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Posted: 13 years ago
Nancy, sorry for such a late comment. But I joined the forum recently so didn't know about your SS until today. Read all parts at one stretch. Loved it to bits. Great dialogues and having familiar characters helps 😆 Hope to read more from you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part-7

"Kunal aap yahan!" she exclaims, happy to see Kunal at Shumi party. wow😛...finaly kunal came ...and he made my day!😛 thanks nanu for bringing kunal to my party...

Ritcha and Vineet wish Shumi,...never mind...
Kunal frowns slightly and says grumpily "Haan kaam jaldi khatam ho gaya toh socha aa jaaoon' yeh tho ho na hi tha😛
aur hum log bikes pe behas kyun kar rahe hain.. exactly?😕

main le jaaonga na Siddhi ko. Bas baat khatam' exactly!😛 😆

Kunal is trying his best to ignore Bipin... hahaha 🤣

"Kunal please dosti ki khatir'." i hate this dosti😡
dosti ki khatir please'"...ek ur dosti?

his reaction is making Rani, Sahasra, Nidhi and Shumi very very very happy.lol😆

"Haan abhi, mujhe yaad aaya' ...hahaha...abhi yaad aaya...that is funny...🤣

"Kal le lena Shumi se" haaa😲...i won't be giving her back...

Kunal is busy finding his orange kurta😍 in the cupboard. orange kurta 😍waise siddhi ko help karna chahi yeh tha na😡

"Siddhi tum aaj ke baad Bipin se nahin milogi..."

"Kyunki maine kaha' " "Keh diya toh keh diya'" yeh hue na baat 😛

"Siddhi Ritcha meri achi dost hai bas." "Toh Bipin bhi mera acha dost hai'" Siddhi says, grabs her night dress and leaves, leaving behind a thoughtful Kunal' becharey ko confused kardiya ya na


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

sorry nanu...i thought i finish reading ur ff...i will read it now...😃: Morning Shumi...🤗thank God aap online aaye toh.. itni dino tak kahan the?


i remember very well that i have already red 4 prts...

now part 5:

siddhi, Sahasra aur Bipin lunch time meeting! wow!!!!😛

Kunal shouts "Siddhi chai" chalo...shuru ho gay kunal k chillana...😆: Serial mein bhi toh Chillata rehta hai...chai.. chai...😆 Imagine agar Kunal train mein chai bechta...😆😆😆😆

Kunal calls Siddhi and said ' main tumhe lene aajaonga'how sweet na?😛: Sweet sweet kuch nahin.. bas jealous hai Siddhi ke dost se...😃

"Abhi toh shuruwat hui hai' aur yeh haal hai.Aage aage dekho hota hai kya" Rani declares.wo tho hai😛...after all plan kis ka hi...😉 😆😆😆

"haan maine aapna hairstlye change kiya hai' haaa😲...siddhi changed her hair style? par kyun?😕: Kyunki uska current hairstyle bahut faltu hai...😆

it is all cuz bipin ko achcha lag tha tha...🤣: Good idea na?

Kunal looks at her' and says "Mujhe tumhara purane wala hairstlye jyada acha lagta hain'." aur nahi tho kya?😆

Kunal throws the car into gear and backs it out of the parking lot....hairstyle kay leyeh ithna hangma? thoda ziyad nahi hai...?😆 waise i love kunal when he gets irritated😛...he looks 2 cute😳: Really... hmm. Vaise I am glad you picked up his reaction so well...⭐️ for being such a good and observant reader...

WELDONE NANU👏: Thank you Shums...

