My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 15

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Update soon😳

Will do it today.... 👍🏼

Part 11

N. Arey aayiye na kyun wahi khade hai....

Minni was still in shock.... She was just seeing it the person standing at the door.... Meanwhile Neil goes. To the person and gets him in... All this while Minni and the man were just staring at each other...

N. Aap jake fresh ho jayiye.... Minni get a towel MA.. Wo meri bike ki vajah se kichad poora inke shirt pe chit gaya.... Minni... Minni....

He held her shoulder and shrugged her which made Minni to come out of her shock.... And she just uttered one word...

M. Pappa ji...

Neil was now shocked to hear this.... He can see that even Ashok was just standing still....

N. Minni yeh tumhare papa ji hai kya.... I am. Sorry I dint knew him. Na so....

M. That's okay Neil.... Aap kya kar rahe hai yaha Mr. Ashok Khurana...

Minni. Had a storm inside but she shrugged off all and just asked him a straight question...

M. Boliye.... Why are here now....

A. Minni beta... Wo mein apne business ke kaam se aaya tha India....

M. Oh yeah..of course... Aap apne kaam se aaye honge... Mein bhi kya pagal hoon to ask such question....

A. Wo mein patiala tum logo ke liye hi aaya tha... Socha tum sabse mil loon ek baar... Hanuman singh aur babita ke jaane ke baad socha tha bohut baar but Ho nahi paya....

Hearing Babita and hanuman name... Mini remembered that arya was standing there itself... Before she can say anything arya asked....

Ar. Aap veerbalika ke papa ji Ho...

M. Chutanki... Andar jao...please...

N. Haa choti madam let's go come...

Ar. Ek minute.... Batayiye na....

Ashok bent to arya height and said...

A. Haa... Aur aap...

Ar. Mein hanuman singhji air babita ki chori hun...

M. Sirf tum akeli nahi chutanki...hum dono.... Ab tum jao... Homework Karo... Mein bas abhi aati hun... OK...

Ar. Thik hai.... Par jaldi aana... Aur uncle aap kahi nahi jaana... Neil na bohut acha khana banata hai... Khake jaana... Dadu beeji to pind gaye hai na....

Ashok could only smile at arya innocence...

M. Aapse Milne ke liye yaha koi nahi hai... Please go...

A. Bas ek baar tumse baat karni hai... Please... Mein phir chala jaunga...

M. Ab aapko kya baat karni hai.... In paanch saalon mein aapne kabhi call bhi kiya...

A. Meine hanuman singh ko letter bheji thi... Wo..uska koi jawab hi nahi aaya to mujhe call karne ki himmat nahi thi

M. Oh yes letter... Aapne kabhi yeh socha ki us letter ka reply kyun nahi aaya aapko...

A. Socha matlab.... Tum mujhse naraaz ho ki shayad tumhe Uska jawab dena bhi pasand nahi tha....

M. Yehi to problem hai aapki... Aap San this sochte hai.... But actual baat jaanne me koi interest nahi hota.... Khair chodo... Aap ab jayiye... Please...

N. Minni... Yeh kaise baat kar rahi Ho tum...

M. Neil... Tumhe inke baare me Kuch nahi pata... Please don't take his side...

N. Come on Minni, I am not going against u... And haa mein inke baare mein nahi jaanta but itna jaanta hun ki he is ur father and he has come to meet u... Aur kahin aur rukne ke liye he don't know anyone else... Naeeim bi bhi nahi hai.... Let him stay her for tonight na...

M. Neil... Please... No... Samjho baat ko...

N. understand the situation Minni.... Acha Papa ji nahi at least we can help him to stay here just thinking as a stranger...

Minni knows Neil was right but she can't take that man in the Havel but finally she have to give up to Neil....

M. Tum nahi manoge na... Karo jo karna hai... But I am telling u Neil oberoi I want this man out of my house in the morning.....u get it....

Saying that Minni just went to her room...

N. Mr. Khurana... Aap chaliye mere saath... Freshen up... Them we will have dinner....

A. No... Let it be... Minni comfortable nahi hai... I will. Leave... Mein kisi hotel me ruk jaunga...

N. See mr Khurana... Mini ka gussa jayaz hai but we can't let you go like this at this time and ab is waqt aapko room milna bhi mushkil hoga... Please come...

A. Thank you...

N. Aap yaha dadu beeji air Minni we Milne aaye hai to itna to kar sakte hai hum...

A. Wo mein isiliye thanks kaha bcoz u convinced Minni about me staying here... I know Minni ko convince karna asaan nahi hai... Babita batati thi...

N. Mr Khurana meine sirf humanity grounds pe Minni ko convince Kia hai... Please don't think that i m ok with whatever u have done to Minni and her babes.... Chaliye I will show u the room...

Neil have shown him the room to freshen up... Ashok have got his luggage at he came to patiala for two days...

N. Aap frsh Ho jayiye... Will meet for dinner....

Ashok was wondering that who is this guy who can actually control Minni anger so easily just like Babita and hanuman.... He is bothered about her at the same time he don't let her do anything in anger.... Ashok thought of checking with naieem bi about him in the morning.... As he knows if he asks anything to Neil Minni will not tolerate....

That's it guys... Hope u like it...

Going great .So our guess was right it's Ashok. Update soon next part .Want to see Ashok ,Mini and Ashok Meil conversation also. I like Ashok 😆

Bahut badhiya

Toh papaji ji entry ho gayi

I am waiting for this track in the show also

Bahut achha hone wala hai ye track

Aur tumne bhi bahut achha likha hai

Interesting update lata. Main na ashok k baremein bhul hi gayi thi. I want to know ab ashok kyun aya h, n as far as I know mini ne ashok k ek letter ko jala dia tha. Ye wohi letter h na. I don't know if ashok loves his daughter. 😲🤔❓

Plz plz update next part soon. I think ashol will support Neil. Warna to mini k hath se danda khayega is baar 😆

Mini ka ghussa abhi satve aasmaan par jane wala h to sirf Neil shant karwa sakta h.. wow I m excited unka ruthna manana ka level bohot high h ☺️

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Going great .So our guess was right it's Ashok. Update soon next part .Want to see Ashok ,Mini and Ashok Meil conversation also. I like Ashok 😆

Yeah it's Ashok.... Thanks sharma... 🤗

Even I like Ashok.... He is dedicated villain I tell u.... Selfish man...

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Bahut badhiya

Toh papaji ji entry ho gayi

I am waiting for this track in the show also

Bahut achha hone wala hai ye track

Aur tumne bhi bahut achha likha hai

Papa ji ki entry honi hi thi... Minni ka last scar...

Hope we get Ashok I'm the show soon....

Thanks anjali... 🤗

Originally posted by: Rishrabh

Interesting update lata. Main na ashok k baremein bhul hi gayi thi. I want to know ab ashok kyun aya h, n as far as I know mini ne ashok k ek letter ko jala dia tha. Ye wohi letter h na. I don't know if ashok loves his daughter. 😲🤔❓

Plz plz update next part soon. I think ashol will support Neil. Warna to mini k hath se danda khayega is baar 😆

Mini ka ghussa abhi satve aasmaan par jane wala h to sirf Neil shant karwa sakta h.. wow I m excited unka ruthna manana ka level bohot high h ☺️

Letter was burnt by babita not Minni....

Minni is sure angry on Neil. Now for letting Ashok in.... But uske against bhi nahi jayegi as she loves him and respects him... Aage dekho kya hota hai...

Please continue and end this story . Don't leave it Incomplete

Lata ...apna pulav chalu rakhna