ArMan in Switzerland ( Aakhri Lamhe/Pg-8) - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Satyam das if Ekta adds atleast half of ur naughtiness then PR trp will go very high 😆
I kind of like these naughty Arman
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Manav is so naughty.. love your writings Satyamdas.. keep them coming..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awww such a cute part😍...luved BT part too😆u r d best👏..kee posting yaar👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you all.
Thinking of an emotional end to the swiss trip. Let's see when I get the time to pen it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Another gem frm u SD....u dnt surprise me nymore...always luk frwrd to yr post to hve some fun n relax after a hard days work n u provide that without even asking...thnx as always.😎
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Posted: 15 years ago
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So Manav finally gets his revenge by Teasing Archu. 😆 In all other posts he was made ullu by Archu. Like always, had fun reading this one.😉
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🤣 that BT bit was tto funny ... and the rest of it was minblowing ...i cant wait for the next installment .... keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: satyamdas

Thank you all.

Thinking of an emotional end to the swiss trip. Let's see when I get the time to pen it.



gr8 work SD. full entertainment package u hav. m waitin 4 d emotional climax 2 da honeymoon. u r gud at comedy n romance. waitin 4 emotinal treatment of urs.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Good work.
Waiting for the next episode.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Switzerland ke Aakhri Lamhe

As discussed earlier, Archu and Manav visited many beautiful places but preferred to stay the last 2 days in the hotel room. The reason was obvious. It is their last night and tomorrow morning they have the flight. Both get emotional about this that a beautiful honeymoon trip has come to an end.

(Both are silent. Manav bed pe leta hua hai aur Archu kapdon ko bag mein dal rahi hai)

Archu- Manav..aap kuch bol kyon nahin rahe ho

Manav- kuch nahin bas aise hi

Archu- pichhle ek ghante se aap chup chap lete ho bed pe

Manav- nahin bas soch raha tha kitne achhe the yeh 7 din'koi tension nahin koi jimmedari nahin..bas ghumte raho'yeh jo pal tumhare sath bitaye yeh bahut hi anmol the..kaash yeh kabhi khatam nahi hote

Archu- ( emotional ho jati hai par Manav ka mood change karne keliye kehti hai) are baba..hum thodi na juda ho rahe hain pagal'aur phir bhul gaye hum pati patni hai..

Manav- par yeh honeymoon wale din khatam ho gaye na..do baara laut ke kabhi nahin aayenge apne paas'har ek pal har ek lamha jo gujar raha hai'woh aanewala nahin..samajh rahi ho na

Archu- are kya dikkat hai aap ko..thodi na waqt ko hum rok ke rakh sakte hain?

Manav- wohi to keh raha hun..kal kya hoga yeh humen pata nahin..aur aaj aur abhi ke yeh pal bas haath se niklate ja rahe hain

Archu- ( sab samajh rahi hai par she wants to make manav happy) kya aap bhi philosophy jhadne lage'kaafi boring hai Manav yeh baatein

Manav- Archana mujhe lagta hai tumhare sath jitne bhi pal bitaun woh kam hai'aisa lagta hai bas tumhe dekhte rahun..aur mera dekhna kabhi khatam na ho

Archu- haan dekhte rehna apni biwi ko..mana kisne kiya aapko

Manav- par yeh hamesha keliye nahin ho sakta na ( manav ki aankhon mein aansoo)

Archu- (manav ko gale laga leti hai) yeh kya keh rahe ho aap..shaadi ki hai aapse maine'ab kuch bhi ho jaye aapko chhod ke kahin nahin jaungi'bas maut mujhe aapse judaa kar sakti hai ( ab archu bhi ro rahi hai)

Manav- nahin archana'hum dono mein se agar koi ek chala jata hai doosre ko chhodke..uska kya hoga

Archu- ( speechless now)

Manav- tumhe main itna pyar kyon karta hun?

Archu- kyon ki main bhi aapse utna pyar karti hun. Par yeh chhodne ki baat kyon kar rahe ho aap..kya ho gaya aapko

Manav- ek na ek din sabhi ko jana hai..par pata nahin mujhe tumhare liye jeene ko mann karta hai..lagta hai bas hum kabhi bhi alag na ho

Archu- nahin honge alag..wada raha

Manav- par un cheezon ko ka kya jo hamare hath mein nahin..agar main pehle chala gaya to tum kaise jiyogi mere bina..

( Archana kas ke Manav ko apne seene se laga leti hai aur apne aur uske aansoo ko rokne ki koshish kar rahi hai but in vain)

( Ekta Ji bhi aaj aansoo rok nahin pa rahi hain in dono ka pyar dekh kar. Aaj woh apne pasand ka gaana play karti hain'

Sau baar janam lenge sau baar fanaa honge..aye jaan- e-wafa phir bhi hum tum na judaa honge)

Archana- manav bahut ho gaya aap ka rona..ab meri kasam jo roye to

Manav- ( aansoo band ho jate hain yeh sunke)

Archana- wais eek baat batao mujhe itna hi pyar karoge jab main buddhi ho jaungi

Manav- tume sak hai kya

Archana- are nahin mere achhe manav. Waise ab 2-3 hr ke baad yahan se chale jayenge hum. Kyon na is pal ko yaadgar bana de

Manav- kaise

Archana- wohi jo aapko pasand hai woh karke..

Manav- ( thoda muskarata hai)

Archana- arey wah.. mere Manav hasne lage!!! Bas yehi ek baat hai jo aapko hamesha khush rakhti hai. Bade gande ho aap.

Manav- Ji

Archana- (has uthati hai) aap ko bhi pata hai mujhe kaise chheda jaye

(dono ek doosre ke gale lag jate hain aur batti bujha dete hain. Aage kya hota hai woh aap ko pata hai. Just imagine. )

Sorry this time there was no fun in the story, but wait for the never ending Mumbai Episodes. I will be going to Mumbai soon for some work. Hope this trip gives me some ideas for the next stories.

Cheers

SD

Edited by satyamdas - 15 years ago

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