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Posted: 13 years ago
part-8

Next Morning:
Kunal wakes up to find the bed made and Siddhi nowhere in the room. Frowning,...arey yaar...ab frown kyun? wo bhi subha shubha...haan?😡..😆
siddhi giving him the silent treatment, best treatment for attitude patient!😆

Kunal, holding one end of her dupatta....kaash issa serial mai hotha😍

She removes the dupatta from around her neck, drops it in Kunal's hand and leaves....bechra...ab dupatta se hi kaam chala na hai?
Kunal stares at the dupatta in his hand and thinks "Kitni akdoo hai... " certainly less than u...😛

Kunal sees the smile on her face and was now also smiling...phew!... finally...😛
" "Jaane-man.. Pooja tu.."...arey...yeh kun pooja?😕

"Chal theek hai.. toh sham ko milte hain..." and Pooja disconnects the call...ab yeh kya naya naatak?😡...sinal milan abhi aadha adhura hai...
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THANK U NANU DEAR😃

special thanks to tweeter13 for always listening to my stories!😊 who is this tweeter13? 😡naya boy friend hai kyaaa?😉😆

Edited by shumi. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

part-7


"Kunal aap yahan!" she exclaims, happy to see Kunal at Shumi party. wow😛...finaly kunal came ...and he made my day!😛 thanks nanu for bringing kunal to my party...: You are welcome Shumi... may you celebrate many many more birthdays!😊

Ritcha and Vineet wish Shumi,...never mind...Aap ka reaction... 🤣
Kunal frowns slightly and says grumpily "Haan kaam jaldi khatam ho gaya toh socha aa jaaoon' yeh tho ho na hi tha😛: Sab plan ka asar...
aur hum log bikes pe behas kyun kar rahe hain.. exactly?😕: Arey Kunal ko tang karne ke liye... bechara bike ka bahana banake Siddhi ke peeche peeche bhag raha hai...😆

main le jaaonga na Siddhi ko. Bas baat khatam' exactly!😛 😆

Kunal is trying his best to ignore Bipin... hahaha ROFL

"Kunal please dosti ki khatir'." i hate this dosti😡 : Ab toh Serial mein Kunal also hates this dosti!!!! Bechara will be cursing the day.. jab usne Ritcha se dosti ki thi...
dosti ki khatir please'"...ek ur dosti?

his reaction is making Rani, Sahasra, Nidhi and Shumi very very very happy.lol😆: 🤣

"Haan abhi, mujhe yaad aaya' ...hahaha...abhi yaad aaya...that is funny...ROFL : Bechara dekh nahi paya ki Siddhi Bipin ke saath dance kar rahi hai...😆

"Kal le lena Shumi se" haaa😲...i won't be giving her back...: Haww... aap Siddhi ka bag usse wapas nahin doge? Kyun? Why?

Kunal is busy finding his orange kurta😍 in the cupboard. orange kurta 😍waise siddhi ko help karna chahi yeh tha na😡: ARey kyun kare... khud dhoonde... Siddhi bechari sara kaam kare...

"Siddhi tum aaj ke baad Bipin se nahin milogi..."

"Kyunki maine kaha' " "Keh diya toh keh diya'" yeh hue na baat 😛: Authoritative... haina?

"Siddhi Ritcha meri achi dost hai bas." "Toh Bipin bhi mera acha dost hai'" Siddhi says, grabs her night dress and leaves, leaving behind a thoughtful Kunal' becharey ko confused kardiya ya na: Nahin soch raha hai.. afterall use pata hona chahiye ki Kunal aur Ritcha ki dosti se Siddhi ko problem hai...


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THNKS nanu...love u😛🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
part-9
she throws the door open and hugs him...heynnn!😡"Oy hero.." wo tho hai...😍

Kunal's eyes tear up and he tells Pooja about Anand death,tch! tch! tch! 😭and how he ended up marrying Anand's fianc. wooo...
' zindagi mein agar pyaar ho toh jeevan aabad hota hai' ...pyaar dena ka naam hota hai lena ka nahin'...Siddhi ne apni poori zindagi apne pyaar ke liye de di ..
wa wa wa...kya dialogue hai!👏...kaash parichay ki dialogue writer tum hoti...serial ki thagiya na udaa thay thi...😉
" Pooja who is drinking coke, almost chokes' 👏
' ek ladka aur ladki kabhi dost nahin hote' " 👏 👏
aur tujhe yeh kaise pata ki Siddhi ko tujhse pyaar nahin'." consummation kay baad mai...🤣
".. aur mera Ritcha..." lucha...

