hun main tumse baat nahin kaarungi. Good Bye.

( Archana naraz hoke wahan se jane lagti hai. Manav isi mauke ki talash mein tha Archana ko aaj khub chhedega. Aaj tak buddhu banati aa rahi hai use woh. Archu ke pichhe pichhe jata hai woh)

( BT wale yeh wala mauka haath se nahin jane dete. Aakhir kar naukri ka sawal hai. Gaan bajta hai. Kaanchi re kaanchi re preet meri saachi ruk ja na ja dil tod ke..)

(Archana ab jyada bhag nahin pati park ke ek kone mein jake baith jai hai. Manav wahin aake baith jata hai)

Manav- Archana bachhe ho jayenge..ab thoda hum ek doosre ko samajh to le

Archana- 3 saal ho gaye shaadi ko..kya kya nahi ho gaya hum dono mein

Manav- par jo karne se bachhe hote hain woh to bahut kam hua na hum dono mein

Archana- aap duniya ke sab se bade bure insaan ho

Manav- (hasne lagta hai)

Archana- maze le rahe ho na…dekho agar jaldi tumne apna mind change nahin kiya na..main aai baba ke paas chali janungi fir baithe rehna apne ghar aur garage mein

Manav- are aisa mat kaho

Archana- kyon na kahun? Aap ek baat sunte ho kya meri. Shaadi ho gayi kab ki. Ab ek bachha chahiye. Kuch galat keh rahi hun kya

Manav- main ab baap banne keliye mentally ready nahin hun

Archana- achha!! yeh baat hai. Matlab aapko bas enjoy karne se matlab hai. Aap ko to live in relationship karni chahiye thi

Manav.-Tum uskeliye tayaar hoti to wohi kar leta tumhare sath

Archana- Aap kitne bure ho Manav

Manav- phir bhi tumhara hun

Archana- aap aise manoge nahin ( Manav ke seene se lag jati hai) man jao na

Manav- ek saal baad Archana

Archana- tab tak meri jaan chali jayegi

Manav- oho baba…chalo jaisa tum kaho

Archana- mere achhe Manav..

Manav- abhi yeh bura aadmi achha ho gaya..par karna kya hai yeh to batao

Archana- chup karo gande

Manav- bolo to

Archana- Aap ko pata hai kya karna hai

Manav- kahan karne deti ho jo mujhe chahiye

Archana- Aap bas apna muh band rakho. Jo karna hai main karungi aaj se. ab chalo room pe. Kaafi der ho gayi hai.

( dono aise hi ladte rehte hain. No solution comes out. Dono room ke aur jate hain. Plz don't ask me aaj ki raat kya hone wala hai dono mein.)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
That was wonderful! I loved the little BT part too.
The live-in relationship part was really funny, infact once in an SBS (or something similar) segment Sushant was saying that on the show he would like have a live-in relationship with Archana after they get divorced. 😆
This was really great though, I'm looking forward to your next installment/creation!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Keep these naughty posts flow satyam das...i really like your posts.....

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