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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends,

Just thought of writing an OS in the way how i want the leap to take place...
Atleast i can imagine this and be happy so thought of sharing it with you guys...
Story goes like this...

Kunal takes the kid in his arms and holds him tight to his chest, and was walking away from richa...

Richa gives the devilish smile thinking she has won the game finally... now she will be in the good books of kunal...
Not even once did she think that to get kunal what all evil things she had to do...

Kunal looked at his baby and there was a sigh of relief and happiness...
He felt like this was the best moment of his life...

He remembers how happy siddhi was at the thought of becoming a mother...

Seeing his babys face he could feel the happiness of siddhi...
He just wanted to see siddhi for once...
His heart never believed what the rest of the world said... but then he remembers siddhis harsh dialogues and he was deeply hurt...
He turns towards the place where siddhi was and wanted to meet her...

But richa had already bribed the ladies out there to tell him that she has been shifted from there and that they cannot reveal the place where she is...

Kunal felt really angry on himself for not being there with siddhi when she needed him the most...
He takes his kid and walks away from the place deeply hurt...


Suddenly his brain started working and he was just unable to change the sudden change in characters of siddhi and richa...
He felt something fishy going on...

He just recollected the conversation which he had with siddhi the last time she had come to jail and she said vaikram ko pata lag gaya tha ki rohit kaha hei and she had gone from home...

uss din ke baad hi siddhi has changed... zaroor kuch na kuch hua hoga...

Rohit kaha hei???? ussi ko doonte gayi thi siddhi??? waha pe aisa kya ho gaya ki siddhi mein itna badlaav aa gaya...
it stikes him that vikram is the right person to ask about...

Siddhi and sulekha looks at the baby and are happy ...
Suddenly sulekha ji feels that siddhi should not be in jail and that she should do something to bring her out of the jail...

Jaha itne saare evils ho sakte hei waha pe achaai keliye ek bura kaam zaroor ho sakta hei...
She decides to help siddhi escape from jail with the help of some of her aquaintances...

Next day is sulekha jis release and before that she has planned to help siddhi escape...
They planned in such a way that they will move out of india itself...

Arranged fake passsport for siddhi and siddhi escapes and as instructed by sulekha she boards the flight to London...
Sulekha ji is relased the next day and she takes the kid with her...

Kunal meets vikram and he tells all what happened on the day rohit had died...
Now kunal could read between the lines... siddhi had put up the deal with richa to get him out of jail...

He decided to meet takraal... this time he got to see a heart broken dad... he was not the same takraal who used to be roaring in front of kunal...
he was completely shattered...
Takral says "agar meri beti mujhe emotionally black mail nahi kiya hota to aaj meri yeh haalat nahi hoti aur na hi tum baahar hote..."

Kunal chopra could now very well understand the sudden change...
He felt like killing himself for blindly believing what siddhi had told him...

Kunal sees richa coming out of her room...
Richa comes near him and talks all goody goody stuffs...

Kunal looks at her and gives a tight slap and just walks away and says "ainda mere paarivaar ke zaamne ya mere ghar ki taraf bhi aane ki koshish mat karna"
tumhari asliyat mein jaan chuka hu... tumne apne bhai ko bhi istamaal karke maar daala iss ghatiya se chaal mein...
mujhe tumpe itna gin aa raha hei ki kisi zamane mein meine tumhei chaha tha... tum ek khudgarz insaan ho jismein insaaniyat naam ki koi cheez hi nahi"
yaha tak apne paagalpan ko poora karne keliye tumne apne papa ka bhi khayal nahi kiya..."
Kunal says he will repopen the case and will free siddhi from this jhoota case and will make sure tumein sazaa mile jo tum deserve karti ho...

He leaves and richa shattered and she feels she has lost it... she runs to her room...

Next morning kunal wakes up and goes near his baby and says "mein tumhare mumma ko tmhare paas leke aaunga..."
Suddenly Seema come with the news paper all shocked and she gives him the following news...

SIDHHI HAS ESCAPED FROM JAIL AUR USKA KOI ATA PATA NAHI...
RICHA NE SUICIDE KAR LIYA...

Then goes for the 5 year leap where kunal happens to come to London for a businees trip...
Will he be able to complete his incomplete story?????

I hope i have ended it on a positive note and you guys are happy...
Thanks for your time

Gayathri

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Os is superb...i really enjoyed it... ...feeling much better... Thank u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarakvp

Os is superb...i really enjoyed it... ...feeling much better... Thank u...


You are most welcome...
this is what we all want right...

i seriously dont want KC to be portrayed so bad...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice story. 👏

Hope our brain dead CVs use your to recover the mess they made.😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Simply Awwweeesssooommeee👏👏👏👏
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have totally lost my hopes aftr reading abt d promo...im scared thinking abt d future tracks...feeling pity on sinal's elder son...poor boy wont get his mothe'rs love..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ahahhhaaa kollaaalooo 😃
awesomely written Chechi👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome dear👏...much needed OS as of now.

kaash in the serial too kunal feels...things...reacts...slaps ritcha...promises his baby to bring back his mother...😍

and the best part is ritcha ne suicide karliyađŸ„ł...

loved reading it😛. thanks for the same.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silambu

Very nice story. 👏

Hope our brain dead CVs use your to recover the mess they made.😉


Hope is something that you should not bring if at all u intend to watch parichay...
I can bet that this thing is not gonna happen...
you know it was very difficult for me to write this... there was no feeling while writing this...
i just wanted jot down how i want the leap to take place...

Please yaar do not expect this from the CVs... atleast for parichay

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