'Ritcha tera sacha pyaar hai.. agar aisa hai.. toh tu apne sache pyaar ki khatir apni zindagi kharab kar sakta hain' par ek sorry nahin bol sakta' ek sorry jiske karan tera pyaar teri zindagi mein rahe? Dekha jaaye toh ek chota sa shabd hai sorry' agar tu tab sorry bol deta.. toh kya hota tere asoolon ko? Tere asoolon ka aur Sorry bolna ka koi connection hi nahin' Sorry bolne se asool choot thoda jaate tere.. bas Thakral ki ego satisfy hoti.. aur tu woh nahi kar saka apne so called sache pyaar ke liye." EXACTLY...VERY WELL SAID👏 waise serial mai he said to gaurav that he will return 5 lakh rupees with in 10 days(which was taken from dadyji for his bail)...par aaj thak return nahi kara hai...ab uus ka asool kahan gaya...haan?😡
Kunal immediately remembers the incident during Raveena's wedding when he wanted to tell Seema and Vikram the whole truth but his father forbade him from doing so.wa..."Toh apne family members ke liye tu asoolon ke khilaaf ja sakta hai.. apne pyaar ke liye nahin?
what a point?👏

"Anand ki amant ek jeeti jaati insaan hai... koi jewellery piece nahin jise locker mein sambhal ke rakhdo...jab amant insaan ho...toh usse sambhal ne ke liya..usse pyaar karna chahiye.. very true...nanu tum tho iss part mai pooja ka charater mai chaagaye...well done dear👏

yahan main apna aur Siddhi ka relationship discuss karne nahin aaya" sahi baat hai😃...poor guy this pooja is drilling him...😡

"Kya main Siddhi ko pasand karne laga hoon? Agar haan toh kya woh mujhe pasand karti hai? Aur agar karti hain toh kaise pata chalega mujhe?" bechara ho gaya na confused

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THANKS AND LUB U NANU😛🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
part-10

"Bhaiyya usko kaam tha..isliye subah subah hi nikal gayi office ke liye..."...arey...issa kya kaam...chai thak nahi diya kunal ko...😡


"Kunal hello, main Ritcha bol rahi hoon.." argh! ab yeh kahan se aagaye...

Kunal at their insistence agrees to accompany them. ugh!yeh kunal bhi na...dhimag hi nahi hai...insist kiya tho agrees karli.😡.

"Bahut achi lag rahi ho aaj Siddhi...' finally...dhimaag ki bthi jali and he complimented siddhi

'...aur mera plan fail ho jaye" girrr she too has a plan?😡 bechara kunal...every one is planing against him

Ritcha and Siddhi both lying side by side and unconscious.i am happy for ritcha😛...par siddhi...😭

"Siddhi" he shouts and rushes to her ignoring Ritcha. He ignored ritcha😛...hahaha...first time he acted sensibly...😃

"Please Siddhi please aankhon kholo.. please main kabhi tumse naraaz nahin hoonga.. please Siddhi..."😭 😭 😭

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

part-10

"Bhaiyya usko kaam tha..isliye subah subah hi nikal gayi office ke liye..."...arey...issa kya kaam...chai thak nahi diya kunal ko...😡 : Arey strategy.. Kunal has to miss Siddhi, right?


"Kunal hello, main Ritcha bol rahi hoon.." argh! ab yeh kahan se aagaye... Woh gayi hi nahi kabhi.. toh aayegi kaise...😆

Kunal at their insistence agrees to accompany them. ugh!yeh kunal bhi na...dhimag hi nahi hai...insist kiya tho agrees karli.😡.: Arey... plan hai tension mat lo...

