My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 28

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Thanks yaar... 🤗

Confession kw liye abhi time hai...

No 💔 keep it fast plz

Part 17

Minni was waiting for Neil since a long time …she was just pacinghere and there in the drawing room….now and then minni goes to the door andchek if neil has come or to check whether the calling bell is workingproperly….and arya was playing with her football all over the house and wasasking minni to come and play with her…but mini was just pinned near the doorand waiting fr neil..

A. ufffo ver Balika…neil aa jayega..aao na khelte hai…

M. chutanki…mujhe nahi khelna yaar…tum khelo na….

Both the sisters were busy in arguing that they dint notice neilcoming inside….he saw them fighting over something but thought of just going intohis room and he was going when minni got a glance of him and stopped him bycoming into his way…

M. Tum aa gaye…

A. khada to hai…aise kyun pooch rahi ho…

M. chutanki chup …ah ne..

N. Mini I am tired …I need some rest ..kal subah nikalna hai nacourt ke liye…

M. ah..sure…but khana to ka lo…

N. nahi rehne do….bhook nahi hai..

M. please kha lo…humne bhi nahi khaya…

A. haw…sirf tumne nahi khaya veer Balika meine kha liya….

M. haa…wo hi…please chalo lets have dinner…

N. par minni…

A. Please neil kha lo…veer Balika tumhare liye wait kar rahi thi…

Hearing to Arya neil looked at minni who was standing with a puppyface…

N. thik hai…I will change and come…

Arya says that she is sleepy and want to sleep…mini insists her tostay till they complete their dinner but arya was adamant the she will sleepand lefts for her room…minni taking advantage of the situation arranges thetable for both of them upstairs…she decorates the table with flowers andscented candles she dims the light and plays a soft music…the arrangementsmakes neil stunned…by now neil got to know that minni wants to pacify him forwhatever happened in the evening…though he was angry on her that she dint trusthim enough with her heart but now gradually he started enjoying her antcs…firstwaiting for him at the door, then waiting for him for dinner aand then this….hewas now a bit refreshed and in a naughty mood and want to tease minni more…justwhen he was about to say he got one more shock…he saw minni coming out of herroom and was statued by her as she dawned knee lengthed red gown…she waslooking stunning in that dress..neil really needed some time to come out to hissenses…he gulped and cleared his chocke throat

N. Ah…I dint knew that it was a date…mini madam…

This made minni also red like her dress and was patted herselfmentally that she made him come out oof his sulking mood finally…

M. who agar koi naraz hai to thodi mehnat karni padegi na…

N. oh to tumhe pata tha ki mein naraz hoon…good…

Minni came closer to him and held his hand…

M. Neil I know I have hurt you…but…

N. ya but….

M. Neil…wo…

N. ha wo…

M. Neil…

N. Yes mini…

M. ah…

N. That u don’t trust me right…

M. no neil…aisa nahi hai…trust me…

N. really minni…ok then do what I wanted u to do…

M. Neil..u know that right the why do u want me to do…

N. kyunki mein tumhe apne insecurities se bahar nikalna chahtahoon minni…

Minni makes him sit on the sofa and sits beside him holding hishand….

M. Neil yeh tum bhi jaante ho mein bhi jaanti hun infact sabjaante hai jo bhi hai humare beech….u can call it anything but the fact is youare my life …

N. but…

M. neil let me complete please…dekho neil I know tum yeh sochtehho ki I don’t trust you but ais nahi hai…I trust you more than anyone…be itwith arya be it with restaurant or ……be it with us…but neil…mere liye its notthat easy to accept a relationship…I do want to but somehow mujhe na mera darrrokta hai…see I am not asking to e like this forever but I need some time tocome out my insecurities….and trut me jis din mein is sabse bahar aa jaungi Iwill be the one to say this out loud….

