Knowing you............ArMan...UpDt....Pg4........ - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Leo yaar, is that you!?!?!? I can tell from the writing style it is!!! What with people changing their usernames now a days!?!?! =S lol

I'll read and comment soon!! Promise!!! YAY!! The wonders of ff and one-shots is here!!!! *does a little jig* lol I'm planning on writing a one-shot soon as well.... after my exams though!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok, just read the two parts!! Gosh hun, love how you write!! It always so dramatic and your dialogues are always very very good!!
Can't wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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updated my comment
wow u changed ur username i barely noticed it
premleomanav😳 nice username
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx black daughter....glad u enjoyed both parts.......Yaa I changed my username............U liked it?...........Well.........Glad u enjoyed it dear....and even more to have u here toooooooooooo............it feels soooooooooooooo great!................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx pooji....glad u liked it dear...and well...........i left u speechless...........that's a BIG complement for me dear.............hope u enjoy the next part too..............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Manav replies innocently--- Kya farak padhtaa hai.chaata hii toh hai?...............

Varun replies--- Chaatey se nahiin mere bhai…………..chaatey waali se toh farak padhtaa hai………..chal chod………..yeh bataa dikhney mein kaisi thi?..................................😆

A slight smile crosses Manav's face as he begins almost dreamily---- Bahot khoobsurat thi……….usski aankhon mein mainne kayi sapney sajey hue dekhey………usski nazron mein mainne..hazaaron ArMan sajtey dekhey………..(Hope u all relies why I used this word)…………usskey chehre par.ek masoomiyat sii thi…aur uss masoom chere par…jaise usski dil kii achchai…..raunak bikher rahi thi!.................😳

Manav says further as he stops in midway…while there Archana walks to where he was standing---- Baarish kii har boond jaise usse choona chahti thi……….jo bood choo leti ussey khud par guroor hota….aur joy un hii gir jaati…ussey ek afsos!..............Vo mere saamney thi….aur main………..usse dekhtaa reh gaya………….na kuch kaha……….na kuch poochaa…………pata nahiin kya ho gaya tha mujhe?..................😊❤️

Varun replies teasingly---- main bataata hoon tujhe kya ho gaya tha……aur kya ho gaya hai…………mere bhai…mere dost……….u r in luv with her!...............Lekin abb tu usse dhoondey gaa kaise?.............

Manav replies---- Pata naiin……….waise kismet ne hummein itni baar ek doosrey ke saamney laakar khadaa kiya hai………shaayad iss baar phir…………..😊

U see Archana walking past Manav but he doesnot see her!..............

Manav looks up taken aback……..just as he notices a gir walking on the road in the dark…………the girl who had just walked past him and Manav had not seen her…………Lekin abb he could see was walking lost in her own thoughts as a car was speeding towards her!..................👏

Manav runs after her at full speed…………just as the car approached her…he pushes her and taking her with him……….the two land up on the ground…………..

The car sped away……….while Manav looked at the girl………..as her hair blew across her face!...........😊

The two get up….and as Archana moved away her long hair from her face….manav said almost scolding her---- Yeh kya tareeka hai sadak par chalney kaa…………vo..vo gaadi waala maar jaata…………kab se vo horn bajaa raha tha…..aur aap apney hii khayaalon mein khyi hui thi!.................⭐️

Archu looks up with tears in her eyes…………and Manav too realized it was the same girl………….

He looked at her in utter shock!.............Once again he ended up gazing at her……….not knowing at all as to what to say!....................😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx dear............Next part asap...........😊

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