"Bahut achi lag rahi ho aaj Siddhi...' finally...dhimaag ki bthi jali and he complimented siddhi : Kunal ke paas dimaag hai...😲 yeh kab hua? 🤣

'...aur mera plan fail ho jaye" girrr she too has a plan?😡 bechara kunal...every one is planing against him: Itna demand mein hai toh aisa hi hoga...😆

Ritcha and Siddhi both lying side by side and unconscious.i am happy for ritcha😛...par siddhi...😭 : Awww. mat cry karo... aage dekho hota hai kya...

"Siddhi" he shouts and rushes to her ignoring Ritcha. He ignored ritcha😛...hahaha...first time he acted sensibly...😃: Sab aap logon ke plan ka asar hai ki he is acting sensibly...

"Please Siddhi please aankhon kholo.. please main kabhi tumse naraaz nahin hoonga.. please Siddhi..."😭 😭 😭: ARey you should be happy, he is crying for her...

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aw...thank u so much sweetu😃: 😊 You are most welcome!😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
part-11

"Haan Ritcha ke saath woh hai" and Kunal points towards Vineet. thank god he did not say ritcha kay saath mai hun...😃

Vineet seeing Kunal's reaction thinks to himself "Ritcha tum galat thi... Kunal Siddhi ke saath aage badh gaya hai.. bare mein soch raha hai..." glad that vineet was wise in his thoughts unlike kunal😃

Kunal relents and he and Seema leave the hospital...tch! kunal should have stayed with siddhi na...😒

"Seema, agar Siddhi ko kuch hua toh main... mujhe pata nahin main kya karoonga... "...my heart goes for him😭

'... Main yahan pe kar kya raha hoon, mujhe usse ke paas hona chahiye... " and saying so he rushes out of the room... chalo...finaly he realized her important😛

"Kaisi hai meri wife" meri biwi kahatha tho aur bhi senti ho tha...😛


"Ji bilkul..main dhyaan rakhoonga...Thank you doctor.." obviously 😃"

Kunal steps forward and offers Siddhi his arm, as means of
support and helps aw...very sweet of him na...he always does that especily while she is crying...😛

"Powai Lake" i think it is a must visit place in munbai...next time when i go to india...i should😃

Kunal leads her to a bench and makes her sit. He then gets channas and sits beside her. "Kaisi lagi jagah?" "Achi hai Kunal.. par powai lake kyun? Mujhe laga ki aap mujhe beach pe leke jayenge ya phir Gateway of India.."

"Powai lake do tarah ke log jaate hain... woh jo berozgar hote hain, ya woh jo ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hain..."arey wa...kunal ne tho maar liya sixer...
"Par Siddhi main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon...par main apna vada kabhi nahi todoonga... tum agar ab bhi Anand se pyaar karti ho, woh theek hai... " wa wa ky badappan kunal ne batha ya👏...par kya duffer nahi jaan tha pyaar mai badap pan nahi chal tha...

suddenly he realizes that Siddhi is in his arms crying....awww sinal hug in pawai lake!😍

"Aap har roz mujhse kahenge ki aap mujhse pyaar karte hain..." arey ...yeh kya zabar jasthi hai...haan😆
" Johukum judge sabhiba... jo hukum..." ab kunal tho gaya kaam se😆
THE END... THE END!😲😭
I hope you all enjoyed this short story.. .very much😛...the basis of this story was simple..I believe that due to marriage, husband and wife feel a sense of ownership of their better half (am hoping the married ppl on the forum can pitch in here.. let me know if I am right), which is why a guy was introduced to make Kunal realize that HIS WIFE... is out with another guy.. second was the fact that Kunal till date I feel takes Siddhi for granted.. and the day she starts doing the same thing... seedha line pe aajayge😆... And through these two things, I tried to show that Kunal can indeed fall in love with Siddhi without knowing Ritcha's truth...wa...what a conclusion! well said..👍🏼 well done👏
THANK U VERY MUCH NANU FOR GIVING US SUCH A WONDERFUL FF...it was my pleasure to read and comment...thanks again😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

part-11


"Haan Ritcha ke saath woh hai" and Kunal points towards Vineet. thank god he did not say ritcha kay saath mai hun...😃:

Vineet seeing Kunal's reaction thinks to himself "Ritcha tum galat thi... Kunal Siddhi ke saath aage badh gaya hai.. bare mein soch raha hai..." glad that vineet was wise in his thoughts unlike kunal😃: Vineet bhi toh meri choice hai.. toh dimaag toh hoga uska...