Now neil was confused by her confession , he was thinking aboutall that he thought since morning….minni broke his thoughts …

M. I know tumhe yeh sab complicated lagta hoga but kya karu meinhoon complicated….i just need some time to take this all ahead…

Neil tightened his grip on her hand and said…

N. I will wait minni….

M. sach…

N. yes…I just wanted you to understand that nt everything shouldbe unsaid….and tumhe samajh aaya and u said ur heart out…mein intezaar karungaus din ka jab tum khud se mujhse bologi…and trust me that day will be the mostbeatuful day of my life…

Mini was happy that neil understood her dialemma…

N. wise subah se mere dimag ko itna kaam diya tumne to need to release it stress now…

M. matlab…

Neil changes the song and asks minn for a dance…minni extemds herhand for the dance but was shocked to hear the song…infact a sensous song…

Kitni bechain hoke tumse mili
Kitni bechain hoke tumse mili
Tumko kya thi khabar thi main kitni akeli
[Haan.. haan! Haan.. haan!
Haan.. haan! Haan.. haan haan

He reaches her shoulder while kissingher hand making minni shiver….he nuzzles her neck an places kisses on her neckand ears….which makes minni more crazy and she just tyrns and hugs him…

Ke kitni mohabbat hai tumse?
Zara paas aake to dekho
Kya aag hai dhadkanon mein?
Gale se laga ke to dekho
Bataai na jaaye zubaan se yeh haalat
Mere jism-o-jaan ko tumhaari hai chahat
Kitna bechain hoke tumse mila
Kitna bechain hoke

They just takes steps hugging each other…and minniplaying with his t shirt buttons which maks him more aroused and he rubs herbare hands and turn her in way that her back touchs his chest…

Jo Hai Darmiyaan Ek Parda
Ise Jaaneman Ab Hata De
Yehi Faasle Keh Rahe Hain
Chalo Dooriyon Ko Mita De
Na Koyi Tamanna Hai, Na Koyi Hasrat
Mujhe To Sanam Hai Tumhari Zaroorat
Kitna Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mila
Kitna Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mila

He again nuzzles int her neck andthey dance like this for some time then he makes her turn towards him …he cupsher face and says….

N. Minni I love you….

Minni was overwhelmed thatshe couldn’t stop her tears coming out of her eyes…neil kissed her eyes and lickedthose tears on her face…

N. U know I cant see u crying right….andmeine confess kiya hai to tumpe koi zabardasti nahi tum apna time leke mujheapna acceptance dena…

Minni just nodded her head whileclosing her eyes…neil couldn’t control himself seeing her innocent face that hejust wanted to claim her lips…he kissed those lips like never before…hesavoured her flavour….they broke their kiss when neil phone ranged…

Neil was shocked to see the caller….

M. Kya hua koun hai…

N. Ritwik…

That’s it guys….bohut lamba ho gaya…

This was Mineil . simply loved it . Their date ,dance and that song😉 it's made for MiNeil . Mini asked for time and it's her .She got her strong reasons and Niel confessed his feelings. I could see SouNoor here .

So cute Mineilian style...

Originally posted by: Krithzz

This was Mineil . simply loved it . Their date ,dance and that song😉 it's made for MiNeil . Mini asked for time and it's her .She got her strong reasons and Niel confessed his feelings. I could see SouNoor here .

Thanks kritzz... 🤗

Yeah aajkal sirf imagine hi karna pad raha hai....

Originally posted by: sou-miya

So cute Mineilian style...

Thanks dear... 🤗

Originally posted by: sub_94

No 💔 keep it fast plz

Ha Ha... Half. Confession hua hai... Half thode der baad...😆

Lata ☺️why did you end this so early ? It was beautiful. Mini trying to make Neil happy . Remembered that pizza scene and Neil teasing her and song🤣our favourite ☺️that tension between them🔥and Neil couldn't control and confessed it and Mini madam in typical trying to be controlled mood 😆and that kiss seal at end ☺️

Precap Ritwik 🤣plz let him take away that haddifest 🤢soon.🤣

Too good lata..

Neil ne toh confess kar dia but y mini taking time.. jaldi karwado confessions.

Waiting for next update.

So good this was .So like you said half confession is done😆 but tigress will not confess it soon .I liked this😉