Kunal relents and he and Seema leave the hospital...tch! kunal should have stayed with siddhi na...😒 :ruko bechare Kunal ke dimaage ki batti late jalti hai...

"Seema, agar Siddhi ko kuch hua toh main... mujhe pata nahin main kya karoonga... "...my heart goes for him😭: Aww... do not worry...
'... Main yahan pe kar kya raha hoon, mujhe usse ke paas hona chahiye... " and saying so he rushes out of the room... chalo...finaly he realized her important😛

"Kaisi hai meri wife" meri biwi kahatha tho aur bhi senti ho tha...😛: Mere dimaag mein wife bina life wala show chal raha tha.. isliye meri wife likha FF mein...😆


"Ji bilkul..main dhyaan rakhoonga...Thank you doctor.." obviously 😃"

Kunal steps forward and offers Siddhi his arm, as means of
support and helps aw...very sweet of him na...he always does that especily while she is crying...😛: Not true.. divorce ki baat sunke Siddhi kitna roa thi.. but Kunal ne tab toh kuch nahin kiya...😡

"Powai Lake" i think it is a must visit place in munbai...next time when i go to india...i should😃: Pata nahin.. main toh Bombay ki hoon, maine serial se pehle iss jagah ka naam nahin suna tha...😆

Kunal leads her to a bench and makes her sit. He then gets channas and sits beside her. "Kaisi lagi jagah?" "Achi hai Kunal.. par powai lake kyun? Mujhe laga ki aap mujhe beach pe leke jayenge ya phir Gateway of India.."

"Powai lake do tarah ke log jaate hain... woh jo berozgar hote hain, ya woh jo ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hain..."arey wa...kunal ne tho maar liya sixer...: 🤣
"Par Siddhi main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon...par main apna vada kabhi nahi todoonga... tum agar ab bhi Anand se pyaar karti ho, woh theek hai... " wa wa ky badappan kunal ne batha ya👏...par kya duffer nahi jaan tha pyaar mai badap pan nahi chal tha...: Shums woh vaade ka pakka hai... isliye...

suddenly he realizes that Siddhi is in his arms crying....awww sinal hug in pawai lake!😍

"Aap har roz mujhse kahenge ki aap mujhse pyaar karte hain..." arey ...yeh kya zabar jasthi hai...haan😆: Har roz agar husband I love you bole.. toh acha lagega... right...
" Johukum judge sabhiba... jo hukum..." ab kunal tho gaya kaam se😆: Subah Subah uth ke I love you bolna padega bechare ko... varna Siddhi use chai nahin degi...😆😆
THE END... THE END!😲😭
I hope you all enjoyed this short story.. .very much😛...the basis of this story was simple..I believe that due to marriage, husband and wife feel a sense of ownership of their better half (am hoping the married ppl on the forum can pitch in here.. let me know if I am right), which is why a guy was introduced to make Kunal realize that HIS WIFE... is out with another guy.. second was the fact that Kunal till date I feel takes Siddhi for granted.. and the day she starts doing the same thing... seedha line pe aajayge😆... And through these two things, I tried to show that Kunal can indeed fall in love with Siddhi without knowing Ritcha's truth...wa...what a conclusion! well said..👍🏼 well done👏
THANK U VERY MUCH NANU FOR GIVING US SUCH A WONDERFUL FF...it was my pleasure to read and comment...thanks again😃 Shumi.. thank you for taking the time to read the long story.. you are my favorite audience... I love your step by step comments... 🤗

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